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2025湖北省部分市州高三元月期末联考英语试题
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Our family outing to the all-you-can-eat buffet turned into an evening to remember. The atmosphere was lively and busy, with the noise of plates and the sound of conversations creating a warm and inviting setting. The smell of freshly cooked food floated through the air, inviting everyone to try a little bit of everything. The buffet was a feast for the senses, with steaming trays of dishes from all over the world. The kids were particularly thrilled at the sight of the dessert section, which they had been eagerly longing for all week. Their eyes widening at the array of cakes, ice creams, and pastries, they quickly made plans to sample everything.
As we sat down to enjoy our meals, chatting cheerfully about the various food options, my husband's attention was drawn to an elderly man standing by the chocolate milk dispenser (分液器). The man seemed determined, but his hands were shaking, making it difficult for him to fill two glasses. My husband watched him for a moment, a concerned look on his face. "Now, how on earth is he going to carry that milk back to his table " he wondered aloud, his eyes narrowing in thought. He noticed the man's expression of concentration and effort, and a wave of sympathy made him restless. The kids, absorbed in their plates, hadn't noticed, but my husband couldn't look away.
I glanced at my husband and raised my eyebrows(眉毛) with a knowing smile. He immediately understood my silent message. The next moment, without a word, he got up from his seat and approached the elderly gentleman. I watched as he gently placed a hand on the man's shoulder, offering a kind smile. I felt a warm wave of pride and admiration for my husband. His kind-hearted nature always managed to shine through in moments like these, making me realize how lucky I was to have him by my side.
注意:
1. 续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1 :
" May I help you with that " my husband asked kindly.______________________________
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Paragraph 2 :
As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal.___________________
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第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Our family outing to the all-you-can-eat buffet turned into an evening to remember. The atmosphere was lively and busy, with the noise of plates and the sound of conversations creating a warm and inviting setting(非谓语动词做伴随动作)(环境描写). The smell of freshly cooked food floated through the air, inviting everyone to try a little bit of everything(非谓语动词做伴随动作)(环境描写). The buffet was a feast for the senses, with steaming trays of dishes from all over the world(介词短语做后置定语). The kids were particularly thrilled at the sight of the dessert section, which they had been eagerly longing for all week(定从). Their eyes widening at the array of cakes, ice creams, and pastries(独立主格), they quickly made plans to sample everything.
As we sat down to enjoy our meals(状从), chatting cheerfully about the various food options(非谓语动词做伴随动作), my husband's attention was drawn to an elderly man standing by the chocolate milk dispenser (分液器)(非谓语动词做后置定语). The man seemed determined, but his hands were shaking, making it difficult for him to fill two glasses(非谓语动词做结果状语). My husband watched him for a moment, a concerned look on his face(名词短语做补语). "Now, how on earth(介词短语做状语：究竟) is he going to carry that milk back to his table " he wondered aloud, his eyes narrowing in thought(独立主格). He noticed the man's expression of concentration and effort, and a wave of sympathy made him restless. The kids, absorbed in their plates(非谓语动词做后置定语), hadn't noticed, but my husband couldn't look away.
I glanced at my husband and raised my eyebrows(眉毛) with a knowing smile. He immediately understood my silent message. The next moment, without a word, he got up from his seat and approached the elderly gentleman. I watched as he gently placed a hand on the man's shoulder(状从), offering a kind smile(非谓语动词做伴随动作). I felt a warm wave of pride and admiration for my husband. His kind-hearted nature always managed to shine through in moments like these, making me realize how lucky I was to have him by my side(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从).
注意:
1. 续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1 :
" May I help you with that " my husband asked kindly.______________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2 :
As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal.___________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
1. 读后续写分析表
分类 家庭温馨与人性光辉类
思路构思 通过刻画细腻的情感和善良行为，展现人与人之间的温情和善意。
布局 以观察到的事件为起点，逐步引入帮助行为和善举的细节，最后通过温馨的收尾展现主题。
提炼框架 起因：观察老人行动困难→经过：主动帮助并对话→结果：温暖的情感升华。
实施 细化人物心理与动作描写，注重情节承接自然，用具体语言体现善意和温情。
注意事项 承接原文情节，保持叙述风格统一，避免过于突兀的情节转折；突出核心情感。
巧妙设计 运用细腻的动作和心理描写点出人物品质；通过孩子们的反应或参与丰富故事层次。
2. 故事山模式（Story Mountain 思维导图）
开端：家庭在餐馆用餐，氛围温馨。
发展：丈夫注意到老人难以操作牛奶机，表现出关心。
高潮：丈夫主动帮助老人，体现善良与尊重。
下降：帮助完成后，老人表达感谢，丈夫返回座位。
结局：家庭继续用餐，孩子们受到善意的影响。
3. 续写衔接分析表
分析角度 内容 原文反映句
人物刻画 丈夫关心他人、善良体贴；旁观者感受到暖意。 “His kind-hearted nature always managed to shine through…”
情感层次 从观察到行动，情感逐渐加深，从同情到欣慰。 “A wave of sympathy made him restless.”
关键情节点 丈夫起身帮助老人，老人表达感激，温情氛围升华。 “May I help you with that ”
语言特色 简洁但细腻的语言展现情感，使用动词和短语增强情感氛围。 “Offering a kind smile…”
心理描写 丈夫的同情、犹豫、行动前的思考过程。 “He noticed the man's expression…”
动作描写 起身、走向老人、帮助操作牛奶机、返回座位。 “Without a word, he got up from his seat…”
环境描写 餐馆的温馨氛围和背景对比老人的孤独感。 “The smell of freshly cooked food…”
隐含主题 善意与互助是生活中不可或缺的部分，温情能感染他人。 故事整体体现。
情感转折 从观察到主动行动，从内心的共鸣到外在的感动。 由心理变化推动情节发展。
时间过渡 丈夫观察→帮助→返回座位，衔接流畅。 以动作和心理活动自然连接情节。
4. 动作、心理、环境描写推荐语料
动作描写：
He gently placed a hand on the elderly man's shoulder.
Without hesitation, he reached out to steady the glass.
He carefully poured the milk, ensuring it didn’t spill.
He carried the glasses back to the table, his steps steady.
He offered the man the glasses with a warm smile.
心理描写：
A wave of sympathy made him restless.
He hesitated briefly, unsure of how to approach.
His mind raced as he watched the elderly man struggle.
A sense of responsibility pushed him to act.
Pride and satisfaction filled his heart as he returned.
环境描写：
The lively chatter in the buffet contrasted sharply with the man’s quiet struggle.
The aroma of food floated in the air, masking the tense moment.
The warm lighting bathed the scene in a comforting glow.
The clatter of plates seemed to fade as he focused on the man.
The bustling restaurant became a backdrop to a quiet act of kindness.
5. 高中语法点与搭配分析
常见语法点：
虚拟语气：If I hadn’t helped him, I would have regretted it.
分词作状语：Placing the glasses gently, he nodded at the man.
非谓语动词：He struggled to hold the glasses steadily.
搭配语料：
sympathy for: He felt deep sympathy for the elderly man.
offer a hand: Without hesitation, he offered a hand.
steady oneself: The man struggled to steady himself.
warm glow: A warm glow of satisfaction filled the room.
Possible Versions
Version 1：
Paragraph 1 "May I help you with that " my husband asked kindly. The elderly man looked up, startled but grateful(adj做状语), and nodded with a trembling smile. Without hesitation, my husband stepped forward, steadying the glasses(非谓语动词做伴随动作) as the man held them(状从). Gently, he filled the second glass with chocolate milk, his movements deliberate to avoid spills(独立主格). The man whispered a soft “thank you,” his eyes glistening with gratitude(独立主格). Other diners watched the scene, some pausing their conversations to exchange approving looks(独立主格).
Paragraph 2 As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. The children, having witnessed the scene(非谓语动词做后置定语), began to chat about what had just happened(宾从), their admiration for their father evident in their wide eyes(独立主格). “Dad, that was really kind of you!” one of them exclaimed. The restaurant’s warm atmosphere seemed even brighter, the small act of kindness leaving a ripple of warmth in its wake(独立主格). I couldn’t help but smile, knowing that such moments made our family outings truly unforgettable(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从).
Version 2:
Paragraph 1: "May I help you with that " my husband asked kindly. The elderly man hesitated for a moment, then gave a grateful nod. My husband gently steadied the man’s trembling hands as he helped pour the chocolate milk into both glasses(状从). “Take your time,” he said softly, his calm tone easing the man’s visible anxiety(独立主格). With a warm smile, my husband carried the glasses to the man’s table, placing them carefully before him(非谓语动词做伴随动作). A few nearby diners had paused their meals to observe, their faces lighting up with admiration at the kind gesture(独立主格).
Paragraph 2: As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. The children, who had been watching(定从), couldn’t contain their curiosity. “Dad, why did you help that man ” one asked. My husband replied with a smile, “Sometimes, a small gesture can mean the world to someone.” The children nodded thoughtfully, clearly inspired by his words(非谓语动词做原因状语). The once ordinary family dinner had turned into a meaningful moment, one that left a warm glow in all our hearts(定从).
Version 3：
Paragraph 1:"May I help you with that " my husband asked kindly. Startled(非谓语动词做状语), the elderly man looked up, his weary eyes meeting my husband’s warm gaze(独立主格). “Oh, thank you,” he replied in a shaky voice, visibly relieved(非谓语动词做补语). My husband guided his hands to steady the glass, ensuring not a single drop of milk spilled(非谓语动词做补语). The elderly man smiled faintly, his gratitude evident in the way his shoulders relaxed(独立主格). “I’m not as steady as I used to be,” he admitted, a note of embarrassment in his tone(名词短语做补语). “That’s alright,” my husband said gently, “we all need a little help sometimes.”
Paragraph 2: As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. The children, inspired by what they had seen(非谓语动词做原因状语+宾从), began to share stories of helping their friends at school. “I helped Anna with her books last week,” one of them said proudly. The atmosphere around our table felt lighter, warmer, as though the small act of kindness had touched not just the elderly man but everyone(原因状从) who witnessed it(定从). It was a quiet reminder of the power of compassion to bring people together(非谓语动词做定语).
Version 4:
Paragraph 1:"May I help you with that " my husband asked kindly, stepping closer to the elderly man. The man hesitated, then nodded, his hands trembling(独立主格) as he released the glass(状从). “I was worried I’d spill it(宾从),” he said with a nervous laugh. My husband poured the milk smoothly into both glasses, his steady hands a stark contrast to the man’s frailty(独立主格). “There you go,” he said, handing the glasses back(非谓语动词做伴随动作). A soft “thank you” escaped the man’s lips as he looked at my husband(状从) with a mix of gratitude and relief. The quiet exchange caught the attention of other diners, and a murmur of approval rippled through the room.
Paragraph 2: As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. The children, inspired by their father’s actions(非谓语动词做原因状语), started discussing how they could help others in their own way(宾从). “Maybe I can help Grandpa carry things at home,” one suggested. The moment felt profound, not just for our family but for everyone who witnessed it(定从). The evening had begun with the simple joy of sharing a meal, but it ended with a shared understanding of kindness’s quiet strength.
亮点语法与词汇分析
语法加分点：
非谓语动词：
"Stepping closer to the elderly man…"
"Handing the glasses back…"
虚拟语气：
"If I hadn’t helped, I’d have felt terrible."
分词作状语：
"Inspired by their father’s actions, the children…"
亮点词汇与短语：
sympathy → compassion, empathy
"He felt deep compassion for the elderly man."
"Empathy drove him to act."
relieved → comforted, reassured
"The man looked reassured after receiving help."
"He felt comforted by the kind gesture."
trembling → shaking, quivering
"His hands were trembling with effort."
"The elderly man’s hands quivered as he tried to hold the glass."
积累语料：
Kindness is a language everyone understands.
A small act of generosity can ripple far beyond what we imagine.
Helping others costs nothing but can mean everything.
读后续写：（官方范文）
“May I help you with that ” my husband asked kindly. The elderly man looked up, his eyebrows raised in mild shock(独立主格), but then relief washed over his face as he sighed softly(状从). He nodded appreciatively, his eyes conveying his gratitude(独立主格). “Thank you, young man,” he said, his voice trembling slightly(独立主格). My husband and the elderly man walked side by side, their steps harmonizing(独立主格), creating a heartwarming scene of mutual respect and kindness(非谓语动词做伴随动作). When they reached the table(状从), the elderly man grasped my husband’s in a firm, heartfelt handshake. With a warm smile, he said, “You’re a good man, thank you once again.” My husband stayed for a few minutes, engaging in polite conversation before returning to our table(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
As he sat down, he gave me a small nod, and we continued our meal. The mood around our table was even more cheerful, and the kids, who had observed the interaction(定从), were full of questions and comments about how nice it was to help someone in need(宾从). “That was so nice, Dad!” one of them exclaimed, eyes wide with admiration(独立主格). Our dinner that night was not just about the food but about the small act of kindness that can make a big difference in someone’s day(定从). It reminded us that in the midst of our busy lives, taking a moment to help others(非谓语动词做主语) is a simple yet profound way to connect and spread a little joy(非谓语动词做后置定语).

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