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In a world where negativity often seems to dominate the headlines, it’s easy to overlook the small acts of kindness that can make a significant difference in someone’s day. I recently experienced this first hand during a particularly challenging week.
I had a hard day at work, my week didn’t go well and problems just kept popping up everywhere. Things broke or quit, unexpected bills came in and I was struggling to cope with all the stress. Then an unexpected run to the store popped up, when all I wanted to do was go home and well, I felt like I was at the boiling point.
I made the trip across town to the store, even though I only needed a few things, and found the parking lot packed. To add to it, the person next to where I was going to park seemed to think his car was entitled to TWO parking spots, which bothered me when it was a small vehicle and it parked on the middle line of two spaces, clearly taking them both. I finally parked and then realized I had left my purse, with my debit card (借记卡), checkbook, etc., at home that day. Thankfully, I had a small amount of cash, so I grabbed it and my coupon (优惠券) book and went inside, thinking that with the coupons, I would even have some cash left over. The store was really busy, but I just went and found the few things I needed and got in one of the few lanes open, and prepared to wait.
I waited and waited. Meanwhile, my impatience grew. After a stressful day, all I wanted to do was go home, but I was stuck in the checkout line. The line I joined seemed to crawl at a snail’s pace. My stress levels were rising. I was shifting restlessly while waiting in line when I spotted an old lady standing behind me. It seemed that she sensed my anxiety because she cast a kind smile. Awkwardly returning a smile, I kept waiting. After what seemed like an age, it was my turn and I got to the front.
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第一段：However, things didn’t go as I had expected.
第二段：I was about to go back for more cash when I felt a pat on my shoulder.
一、文章大意
文章开篇点明在充斥着负面新闻的世界里，小小的善举意义重大。接着讲述 “我” 诸事不顺的一周，工作碰壁、东西损坏、意外账单来袭，去商店购物时又遭遇停车不顺、忘带钱包等状况。结账时优惠券过期，现金不够，尴尬之际，身后的老太太雪中送炭，帮 “我” 解了围，让 “我” 感受到善意无处不在，驱散了整日的阴霾。
二、故事山分析
伏笔一：开篇提及一周诸事不顺，为后文购物时频出状况做铺垫，回应：后续在商店遇到停车难、忘带钱包、优惠券不能用等一系列烦心事，都源于这倒霉的一周。
伏笔二：发现旁边车辆占两个车位，让心情本就糟糕的 “我” 更加烦躁，回应：侧面烘托出 “我” 当时糟糕的心境，与后文结账遇困时的焦急相呼应，都是在压力下情绪的展现。
伏笔三：忘带钱包只带少量现金，暗示购物可能会出现资金问题，回应：结账时优惠券失效，现金不够，直接引发了尴尬局面。
伏笔四：老人站在身后，且之前对 “我” 报以微笑，为后面老人帮助 “我” 埋下伏笔，回应：关键时刻老人递来现金，她之前的善意铺垫让这一行为顺理成章。
伏笔五：开篇强调小善举的重要，为故事结尾老人的善举升华主旨做铺垫，回应：结尾处 “我” 因老人的帮助体悟到善意常在，回扣开篇。
三、续写要点
第一段：可详细描写 “我” 接过钱后的动作、神态，比如手微微颤抖着接过钱，眼中满是感激，向老人再三道谢，周围人的反应，有人投来赞许的目光，让 “我” 越发觉得温暖。
第二段：写结完账后，“我” 与老人一起走出商店，交流几句，得知老人也曾有过类似艰难时刻，所以懂得援手的重要。“我” 再次表达感激，老人微笑着离开，“我” 望着她背影，心中感慨万千。
四、情感线
起初，“我” 满心烦躁、焦虑，工作和生活的压力让 “我” 濒临崩溃，停车、忘带钱包等状况加剧了负面情绪；结账遇困时，尴尬与窘迫达到顶点；老人伸出援手后，“我” 先是惊讶、感动得说不出话，接着满心感激，最后领悟到善意的力量，心情由阴转晴，内心满是温暖与对生活的希望。
五、故事线
“我” 本周诸事不顺，心情低落。
去商店购物，遭遇停车难题。
忘带钱包，带少量现金想用优惠券省钱。
结账时优惠券过期，现金不足陷入尴尬。
老人雪中送炭，递来现金。
“我” 感受善意，心情转变，领悟生活真谛。
六、主旨升华句
A small act of kindness is like a candle in the dark, lighting up the way for those who are lost.（小小的善举就像黑暗中的蜡烛，为迷路的人照亮前行的路。）
In the sea of difficulties, kindness is the lifebuoy that keeps us afloat.（在困难的海洋中，善良是让我们漂浮的救生圈。）
Kindness is the bridge that connects our troubled hearts, leading us to the warmth of humanity.（善良是连接我们疲惫心灵的桥梁，引领我们走向人性的温暖。）
Even the tiniest spark of kindness can ignite a fire of hope in the coldest winter of our lives.（即使是最微小的善举火花，也能在我们人生最寒冷的冬天点燃希望之火。）
When kindness knocks on the door of our distress, it brings with it the sunshine that dispels all the clouds.（当善良敲响我们苦难的大门时，它带来的阳光会驱散所有阴霾。）
七、写作示范
第一篇
续写第一段：With trembling hands, I took the money from her, my eyes glistening with tears of gratitude. “Thank you so much, ma’am. I don’t know what I would have done without you.” I choked out. The people around us in the line also seemed touched, nodding their heads in approval. Their silent acknowledgement made this moment even more special, filling the air with an intangible warmth.
续写第二段：After paying the bill, I walked out of the store with the old lady. We exchanged a few words, and I learned that she had once gone through tough times herself, which was why she understood my plight so well. I thanked her again from the bottom of my heart. As she walked away with a gentle smile, I stood there, watching her receding figure, overwhelmed by the realization that a simple act of kindness could have such a profound impact. It was a reminder that no matter how difficult life gets, there is always kindness waiting to embrace us.
第二篇
续写第一段：My hand hesitated for a second before reaching out to take the money. I was so astonished that it took me a moment to find my voice. “You are an angel. I really appreciate this.” I said, my voice cracking with emotion. The cashier, too, was visibly moved and gave me an understanding smile. In that instant, the hustle and bustle of the store seemed to fade away, leaving only the kindness that radiated from the old lady.
续写第二段：Once outside, I caught up with the old lady. We chatted briefly, and she shared a bit of her own story of struggle and how kindness had once saved her day. Her words resonated deeply with me. When we parted ways, I watched her disappear into the crowd, a newfound sense of hope blooming in my chest. That day, not only did I receive the money I needed, but I also received a precious gift – the knowledge that kindness is a never-ending cycle, and it was my turn to pass it on.
【答案】However, things didn’t go as I had expected. When the cashier scanned my items, the total cost was more than the cash I had. I was embarrassed and didn’t know what to do. I started to explain my situation to the cashier, feeling really frustrated. The people behind me in line were starting to get impatient as well. Just when I thought things couldn’t get worse, I felt a sense of hopelessness. I thought I would have to go back home to get more cash.
I was about to go back for more cash when I felt a pat on my shoulder. It was the old lady behind me. She handed me some money and said with a warm smile, “Don’t worry, dear. We all have tough days.” Her kindness made me feel so touched. I thanked her sincerely and paid the bill. I left the store feeling grateful and realized that small acts of kindness could indeed have a big impact. This small act of kindness really brightened my day. I made up my mind that in the future I would do my best to help the people around to pass on the kindness.

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