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2025年1月浙江首考 │ 读后续写——优秀品行：冒险报警捉小偷！
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
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When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
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Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
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思路点拨：
题目文本核心要点回顾
人物关系：Kevin 父母不在家，由邻居 Mrs. Hill 照顾，他发现 Green 家有异常，闯入并报警。
关键情节：Kevin 看到陌生男子闯入 Green 家，以为是小偷，男子称是找父亲的手表。警察到来时男子逃跑被抓，Kevin 对自己的行为产生怀疑。
续写思路引导及素材
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
思路引导：从 Kevin 的紧张、Green 夫妇的反应入手，思考 Kevin 讲述事件时的状态，以及 Green 夫妇在倾听过程中的表情、动作、疑问和回应，重点刻画双方互动场景，展现 Kevin 忐忑不安的心情，以及 Green 夫妇惊讶、好奇等情绪。
好句积累：
心理描写：
“Kevin's heart was pounding wildly as he approached Mr. and Mrs. Green. He was filled with a mix of anxiety and anticipation, unsure of how they would react.” （Kevin 走向格林夫妇时，心脏狂跳。他满心焦虑又期待，不确定他们会作何反应。）
“With his palms sweating and legs trembling slightly, Kevin was on pins and needles, dreading the moment when he had to break the news to Mr. and Mrs. Green.” （Kevin 手心出汗，双腿微微颤抖，如坐针毡，害怕向格林夫妇说出这件事的那一刻。）
“Kevin's mind was racing with worry. He kept asking himself whether he had done the right thing and how he could possibly explain the whole messy situation to the Greens.” （Kevin 忧心忡忡，脑海里思绪万千。他不断问自己是否做对了，以及该如何向格林夫妇解释这一团糟的情况。）
动作与对话描写：
“Mr. Green placed a hand on Kevin's shoulder, a gesture of comfort, and said softly, 'Take your time, son. Tell us what happened.' Kevin took a deep breath, stammering at first, 'Well, I... I saw a man jump into your house this afternoon...'” （格林先生把手放在 Kevin 的肩膀上，以示安慰，轻声说道：“别着急，孩子。告诉我们发生了什么。” Kevin 深吸一口气，一开始结结巴巴地说：“嗯，我…… 我今天下午看到一个男人跳进了你们家……” ）
“Mrs. Green stepped forward quickly, her eyes full of concern, and gently took Kevin's hand, guiding him to the sofa to sit down. 'Oh dear, were you in danger ' she asked worriedly. Kevin shook his head, trying to calm himself, 'No, but I was really scared at first.'” （格林夫人快步走上前，眼中满是关切，轻轻握住 Kevin 的手，把他领到沙发上坐下。“哦，天哪，你有危险吗？” 她担忧地问道。Kevin 摇了摇头，努力让自己平静下来，“没有，但一开始我真的很害怕。” ）
“As Kevin recounted the man's claim about the watch, Mr. Green interrupted with a puzzled look, 'A watch But we've never noticed anything like that in the house.' Kevin scratched his head nervously, replying, 'I know it sounds strange, but that's what he said.'” （当 Kevin 讲述男子关于手表的说法时，格林先生一脸困惑地打断道：“一块手表？但我们在房子里从来没注意到有那样的东西。” Kevin 紧张地挠挠头，回答说：“我知道这听起来很奇怪，但他就是这么说的。” ）
表情描写：
“Mrs. Green's eyes widened in astonishment when Kevin recounted the man's claim about the watch. 'A watch In our house ' she exclaimed.” （当 Kevin 讲述男子关于手表的说法时，格林夫人惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。“一块手表？在我们家？” 她惊叫道。）
“Mr. Green's eyebrows knitted together in confusion as he listened intently to Kevin's story, trying to make sense of what had happened.” （格林先生专注地听着 Kevin 的讲述，困惑地皱起眉头，试图弄清楚到底发生了什么。）
“Kevin's face flushed with embarrassment as he realized how hasty his actions might have been, and he avoided the Greens' eyes for a moment.” （Kevin 意识到自己的行为可能太草率了，脸因尴尬而涨得通红，一时间避开了格林夫妇的目光。）
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
思路引导：着重描写在警察局的互动，警察的询问、调查过程，以及 Kevin 的感受。重点刻画 Kevin 从不安到释然的心情转变，以及警察严谨工作时的氛围。
好词好句
对话描写：
“'Are you sure this is the watch the man mentioned ' the police officer inquired, holding the watch carefully. Mr. Green nodded firmly, saying, 'Yes, we found it exactly where he said.'” （“你确定这就是那个男人提到的手表吗？” 警察小心地拿着手表问道。格林先生坚定地点点头说：“是的，我们就是在他说的地方找到的。” ）
“Kevin nervously asked the police officer, 'What will happen to the man now Did I make a big mistake ' The officer smiled kindly and reassured him, 'We'll handle it fairly. Don't worry too much.'” （Kevin 紧张地问警察：“现在那个男人会怎么样？我是不是犯了大错？” 警察和蔼地微笑着安慰他：“我们会公正处理的。别太担心。” ）
过程描写：
“After a series of investigations and cross - checking with the man's information, the police finally verified the truth. They found out that the man was indeed telling the truth about the watch being his family heirloom.” （经过一系列调查和与男子信息的核对，警察最终核实了真相。他们发现男子关于手表是他家传家宝的说法确实属实。）
“The police officer meticulously examined the watch, comparing it with the information in the files, and then started to make phone calls to confirm the details.” （警察仔细检查了手表，与档案中的信息进行比对，然后开始打电话确认细节。）
“While waiting for the results of the investigation, Kevin paced back and forth in the waiting area, his eyes fixed on the closed door of the police office, praying for a clear - cut answer.” （在等待调查结果的时候，Kevin 在等候区来回踱步，眼睛紧紧盯着警察局办公室紧闭的门，祈祷能得到一个明确的答案。）
情感表达：
“Kevin felt a huge weight lifted off his shoulders when he learned the truth. He realized that while his actions were well - intentioned, he should have been more careful in judgment.” （得知真相后，Kevin 感到如释重负。他意识到，虽然自己的行为是出于好意，但在判断上应该更谨慎。）
“Relief washed over Kevin as the police confirmed the man's innocence. He couldn't help but smile, feeling a sense of closure to this unexpected incident.” （当警察确认男子无罪时，Kevin 如释重负。他忍不住笑了，感觉这件意外事件终于有了了结。）
“Kevin was filled with a bit of self - reproach but also a newfound wisdom. He knew that this experience would teach him to be more rational and less impulsive in the future.” （Kevin 心中有些自责，但也收获了新的感悟。他知道这次经历会让他在未来更加理性，少些冲动。）
升华：
This incident not only resolved the misunderstanding but also cultivated a stronger sense of community, with Kevin emerging as a symbol of courage and integrity in the neighborhood.这次事件不仅化解了误会，还培育了更强烈的社区意识，Kevin 成为了邻里间勇气与正直的象征。
Through this experience, Kevin learned the value of rational thinking and the power of communication, while the neighborhood witnessed the positive impact of unity and mutual trust.
通过这次经历，Kevin 学到了理性思考的价值和沟通的力量，同时邻里见证了团结与相互信任的积极影响。
This event not only strengthened the connection between neighbors but also became a life - lesson for Kevin, teaching him to approach challenges with both bravery and prudence.
这次事件不仅加强了邻里之间的联系，也成为了 Kevin 人生中的一课，教会他用勇敢和谨慎去面对挑战。
参考范文：
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. Mr. Green listened intently as Kevin recounted the events of the day. Mrs. Green, her eyes wide with concern, asked Kevin if he was hurt. Kevin shook his head, assuring them he was fine. Mr. Green then asked Kevin to show him the spot where the man had claimed to find his father’s watch. Kevin led them to that floorboard, and Mr. Green, with a bit of effort, managed to pry it up. There, lying beneath, was an old-fashioned watch. Kevin's eyes widened in surprise, a mix of relief and embarrassment flooding over him.
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. Upon arriving, Mr. Green explained the situation to the police officers, showing the watch as evidence. The police officers confirmed that the man had no criminal record and that the watch was indeed his father’s. It was the man’s family heirloom that had been lost when his parents moved out of the house. Mr. Green expressed his gratitude, saying, “You’ve shown great courage and integrity. Thank you for looking out for our neighborhood.” Kevin felt relieved and proud, knowing that he had acted with good intentions, even if the outcome was different from what he expected.

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