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After World War I, a small group of veterans returned to their village in France. Most of them managed to get along quite well, but one — Barton, who had been wounded and never recovered his strength — was unable to work regularly. After some time, he gradually became so poor that he could barely support his wife and five children. Yet he was a man with great self- respect and too proud to accept charity from the the villagers.
Once each year the veterans held a reunion dinner party. On one of these occasions they met in the home of Clinton, who had made a fortune and had grown self-important. Clinton produced a curiosity by showing them a large coin, about whose age and value he kept talking for long. Each man examined it with interest as it passed around the long table. All had drunk wine freely and the dining room was resounded with noisy talk, so that the gold coin was soon forgotten. Later, when Clinton wanted to get it back, however, the coin was missing.
Immediately there arose questions and denials. Finally the village lawyer suggested everyone be searched, to which all agreed — except Barton. His companions looked at him with surprise.
“You refuse, then ” asked Clinton. Barton turned red. “Yes,” he said. “I can’t allow it.”
“Did you realize,” asked the owner of the gold coin, “What your refusal means ”
“I did not steal the gold coin, and I will not agree to such a search.” Barton answered firmly.
One by one, the rest of the group turned out their pockets. When the coin failed to appear, attention was focused once more on poor Barton again.
“Surely you should not insist on your refusal.” The lawyer demanded.
Barton made no reply. Clinton walked out of the room in anger. No one spoke another word to Barton and he returned to his home.
From that day on, Barton was regarded as a dishonest man. People turned their eyes away when they met him.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。.
One day many years later, Clinton was doing cleaning when he caught something faintly shining behind one leg of the long table.
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Hearing his words, Barton looked at Clinton with a puzzled expression.
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文章大意：一战后，一群退伍老兵每年举办聚会。一次在克林顿家，他展示的金币丢失，众人搜身以证清白，唯有巴顿拒绝。此后，巴顿被视为不诚实之人遭人嫌弃。多年后，克林顿打扫时在长桌腿后发现金币，深感愧疚，前往巴顿家道歉。真相大白，巴顿洗清冤屈，重获尊严与尊重。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔 1：聚会时众人饮酒畅谈，金币很快被遗忘。续写回应：这一情节为金币不慎掉落桌腿后未被发现埋下伏笔，多年后克林顿打扫时才偶然发现。
伏笔 2：巴顿因受伤无法正常工作，生活贫困。续写回应：正因他生活艰难，在金币丢失后，他的拒绝搜身行为更易被人误解为心虚，而后来的真相也更凸显了他的自尊与清白。
伏笔 3：巴顿自尊心强，不愿接受慈善。续写回应：这体现了他坚守尊严的性格，所以坚决拒绝不合理的搜身要求，也为他多年来承受误解却不妥协做铺垫。
伏笔 4：众人对巴顿的拒绝搜身表示惊讶。续写回应：这种惊讶反映出众人对他的不信任，与后文真相大白后众人的态度转变形成鲜明对比。
伏笔 5：克林顿生气离开，且之后无人与巴顿交流。续写回应：这导致巴顿长期遭受孤立，而克林顿发现金币后的道歉和弥补行为，改变了这一局面。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描述克林顿发现金币时的震惊、懊悔情绪，以及他决定向巴顿道歉的急切心情和行动。
第二段：刻画巴顿听到道歉时的复杂反应，如惊讶、委屈等，接着讲述村民得知真相后态度的转变，以及巴顿最终获得的结果。
情感线：故事开头以聚会欢乐氛围起，金币丢失后众人对巴顿的怀疑、指责，让巴顿陷入痛苦与委屈之中。多年后克林顿发现金币，情感转为愧疚，而巴顿从被误解的悲愤到最后洗清冤屈的欣慰，村民们从偏见转为愧疚与歉意。
主旨升华句
True friendship and trust should not be easily broken by misunderstandings. 真正的友谊和信任不应轻易被误解打破。
Prejudice can blind us to the truth, but honesty and perseverance will eventually prevail. 偏见会蒙蔽我们对真相的认知，但诚实和坚持最终会胜利。
Dignity is a precious possession that cannot be compromised, even in the face of great adversity. 尊严是宝贵的财富，即使面对巨大困境也不能被妥协。
The power of apology can heal deep - seated wounds and restore broken relationships. 道歉的力量可以治愈根深蒂固的创伤，修复破裂的关系。
A person's true character is revealed not in prosperity but in the face of unjust accusations. 一个人的真正品格不是在顺境中展现，而是在面对不公正指责时显露出来。
写作示范
示范一
One day many years later, Clinton was doing cleaning when he caught something faintly shining behind one leg of the long table. Stunned, he recognized it as the missing gold coin at once. Memories of that night came crashing back, and he was filled with remorse. How could he have been so hasty in judging Barton Without a second thought, he sped to Barton's place.
Hearing his words, Barton's eyes widened in disbelief at first. As Clinton's sincere apology poured out, a long - suppressed sob escaped from Barton. “I've endured so much humiliation,” he choked. Clinton nodded, admitting his fault. When the villagers learned the truth, they were ashamed of their past prejudice. Barton, finally vindicated, stood tall with his dignity fully restored. From this incident, they all learned that hasty judgments can lead to great injustice.
示范二
One day many years later, Clinton was doing cleaning when he caught something faintly shining behind one leg of the long table. His heart skipped a beat as he realized it was the lost gold coin. The guilt that had been dormant for years suddenly resurfaced. He couldn't wait to right his wrong. Hastily, he made his way to Barton's home.
Hearing his words, Barton looked at Clinton with a mixture of shock and relief. Tears streamed down his face as he recounted the years of being ostracized. Clinton listened, his head bowed in shame. Soon, the news spread through the village. The villagers came to Barton one by one, expressing their apologies. Barton, now free from the unjust stain, found that the respect he had lost was returned tenfold. This experience taught them all that truth and justice might be delayed, but never absent.
【答案】
One day many years later, Clinton was doing cleaning when he caught something faintly shining behind one leg of the long table. He picked it up and recognized that it was his lost gold coin years ago. It reminded him of what had happened at the reunion night. And then Clinton realized that Barton didn’t steal the coin at all. After a moment of hesitation, Clinton decided to apologize to Barton. He walked in a hurry to Barton’s home and found Barton working in the garden behind his house. Holding the coin tightly in his hand, Clinton said sincerely:“I’m so sorry, Barton.”
Hearing his words, Barton looked at Clinton with a puzzled expression. “Why do you say sorry to me ” Barton asked curiously. Then Clinton slowly opened his hand, and the coin glittered in the sun. “I found the coin under the table just now. I’m terribly sorry!” he said sincerely. “I was wondering why you refused to be searched then,” Clinton asked. Barton explained, “I was very poor at that time and everyone looked down upon me. For me, dignity was my last property besides my family. And I don’t want to lose it.”

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