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It was last August. We were on vacation, just me, my husband, and our two kids, out for a nice, safe, socially distanced week away. We went to a popular place called Diana's Baths, where the water falls off a series of flat rocks up the mountain. The baths were full of families, so we made our way to one of the upper levels of rock to keep our distance.
Both where we sat and down below, the water fell down and into small pools, where kids in swimsuits were playing water around. I was frightened as I saw my two boys jump between the smooth rocks. I told them to stay away from all those edges. But I soon relaxed, and we were all having fun, laughing in the pools.
Suddenly, I turned and saw my son Wyatt sitting down between two rocks in fast-moving water. I shouted at him to get out. He called back something that I couldn't hear, and then he disappeared over the edge. All I remember from the moments after was screaming, over and over, like a prayer, “Somebody help my son!” I didn't even know what help he needed, because I couldn't force myself to look.
My husband was already jumping down the rocks. I finally looked. Wyatt was sitting up-he was alive. My biggest fear was gone. As I held my younger son, Jed, close, I heard another woman scream. “That child just went over the waterfall!” she shouted at her husband. “We are leaving!” They walked away, never even looking back to see whether our child was OK.
It was about 4 meters from the top of the waterfall to the pool below, which was filled with huge rocks. Wyatt had fallen on his back, straight onto the rocks. That's what Lisa told us. We didn't know her name was Lisa at that point. All we knew was that while everyone else looked on from a distance, too afraid or unbothered to help, Lisa didn't hesitate.
注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Later, Lisa told me that she was a nurse.__________________________________________
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The rescue team finally came.___________________________________________________
文章大意：
去年八月，一家人外出度假，在戴安娜浴场游玩，孩子们在岩石间和水池嬉戏，“我” 叮嘱儿子们远离边缘。但 Wyatt 还是坐到了湍急水流中的岩石间，随后失足落水，“我” 惊恐尖叫，丈夫立刻去救。 Wyatt 落水处约 4 米高，下方布满巨石，他背部朝下摔落。众人围观却无人帮忙，只有 Lisa 毫不犹豫伸出援手。
故事山分析：
开端：一家人在戴安娜浴场享受假期，孩子在危险区域玩耍。
发展：Wyatt 落水，“我” 惊慌失措，丈夫施救，旁人冷漠离去。
高潮：Lisa 挺身而出，后续需续写她救助的过程及结果。
结局：待构建，包含救援后续情况及感悟。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应：
伏笔：浴场有很多家庭，人多拥挤，续写回应：凸显旁人的冷漠，更衬托 Lisa 的勇敢热心，在人群中只有她果断行动。
伏笔：“我” 叮嘱孩子远离边缘，孩子不听，续写回应：导致 Wyatt 落水，引发后续紧张情节，也为 Lisa 的救助铺垫，让她的行为显得更关键。
伏笔：众人围观却无人帮忙，续写回应：突出 Lisa 的与众不同，强化她善良、果敢的形象，使其成为故事转折点。
伏笔：提到下方水池布满巨石，续写回应：增加救援难度与危险系数，衬托 Lisa 专业救助的重要性，稍有不慎 Wyatt 就有生命危险。
伏笔：“我” 惊恐尖叫，丈夫施救，续写回应：与 Lisa 的救助交织，展现多方努力，使故事更曲折，一家人的感激之情也因众人反应对比而更浓烈。
续写要点：
第一段：
要点：描述 Lisa 表明护士身份后，如何利用专业知识快速检查 Wyatt 身体状况，安抚他的情绪，采取初步急救措施，如固定受伤部位，同时 “我” 和家人的反应，焦急又感恩。
情感线：从惊恐、绝望转为看到希望后的感激、庆幸，对 Lisa 充满感恩。
故事线：Lisa 跑来告知职业，冷静查看 Wyatt；边检查边轻声安慰；用衣物简单固定 Wyatt 可能受伤的背部；“我” 和丈夫围在旁，不断道谢。
第二段：
要点：救援团队到来后的专业救援流程，如用担架搬运 Wyatt，送往医院检查治疗，最终 Wyatt 平安无事，结尾点明这次经历对一家人的触动，感恩陌生人的善意。
情感线：从紧张担忧过渡到安心、感恩，对人性温暖有更深体会。
故事线：救援团队迅速展开行动，用专业设备将 Wyatt 抬上担架；送往医院，一家人跟随；经检查 Wyatt 无大碍；“我” 感慨陌生人的善意拯救家庭。
情感线：
听到 Lisa 说自己是护士，绝望瞬间被希望点亮，感激如潮水涌上心头。看着她专业检查 Wyatt，轻柔安抚，慌乱的我渐归平静，满心庆幸有她出现。救援团队赶来，紧张再度揪紧心房，直至 Wyatt 被稳妥抬上担架，送往医院，忐忑才慢慢消散。最终得知 Wyatt 平安，感恩如暖流包裹全家，这份来自陌生人的善意，让我们深知人间有爱，温暖总在危难时。
故事线：
Lisa 表明护士身份，快速跑到 Wyatt 身边查看。
她边检查边安慰 Wyatt，用衣物固定其背部。
我” 和丈夫焦急围在旁边，向 Lisa 道谢。
救援团队赶到，用担架搬运 Wyatt。
送往医院，一家人紧张跟随。
Wyatt 经检查无大碍，一家人感恩陌生人善意。
主旨升华句：
In the face of danger, a stranger's kindness can be the brightest light, guiding us through the darkest moments.（在危险面前，陌生人的善意可以是最亮的光，指引我们度过最黑暗的时刻。）
Sometimes, it's not the grand gestures but the prompt action of a kind-hearted person that saves a life and restores our faith in humanity.（有时候，拯救生命、重拾我们对人性信心的，不是什么宏大的举动，而是一个好心人及时的行动。）
When everyone else turns a blind eye, the one who steps forward with love proves that goodness still exists and is more powerful than fear.（当其他人都视而不见时，那个带着爱挺身而出的人证明了善良依然存在，且比恐惧更强大。）
This experience taught us that the bonds of humanity extend beyond family and friends, reaching out to strangers in need.（这次经历让我们明白，人性的纽带超越了家人和朋友，伸向了需要帮助的陌生人。）
A single act of courage from a stranger can turn a moment of despair into a story of hope and gratitude.（陌生人的一次勇敢之举，可以把绝望时刻变成一个充满希望与感恩的故事。）
写作示范两篇：
第一篇：
Later, Lisa told me that she was a nurse. Without wasting a second, she rushed to Wyatt's side. Kneeling down, she gently but firmly examined his body, her fingers probing carefully for any signs of serious injury. “It's okay, sweetheart. You're gonna be just fine,” she cooed to Wyatt, her voice soothing his panicked cries. She quickly improvised a makeshift splint using a towel and some branches to immobilize his back. I stood there, clutching Jed tightly, tears streaming down my face, whispering words of gratitude to this angel who had descended in our moment of need.
The rescue team finally came. They immediately took over, their professional equipment and expertise evident. With practiced ease, they transferred Wyatt onto a stretcher, securing him snugly. As we rushed to the hospital behind them, my heart was in my throat. Hours later, the doctor emerged with a smile. Wyatt had escaped with just a few bruises. That day, we not only witnessed the power of a stranger's kindness but also learned that in times of crisis, heroes don't always wear capes; sometimes, they're just kind-hearted people like Lisa.
第二篇：
Later, Lisa told me that she was a nurse. Swiftly, she made her way to Wyatt, her eyes sharp and focused. “Mom, don't worry. I've got this,” she said reassuringly as she started her assessment. She checked his pulse, his breathing, all while chatting softly with Wyatt to keep him calm. “You're one brave boy, you know that ” She deftly fashioned a support for his back with her scarf and a couple of sticks. My husband and I watched in awe and relief, our eyes never leaving her hands.
The rescue team finally came. They brought a sense of order and further reassurance. Working in tandem with Lisa, they lifted Wyatt onto the stretcher with the utmost care. En route to the hospital, I held Wyatt's hand, still trembling. Once there, we received the wonderful news that he was okay. That fateful day, Lisa's actions became a testament to the kindness that can transform a nightmare into a tale of survival and love, making us believe in the goodness of strangers again.
参考答案
Paragraph 1: Later, Lisa told me that she was a nurse. She immediately sprang into action, her training kicking in. Kneeling beside Wyatt, she first gently checked his breathing and pulse, her face a mask of concentration. “He’s breathing steadily, but we need to be cautious,” she murmured. With deft hands, she took off her light jacket and carefully folded it to cushion Wyatt’s head. Then, she started talking to him in a soothing voice, asking simple questions to keep him alert. “What’s your name, sweetie You’re doing great.” I stood there, tears streaming down my face, clutching Jed tightly, utterly grateful for her presence.
Paragraph 2: The rescue team finally came. They quickly surrounded Wyatt, their professional equipment at the ready. One of them nodded approvingly at Lisa’s makeshift cushion. Gently, they lifted Wyatt onto a stretcher, securing him with straps. As they carried him away, I rushed to follow, my husband by my side. At the hospital, after a series of tests, the doctor emerged with a reassuring smile. “He’s going to be just fine, a few bruises and scrapes, that’s all.” That day, we learned that kindness and courage can come from the most unexpected places. Lisa, a stranger, had become an angel in our darkest hour, and we would never forget her selfless act.

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