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Continuation Writing—— Action & Emotional Descriptions
构建动作链Action-chain
Strategy 1: Sb did A, did B and did C
The boys rushed to the lake, took off the clothes and and jumped into the water.
Strategy 2: Doing A, sb did B and did C
She rushed happily into the rain, singing and dancing.
Strategy 3: Having done A, sb did B and did C
Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the tickets had been sold out. (queue排队)
Strategy 4: Done sth, sb did…
Moved by the story, the child began to weep（抽泣）.
Equipped/Armed with the technology, our contest made a hit. （成功或受欢迎）
有…的支持
with the help of
with the support of
be equipped with the technology
be armed with the technology
Strategy 5: 独立主格结构---主语1(次要)+非谓语，主语2（主要）+谓语
The bell was ringing.（铃声响了）
The students entered the classroom.（学生进入教室）
合并后：The bell ringing, all the students entered the classroom.
她颤抖着手，缓缓打开了包裹。
Her hands was trembling.
She opened the parcel slowly.
合并后：Her hands trembling, she opened the parcel.
情绪描写Emotional Descriptions
介词短语(to/in/with)
“with/without+宾语”表示“有着…”“没有…”
To one’s + 名词”表示“让某人…的是” To her astonishment(让她吃惊的是)
In+名词，表示“…地” In delight(=delightedly), they entered the room, singing and dancing.
情绪adj+as sb+be动词，sb (still) do sth
Nervous as he was , David became determined to finish the race.
尽管很紧张， David 决心完成赛跑。
sb was so+adj+that … 某人如此…以至于
He was so scared that he was unable to utter a single word.
他吓得一句话也说不出来
4. adj. and adj.（并列情绪adj）, 主+谓
Excited and pleased, the boys rushed to the lake, laughing and dancing.
5. 无灵主语（n+v）
用法是 主语（情感名词）+ 谓语动词（有生命的）
通常用“一阵感情/一股情绪…”因此，“a sense（可以换） of + N + V”
万能句型：
a sense/feeling/wave/ripple/flush/surge/pang of + 情感名词+ welled up in one’s heart/ washed over sb./ flooded over sb. /surged through sb./took hold of/swept over sb(其他谓语动词可以替换)
A ripple/flush/wave/surge of sadness welled up inside him.他内心涌起一股悲伤。
A wave of happiness and excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her.她内心涌起一阵…
【常见的情绪名词】 【常见的谓语动词】
happiness, joy, delight开心快乐 excitement/exhilaration(/ ɡ z l re ( )n/) 兴奋； surprise/astonishment/shock/amazement 惊奇； shame 羞耻羞愧； despair 绝望； anger/annoyance(/ n ns /) /irritation(/ r te ( )n/)/fury(/ fj ri/) 愤怒； regret 遗憾；后悔 sorrow /grief (/ɡri f/)悲伤； horror /fear/scare惊恐； anxiety 焦虑； sympathy同情； disappointment/frustration/upset 失望/沮丧； satisfaction/contentment 满意； puzzlement/confusion 困惑； eagerness/thirst(/θ st/)/craving(/ kre v /)渴望； tension 紧张； Uneasiness/ worry/concern 不安/担忧； awkwardness/embarrassment 尴尬 self-reproach/shame/guilt/(/ɡ lt/)/ conscience(/ k n ns/ )内疚/自责 Blush/shyness/bashfulness 害羞/腼腆 Disgust/hate 厌/憎恶 seize/overwhelm sb控制 take hold of sb 控制 choke sb噎住堵住； creep sb/over sb (/kri p/) 渐渐出现 grip sb(/ɡr p/)紧抓； give way to sth让步于； wash/flood over sb 突然侵袭； desert sb/sth遗弃； well up(in one’s heart)涌出
应用---语料补充：
A sense of sorrow welled up in her eyes as she thought of her late mother.
当她想起已故的母亲时，悲伤在她眼中涌出。
Horror seized him when he saw the ghost - like figure in the dark.
当他在黑暗中看到那个像鬼一样的身影时，恐惧控制住了他。
A feeling of anxiety flooded his mind as the exam day drew closer.
随着考试日越来越近，焦虑充满了他的脑海。
A wave of disappointment gave way to determination as she failed the exam again.
当她再次考试不及格时，失望让位于决心。
A surge of satisfaction filled her heart as she saw the beautiful garden she had created.
当她看到自己亲手打造的美丽花园时，满足感充满了她的内心。
Puzzle creeps into his expression as he tries to figure out the complex problem.
当他试图弄明白这个复杂的问题时，困惑爬上了他的脸庞。
A sense of eagerness welled up in her as she waited for the concert to start.
当她等待音乐会开始时，渴望之情在她心中涌起。
A flush of happiness seized her the moment she saw her long - lost friend.
（当她看到失散已久的朋友时，喜悦瞬间笼罩了她。）
A pang of excitement flooded through him as he heard the news of his promotion.
（当他听到自己升职的消息时，兴奋之情充满了他的全身。）
A feeling of surprise choked her when she opened the door and saw a room full of balloons.
（当她打开门，看到满屋子的气球时，惊讶得说不出话来。）
A ripple of ahame crept over him as he realized his mistake.
（当他意识到自己的错误时，羞愧感不知不觉地涌上心头。）
A pang of anger gripped her when she heard the unfair treatment her friend had received.
（当她听到朋友受到不公平对待时，愤怒紧紧抓住了她。）
A wave of despair washed over her as she watched her hopes fade away.
（当她看着自己的希望渐渐破灭时，绝望感侵袭而来。）
A ripple of regret deserted him after he made the right decision.
（在他做出正确决定后，后悔之情离他而去。
描述emotions时，从face+body+voice进行几种常用的高频情绪表达：
开心和激动（joy and excitement）
Face
Her face lit/brightened/glowed with joy.
She smiled/grinned from ear to ear.
Her eyes were twinkling.
body
He clapped his hands and jumped up and down with joy.
voice
The girl burst into laughter/giggled(咯咯笑) with joy.
Happiness Excitement face glow with joy闪烁着快乐的光芒 grin from ear to ear 咧嘴笑 Beam(V.)眉开眼笑 a bright smile, burst into laughter, one’s eyes shine/twinkle/sparkle with excitement tears of joy 喜极而泣
Body clap hands, jump up and down, dance, hug sb tightly, tremble with excitement, jump/spring to one’s feet(一跃而起)
voice burst out laughing, burst into cheers, in an excited voice, yell/shout with joy
【高级语块】
1. jump for joy 非常高兴
2. in good/high spirits 兴高采烈
3. one’s face lights up 喜形于色
4. be wild with delight/joy 欣喜若狂
5. tremble with excitement 激动得发抖
6. flush with excitement 激动得满脸通红
7. be overwhelmed with happiness 充满喜悦
8. contain one’s excitement 抑制内心的激动
9. tears of happiness flow down 流下幸福的泪水
10. one’s eyes shine with excitement 眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒
【高级句子】
1. Her face lit up with pleasure. 她的脸上洋溢着喜悦。
2. Laughter lingered around the room. 笑声在房间里萦绕。
3. She wore a shining smile on her face. 她脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。
4. She laughed, her eyes shining with excitement. 她笑了，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
6. Hearing this, everybody was wild with delight/joy. 听到这句话，每个人都欣喜若狂。
7. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. 他脸上闪过一丝理解的微笑。
8. She came out of the teacher’s office with a big grin on her face. 她笑容满面地走出了老师的办公室。
9. At his words, I became overwhelmed with happiness and jumped to my feet. 听了他的话，我高兴得跳了起来。
【忧虑(Worry)】
1. A worried look appeared on his face. 他的脸上露出了忧虑的神情。
2. Worried about the journey, I was unsettled for the first few days. 由于担心这次旅行，头几天我心神不宁。
3. He was so nervous about the English test that he lay awake half the night, worrying.他对考试感到紧张，以至于半夜都睡不着，心神不宁。
4. He was so concerned that his face turned pale, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.焦虑得脸色苍白如坐针毡。
【紧张(nervousness)】
1.His heart beat wildly and his legs trembled. 他的心脏狂跳着，双腿颤抖着。
2. His heart beat so violently that he felt like sitting on pins and needles. 如此剧烈，他感到如坐针毡。
3. He was about to respond when he felt his tongue /t / tied in and palms/pɑ m/ sweating.
他正要回答时，感到舌头被绑住了，手掌开始出汗。
4. As the bus got closer and closer, Tom ' s heart beat so violently that he felt nearly breathless.
公共汽车越来越近了，汤姆的心脏剧烈跳动，几乎呼吸困难。
【惊恐(Surprise)】
1. Scared and shocked, she couldn't say a word.他又害怕又震惊，一句话也说不出来。
2. He frozen with fear, too scared to move an inch.他吓得僵住了，不敢动弹。
3. Her face turned pale and stood there, tongue-tied.他的脸色变得苍白，站在那里，舌头打结。
4. The sight of the fierce wolf, Mike felt so scared that his throat tightened and his knees felt weak.
看到那只凶猛的狼，迈克感到非常害怕，喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。

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