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Carol Ansbro, Marion Bamforth, Susan Morris, and Mary Helliwell have been good friends since primary school. They had countless happy hours together, exploring the vast playground, dreaming big, and whispering secrets under the blanket of night. Each weekend, they gathered at Carol's home, making plans for the next week, looking forward to more excitements and surprises.
At seventeen, their friendship blossomed further during a summer trip to the seaside town of Torquay, Devon. As teenagers, the group stayed and soaked in the excitement of being on their own for the first time. It felt really fantastic and grown-up being on their own without parents. The sea breeze carried their giggles, and under the starlit(星光照耀的) sky, they promised to always stand by each other for ever. One day, a photographer happened to notice them and took a photo of them. So in blue jeans and white shirts—a common sight of teenage girls at tourist destinations in those days, each girl had a precious picture in the year of1972.
Following high school, life presented crossroads. Carol moved to Edinburgh for her art studies, Marion pursued medicine in Manchester: Susan ventured into engineering in Bristol, and Mary sailed off to Oxford for law. Distance stretched across miles, yet they had alternatives to stay together. Emails, calls and visits bridged the gaps created by geography. So, despite varied lifestyles and responsibilities, they prioritized reunions, whether virtual or in person, cherishing the moments they shared.
Fast forward to 50 years later, Carol, the eldest of the four, who was always considerate and thoughtful, thought they should do something to celebrate their everlasting friendship. However, things were not easy as she had expected. Worried, she was at a loss where to start. But to her great joy, her grandson, Mike, who was having a summer break, volunteered to help her after hearing the story with her lifelong friends. The first thing he did was to look over his grandma's old stuff.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段： An old photo attracted his attention immediately. 第二段： Soon, each of them received a package.
文章大意：
Carol、Marion、Susan 和 Mary 从小学起就是好友，一起度过无数欢乐时光，十七岁去海边旅行时友谊升温，还留下珍贵合影。高中毕业后，四人各奔东西追求学业与事业，虽相隔甚远但通过各种方式维系友情，五十年后，作为大姐的 Carol 想庆祝这段长久友谊，孙子 Mike 听闻后主动帮忙，从翻找旧物开启行动。
故事山分析：
开端：四人自幼结下深厚友谊，青少年时海边之旅留下美好回忆。
发展：毕业后分赴各地，仍努力维系友情。
高潮：五十年后 Carol 想庆祝，Mike 帮忙找旧物，发现关键物品，后续需续写庆祝筹备及老友反应。
结局：待构建，应展现友情延续与升华。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应：
伏笔：四人从小亲密无间，分享秘密，续写回应：五十年后收到 Mike 寄来的包裹，睹物思人，回忆潮涌，感慨岁月未淡友情，更加珍视彼此。
伏笔：十七岁海边之旅留下合影，续写回应：Mike 发现旧照，以照片为核心筹备庆祝，勾起老友青春记忆，成为情感纽带，串联起五十年岁月。
伏笔：毕业后各奔东西，靠多种方式保持联系，续写回应：收到包裹后，迫不及待线上分享感受，即便相隔千里，心瞬间拉近，凸显友情坚韧。
伏笔：Carol 想庆祝友谊却不知从何下手，续写回应：Mike 的行动推动进程，他的用心让 Carol 欣慰，也为老友重聚铺垫，展现年轻一代对长辈情谊的助力。
伏笔：Mike 主动帮忙且先翻旧物，续写回应：找到照片，精心筹备包裹，用充满回忆的物品给老友惊喜，体现他的聪慧细心，延续友谊火种。
续写要点：
第一段：
要点：描述 Mike 看到旧照片后的所思所想，如何以照片为灵感策划特别庆祝方式，比如制作复刻版当年穿搭、准备写有回忆话语的卡片，联系冲印店放大照片等，展现他的用心。
情感线：因受奶奶友情触动而满怀热忱，期待给老人们带来惊喜，对传承这份情谊充满干劲。
故事线：Mike 端详旧照，忆起奶奶讲述的故事；联系裁缝、文具店、冲印店筹备；精心打包物品，贴上写有四人名字的标签。
第二段：
要点：讲述老友们收到包裹后的反应，打开看到熟悉又陌生的复刻物品，回忆如潮水般涌来，她们或落泪或欢笑，通过电话、视频分享感受，约定相聚，彰显友情经岁月沉淀后的醇厚。
情感线：从惊讶、感动到迫不及待相聚的喜悦，沉浸在回忆与重逢期待中，感恩岁月留情。
故事线：收到包裹，惊讶于寄件人；打开看到旧照复刻品、卡片等，眼眶湿润；纷纷联系彼此，视频中欢笑感慨；约定见面日期，满心欢喜筹备。
情感线：
Mike 凝视旧照，仿若踏入时光隧道，被奶奶的青春友情深深触动，一腔热忱为惊喜奔忙。精心筹备时，满是对传递温暖的期待。老友们收到包裹，惊讶瞬间击中心房，打开刹那，熟悉物件拽出回忆洪流，眼眶湿润，笑声与泪花交织。视频电话里，感慨跨越时空，迫不及待相约重聚，喜悦在心底疯长，五十年风雨未淡情谊，感恩岁月让重逢更暖。
故事线：
Mike 发现旧照，被照片背后故事吸引。
他联系多方，筹备复刻版穿搭、卡片、放大照片。
精心打包，标注四人名字，寄给各位奶奶。
老友们收到包裹，诧异寄件人身份。
打开包裹，睹物思人，激动落泪、欢笑分享。
线上约定相聚，满心欢喜筹备重逢。
主旨升华句：
True friendship is like a fine wine that gets better with age, and theirs was a vintage that had aged gloriously.（真正的友谊就像美酒，越陈越香，而她们的友谊是一瓶历经岁月沉淀而愈发醇厚的佳酿。）
In a world full of changes, their unwavering friendship remained a constant, a lighthouse guiding them through life's storms.（在这个充满变化的世界里，她们坚定不移的友谊始终如一，如同一座灯塔，指引她们穿越人生的风暴。）
Fifty years of separation only strengthened the bond they shared, proving that distance and time are no match for true friends.（五十年的分离只会让她们之间的情谊更加深厚，证明了距离和时间都无法与真正的朋友抗衡。）
The power of friendship lies not only in the shared memories but also in the ability to reignite the spark after decades apart.（友谊的力量不仅在于共同的回忆，还在于分别数十年后仍能重燃激情的能力。）
Their story is a testament to the fact that friendship, once kindled, can burn brightly for a lifetime and beyond.（她们的故事证明了，一旦点燃友谊之火，它就能在一生乃至更久的时间里熊熊燃烧。）
写作示范两篇：
第一篇：
An old photo attracted his attention immediately. It was the picture taken in Torquay in 1972. Mike's eyes lit up as he held it, imagining the fun his grandma and her friends must have had. He decided to recreate that moment. He contacted a local tailor to make replicas of their blue jeans and white shirts. Then, he went to a stationery store to buy some vintage-looking cards and wrote down memories shared by Carol over the years. After getting the photo enlarged at a print shop, he carefully packaged everything, labeling each item with the four ladies' names.
Soon, each of them received a package. Carol was the first to open it. As she saw the familiar photo and the clothes replica, tears welled up in her eyes. She immediately called the others. Marion, Susan, and Mary, all had the same reaction. Through video calls, they laughed and cried, reminiscing about that summer. They all agreed that they couldn't wait to meet in person and relive those golden days. Their friendship, rekindled by a young heart, was set to continue shining brightly.
第二篇：
An old photo attracted his attention immediately. Staring at the faded image, Mike was captivated by the carefree smiles of the four young girls. Inspired, he sprang into action. He searched online for the exact style of jeans and shirts, ordering custom-made replicas. Next, he dug through his grandma's photo albums for more snapshots and made a small collage. With a heartfelt note attached, he placed it all in a box. He even found a small shell from a local beach to add a touch of Torquay.
Soon, each of them received a package. Susan opened hers at work and gasped. The memories came flooding back. She quickly dialed the others. Mary, who was reading in her study, dropped her book and joined the call. Marion, in the middle of a hospital shift, took a break to see what was inside. Their voices filled with emotion as they talked about the past. They planned a reunion trip to Torquay, determined to make new memories while honoring the old. Their friendship, once again, proved to be timeless.
参考答案
（1）An old photo attracted his attention immediately. It was the photo from that memorable summer in Torquay in 1972. The four girls, with their youthful smiles and carefree postures, seemed to leap out of the picture. Mike could almost hear their laughter carried by the sea breeze. He realized this photo was a treasure trove of memories for his grandma and her friends. He carefully scanned the photo and had high-quality prints made. Then, he got creative. He added small notes on the back of each print, jotting down some of the funniest moments they had shared during that trip. He also found some vintage postcards of Torquay and included them in the package.
Soon, each of them received a package. As they unwrapped it, a rush of emotions overwhelmed them. The photo, now pristine and accompanied by the postcards and notes, took them back in time. Carol's letter spoke of the unbreakable bond they had formed and how this photo was a symbol of their enduring friendship. She suggested they each write a short memory on the back of the photo and send it back to her, so they could create a collective memory book. The idea sparked enthusiasm among them. They called each other, their voices filled with excitement and anticipation. They couldn't wait to start this new chapter in their friendship story, just like they had eagerly planned their adventures in the past.

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