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假定你是李华，你计划寒假期间去海南旅游，留学生朋友Jack得知消息后想和你一起去。请你根据下面的要点提示，给他写一封电子邮件：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 旅游安排；
3. 你的期待。
注意：
1. 词数80字左右。
2. 书写清晰、工整。
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一、写作提纲
第一段：表达欢迎
开篇点明收到 Jack 想一同旅游的消息，用热情洋溢的语句表达欢迎，如 “I was overjoyed to hear that you’d like to join me on my trip to Hainan during the winter vacation. Welcome aboard!”，让 Jack 感受到真诚的接纳。
简单提及自己对这次旅行的期待心情，如 “I’ve been looking forward to this trip for ages, and it’ll surely be more fun with you by my side.”，为下文介绍旅行安排做铺垫。
第二段：旅游安排
交通方面：告知 Jack 往返的交通方式，若是乘坐飞机，说明航班信息，如 “We’ll take a direct flight to Haikou on [具体日期] and the flight number is [航班号]. It only takes about [时长] hours, which is quite convenient.”，确保行程清晰。
住宿安排：介绍预定的酒店位置、特色，例如 “Our hotel is located near the beach in Sanya. It has a beautiful sea view and offers various amenities like a swimming pool and a beach bar.”，展现舒适的居住环境。
行程规划：按日期详述每日行程，第一天去海边漫步、享受日光浴；第二天参观热带雨林，感受大自然魅力；第三天游览当地著名景点如天涯海角，领略人文风情，如 “On the first day, we’ll stroll along the beach and soak up the sun. The second day is reserved for exploring the tropical rainforest. And on the third day, we’ll visit some famous local spots like Tianya Haijiao.”，让 Jack 知晓丰富多彩的游玩内容。
第三段：表达期待
再次强调对与 Jack 同行的期待，如 “I can’t wait to share this amazing journey with you and create some unforgettable memories.”，强化喜悦心情。
提及希望 Jack 提前做好准备，如准备合适衣物、了解当地文化习俗，以保障旅行顺利，如 “Make sure to pack some light and breathable clothes. Also, it’d be great if you could learn a bit about the local customs in advance.”，为邮件画上友好、周全的句号。
二、语言积累
I was overjoyed to hear that you’d like to join me on my trip to Hainan during the winter vacation. Welcome aboard!（得知你想在寒假和我一起去海南旅行，我高兴极了。欢迎加入！）
I’ve been looking forward to this trip for ages, and it’ll surely be more fun with you by my side.（我期待这次旅行很久了，有你在身边肯定会更有趣。）
We’ll take a direct flight to Haikou on [具体日期] and the flight number is [航班号]. It only takes about [时长] hours, which is quite convenient.（我们将在 [具体日期] 乘坐直飞海口的航班，航班号是 [航班号]。只需要大约 [时长] 小时，非常方便。）
Our hotel is located near the beach in Sanya. It has a beautiful sea view and offers various amenities like a swimming pool and a beach bar.（我们的酒店位于三亚海边附近。它有美丽的海景，还提供各种便利设施，如游泳池和海滩酒吧。）
On the first day, we’ll stroll along the beach and soak up the sun. The second day is reserved for exploring the tropical rainforest. And on the third day, we’ll visit some famous local spots like Tianya Haijiao.（第一天，我们将在海边漫步，享受日光浴。第二天安排去探索热带雨林。第三天，我们将游览一些当地著名景点，如天涯海角。）
I can’t wait to share this amazing journey with you and create some unforgettable memories.（我迫不及待地想和你分享这次奇妙的旅程，创造一些难忘的记忆。）
Make sure to pack some light and breathable clothes. Also, it’d be great if you could learn a bit about the local customs in advance.（一定要带上一些轻便透气的衣服。另外，如果你能提前了解一些当地习俗就太好了。）
Hainan is renowned for its warm climate and stunning natural scenery. I believe we’ll have a great time there.（海南以温暖的气候和迷人的自然风光而闻名。我相信我们在那里会玩得很开心。）
The local cuisine in Hainan is also something not to be missed. We can try some delicious seafood and tropical fruits.（海南的当地美食也不容错过。我们可以尝尝美味的海鲜和热带水果。）
This trip will be a wonderful opportunity for us to relax and get closer to nature. I’m really excited about it.（这次旅行将是我们放松身心、亲近自然的绝佳机会。我真的很兴奋。）
三、写作示范
第一篇
Dear Jack,
I was delighted to learn that you want to come with me to Hainan this winter vacation. You're more than welcome! I've been counting down the days to this trip, and now it'll be even better with you.
We'll fly to Sanya on January 10th, and our flight is CA123. Once we arrive, we'll check into a beachfront hotel with a private balcony overlooking the sea. For the next few days, we'll have a full schedule. The first day, we'll hit the beach and enjoy the sun and surf. Day two, we'll venture into the rainforest to discover unique plants and wildlife. On the final day, we'll visit some cultural landmarks like the Nanshan Temple.
I can't wait to start this adventure with you. Make sure to bring your swimsuit and sunglasses. Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Best regards,
Li Hua
第二篇
Dear Jack,
Hi! I was over the moon when I heard you'd like to join my Hainan trip. It's going to be epic!
We're taking a direct flight to Haikou on February 5th, flight number CZ345. The hotel we booked is in the downtown area, close to many restaurants and shops. It has a great rooftop pool.
Our itinerary is exciting. First day, we'll relax at the hotel pool and get acclimated. Then, we'll explore the famous Wuzhishan Mountains on the second day, hiking and enjoying the fresh air. On the last day, we'll go shopping at the local markets and buy some souvenirs.
I'm really looking forward to sharing this trip with you. Remember to pack some comfortable shoes and a hat. See you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
第三篇
Dear Jack,
Dear Jack,
I was thrilled to receive your message about joining me in Hainan. Welcome with open arms!
We'll depart on January 15th, flying to Sanya via MU567. Our accommodation is a cozy resort near a lagoon. It features a spa and a fitness center.
During the trip, on the first day, we'll take a boat tour around the bay, admiring the coastline. The second day, we'll visit a local fishing village and learn about their way of life. And on the third day, we'll have a beach barbecue at sunset.
I'm eager to have you along. Don't forget to bring sunscreen and a camera. I'm sure we'll have an unforgettable time.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
参考答案：
Dear Jack,
I’m excited to know that you are willing to spend the winter vacation in Hainan with me.
I’d like to share my travel plan with you. First, I will go there by train. Besides, I am planning
to stay there for five days to fully enjoy myself. It won’t be so hot there then, so playing beach volleyball is still able to be done. Above all, I will attend a few traditional festivals there. Such is my plan. If you’d like to join me, please tell me.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

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