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河南省顶级名校联盟2025届高三上学期1月调研考试
第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When my husband passed away last year，my world turned upside down．Richard and I had been together for over forty years，and suddenly，there was an unbearable blank where he used to be．So，when my son，James，and his wife，Natalie，invited me to live with them for a while，I wasn’t about to refuse．I think being with the grandkids will be healing．
They welcomed me with open arms，making me feel like part of their daily life．They insisted that they wanted to help me through this difficult time and when I moved in，I only took the essentials．The rest of my things were locked 30 minutes away at my home，locking away the memories of a life shared with Richard．
From the beginning，there was simply one rule for the kids and myself：“Please，all three of you，stay out of the basement（地下室），” James had said when we were sitting for dinner，his tone was gentle but firm．“There are some repairs being done，and it’s really dusty and messy down there．We don’t want any of you to get sick or hurt．Understood ”
The boys，John，6，and Eric，4，nodded．I understood James’ concern，too．I agreed without giving it much thought．It wasn’t like I had any reason to go down there anyway．
Living with them was an adjustment．John and Eric were everything I needed to keep me distracted while my heart healed and grew with love for my grandchildren．We had also gotten into a new routine，where every evening，we’d gather in the living room for story time．Nothing delighted me more than watching their eyes light up as I read to them．
We’d been reading Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets for a few days now，and it had quickly become a favorite for them．One evening，I turned to the next chapter，and as I read about Harry discovering the hidden entrance to the chamber，Eric suddenly piped up，“Grandma! We have a Chamber of Secrets too! In the basement!”
注意：
1．续写词数应150左右：
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I paused，glancing down at him unbelievably．____________________________________
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The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home．________________________
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第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When my husband passed away last year(状从)，my world turned upside down．Richard and I had been together for over forty years，and suddenly，there was an unbearable blank where he used to be(定从)．So，when my son，James，and his wife，Natalie，invited me to live with them for a while，I wasn’t about to refuse．I think being with the grandkids will be healing(宾从)．
They welcomed me with open arms，making me feel like part of their daily life．They insisted that they wanted to help me through this difficult time (宾从)and when I moved in(状从)，I only took the essentials．The rest of my things were locked 30 minutes away at my home，locking away(状从) the memories of a life shared with Richard(非谓语动词做后置定语)．
From the beginning，there was simply one rule for the kids and myself：“Please，all three of you，stay out of the basement（地下室），” James had said when we were sitting for dinner(状从)，his tone was gentle but firm．“There are some repairs being done(非谓语动词做后置定语)，and it’s really dusty and messy down there．We don’t want any of you to get sick or hurt．Understood ”
The boys，John，6，and Eric，4，nodded．I understood James’ concern，too．I agreed without giving it much thought．It wasn’t like I had any reason to go down there anyway(宾从)．
Living with them was an adjustment．John and Eric were everything I needed to keep me distracted(定从) while my heart healed and grew with love for my grandchildren(状从)．We had also gotten into a new routine，where every evening，we’d gather in the living room for story time(定从)．Nothing delighted me more than watching their eyes(否定比较级=最高级) light up as I read to them．
We’d been reading Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets for a few days now，and it had quickly become a favorite for them．One evening，I turned to the next chapter，and as I read about Harry(状从) discovering the hidden entrance to the chamber(非谓语动词做伴随动作)，Eric suddenly piped up，“Grandma! We have a Chamber of Secrets too! In the basement!”
注意：
1．续写词数应150左右：
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I paused，glancing down at him unbelievably．____________________________________
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The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home．________________________
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1. 高考英语读后续写要求与分析
分类角度 内容 原文反应句
续写类型 温情类情感故事，通过亲情治愈失落的心灵。 "When my husband passed away last year, my world turned upside down."
构思与布局 1. 第一段：发现地下室的秘密，引出意外惊喜；
2. 第二段：表达情感，重拾对生活的希望和家庭的温暖。 "‘Grandma! We have a Chamber of Secrets too! In the basement!’"
提炼框架 原文中伏笔：“地下室秘密”，承接儿童的天真表达，引出地下室情感象征的场景。 "Please, all three of you, stay out of the basement."
实施建议 1. 延续原文语气和细节描写；
2. 通过心理、动作和环境描写表现转变的情感；
3. 以正向结局升华主题。 "Living with them was an adjustment."
承接原文注意事项 保持情感连贯；注意儿童语言的天真风格；地下室与回忆之间需有自然连接；不要偏离亲情治愈主题。 "We’d been reading Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets for a few days now, and it had quickly become a favorite for them."
巧妙设计续写内容 1. 地下室布置成温馨回忆场景，引发感动；
2. 利用儿童角色语言推动情节，结局强调重拾对生活的热爱。 "The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home."
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
伏笔 地下室禁止进入，暗示秘密的存在。 "Please, all three of you, stay out of the basement."
冲突点 孙子无意中提到地下室秘密，引起奶奶的好奇心。 "‘Grandma! We have a Chamber of Secrets too! In the basement!’"
隐含线索 地下室可能是儿子为母亲布置的回忆场所，用来治愈母亲的伤痛。 "The rest of my things were locked 30 minutes away at my home."
解决方案 奶奶进入地下室，发现重温回忆的温馨布置，感受到家人的用心。 "The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home."
故事山模式思维导图：
引入：丈夫去世，生活失落，搬入儿子家。
上升：孩子提到地下室的秘密，引发好奇。
高潮：地下室布置与过去的房间一模一样，充满回忆。
下降：奶奶感动，感受到家人对她的爱与关怀。
结局：奶奶重新燃起对生活的热爱，与家人更加亲密。
3. 推荐语料
描写类别 英文例句 高级替换词
动作描写 - She pushed the door open cautiously, her heart pounding in anticipation.
- Tears welled up in her eyes as she stepped inside.
- Her trembling hands traced the familiar patterns on the quilt. - cautiously → gingerly
- stepped → ventured
- trembling → quivering
心理描写 - Her heart ached at the sight of the room, but it was a comforting ache.
- Memories flooded back like an unstoppable tide.
- She felt a warm glow of gratitude spread through her chest. - ached → throbbed
- flooded → surged
- glow → radiance
环境描写 - The room smelled faintly of lavender, a scent that transported her back in time.
- The soft lighting cast a golden hue over the room.
- The carefully arranged furniture felt like a warm embrace. - smelled faintly → carried a whiff
- cast → bathed
- carefully → meticulously
4. 高中语法与搭配分析
语法现象 原文例句 搭配与语料
时态变化 "Living with them was an adjustment." - be an adjustment
- present continuous for ongoing actions
复合句使用 "They insisted that they wanted to help me through this difficult time." - insist that + 从句
- want to help + 宾语
词汇积累 - "unbearable blank" = intolerable void - blank (n.) = gap, void
- unbearable (adj.) = intolerable, insufferable
语料例句 - Her husband’s passing left an unbearable void in her life. - The soft lighting bathed the room in a nostalgic glow.
5. Possible Versions
中心概括：
通过家人的温暖举动，祖母重新找回记忆与家的归属感，传递爱与感恩的力量。
I paused, glancing down at him unbelievably. Eric said he would show it to me. Before I could stop him, he jumped off the couch and grabbed my hand, tugging me toward the basement door(非谓语动词做动作串). I called that we were not supposed to be going down here(宾从). “There it is!” Eric exclaimed, pointing toward a door hidden behind a large sheet of plastic(非谓语动词做伴随动作). I was curious and reached for the door handle. The door swung open with a soft creak, revealing a room(非谓语动词做伴随动作) that took my breath away(定从).
The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home. The familiar wallpaper and the same pattern of the bed were identical. But what truly made my heart sing(主从) was the photograph: Richard and I on our wedding day, smiling and yong, full of life(非谓语动词，adj补语). I stepped backward, tears streaming down my face(独立主格) as a thousand memories flooded back(状从). James and Natalie rushed down the staris, followed by John. James explained softly that they wanted to surprise me and didn’t want me to go back to my old house(宾从). They wanted me to have a space here that felt like home(定从). I hugged them and said in tears that I wanted them(宾从), too.
Version 1:
Paragraph 1: I paused, glancing down at him unbelievably(非谓语动词做伴随动作). “What do you mean ” I asked with a curious smile. The boys exchanged mischievous(adj.淘气的 naughty ) looks before leading me toward the forbidden basement. As I hesitated(状从), John tugged my hand and whispered, “You’ll love it, Grandma!” My heart raced as the door creaked open(状从).
Paragraph 2: The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home. Familiar photos lined the walls, and my favorite quilt was spread neatly on the bed. Tears filled my eyes as I turned to James(状从), who stood at the door(定从). “We thought it might help(宾从),” he said softly. My heart swelled with gratitude, and for the first time in months, I felt whole again.
亮点词汇短语：mischievous looks, creaked open, swelled with gratitude
升级替换词：tears filled → welled up; felt whole → felt complete
Version 2:
Paragraph 1: I paused, glancing down at him unbelievably(非谓语动词做伴随动作) “Really What makes you say that ” I asked, trying to mask my curiosity(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Eric grinned and whispered, “There’s a big surprise!” Unable to resist their excitement(adj做主语补语), I allowed the boys to lead me to the basement. The moment we stepped inside(状从), the dim light flickered on, revealing(非谓语动词做伴随动作) a space that looked astonishingly familiar(定从).
Paragraph 2: The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home, from the floral curtains to the antique clock on the dresser. The faint scent of lavender hung in the air, just as it had for years in my old room(状从). Overwhelmed by emotions(非谓语动词做原因状语), I turned to James, who was standing behind me with a soft smile(定从). “We wanted to bring your memories closer to you,” he said. Tears welled up in my eyes as I realized how much love and effort they had poured into this gesture(状从含宾从含定从).
亮点分析
情绪描写：mask my curiosity, overwhelmed by emotions, tears welled up
动作描写：grinned, whispered, flickered on
环境描写：dim light, floral curtains, faint scent of lavender
Version 3
Paragraph 1: I paused, glancing down at him unbelievably(非谓语动词做伴随动作)“Are you sure about that ” I asked, feigning(vt.假装) suspicion(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The boys nodded eagerly, their small hands tugging at mine(独立主格). “Come and see!” they chimed in(加入，配合，一致) unison(n.合奏，合唱). Despite James’ earlier warning, their enthusiasm was infectious, and I found myself descending the stairs with them. The door opened, and I froze in surprise.
Paragraph 2: The basement had been transformed into a replica of my old bedroom. Familiar books lined the shelves, and my favorite armchair sat invitingly in the corner. A warm glow from the lamp lit up the room, casting shadows that felt like old friends(非谓语动词做伴随动作). “We thought this might help you feel at home,” James said from behind me. My voice caught in my throat as I murmured(状从), “It’s perfect.” Love and gratitude filled my heart as I embraced my boys(状从), thankful for a family that understood me so deeply(定从).
亮点分析
情绪描写：infectious enthusiasm, froze in surprise, love and gratitude filled my heart
动作描写：feigning suspicion, tugging, descending
环境描写：replica of my old bedroom, warm glow, shadows that felt like old friends
亮点词汇短语总结
亮点词汇/短语 含义 同义词/替换词 例句
mask my curiosity 掩饰自己的好奇 hide my curiosity She tried to mask her curiosity but couldn’t hide her smile.
tears welled up 泪水涌上眼眶 tears filled, eyes moistened Tears welled up as she read the heartfelt letter.
infectious enthusiasm 感染人的热情 contagious excitement The children’s infectious enthusiasm made her laugh.
warm glow 温暖的光芒 gentle light, soft illumination The warm glow of the fireplace lit up the cozy room.
faint scent 淡淡的香气 subtle fragrance The faint scent of jasmine filled the evening air.
亮点语法与语料
语法现象 原文例句 解析与拓展
情态动词用于推测 "Are you sure about that " 用于表达怀疑或确认，常用于续写中传递对未来情节发展的期待或悬念。
复合句 "We thought this might help you feel at home." 分析：主句+宾语从句，用于解释情节和情感的起因。
高分词汇 "Overwhelmed by emotions" overwhelmed 替换 moved，更形象地表达情感的强烈程度。
语料例句 - The warm glow of the room brought back cherished memories. 可作为续写中环境描写和情感升华的高分语句模板。
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（满分15分）
你校英语报将举行寒假摄影大赛来展现同学们丰富多彩的假期生活。请写一篇征稿启事，要点如下：
1．作品要求；
2．投稿方式及截止日期；
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Winter Vacation Photography Contest
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Winter Vacation Photography Contest
Are you ready to share your colorful winter vacation moments
Our school English newspaper invites all students to participate in the Winter Vacation Photography Contest. To be eligible, you must be a current student and submit your original and best photos about your unique experiences or beautiful scenery in your holiday. The winner will get prizes, including a certificate and an album of this photo contest.
Entries should be sent via email to englishnewspaper@ourschool.edu by February 28th,2025. Don’t miss the chance to show your talents and win fabulous prizes!
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