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Outside the first few stars were beginning to appear. Dadu climbed on his bicycle and as my friend Aslam and I jogged along beside him, he said, “Come on, boys, can’t you keep up with an old man ” I wished I had been at home, studying for that exam tomorrow... But Dadu was counting on me. We needed the money. He worked hard so I could stay in school although he once told me that he never liked the work. As we crossed the train tracks, two policemen passed by.
We melted silently into the shadows of the forest. Dadu switched on his torch. The flash of light swept the trees, illuminating enormous spider webs stretched between tree branches like soft nets.
“A den(兽窝) is near, so you both stay here and watch. I’m going further on to another den.” Dadu handed Aslam an old cardboard box. “Remember, the traders won’t pay for an empty box. I am counting on you, boys.” Dadu left.
“This makes me frightened,” Aslam said, “if we get caught out there hunting for a pangolin (穿山甲), we could go to prison!”
The moon climbed higher into the sky... “Oy! What’s that noise ” Aslam shouted.
My heart sank. A pangolin. For a while I held my breath, watching the pangolin sweep dry leaves with its flat, brown-gray tail. Its tiny eyes shined. With long claws(爪子), it dug through a pile of dirt. And then in the moonlight, we saw it.
Aslam picked up the box. “Get it, Rahim! Then let’s call your grandpa and get out of here!”
“I can’t.” My voice sounded as quiet as a flower unfolding its petals. “You have to,” Aslam said. “Your grandpa said you have to be a man, remember ” “I know, I know!” I was almost shouting.
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一、文章大意
故事开篇描绘了夜幕降临时，“我” 和 Aslam 跟着 Dadu 外出，尽管 “我” 心系明日考试，但因家里需要钱，Dadu 又指望 “我”，只能同行。他们穿越铁轨、躲进森林，准备猎捕穿山甲赚钱。在发现穿山甲后，“我” 内心挣扎，最终出于良知拒绝抓捕，Dadu 在了解情况后认同了 “我” 们的做法，大家决定放弃捕猎，寻找正当谋生途径，带着新希望回家，保护了穿山甲也坚守了道德底线。
二、故事山分析
开端：夜幕降临，“我”、Aslam 随 Dadu 外出，交代背景，三人准备捕猎穿山甲补贴家用，“我” 虽不情愿但无奈跟随，营造出略带无奈、紧张的氛围，为后续故事发展做铺垫。
发展：途中遇警察，三人躲进森林，Dadu 安排分工，凸显捕猎的非法与隐秘，加剧紧张感；发现穿山甲后，Aslam 催促抓捕，“我” 内心极度矛盾，将情节推向高潮。
高潮：“我” 战胜私欲，拒绝抓捕穿山甲，与 Aslam 产生冲突又化解，展现人性抉择。
结局：Dadu 认可 “我” 们做法，决定放弃捕猎，众人回家，故事走向温暖、光明，传递正能量。
三、伏笔及续写回应
伏笔：“Dadu worked hard so I could stay in school although he once told me that he never liked the work.” 续写回应：表明 Dadu 一直以来为生活所迫从事不喜欢的工作，为后文他愿意放弃捕猎，寻找新谋生方式埋下伏笔，因为他本身就对这份工作心存不满，只是为了生计。
伏笔：“We melted silently into the shadows of the forest.” 续写回应：体现捕猎行为的隐秘性，暗示其非法性，所以当 “我” 和 Aslam 决定放弃捕猎时，也害怕被 Dadu 责骂，担心违背这种隐秘非法活动的 “规矩”。
伏笔：“The traders won’t pay for an empty box. I am counting on you, boys.” 续写回应：强调 Dadu 对捕猎成果的重视，突出赚钱不易，使得 “我” 拒绝抓捕时内心压力巨大，同时也衬托出后面 Dadu 转变态度的难能可贵。
伏笔：“Aslam said, ‘if we get caught out there hunting for a pangolin (穿山甲), we could go to prison!’” 续写回应：再次点明捕猎穿山甲是违法犯罪行为，让 “我” 和 Aslam 在面对抉择时更加谨慎，也为后文果断放弃提供依据，因为一旦被抓后果严重。
伏笔：“Dadu said you have to be a man, remember ” 续写回应：前文 Dadu 强调 “男子气概”，与 “我” 此刻坚守良知的抉择形成对比，“我” 用行动诠释了真正的 “男子气概” 并非盲目听从，而是明辨是非，升华主题。
四、续写要点
第一段：
描述 Dadu 得知未捕到穿山甲后的复杂表情与心理活动，他可能会陷入短暂沉思，回忆过往捕猎经历及内心纠结。
展现 “我” 和 Aslam 的忐忑不安，担心受到责备，同时坚定自己保护穿山甲的立场，准备好应对 Dadu 的反应。
第二段：
重点写 Dadu 的态度转变，他如何从起初的依赖捕猎谋生，到被 “我” 们的行为触动，意识到错误。
描绘众人离开森林时的场景，包括自然环境描写，衬托人物心情舒畅，以及对未来的展望，提及寻找合法赚钱途径的决心。
五、情感线
故事起始，“我” 充满无奈与不情愿，因考试在即却要参与捕猎；随着接近穿山甲，恐惧与纠结涌上心头，一方面害怕违背 Dadu 期望，一方面良知谴责捕猎行为；当拒绝抓捕时，内心有短暂的坚定与释然；面对 Dadu 靠近，又极度忐忑；最后 Dadu 认可，大家转为欣慰与充满希望，决心开启新生活，这条情感线丰富且跌宕起伏，紧扣故事发展。
六、故事线
开篇点明时间、人物出行缘由，“我” 心牵考试却因经济压力随 Dadu、Aslam 外出捕猎。
途中遇警察躲避，进入森林，Dadu 安排两人守兽窝，凸显捕猎风险与谨慎。
发现穿山甲，Aslam 催促，“我” 内心挣扎，拒绝抓捕。
Dadu 归来，知晓情况，陷入沉默思考。
Dadu 认可 “我” 们做法，决定放弃捕猎。
众人离开森林，怀揣希望回家，准备另谋生计。
七、主旨升华句
“True courage lies not in blindly following orders, but in standing up for what is right, even when it's difficult.”（真正的勇气不在于盲目听从命令，而在于即便困难重重，依然坚守正义。）
“Protecting the innocent is not just a choice, but a responsibility that defines our humanity.”（保护无辜生灵不只是一种选择，更是彰显人性的责任。）
“In the face of temptation, our conscience should always be the guiding light that leads us to the right path.”（面对诱惑，良知应始终是指引我们走向正途的明灯。）
“Sometimes, giving up immediate gains means gaining something far more precious: our integrity.”（有时，放弃眼前利益意味着收获更为珍贵的东西：我们的正直。）
“Wealth obtained through immoral means is but a hollow victory; true prosperity comes from a clean conscience.”（通过不道德手段获取的财富只是空洞的胜利；真正的富足源自问心无愧。）
八、写作示范
第一篇：
As Dadu walked up to us, his eyes fixed on the empty box, a frown creased his forehead. For a moment, the silence was deafening. I could almost hear my heart pounding in my ears. Aslam and I exchanged nervous glances, bracing ourselves for the scolding we thought was coming. But then, Dadu's stern expression softened. He looked at the pangolin, now scurrying further away, and let out a sigh. "Boys," he said quietly, "I've seen too many of these creatures suffer. I was wrong to drag you into this." Relief washed over us. We joined Dadu, and as we made our way out of the forest, the moonlight bathed our path. We knew there would be hardships ahead, finding a new way to earn money, but our hearts were light. The stars above seemed to wink at us, as if in agreement that we had made the right choice.
Back home, we huddled around the kitchen table, Dadu's face determined. "Tomorrow," he said, "we'll start looking for honest work. Maybe farming, or helping out at the local market." I nodded, feeling a new sense of purpose. We had not only saved a life but also found a new direction for ours.
第二篇：
When Dadu reached us and saw the untouched box, his shoulders slumped. I could sense his disappointment, not at us, but at the situation he had put us all in. Aslam shuffled his feet, and I swallowed hard, ready to defend our decision. But before I could say a word, Dadu spoke. "I'm proud of you two," he murmured. "I've been having sleepless nights, knowing this was wrong. But I was too stubborn to change." His admission took us by surprise. The pangolin peeked out from behind a bush, as if listening. We left it there, unharmed.
Walking out of the forest, the night air felt cool and refreshing. Dadu put his arms around our shoulders. "We'll find a way," he said. "A way that doesn't cost these precious animals their lives." As we neared home, we saw the first rays of dawn breaking. It was a new beginning. We planned to visit the village elders, seek their advice on legitimate livelihoods. With hope in our hearts and a clean conscience, we stepped forward into a future that was uncertain but filled with possibilities.
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Holding the pangolin, I could feel its heart beating. The scales were cool under my fingertips. My stomach churned. I knew that Dadu was counting on me and I should stay in school, but I also knew what the traders would do with the pangolin. Never should I let such a thing happen, although Aslam could’t understand. Then I did what I must do to be a “man”. I found the darkest place I could to nestle the pangolin and left.
We reached home with an empty box. I bowed my head. “Dadu,” I said, “I’m sorry I could not do what you asked me.” My heart felt as heavy as a cloud inside of me. I felt Dadu’s old, rough hands on my face. “Rahim, you are tender-hearted. I never liked the work.” He raised a finger before I could argue. “I will make ends meet somehow. Don’t you worry.” I nodded my head and looked back at the forest which glowed like a king’s crown with orchids. And deep in its green heart, the
pangolin would be safe.

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