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One morning in June 2023, a high school student Alex saw a community message on social media. A strong storm the night before had caused many trees in a nearby small park to fall, and part of the park was closed off. The message said that the park’s management team was cleaning up the fallen trees, but they needed more volunteers to help.
Alex was a member of the school ‘ volunteer club. He quickly called the club leader, explained the situation, and asked for agreement to help. They quickly put on work clothes, asked the management team if they had enough tools, and got a positive answer. They rode their bikes, with gloves, to the park.
When they arrived, they saw the park’s management team, including Mr Thompson and several other workers, working hard to clear the fallen trees.
Alex walked up and greeted them warmly, “Good morning, everyone, we’re here to help!”
The park manager Mr Thompson smiled, “You came. That’s great! The work here is too much, and we don’t have enough people.”
Everyone worked together. Some cut the big trees into smaller pieces, while others moved them to a pile (堆). They also used brooms (扫帚) and garbage bags to clean up leaves. Although the work was hard, they encouraged each other, and the work went quickly.
While cleaning, they found a frightened little bird. The bird ‘ wing seemed hurt, and it couldn’t fly. Alex gently held the bird in his hand and said to his friend bake, “We need to help it.”
They made a temporary nest (临时的鸟窝) for the bird with leaves and soft grass and placed it in a bate place. They contacted the local animal rescue organization and described the bird’s situation to the worker.
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After that, they went on cleaning the park.
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As they looked at the clean park, workers from the animal rescue organization arrived.
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文章大意
2023年6月的一个早晨，高中生亚历克斯看到社交媒体上的社区消息，得知前一晚的强风暴致使附近小公园许多树木倒下，公园部分区域关闭。身为学校志愿者俱乐部成员的亚历克斯，迅速联系俱乐部负责人，一同前往公园帮忙清理。在公园，他们与管理团队携手工作，期间发现一只受伤的小鸟，为其制作临时鸟窝并联系了当地动物救援组织。
故事山分析
开篇：通过社交媒体消息引出公园因风暴树木倒下需要清理，以及亚历克斯看到消息决定参与志愿活动，为故事发展奠定基础。
发展：亚历克斯联系俱乐部负责人，一同前往公园，与管理团队见面后开始清理工作，在清理过程中发现受伤小鸟，这是情节的进一步推进。
转折：发现小鸟并为其采取救助措施，使故事发展方向发生转折，从单纯的公园清理工作延伸到对动物的救助。
高潮（待续写）：第一段续写他们继续清理公园的过程，以及遇到的困难或有趣的事情；第二段续写动物救援组织到来后的情况，如对小鸟的检查、对志愿者的赞扬等。
主题：该故事展现了志愿者们热心公益、爱护环境与动物的美好品质，传递了积极向上的正能量，强调了社区互助和关爱生命的重要性。
伏笔及续写回应
伏笔：“The work here is too much, and we don't have enough people.”
回应：表明公园清理工作艰巨，为后续志愿者们在清理过程中可能遇到困难，如清理大树时工具不足、体力不支等埋下伏笔，在续写第一段中可体现志愿者们如何克服这些困难，完成清理工作。
伏笔：“They contacted the local animal rescue organization and described the bird’s situation to the worker.”
回应：联系动物救援组织后，自然引出救援人员到来后的情节，在续写第二段中，救援人员的到来会对小鸟的命运产生影响，同时也可能对志愿者的行为给予评价，推动故事发展。
伏笔：“Alex was a member of the school ‘ volunteer club.”
回应：体现亚历克斯的志愿者身份，为他积极参与公园清理及后续认真救助小鸟的行为提供合理性依据，也暗示了志愿者俱乐部成员在活动中可能展现出的团队协作精神，在续写中可进一步体现他们的团队合作，如共同应对清理工作中的难题。
伏笔：“The bird ‘ wing seemed hurt, and it couldn't fly.”
回应：描述小鸟受伤情况，决定了后续动物救援组织到来后的工作重点，在续写第二段中，救援人员会针对小鸟的伤势进行检查和处理，这是故事发展的关键环节。
伏笔：“They made a temporary nest (临时的鸟窝) for the bird with leaves and soft grass and placed it in a bate place.”
回应：制作临时鸟窝体现志愿者对小鸟的关爱，在续写第二段中，动物救援组织人员到来后会看到志愿者为小鸟所做的努力，这可能会引发他们对志愿者的赞扬等情节。
续写要点
第一段
继续清理工作：描述他们继续清理公园时遇到的困难，如遇到特别粗大的树干难以搬运，或是在清理角落时发现更多杂物。
克服困难：讲述志愿者们如何通过团队协作克服困难，如一起想办法利用工具分割树干，或是分组清理杂物提高效率。
完成清理：最终完成公园大部分区域的清理，展现出公园逐渐恢复整洁的场景。
第二段
救援人员到来：描写动物救援组织人员到达后的场景，如他们的着装、携带的工具等。
检查小鸟：救援人员对小鸟进行仔细检查，告知志愿者小鸟的伤势情况及后续治疗方案。
赞扬与感悟：救援人员对志愿者的善举表示赞扬，志愿者们也从这次经历中获得关于关爱动物、参与公益的深刻感悟。
情感线
故事开头，志愿者们怀着热情参与公园清理工作，在发现受伤小鸟时，他们的情感转为担忧与关切，积极为小鸟提供帮助。在续写第一段中，面对清理工作的困难，他们的情感有紧张和焦虑，但通过努力克服困难后，又充满成就感。第二段中，动物救援组织到来时，志愿者们的情感是期待与好奇，听到对小鸟的诊断和赞扬后，内心充满自豪与满足，整个情感线围绕着志愿活动的经历逐步发展和升华。
故事线
亚历克斯看到公园清理的社区消息，联系学校志愿者俱乐部负责人决定前往帮忙。
志愿者们到达公园，与管理团队会合后开始清理倒下的树木、清扫树叶等工作。
清理过程中发现一只受伤的小鸟，志愿者们为其制作临时鸟窝并联系动物救援组织。
志愿者们继续清理公园，遇到困难并通过团队协作克服，完成大部分清理工作。
动物救援组织人员到达公园。
救援人员检查小鸟伤势，对志愿者的行为表示赞扬，志愿者们从这次经历中获得感悟。
主旨升华句
Through volunteering, we not only restore the beauty of our environment but also extend a helping hand to those in need, be it human or animal.（通过志愿服务，我们不仅恢复了环境的美丽，还向有需要的人或动物伸出了援助之手。）
Every act of kindness, whether big or small, contributes to a more harmonious and compassionate world, as seen in our efforts to clean the park and save the little bird.（每一个善举，无论大小，都有助于构建一个更和谐、更有同情心的世界，正如我们清理公园和拯救小鸟的努力所体现的那样。）
Our community spirit shines brightly when we come together to face challenges, like the storm - damaged park, and show care for every living being within it.（当我们团结起来面对挑战，如遭受风暴破坏的公园，并关爱其中的每一个生命时，我们的社区精神闪耀着光芒。）
The experience of volunteering in the park taught us that our actions can have a profound impact, not only on the physical space but also on the lives of those around us, just like the rescued bird.（在公园做志愿者的经历告诉我们，我们的行动可以产生深远的影响，不仅对物质空间，而且对我们周围的生命，就像那只获救的小鸟一样。）
In the process of cleaning the park and helping the injured bird, we learned the true meaning of responsibility, which is to take care of our surroundings and protect every life form.（在清理公园和帮助受伤小鸟的过程中，我们学到了责任的真正含义，即照顾我们的周围环境，保护每一种生命形式。）
写作示范两篇
第一篇
第一段
After that, they went on cleaning the park. As they were moving a particularly large tree trunk, they realized it was too heavy for them to handle alone. Alex quickly came up with a plan. He asked some volunteers to find thick ropes while others fetched a sturdy wooden plank. They tied the ropes around the trunk and used the plank as a lever. With everyone working together, they managed to move the trunk bit by bit. Despite the hard work and sweating, their spirits remained high. After hours of effort, most of the fallen trees were cleared, and the park started to regain its former look.
第二段
As they looked at the clean park, workers from the animal rescue organization arrived. Two professionals in white uniforms stepped out of the van, carrying a small medical kit. They carefully examined the little bird. One of them said, "The bird's wing is fractured, but thanks to your timely help, it has a good chance of recovery." They praised the volunteers for their kindness and responsibility. Alex and his friends felt a sense of pride. This experience not only made the park clean but also taught them the importance of caring for nature and its creatures.
第二篇
第一段
After that, they went on cleaning the park. While cleaning a secluded corner, they found a large pile of old branches and debris that had been hidden under the fallen trees. It was a tough job to clear it all. But the volunteers didn't give up. They divided themselves into groups, with some using axes to chop the large branches into smaller pieces and others filling garbage bags. They encouraged each other throughout the process. With their combined efforts, the corner was finally cleaned up. The park was now almost completely back to its normal state.
第二段
As they looked at the clean park, workers from the animal rescue organization arrived. The rescuers were impressed by the clean park and the well - made temporary nest. They gently picked up the bird and examined it closely. One of the rescuers said, "You kids did a great job. This bird will be taken to our center for treatment and will be released back into the wild when it's fully recovered." The volunteers were happy to hear that. They realized that their small actions could make a big difference, both to the park and to the life of the little bird.
参考答案
After that, they went on cleaning the park. A few hours later, the corner of the park Was finally cleaned up. Mr Thompson looked gratefully at all the volunteers and said, “You are amazing. Without your help, we don’t know how long it would have taken to finish this work.” Alex smiled and said, “It’s what we should do, Mr Thompson. The park belongs to all of us, and we all want it to return to normal as soon as possible.”
As they looked at the clean park, workers from the animal rescue organization arrived. They carefully took the bird and said they would take it for a check-up and treatment. Alex and Jake watched the bird being taken away, feeling very warm and satisfied inside. By evening, the park had returned to its usual peace and beauty. The setting sun cast a warm glow on the clean grass. Alex and Jake sat on a bench, watching people coming and going in the park, feeling a great sense of achievement.

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