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少年勇擒 “贼”？2025年浙江1月首考读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Para.1 When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Para.2 Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
文章分析（人物和事件）：
主要角色
凯文（Kevin）：一个 12 岁的男孩，父母将他培养成举止良好的孩子，但他内心渴望刺激。他勇敢且有正义感，发现异常情况后迅速报警并主动出击。经历此事后，他学会了在做判断前要谨慎，不轻易下结论。
希尔夫人（Mrs. Hill）：凯文父母不在家时照顾他的邻居，她在故事中主要是提供凯文所处的环境背景，当时她在睡觉，未直接参与事件。
格林夫妇（Mr. and Mrs. Green）：希尔夫人家对门的住户，他们外出工作，回家后听凯文讲述事件经过，并和凯文一起寻找证据，推动了故事发展。
闯入者：他声称自己是房子前主人的儿子，回来寻找父亲藏在地板下的手表，他的行为引发了一系列事件，他的解释推动了故事的反转。
故事情节
开端：凯文在希尔夫人家感到无聊，看到街对面格林夫妇家有个男人闯入，于是报警并决定自己去制止。
发展：凯文拿着树枝进入格林夫妇家与闯入者对峙，闯入者称自己是前房主儿子，回来找父亲的手表，此时警车声传来，闯入者逃跑后被警察逮捕。
高潮：凯文向格林夫妇讲述事情经过，大家一起发现地板下的手表，证明了闯入者所言属实。
结局：警察确认闯入者身份后将其释放，凯文从这次经历中吸取教训，懂得判断事情要谨慎。
中心思想：
文章通过讲述凯文从怀疑他人是闯入者到发现自己误会的故事，传达了在面对事情时不能仅凭表面现象就匆忙下结论，要在掌握足够证据、了解事情全貌后再做判断，保持谨慎态度的道理。
补充说明：
我个人不太喜欢网上一些作文范文中的情节，比如让Kevin道歉，然后闯入者大度地原谅了他。没有得到房主的同意翻入别人家本身就是错误的行为，不论原因是什么。所以Kevin虽然误会了他的初衷，应该道歉，但是描述闯入者时应写对方感到羞愧，并表达对Kevin的感激之情，因为Kevin找到了手表，证明了他并非入室偷窃。所以我在维克多提供的范文基础上修改了一下。
参考范文：
When Mr. and Mrs Green got home,Kevin went to talk to them. He explained everything, from the man jumping through the window to the police arresting him. The Greens listened attentively, with a doubtful expression on their faces. Kevin then described how the man had been trying to move the floorboard. “He claimed his father’s watch was hidden beneath it,” he added. Mrs. Green’s eyes widened in surprise, and without hesitation, she exclaimed, “Let’s have a look!” It took a little while, but they managed to lift the floorboard. To everyone’s astonishment, there it was—an old watch, exactly as the man had described.
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.The officer confirmed it matched the man’s description. After verification, it turned out that the man was indeed the son of the previous owners. The police released him, who was deeply grateful to Kevin for bringing the matter to light. As for Kevin, he learned an important lesson that he should not jump to conclusions without sufficient evidence. In the future, he would be more cautious in his judgment and would try to understand the whole story before taking action.

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