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记叙文——人与自我（做人与做事）+人与社会（人际关系）——诚实的份量
Summer vacation starting, Steve and I planned to play baseball every day, aiming to join the freshman team. "If you make it into the team, I'll buy you a new baseball glove as a present." My mom's promise echoed in my mind as I excitedly waited for Steve, staring at my worn-out glove.
But today I had to clean Mrs. Thompson's garage first. She was weakened by old age, so my mom always volunteered me to help her. Mom wouldn't let me accept any money, thinking she didn't have much, and literally, I never minded—after all, Mrs. Thompson had knitted me five sweaters and always made me cakes. Most importantly, it was the right thing to do.
Steve came rushing out of his house, and I explained the situation. As expected, he immediately said, "Alright, I'll help."
We instantly got to work. The garage was a mess of boxes, but we gathered all our energy and soon brought the cleanup to an end【结束清理工作】. When arranging the last box, however, I nudged the shelf accidentally. Before I could react, a vase fell and crashed to the ground, broken into pieces.
I froze, my heart pounding.The vase was beautiful with delicate designs,which must havecost a fortune.Glancing at the open garage door,I suggested,"Maybe I can just sweep this up.Mrs.Thompson won't even notice."I responded fast and piled the pieces into the trash bin.ButSteve's expression darkened."That's not how it works.You should tellher what happened."
I tried to justify myself, telling all the chores I'd done for Mrs. Thompson without pay. I even argued that it wasn't my responsibility to pay for something I didn't destroy on purpose. However, Steve wasn't buying it, his voice firm. “You're better than that. Be responsible."
We stood there in silence, the weight of the moment hanging between us. Just then, Mrs. Thompson walked in, giving us a scare. She smiled warmly, unaware of the whole thing. "Boys, I baked a chocolate cake. Now come in for a piece. I really appreciate all your help."
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hesitantly, we entered the room and I noticed a gift box on the table beside the cake. ____________________________
Having said that, I waited nervously for Mrs. Thompson to speak up. __________________________________________
文章大意
暑假期间，“我” 和史蒂夫计划每天打棒球，希望能加入新生队。妈妈承诺若 “我” 入选，会送 “我” 一副新棒球手套。这天，“我” 要先帮年迈的汤普森夫人清理车库，史蒂夫赶来帮忙。车库清理即将结束时，“我” 不小心碰倒架子，打碎了一个精致昂贵的花瓶。“我” 想偷偷清理碎片不让汤普森夫人发现，史蒂夫却坚持要 “我” 承担责任。汤普森夫人浑然不知地邀请我们吃巧克力蛋糕，这时 “我” 注意到桌上有个礼盒。
故事山分析
开端：暑假到了，“我” 和史蒂夫计划打棒球，妈妈承诺 “我” 入选球队会送新棒球手套，“我” 要先帮汤普森夫人清理车库。
发展：史蒂夫帮忙清理车库，过程中 “我” 不小心打碎花瓶，想隐瞒，史蒂夫反对。
高潮：汤普森夫人邀请我们吃蛋糕，“我” 看到桌上的礼盒，内心纠结是否坦白。
结局：“我” 向汤普森夫人坦白，得到原谅，明白诚实的重要性。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：妈妈承诺若 “我” 入选球队送新棒球手套。回应：暗示 “我” 对新手套的期待，可能会因怕没钱赔花瓶而影响买手套，加剧 “我” 隐瞒的想法。
伏笔：妈妈总是让 “我” 无偿帮汤普森夫人，且汤普森夫人给 “我” 织毛衣、做蛋糕。回应：让 “我” 觉得之前帮了很多忙，这次打碎花瓶不赔情有可原，与史蒂夫的观点产生冲突。
伏笔：花瓶精致昂贵。回应：让 “我” 更害怕赔偿，成为 “我” 想隐瞒的重要原因。
伏笔：史蒂夫坚持要 “我” 承担责任。回应：为 “我” 最终坦白做铺垫，促使 “我” 内心挣扎并做出正确选择。
伏笔：汤普森夫人邀请我们吃蛋糕，浑然不知发生的事。回应：营造温馨氛围，与 “我” 内心的紧张纠结形成对比，也让 “我” 更难开口坦白。
续写要点
第一段续写：犹豫间，我们走进屋内并且我发现桌子上蛋糕旁边有一个礼物盒。——本段续写的关键在于如何利用礼物盒在连接手套的同时，衬托出我内心的纠结，一方面是礼物——对我帮忙的答谢；一方面是打碎花瓶，不但承认的害怕，同时考虑到二段首句提示为“Having said that”可知本段的结尾为“我说了实情”，这样处理既有“情节与情感的冲突”，由可以很好地连接二段。——参考词汇有：a new baseball glove；Mrs. Thompson；vase；Steve；gather
第二段续写：说完之后，我紧张地等待汤普森太太开口。——本段续写的关键在于如何设计汤普森太太的态度与反应最有利于本文主题的升华与立意的确立——肯定是包容的、没有责备的的处理不但帮助我摆脱心理的负担，同时更加剧我对于诚实的理解。——参考词汇有：Mrs. Thompson；pay for；cake；play baseball；glove
情感线
起初 “我” 因暑假能打棒球且有妈妈的承诺而兴奋期待，打碎花瓶后，“我” 害怕、慌张，想隐瞒逃避责任；与史蒂夫产生分歧时，“我” 纠结、自我辩解；看到汤普森夫人的蛋糕和礼盒，“我” 内心充满愧疚；最终坦白后，“我” 如释重负，收获了成长和理解。
故事线
“我” 和史蒂夫计划打棒球，妈妈给出承诺。
“我” 要帮汤普森夫人清理车库，史蒂夫来帮忙。
清理车库时 “我” 打碎花瓶，想隐瞒，与史蒂夫产生分歧。
汤普森夫人邀请我们吃蛋糕，“我” 看到礼盒，内心纠结。
“我” 向汤普森夫人坦白打碎花瓶的事。
汤普森夫人原谅 “我”，“我” 明白诚实的重要性。
主旨升华句（英文）
Honesty is not just a word; it is a virtue that defines our character and earns us respect.
In the face of mistakes, choosing honesty over deception is the path to true growth and self - respect.
The value of honesty outweighs any material loss, for it builds trust and deepens relationships.
A moment of truth can be challenging, but it is through such moments that we discover our true selves.
Honesty, though sometimes difficult to uphold, is the foundation of a good and meaningful life.
写作示范一
Hesitantly, we entered the room and I noticed a gift box on the table beside the cake. My heart sank, thinking it might be a present for me, making my guilt even heavier. Steve gave me a meaningful look, as if urging me to do the right thing. Gathering all my courage, I turned to Mrs. Thompson and said, "Mrs. Thompson, I have something to tell you. I accidentally broke your vase while cleaning the garage. I'm really sorry." My voice trembled with nervousness.
Having said that, I waited nervously for Mrs. Thompson to speak up. She was silent for a moment, and my heart pounded. Then, she smiled gently and said, "Oh, dear, it's just a vase. Accidents happen. I'm more concerned about you not getting hurt. And this gift box is for you, as a token of my gratitude for your help." I was overwhelmed with relief and gratitude. At that moment, I realized that being honest was the best choice. It not only cleared my conscience but also made me feel closer to Mrs. Thompson.
写作示范二
Hesitantly, we entered the room and I noticed a gift box on the table beside the cake. Thoughts raced through my mind. Was it a present for my hard work Or something else Steve's eyes were fixed on me, and I knew I couldn't keep silent any longer. Taking a deep breath, I stepped forward and said, "Mrs. Thompson, I made a big mistake. I broke your beautiful vase in the garage. I'm terribly sorry." My hands were sweating, and I braced myself for the worst.
Having said that, I waited nervously for Mrs. Thompson to speak up. To my surprise, she reached out and patted my shoulder. "Don't worry, boy. Things break. What matters is your honesty. I'm proud of you for telling me the truth." Her words were like a warm embrace, melting away my anxiety. I felt a sense of liberation and a newfound understanding of the importance of honesty. From then on, I vowed to always be honest, no matter the situation.
参考答案
Hesitantly, we entered the room and I noticed a gift box on the table beside the cake. I immediately could make sure that there must have been a new baseball glove in it. But with the previous accident of breaking the vase still vivid in my mind, I was too scared to look at Mrs. Thompson’s eyes. Instead, she served us the chocolate cake enthusiastically and actively invited me to open the box, saying that it was to express her gratitude for my help. Hearing this, I found it hard to hold back my emotions, and finally gathered all my courage to tell her the truth, as Steve had suggested before.（4句94）
Having said that, I waited nervously for Mrs. Thompson to speak up. At the same time, I had prepared to accept/suffer/bear all the punishment, including her blame and even paying for the loss. But completely out of my imagination, Mrs. Thompson began laughing loudly, telling me that there was nothing more important and valuable than the quality of being honest. Then she continued to add that the vase was only a replica. At that moment, with my guilt gradually disappearing, Steven and I enjoyed the delicious cake and looked forward to playing baseball later with my new glove, which was regarded as the gift of my honesty.（4句95）
锦言妙语积累：
1.定语从句：make sure that there must have been a new baseball glove in it
2.非谓语做状语与从句的复合结构：saying that it was to express her gratitude for my help；telling me that there was nothing more important and valuable than the quality of being honest.
3.it形式宾语：I found it hard to hold back my emotions
4.定语从句：, as Steve had suggested before.；, which was regarded as the gift of my honesty.
5.独立主格：with my guilt gradually disappearing,
6.非谓语做状语：including her blame and even paying for the loss

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