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河南省安阳市2025届高三年级第一次模拟考试
第二节阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I flew through the back door, excitedly announcing to my mom, “ mom, I’ve been nominated for the National Junior Honor Society!” My mother smiled with pride and replied, “ I’m so proud of you, honey.”
Together in the family room, I began filling out the application for the Honor Society. It required proof of possessing all the necessary candidate characteristics.The following day, I submitted the paperwork to my advisor and didn’t give it much further thought.
Months passed, and one afternoon, as soon as I stepped off the bus, I rushed home with a letter from the school regarding the Honor Society. “Mom,” I said, handing her the letter with tears welling up in my eyes, “ I didn’t make it. They didn’t choose me.” My mother hugged me and said, “ Oh, honey. There must have been some kind of mistake.”
That night at dinner, I said sadly, “It’s not fair.” My mother agreed and then shared a story about her high school friend who was intelligent and kind-hearted but never made the National Honor Society. Despite his hurt and anger, he became a world-renowned lung cancer specialist, saving lives every day.
I grasped my mom’s message: not being part of the Honor Society wouldn’t define my future, but it was certainly painful in the moment. However, seeing most of my friends get selected made those weeks especially tough for me. I opened up to my parents about how difficult it was and declared, “This shouldn’t happen to anyone else.” We brainstormed ways to improve the selection process and arranged a meeting with the school principal to present our ideas.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Paragraph 1: A few days later, I received a cal from the principal.
Paragraph 2: Finally, my graduation arrived and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member.
第二节阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I flew through the back door, excitedly announcing to my mom(非谓语动词做伴随动作), “ mom, I’ve been nominated for the National Junior Honor Society!” My mother smiled with pride and replied, “ I’m so proud of you, honey.”
Together in the family room, I began filling out the application for the Honor Society. It required proof of possessing all the necessary candidate characteristics.The following day, I submitted the paperwork to my advisor and didn’t give it much further thought.
Months passed, and one afternoon, as soon as I stepped off the bus, I rushed home with a letter from the school regarding the Honor Society(介词短语做后置定语). “Mom,” I said, handing her the letter(非谓语动词做伴随动作) with tears welling up in my eyes, “ I didn’t make it. They didn’t choose me.” My mother hugged me and said, “ Oh, honey. There must have been some kind of mistake.”
That night at dinner, I said sadly, “It’s not fair.” My mother agreed and then shared a story about her high school friend who was intelligent and kind-hearted but never made the National Honor Society(定从). Despite his hurt and anger, he became a world-renowned lung cancer specialist, saving lives every day(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作).
I grasped my mom’s message: not being part of the Honor Society(非谓语动词短语做主语) wouldn’t define my future, but it was certainly painful in the moment. However, seeing most of my friends get selected(非谓语动词短语做主语) made those weeks especially tough for me. I opened up to my parents about how difficult it was(宾从) and declared, “This shouldn’t happen to anyone else.” We brainstormed ways to improve the selection process and arranged a meeting with the school principal to present our ideas(非谓语动词短语做目的状语).
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
Paragraph 1: A few days later, I received a cal from the principal.
Paragraph 2: Finally, my graduation arrived and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member.
1. 读后续写类型分析与构思
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
读后续写类型 这是一个情感层次递进的类型，属于个人成长/突破型的读后续写。续写内容应该体现主人公从失望到面对挑战并付诸行动，最终达到目标。 "I grasped my mom’s message: not being part of the Honor Society wouldn’t define my future..."
思路构思 需要体现情感的转折，展现主人公的心理变化，并从负面情绪转变为正面的行动。构思时要加入行动、心理描写的转折点，以及环境的变化。 "My mother hugged me and said, “ Oh, honey. There must have been some kind of mistake.”"
布局 1. 接受失败的情感波动；2. 面对问题的积极转变；3. 提出解决方案并进行行动；4. 展现成长与最终成果。 "I opened up to my parents about how difficult it was and declared, “This shouldn’t happen to anyone else.”"
框架提炼 开始段：讲述主人公从失望到思考问题；中间段：讨论解决方案；结束段：行动后的结果与个人成长。 "We brainstormed ways to improve the selection process and arranged a meeting..."
承接原文事项 1. 需注意情感的承接；2. 不要忽略原文的时间和空间过渡；3. 保持语言风格的一致性；4. 合理延续故事情节，注意逻辑衔接。 "I flew through the back door, excitedly announcing to my mom..."
整体注意事项 1. 语言简洁清晰；2. 切勿过多细节描写，突出人物心理与关键转折；3. 适度调整情感强度的层次感，逐步递进。 "That night at dinner, I said sadly, “It’s not fair.”"
巧妙设计续写内容 1. 采用对话与心理描写的方式展现人物内心的矛盾与成长；2. 通过动情的描述展现解决问题的决心与行动；3. 打破原文的局限，插入主人公与校长的互动。 "We brainstormed ways to improve the selection process..."
2. 文章的“故事山模式”分析与思维导图
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 主人公经历了情感波动，面临挑战并找到成长的机会。母亲是支持和鼓励的角色。 "My mother smiled with pride and replied, “I’m so proud of you, honey.”"
情感层次 情感从兴奋转为失落，再到面对现实的痛苦，最后通过行动与反思，逐渐变得积极，最终迎来转机。 "My mother hugged me and said, “Oh, honey. There must have been some kind of mistake.”"
关键情节点 1. 初获提名时的兴奋；2. 未入选的失落；3. 母亲讲述的励志故事；4. 提出解决方案的行动与结果。 "I didn’t make it. They didn’t choose me."
语言特色 语言直白，情感真实，带有亲情的温暖与鼓励。 "I grasped my mom’s message: not being part of the Honor Society wouldn’t define my future..."
关键词分析 提名、失望、痛苦、解决、改变、行动。 "I opened up to my parents about how difficult it was..."
心理描写 从“难过”和“失望”到“决心”与“成长”，逐渐展现主人公的心理转折。 "My mother agreed and then shared a story about her high school friend..."
动作描写 动作较为简洁，着重表达情感的反应与变化。 "We brainstormed ways to improve the selection process..."
环境描写 主要是家庭环境，聚焦在情感和人物之间的互动。 "Together in the family room, I began filling out the application..."
隐含主题 持续努力与面对挑战的勇气，不以结果来定义自己的价值。 "Despite his hurt and anger, he became a world-renowned lung cancer specialist..."
情感转折 由失落到反思，最终产生行动，展现出成长的过程。 "I grasped my mom’s message: not being part of the Honor Society wouldn’t define my future..."
空间转换 由家庭空间到学校的解决方案讨论，空间转换支持故事情感的演变。 "We brainstormed ways to improve the selection process and arranged a meeting with the school principal..."
时间过渡 文章时间跨度较长，由未入选到最终的行动与解决，时间过渡贯穿整个情节。 "Months passed, and one afternoon, as soon as I stepped off the bus..."
Story Mountain 思维导图：
1. 起点：主人公因提名而兴奋。
2. 失落点：未被选中，感到失望。
3. 转折点：母亲的故事启发，主人公决定采取行动。
4. 解决点：提出改善方案并与校长沟通。
5. 成果点：最终成为Honor Society成员，体现个人成长。
3. 续写时所需描写句型
动作描写
She walked up to the principal’s office, determined to make a change.
I took a deep breath and rang the bell, ready to face the principal.
He nodded in agreement as I presented my ideas.
My heart raced as I waited for the principal’s decision.
She hugged me tightly, offering her silent support.
I began drafting a letter, knowing it might help.
The room fell silent as the principal started speaking.
I stood up confidently and shook the principal’s hand.
She hurried to the principal’s office, her heart pounding with excitement and nerves.
As she entered the room, she greeted the principal with a polite smile, but her eyes betrayed her anxiety.
She reached for the door handle, took a deep breath, and walked in with newfound determination.
Her fingers trembled as she handed the paper with her ideas to the principal.
The principal nodded thoughtfully as he reviewed her suggestions.
She could barely contain her excitement when she saw the approval in his eyes.
She smiled nervously as the principal congratulated her for her thoughtful ideas.
As the principal announced her name, she stood up, shocked and overwhelmed with joy.
心理描写
I couldn’t help but feel anxious about what the principal would say.
My thoughts raced as I recalled my mother’s encouraging words.
A wave of frustration swept over me, but I quickly pushed it aside.
I felt a mix of hope and fear as I looked into the principal’s eyes.
It was hard to accept at first, but I knew I had to try.
Despite the disappointment, I knew this experience would shape me.
I felt empowered, as if my voice had finally been heard.
I was filled with a sense of accomplishment, knowing I had done everything I could.
The weight of the failure had been heavy on her shoulders, but now, her thoughts began to shift towards the possibility of change.
She felt a sudden surge of hope as she spoke up, knowing her voice could make a difference.
As she stood before the principal, a sense of pride washed over her.
Doubt and fear lingered in her mind, but the thought of making a change kept her going.
She was nervous, but her determination to make things right overpowered her fear.
For the first time in days, she felt a glimmer of hope.
Her heart sank when she initially feared rejection, but soon it was replaced with a sense of accomplishment.
She had never felt more proud of herself for taking action, even in the face of disappointment.
环境描写
The school hallway seemed quieter than usual, as I walked to the principal’s office.
The air was thick with anticipation as we sat in the principal’s office.
The warm glow of the family room comforted me as I shared my thoughts.
The evening sun cast a golden hue over the room as we brainstormed solutions.
The principal’s office felt cold and impersonal, but I knew it was where change would happen.
The school courtyard was bustling with students, yet I felt strangely alone.
The dinner table was filled with calm conversation, but my mind raced with ideas.
As I sat in the waiting room, my palms grew sweaty from the nerves.
The principal’s office was quiet, with only the sound of pages turning as they discussed the proposal.
Outside the window, the sun set slowly, casting a warm glow over the school grounds.
The room was filled with a sense of anticipation, as the principal listened intently to her ideas.
The hallway was silent, the only sound the shuffle of her shoes against the floor.
The classroom was empty, except for the stack of papers on the desk, waiting to be reviewed.
The bright afternoon sunlight filled the office, making it feel hopeful and warm.
The principal’s office was lined with bookshelves, and the soft hum of the air conditioner filled the room.
The schoolyard was bustling with students, but Jade felt like she was the only one in the world at that moment.
高级替换词
Excited: thrilled, elated, overjoyed, exuberant, enthusiastic.
Sad: sorrowful, melancholic, disheartened, downcast, despondent.
Confident: assured, self-assured, poised, resolute, steadfast.
Disappointed: disillusioned, crestfallen, downhearted, let down, deflated.
Support: encouragement, aid, backing, reinforcement, assistance.
4. 高中语法现象与搭配分析
语法现象 词组/搭配 词意 词性 近义词 反义词 例句
动词短语 brainstorm ideas 集思广益，提出主意 动词短语 think of, come up with discard, ignore "We brainstormed ways to improve the selection process."
情感表达 feel disappointed 感到失望 动词短语 feel let down, feel disheartened feel encouraged, feel hopeful "I felt disappointed when I didn’t make it."
词组搭配 make a change 做出改变 动词短语 implement change, initiate change maintain status quo "I knew I had to make a change in the selection process."
强调表达 take a deep breath 深呼吸，冷静下来 动词短语 inhale deeply, breathe deeply gasp, pant "I took a deep breath before presenting my ideas to the principal."
转折连接词 despite the disappointment 尽管失望 介词短语 although, in spite of because, due to "Despite the disappointment, I knew this experience would shape me."
Possible Versions
Version 1
Paragraph 1: A few days later, I received a call from the principal. Her words were both encouraging and candid, offering me a chance to address the flaws I had noticed in the selection process(定从). My mind raced with ideas as I realized(状从) this was my moment to advocate for change(宾从). "I’m confident that your perspective will help us refine the process(宾从)," she said, and I could hear the sincerity in her tone. Despite my previous disappointment, I now saw a different path before me—one where I could create a positive impact(定从). This opportunity wasn’t just about fixing the system but ensuring fairness for future candidates.
Paragraph 2: Finally, my graduation arrived, and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member. As I walked across the stage(状从), I couldn’t help but reflect on the journey I had undertaken(定从). I remembered the sleepless nights of preparation, the setbacks I had overcome(定从), and the support I had received from those around me(定从). Standing there in front of my peers(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), I realized that my journey was not just about earning a title but about becoming the person I had always hoped to be(定从)—a person who could make a difference(定从). I smiled, feeling both gratitude and determination for the future ahead.
亮点语法和词汇分析
感官描述：“I could hear the sincerity in her tone.”
搭配: hear sincerity, sense emotion
近义词: perceive, detect
例句: I could sense the excitement in her voice.
倒装句式：“My mind raced with ideas”
搭配: raced with, flooded with
近义词: overwhelmed by, filled with
例句: His mind raced with possible solutions, each better than the last.
亮点语法和词汇分析
条件句使用：“If I had not taken the initiative, I would not be standing here today.”
搭配: take the initiative, would not be standing
近义词: take action, would not be here
例句: If I had not spoken up, things would have turned out differently.
情感转折：“I couldn’t help but reflect on the journey I had undertaken.”
替换词: ponder, reminisce
例句: She couldn’t help but smile when she thought of all she had accomplished.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: A few days later, I received a call from the principal. Her voice sounded warm and reassuring as she explained(状从) that she had carefully reviewed the selection process and appreciated my initiative(宾从). I felt a surge of hope rising within me(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), even though I was still uncertain about the outcome(状从). As she spoke(状从), I couldn’t help but replay the moments of doubt and frustration in my mind. I had never imagined that my disappointment could lead to such an opportunity(宾从). "We will discuss this further during the upcoming meeting," she said, offering me a chance to present my ideas(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). My heart skipped a beat as I realized that my voice could make a difference after all(宾从).
Paragraph 2 : Finally, my graduation arrived, and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member. The applause from my classmates was deafening, and I felt an overwhelming sense of pride. I realized that this moment wasn’t just about being recognized by the school, but about how much I had learned through the process(宾从). Reflecting on the hardships(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作) I had faced(定从) and the support from my parents, I now understood that setbacks are merely stepping stones to success. Standing there on the stage(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), I knew this achievement was only the beginning(宾从). I smiled, knowing that my journey had only just begun(宾从).
亮点语法和词汇分析
使用了虚拟语气：“I had never imagined...”
搭配: never imagined, would make a difference
近义词: couldn't have foreseen, never expected
例句: I had never imagined that this decision would change my life.
情绪描写：“I felt a surge of hope rising within me”
替换词: hope blossomed, excitement surged, confidence grew
例句: Hope blossomed as she offered a solution.
亮点语法和词汇分析
并列句使用：“I realized that this moment wasn’t just about being recognized by the school, but about how much I had learned through the process.”
搭配: not just about..., but about...
近义词: more than, beyond
例句: This decision wasn’t just about what was easy, but about what was right.
使用了感官描写：“The applause from my classmates was deafening”
替换词: overwhelming, thunderous, ear-splitting
例句: The cheers from the crowd were deafening, leaving me stunned.
Version 3
Paragraph 1 : A few days later, I received a call from the principal. She thanked me for my perseverance and shared that the school was willing to review its selection process(宾从). “Your approach has been both thoughtful and proactive,” she remarked, a note of admiration in her voice(独立主格). I was taken aback by her words, as I had never imagined(状从) that my actions would be noticed(宾从). The sense of validation that washed over me(定从) was immense. I had never been more certain that I was on the right path(宾从), and this opportunity made me even more determined to pursue what was just and fair for all future candidates(宾从).
Paragraph 2 : Finally, my graduation arrived, and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member. The recognition felt even more significant because it was not just about being part of an exclusive group, but about the lessons I had learned along the way(定从). I realized that every rejection, every setback had been an opportunity to grow(宾从). As I stood on stage(状从), I felt a renewed sense of purpose, knowing(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作) that I was now ready to face even greater challenges(宾从). I knew that my journey had only just begun, and I was eager to take the next step(宾从).
亮点语法和词汇分析
副词的使用：“thoughtful and proactive”
搭配: thoughtful approach, proactive behavior
近义词: considerate, dynamic
例句: Her approach was thoughtful and showed a great deal of foresight.
使用了反转句式：“I was taken aback by her words”
搭配: taken aback, caught off guard
近义词: surprised, stunned
例句: I was taken aback by the sudden change of plans.
亮点语法和词汇分析
因果关系：“The recognition felt even more significant because it was not just about being part of an exclusive group”
搭配: feel significant, not just about
近义词: meaningful, valuable
例句: The achievement felt more meaningful than I had imagined.
总结性语句：“I knew that my journey had only just begun”
替换词: journey had just started, beginning of my path
例句: This moment marked the beginning of a new chapter in my life.
情绪描写
hope surged
felt overwhelmed
heart skipped a beat
immense validation
sense of pride
动作描写
walked across the stage
took a deep breath
smiled confidently
presented ideas
stood tall
升级替换语料
情绪描写
Hope surged: hope bloomed, excitement swelled
Felt overwhelmed: felt overcome, felt swept away
Heart skipped a beat: heart raced, pulse quickened
动作描写
Walked across the stage: stepped onto the stage, crossed the threshold
Took a deep breath: inhale deeply, breathed with purpose
Smiled confidently: grinned with assurance, beamed with certainty
Version 4
Paragraph 1: A few days later, I received a call from the principal. Her voice was warm and encouraging, and she thanked me for my initiative in bringing attention to the flaws in the selection process. “I believe we can work together to make things better(宾从),” she said confidently. Hearing those words(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), I felt a surge of hope—hope that my actions would not only lead to change but also offer others a fair chance(宾从). It was clear that my persistence had made a difference, and I was grateful for the opportunity to express my ideas(主从). The realization that I could influence the future process(同位从) filled me with purpose, and I knew I had to give it my all(宾从) to ensure that the system would be improved for everyone(宾从)(目的状语).
Paragraph 2: Finally, my graduation arrived, and the principal announced my name as an Honor Society member. The applause from the crowd echoed in my ears, and I stood there in shock for a moment before stepping forward. I had never imagined this moment could feel so rewarding(宾从). As I looked out over my peers(状从), I felt a deep sense of pride. The journey had been tough, but it had taught me valuable lessons about perseverance and resilience. This recognition wasn’t just a title; it was a testament to my growth. I couldn’t help but smile as I realized(状从) that the challenges I faced had shaped me into a stronger(定从), more confident individual.
亮点语法和词汇分析
虚拟语气：“I believe we can work together to make things better”
搭配: make things better, work together
近义词: improve, collaborate
例句: If we collaborate, we can create something extraordinary.
情绪描写：“I felt a surge of hope”
替换词: wave of hope, burst of excitement
例句: A wave of hope swept over me when I heard the news.
动作描写：“I was grateful for the opportunity”
替换词: thankful for, appreciative of
例句: I was thankful for the chance to present my thoughts.
亮点语法和词汇分析
并列句使用：“The applause from the crowd echoed in my ears, and I stood there in shock”
搭配: echoed in my ears, stood in shock
近义词: rang in my ears, stood motionless
例句: The laughter echoed in my mind long after the conversation ended.
情绪描写：“I felt a deep sense of pride”
替换词: overwhelming pride, great satisfaction
例句: Pride filled my heart as I stood before them.
总结性表达：“This recognition wasn’t just a title; it was a testament to my growth”
替换词: proof, evidence
例句: The award wasn’t just a recognition; it was a symbol of my hard work.
情绪描写
Surge of hope → wave of excitement, burst of optimism
Grateful for → thankful for, appreciative of
A rush of emotions → wave of feelings, flood of emotions
动作描写
Walk across the stage → step onto the stage, cross the threshold
Hold back tears → fight back tears, keep composure
Smile confidently → grin with assurance, beam with certainty
亮点语法总结与例句
虚拟语气
“If we collaborate, we can create something extraordinary.”
“I wish I had known about this opportunity earlier.”
并列句
“The applause from the crowd echoed in my ears, and I stood there in shock.”
“She smiled brightly, and I could see the pride in her eyes.”
转折句式
“Instead of accepting the status quo, I had chosen to make a difference.”
“Rather than waiting for change, we must create it ourselves.”

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