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Our swim team always relied on the Snack Bar to raise money for meets and equipment, butCoach Abby had bad news: it would be closed for repairs through August, meaning no money for upcoming events. Everyone was worried. “Does this mean our swim team is canceled ” Noah asked.Coach Abby comforted us, saying we'd still practice, but she wasn't sure how the meets would be funded.
The next morning, practice felt strange. None of us were swimming our best, and even CoachAbby was worried. During a break, Noah suggested, “If we can't run the Snack Bar, maybe we can think of other ways to raise money.”
“Good idea.” said Ruby. She suggested a karaoke sing-along (卡拉 OK) like what her brother did to raise funds for his school singing club. Tamara recommended a bake sale. “A. fall festival would be fun!” I added, thinking we could have water-themed games on grounds by the swimming pool.
At first, Coach Abby hesitated. But when she saw how excited we were, she agreed, “OK! Let’ s go for it!” We quickly began brainstorming ideas for our Support for Pool Party.
“I’ ll bring my karaoke machine.” Ruby offered. “We could make the microphone look like a fish!” someone added. I suggested a“Fun in the Sun” lemonade stand, and everyone jumped in to help. Soon, we had a plan for the best fundraiser ever, complete with a starfish cookie bake sale. We were ready to make it happen! We spent so much time getting everything ready and talking up our fundraiser to everyone we met that we were positive it would be a great success.
The day before our big event, I was squeezing lemons for lemonade when I saw a very dark cloud outside the kitchen window. “Uh-oh! That's not a rain cloud, is it ” I asked my mom. “Rain would be a disaster! It could ruin everything.”“You know what they say,” she answered. “Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.”“Hmm,” I said.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段：The next day,I arrived at the pool grounds early.
第二段：Facing the sudden rain, we were relieved that we had prepared the big umbrellas.
文章大意
游泳队依赖小吃吧筹款，但小吃吧因维修关闭，影响赛事资金。队员们商议举办泳池派对筹款，精心策划，有卡拉 OK、烘焙义卖、柠檬水摊等项目。活动前一天，“我” 发现乌云，担心下雨破坏活动。
故事山分析
开端：游泳队因小吃吧关闭面临赛事资金短缺问题，教练表示担忧。
发展：队员们提出各种筹款建议，最终决定举办泳池派对，并为活动积极准备。
高潮：活动当天遭遇降雨，大家面临巨大挑战。
结局：依靠提前准备的雨伞等应对措施，活动顺利进行，成功筹集资金。
五处伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：活动前一天 “我” 看到乌云，担心下雨。回应：活动当天果然下雨，成为故事转折。
伏笔：妈妈说 “Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.”回应：大家提前准备了大伞，为应对下雨做了铺垫。
伏笔：队员们精心准备活动，信心满满。回应：面对降雨仍积极应对，努力不让准备白费。
伏笔：教练起初犹豫，后看到大家热情同意举办活动。回应：教练和队员们一起想办法克服困难。
伏笔：大家提出丰富多样的活动项目。回应：下雨时各项目在雨中调整继续进行。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述活动当天到达场地时，看到下雨的场景，队员们的反应，如惊讶、沮丧等，以及大家如何迅速开始思考应对办法。
第二段：着重写在大伞的帮助下，活动如何有序开展，人们的参与情况，最后成功筹集到资金，大家的喜悦心情。
情感线
起初队员们为资金问题担忧，提出举办派对后充满期待和热情，活动前一天看到乌云时开始焦虑，活动当天降雨时感到沮丧，在应对过程中逐渐冷静，成功举办活动后充满喜悦和成就感。
故事线
游泳队小吃吧关闭，面临资金难题。
队员们商议举办泳池派对筹款。
精心准备派对各项内容。
活动前一天发现乌云，担心下雨。
活动当天遭遇降雨，大家用大伞应对。
派对在雨中成功举办，筹集到资金。
主旨升华句（英文）
Challenges are not roadblocks but opportunities for growth, as our swim team's experience with the rain - hit fundraiser shows.
With unity and preparation, we can turn potential disasters into remarkable successes, just like we did during the pool party.
Our ability to adapt to unexpected situations, like the rain on the day of the event, is a testament to our resilience and determination.
The rain that day didn't dampen our spirits but rather strengthened our bond as a team, highlighting the power of togetherness.
Even in the face of adversity, such as the rain on our big day, our positive attitude and well - laid plans can lead to great achievements.
写作示范一
第一段
The next day, I arrived at the pool grounds early. To my horror, it was pouring heavily. The once - promising venue now looked like a disaster zone. The lemonade stand was half - flooded, and the starfish cookies were getting soggy. My teammates arrived one by one, their faces falling as they saw the rain. But instead of giving up, we quickly gathered around Coach Abby. She encouraged us to stay positive and come up with solutions. We immediately started moving the equipment under the big umbrellas we had prepared.
第二段
Facing the sudden rain, we were relieved that we had prepared the big umbrellas. We rearranged the karaoke machine and the bake - sale table. People started arriving, and to our surprise, they were excited to join the event even in the rain. The kids were having a blast playing water - themed games in the puddles. The lemonade stand was selling well, and the karaoke corner was filled with laughter and singing. By the end of the day, we had raised enough money for our swim meets. We all celebrated, knowing that our efforts and preparations had paid off.
写作示范二
第一段
The next day, I arrived at the pool grounds early. Rain was pouring down in sheets, and my heart sank. I had been so looking forward to this event, and now it seemed like all our hard work was going to waste. As my teammates arrived, there were gasps of disappointment. But Noah, ever the optimist, shouted, “Hey, we can still make this work!” We quickly remembered the big umbrellas we had stored away. We rushed to set them up, covering the key areas like the bake - sale table and the karaoke machine.
第二段
Facing the sudden rain, we were relieved that we had prepared the big umbrellas. With the umbrellas providing shelter, the event slowly came to life. People showed up, attracted by the lively atmosphere. The starfish cookies were a hit, and the karaoke sing - along became even more fun as everyone huddled under the umbrellas. We were busy selling lemonade and organizing games. At the end of the day, when we counted the money, we realized that we had not only met our fundraising goal but exceeded it. We hugged each other, proud of our ability to overcome the rain and make the event a huge success.
One possible version:
The next day, I arrived at the pool grounds early. The sky was still overcast, but there was no sign of rain yet. I set up the lemonade stand, making sure everything was in place. Ruby and her brother were already there, setting up the karaoke machine and decorating the microphone to look like a fish. Tamara had brought a variety of baked goods, including the starfish cookies, and was arranging them on a table. The rest of the team was busy setting up tables, chairs, and decorations for the fall festival. Everyone was buzzing with excitement and determination. I could see the pride in Coach Abby's eyes as she surveyed our efforts. "This is going to be amazing," she said, giving us all a thumbs up.
Facing the sudden rain, we were relieved that we had prepared the big umbrellas. As the first drops began to fall, we quickly opened the umbrellas and positioned them over the tables and stands. The rain started to pour harder, but we didn't let it dampen our spirits. Ruby and her brother started the karaoke, and a few brave souls joined in, singing their hearts out despite the weather. Tamara and I covered the baked goods with plastic wrap to keep them dry. The lemonade stand was moved under a larger umbrella, and we continued to serve lemonade to the few brave visitors who braved the rain. Coach Abby, ever the optimist, rallied us with her enthusiasm. "We can do this! Let's make the best of it!" she encouraged. Despite the rain, our spirits remained high, and we were determined to make our Support for Pool Party a success.

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