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高二英语期末冲刺读后考前点拨及必背句式短语
读后续写写作思路考前点拨
一、5R解读故事
1. Read for characters(人物)
2. Read for conflict/ problems(冲突/问题)
3. Read for plot(情节)
4. Read for emotional changes(情感变化)
5. Read for theme(主题)
二、3大续写原则
1. Action一Response原则: 角色A的所言、所行、所感、所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。每段对话1-2句， 不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种response。
2. Conflict —Solution原则: 一般而言第二段会有问题的solution。(同时思考: 能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看另一方面也是给第二段作铺垫。)
3. negative一Positive原则：写作中一定要有情感的变化, 无论前面是怎样的情感，最终都应该是积极的。
三、写作口诀
1. 两段首句定一框：由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架。
2.二框二首正能量：第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。
四、十句五定法
整个读后续写大概分10句话，每段各5句（其中第1/5/10句至关重要）
第1句：情感描写（情感万能句）
第2句：细节描写（可用分词/形容词作状语）
第3句：对话描写（如文章不存在对话可写内心独白等）
第4句：细节描写（使用with复合结构/独立主格结构等）
第5句：过渡衔接句（通过第二段第一句写出，可使用时间状语从句，定语从句等）
第6句：衔接句（第2段的第1句，衔接前面一句给出内容，可用倒装）
第7句：细节描写（可适当添加环境描写）
第8句：细节描写（可用无灵主语，呼应第一句存在的情绪变化）
第9句：引出道理（可用强调句）
第10句：结尾感悟+万能结构
读后续写必背句式及短语
情感(4)
So情感adj.was/were sb. that +从句
(So+adv. did sb. do..that+从句 某人如此...以至于...)
So terrified of being called on to answer questions was he that he lowered his head. 他如此害怕被提问以至于他低下了头。
So determined was David that he finally reached the finishing line and all the students cheered for him. 大卫如此坚定，他终于到达了终点，所有的学生都为他欢呼。
So loudly did she speak that everyone could hear her clearly. 她讲的如此大声以至于每个人都可以听清楚。
情感adj. and 情感adj., sb. did sth. 又...又...，某人做某事
Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family. 又疲惫又害怕，简躺在一块石头旁边，想念她的家人。
Determined and inspired, David raised his head, looking at me with gratitude. 感到坚定和受到鼓舞, David抬起头，感激地看着我。
Relaxed and delighted, David waved at me immediately after crossing the finish line , conveying his happiness and gratitude . （2022全国1卷）感到放松开心，大卫在穿过终点线后立刻向我挥手，表达他的快乐与感激。
情感adj. as sb. + was/were, sb. (still) do sth.尽管某人（感到）...，某人(仍做)某事
Anxious and unwilling as I was, I still did the dishes at Dad’s request. 尽管很着急和不情愿，我还是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。
Scared and anxious as he was, Helctor still plucked up his courage to explain what had happened to Mr. Alder. 尽管他很害怕和紧张, 赫克托仍然鼓起勇气解释了瓦尔德先生的遭遇。
A flush/wave/surge/sense of 情感n. seized；took hold of(抓住)/washed over；swept over；flooded over；crept over/overwhelmed(充满) sb. 一阵...感涌上心头/向某人袭来。
A flush/wave of excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her. 改写：Suddenly a flush/wave of happiness and excitementseized/took hold of/swept over her when she caught sight of a familiar figure. 当她看到一个熟悉的身影, 内心突然涌起一阵兴奋.
With +情感n+written on one’s face, sb did sth. 某人脸上写满了...,某人做某事
With look of sadness written on his face, he said goodbye to his best friend who was moving away. 他向即将离开的最好的朋友告别，脸上写满了悲伤。
One’s face+brimmed(充满)lit up(点亮)/beamed(喜笑颜开)/burn(燃烧)/flush(脸红)/pale(变得苍白)/darken(变暗)+with+情感n.
His face brimmed/beamed with pride when he received the award. 当他获得奖项时，他的脸上洋溢着自豪。
动作：一...就(4)
As soon as/The instant/The moment/The minute/Immediately Instantly+从句...,sb did..
As soon as/The moment/ the minute/ the instant/Immediately the result was announced, they started to celebrate. 结果一宣布，他们就开始庆祝。
Hardly had sb. done sth. when sb. did...; No sooner had sb. done than sb. did..
Hardly had she stepped into the classroom when everyone shouted “surprise”. 她一走进教室，每个人就大喊“惊喜”。
No sooner had he finished his speech than the audience erupted into applause.他一完成演讲，观众们就爆发了掌声。
On/Upon doing sth, sb. did...
Upon/On hearing the unexpected news, he was so shocked that he couldn't utter a single word. 一听到这个出乎意料的消息，他震惊到说不出话来。
At the sight/sound/thought of..., sb. did...一看到/听到/想到...，某人....
At the sight of the wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. 一看到狼，我就有一种强烈的恐惧感，手心冒汗。
At the sound of the approaching footsteps, he was so delighted that he could hardly contain his excitement. 一听到接近的脚步声，他如此高兴以至于他几乎不能抑制兴奋。
心理(多用于主题升华)（5）
It hit/struck/occurred to/dawned on sb. that...某人突然意识到/明白...
As I noticed the sign of the supermarket, it suddenly struck/hit/occurred to me that I could give him some daily necessities and food as a gift.当我注意到超市的标志时，我突然想到，我可以给他一些日常必需品和食物作为礼物。
Through this unforgettable and remarkable event, it eventually dawned on me that nothing is difficult with a willing heart.(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷) 通过这一难忘而非凡的事件，我最终意识到，有志者，事竟成。
Not until/Only then did sb. (come to)realize/learn that...(倒装句式) 直到那时，某人才意识到...
Not until/Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.直到那时我才意识到，只有勇敢才能克服路上的任何困难。
It was then/at that moment that sb. realized that... 正是在那一刻某人(开始)意识到(强调句式)
It was then that I realized that every small action of kindness can make a big difference to the world.
正是那一刻我意识到每个小的善举可以产生很大的影响。
The/Such a ...experience/scene enlightened/remind sb. that...这次.../如此..的经历/景象使某人明白/提醒某人...
Such a warm scene enlightened me that the language barrier can never be a problem between kind and friendly people. 如此温馨的场景使我明白语言障碍永远不会是善良友好的人们之间的难题。
(When/Whenever) Looking back on/Reflecting on/Thinking of the experience/journey, sb learned a valuable lesson that/still felt.../couldn’t help doing sth...回首/回想/反思...,某人学到一个宝贵的教训/任然感受到/情不自禁做某事...
Looking back on the experience, I learned a valuable lesson that nature was so adorable and mysterious that we all felt awed and humble when faced with it. 回顾这次经历，我学到了一个宝贵的教训：大自然是如此可爱神秘，以至于我在面对它时感到敬畏和谦卑。
Whenever thinking of that heartwarming scene, Jane couldn’t help getting deeply moved by the selfless love and care of her neighbour. 每当想起那暖心的场景，简都会情不自禁的被邻居的无私关爱深深打动。
Sb’s ...words/encouragement always/still sounded/echoed/rang out/lingered/dwelled in one’s mind/head/ear. 某人...的话语/鼓励总是/仍然在脑海中/耳边回响。
Through many years have worn on, my father’s plain but encouraging words have always lingered/echoed in my mind, guiding the way of my life. 尽管许多年过去了，父亲平淡但鼓励的话语一直在我脑海中回响，指引着我的人生道路。
语言(1)
“...,” sb said/uttered(说)/announced/declared(宣布)/whispered/murmured(低语)/shouted/screamed(喊叫)/responded/replied(回复)+副词+ in a...voice或in/with+情感n., doing /done 非谓语动词或with的复合结构/独立主格结构.
“I hate them,” Linda screamed angrily in a trembling voice, clenching her fist. “我恨他们，”琳达紧握拳头用颤抖的声音愤怒地尖叫。
“Uncle, forgive me! I...broke the vase...unintentionally,” the little boy stuttered fearfully, with his head low/lowering his head. “叔叔，请原谅我！我...无意...打...破花瓶，”小男孩害怕地结巴起来，低着头。
必背短语（6）
鼓起勇气：pluck up/screw up/gather(up)/summon one’s courage
Finally, I plucked up my courage to go on stage.我终于鼓起勇气登上了舞台。
感到欣慰/放下心来:to one’s relief,... 使人欣慰的/放心的是/breathe a sigh of relief/sigh with relief 松了一口气/(A wave of) relief flooded through/washed over sb.
I breathed a sigh of relief as the plane landed safely.飞机安全着陆，我顿时放下心来。
因...颤抖：tremble/shiver/shake with fear(害怕)/panic(惊恐)/excitement(兴奋)/anger/rage(愤怒)
He clenched his fists and trembled with rage/anger, tears rolling down her cheeks.
他握紧拳头，气得发抖, 泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。
①不久后: not long after that,..=shortly afterwards,..=before long, ...=It didn’t take long before从句
It didn’t take long before they got their tasty food ready.=Before long, they got their tasty food ready. 不久后他们准备就好了美味的食物。
②一瞬间/刹那间: in a split second/for an instant/moment/It was in a flash that...
It was in a flash that the twins re-started their meaningful work, with the father’s help. 很快, 在爸爸的帮助下，双胞胎重新开始他们有意义的工作。
③不知不觉/某人还没来得及做某事,...: Before sb. knew it,.../Before sb. could do sth, ...
Before I could say something, the kind man vanished in the crowd.我还没来得及说什么，这个善良的人就消失在人群里。
④似乎一个世纪那么长的时间后：After what seemed a century，...
With surprise written on his face, father asked what they were doing. After what seemed a century, Jenna stammered, “We…we just want to make breakfast for our mother. Today is Mother’s Day.”
迫不及待做某事: could hardly/barely wait to do sth.
As soon as/Instantly Mike received the good news, he could hardly wait to rush back home and share it with his parents. 麦克一收到好消息就迫不及待地跑回家和父母分享。
(做某事)毫不犹豫/毫不耽搁/不假思索: without hesitation/delay/a second thought/even thinking
Although the water was freezing cold, the young man jumped into the water without hesitation/ a second thought. 尽管水很冰冷，可那个年轻人毫不犹豫/想也没想就跳了进去。
不知该做些什么：wonder what to do next/don’t know what to do next/be unsure of what to do next/be at a loss what to do. 手足无措/ be in a dilemma about whether to do or not. 感到难以决定...
He stood there in shock, wondering/not knowing/unsure of/at a loss what to do. 他吃惊地站在那里，不知道接下来该做些什么。

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