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贵州省六校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考试题
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Recently divorced, I had no job and was on my way downtown to go the rounds of the employment offices, I sat down in the streetcar - and there against the seat was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle.
I got off the streetcar in a downpour and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself. I examined the handle and saw a name carved on it. Then I searched a telephone book for the lame on the umbrella and found it. I called and a lady answered.
She said in surprise that it was her umbrella, which her parents, now dead, had given her or a birthday present and it had been stolen from her locker at school (she was a teacher) more than a year before.
I managed to find her and gave the umbrella back to her. She took the umbrella, and her eyes filled with tears. The teacher wanted to give me a reward, but I declined her. We talked for a while, and I left after giving her my address at her request.
My last job ended the day before Christmas, my thirty dollar rent was soon due, and I had fifteen dollars to my name - which Peggy and I would need for food. I had already purchased my daughter a small tree, and we were going to decorate it that night.
The air was full of the sound of Christmas merriment as I walked from the streetcar to my mall apartment. Bells rang and children shouted in the cold dusk of the evening, and windows were lighted and everyone was running and laughing. But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance what so ever.
I felt so helpless and so lonely. What was to become of us We would have only hamburgers or our Christmas dinner tomorrow. I stood in the cold little kitchen, misery overwhelmed me.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, the doorbell rang and I ran to answer it , only to find a pile of boxes beside the door.
Paragraph 2: Seeing these surprises from the teacher, I knew we would have food and ornaments(装饰品)for this Christmas.
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Recently divorced(非谓语动词做主语补语), I had no job and was on my way downtown to go the rounds of the employment offices, I sat down in the streetcar - and there against the seat(介词短语做状语) was a beautiful silk umbrella with a silver handle(介词短语做后置定语)(场景描述).
I got off the streetcar in a downpour and thankfully opened the umbrella to protect myself(todo做目的状语). I examined the handle and saw a name carved on it(非谓语动词做后置定语). Then I searched a telephone book for the name on the umbrella and found it. I called and a lady answered.
She said in surprise that it was her umbrella(宾从), which her parents, now dead(adj做补语), had given her or a birthday present and it had been stolen from her locker at school (she was a teacher) more than a year before(定从).
I managed to find her and gave the umbrella back to her. She took the umbrella, and her eyes filled with tears. The teacher wanted to give me a reward, but I declined her. We talked for a while, and I left after giving her my address at her request.
My last job ended the day before Christmas, my thirty dollar rent was soon due, and I had fifteen dollars to my name - which Peggy and I would need for food(定从). I had already purchased my daughter a small tree, and we were going to decorate it that night.
The air was full of the sound of Christmas merriment as I walked from the streetcar to my mall apartment(环境描写). Bells rang and children shouted in the cold dusk of the evening, and windows were lighted and everyone was running and laughing.(环境描写) But there should be no Christmas for me, I knew, no gifts, no remembrance what so ever(融情于景).
I felt so helpless and so lonely(情感). What was to become of us We would have only hamburgers or our Christmas dinner tomorrow. I stood in the cold little kitchen, misery overwhelmed me.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, the doorbell rang and I ran to answer it , only to find a pile of boxes beside the door.
Paragraph 2: Seeing these surprises from the teacher, I knew we would have food and ornaments(装饰品)for this Christmas.
1. 续写分类与分析表
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
类型分类 本文属于情感治愈型读后续写，聚焦人际善意与意外的温暖馈赠。 "She took the umbrella, and her eyes filled with tears."
构思思路 围绕“困境中获得希望”的主题，展开礼物到来的惊喜与感动，体现人与人之间的温暖互动及善意的回报。 "I had no job and was on my way downtown to go the rounds of the employment offices."
布局方法 1. 第一段：讲述门铃响起、发现礼物，展现惊喜与疑惑；
2. 第二段：描述礼物内容及背后故事，突出情感升华。 "Suddenly, the doorbell rang and I ran to answer it, only to find a pile of boxes beside the door."
框架提炼 - 开端：接到门铃声，发现礼物；
- 发展：查看礼物内容，理解其意义；
- 高潮：情感升华，感激之情；
- 结尾：以积极情感收尾。 "Seeing these surprises from the teacher, I knew we would have food and ornaments for this Christmas."
实施步骤 1. 描述发现礼物的场景和情感；
2. 运用环境描写渲染氛围；
3. 通过心理、动作描写展现人物情感变化；
4. 自然衔接到结尾感悟。 "I felt so helpless and so lonely. What was to become of us "
注意事项 - 注意承接原文基调，突出人物情感；
- 细节描写要服务于情感和主题；
- 保持续写逻辑顺畅，呼应原文伏笔。 "I stood in the cold little kitchen, misery overwhelmed me."
巧妙设计 1. 将礼物与原文人物关系紧密关联；
2. 在描写礼物内容时凸显情感意义；
3. 用小细节体现人性的善良与温暖。 "I managed to find her and gave the umbrella back to her."
2. 故事山模式分析
Story Mountain 思维导图：
1. 开端：主人公陷入困境，孤独无助。（I felt so helpless and so lonely.）
2. 发展：门铃响起，发现一堆礼物，引发好奇与感动。（Suddenly, the doorbell rang...）
3. 高潮：揭开礼物内容，发现是老师送来的温暖回馈，情感到达顶点。（Seeing these surprises...）
4. 转折：感悟善意的意义，感受到人与人之间的联系。（This experience taught me...）
5. 结尾：以感激与希望作结，为未来生活注入正能量。（...we would have food and ornaments for Christmas.）
衔接点与分析：
类型 原文衔接点 分析
情感反映 "Her eyes filled with tears." 老师对伞的情感暗示了后续她的善意回报。
动作描写 "I managed to find her and gave the umbrella back to her." 主动送还伞的动作体现主人公善良，为后续礼物埋下伏笔。
转折点 "I stood in the cold little kitchen, misery overwhelmed me." 窘境与情感低点为后续情感升华创造对比。
伏笔与冲突 1. 老师对伞的感情；
2. 主人公的困境与孤独感； 伏笔：伞象征着希望与人性善意；冲突：主人公面临的经济与情感困境。
解决方案 通过收到礼物，解决了实际的物质困境并收获了希望与感激。 礼物的设计与情感呼应，让原文与续写紧密衔接。
3. 情境适配的动作、心理、环境描写例句
动作描写例句
She ran to the door, her heart pounding with curiosity.
He carefully unwrapped the box, his hands trembling slightly.
She leaned against the wall, clutching the umbrella tightly.
His fingers traced the silver handle, a soft smile spreading on his face.
He sank into the chair, overwhelmed by emotions.
She hurried to the kitchen, grabbing the ornaments with excitement.
He set the table meticulously, adding a festive touch.
She lit the candle, its warm glow filling the room.
心理描写例句
A mix of hope and doubt surged through her mind.
He felt a rush of gratitude that made his heart ache.
Fear of the unknown gnawed at his resolve.
Relief washed over her as she saw the gifts.
A deep sense of connection warmed his soul.
She felt a glimmer of hope for the first time in weeks.
Guilt lingered, but joy soon took its place.
His heart swelled with gratitude for the unexpected kindness.
环境描写例句
The dim light of the streetlamp cast long shadows on the wall.
A cold wind whistled through the tiny cracks of the kitchen window.
The soft glow of the Christmas tree lit up the room.
Snowflakes danced outside, painting the world white.
The faint aroma of pine needles filled the air.
Frosted windows hinted at the icy chill outside.
The room was quiet, save for the gentle ticking of a clock.
The evening sky blushed with hues of pink and orange.
4. 高中语法现象与词汇搭配分析
语法亮点
语法现象 原文示例 分析及例句
非谓语动词 "Seeing these surprises from the teacher..." 非谓语动词作主语的独立结构，用于情感描写。
例句：Hearing the news, she burst into tears.
强调句 "It was her umbrella, which her parents..." 强调某一重点内容，突出情感。
例句：It was kindness that made her life brighter.
定语从句 "The teacher, who had been so grateful..." 定语从句补充背景信息。
例句：The gift, which was beautifully wrapped, lay on the table.
倒装句 "Never had she felt so overwhelmed..." 倒装句表达强烈情感。
例句：Seldom do people show such generosity.
词汇积累
词汇 词性 词义 近义词 反义词 例句
gratitude n. 感激 thankfulness, appreciation ingratitude He expressed his gratitude through a heartfelt letter.
overwhelmed adj. 不知所措的 overcome, overjoyed composed She was overwhelmed by the generosity of her friends.
decorate v. 装饰 adorn, embellish strip They decorated the tree with colorful ornaments.
despair n./v. 绝望 hopelessness, anguish hope In despair, she stared at the empty cupboards.
generosity n. 慷慨 kindness, largesse selfishness His generosity transformed their Christmas into something magical.
Possible Versions
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, the doorbell rang, and I ran to answer it, only to find a pile of boxes beside the door. Stunned(非谓语动词做主语补语), I hesitated for a moment before bringing them inside. The handwriting on the top box revealed it was from the teacher(宾从). As I opened the first box(状从), tears welled up in my eyes—it was filled with delicious food, enough to last us weeks(adj做补语或后置定语). The second box contained ornaments and a beautiful tablecloth. What touched me most(主语从句) was the third box, which held a card(定从) that read(定从): “You returned a gift of hope to me; now let me do the same for you.” At that moment, I realized how much kindness could transform lives(宾从).
Paragraph 2: Seeing these surprises from the teacher(非谓语动词做伴随动作), I knew we would have food and ornaments for this Christmas(宾从). My daughter’s laughter echoed through the room as we decorated the tree together(状从). The once-cold apartment now felt warm and inviting(环境描写). This experience taught me the true meaning of giving: it was not about how much you had(宾从) but how much love you shared(宾从)(感悟). On Christmas morning, as we sat by the glowing tree(状从), I promised myself to pass on this kindness someday. Though life remained uncertain(状从), I felt a new sense of hope and connection, knowing that even in the darkest times, a little light could make all the difference(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从).
亮点语法分析
语法点 范文中的句子 替换例句/解释
强调句 "It was from the teacher." It was love that made the difference. 强调给予的力量。
非谓语动词作状语 "Stunned, I hesitated for a moment before bringing them inside." Encouraged, she continued to fight for her dreams. 状语描述心理状态。
定语从句 "What touched me most was the third box, which held a card..." The house, which was once empty, now felt alive.
亮点词汇与短语
情绪描写：tears welled up, touched me most, laughter echoed
动作描写：ran to answer, hesitated for a moment, decorated the tree
积累语料：
短语：bring warmth to, make a promise, pass on kindness
单词替换：
hesitate → pause, waver
touch → move, affect
glow → radiate, shine
例句：
The message moved her deeply, bringing tears to her eyes.
His actions radiated kindness, touching everyone around him.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, the doorbell rang, and I ran to answer it, only to find a pile of boxes beside the door. With trembling hands(介词短语做方式状语), I brought them inside and opened the first one. Inside were neatly packed groceries, fresh fruit, and even a cake(完全倒装句). My heart pounded as I moved to the second box(状从), which contained colorful ornaments and a handwritten note(定从). The note read: “For all the kindness you’ve shown(定从), may this bring joy to your family.” Overwhelmed with gratitude(非谓语动词做原因状语), I sank into a chair, holding the note close(非谓语动词做伴随动作). It was as though the teacher had given me not just a Christmas gift but also the strength to keep going(不定式做后置定语)(表从).
Paragraph 2: Seeing these surprises from the teacher(非谓语动词做伴随动作), I knew we would have food and ornaments for this Christmas(宾从). As we decorated the tree(状从), my daughter’s face lit up with excitement. The apartment, once dreary and cold, became a haven of warmth and joy. On Christmas morning, I prepared a special meal using the groceries(非谓语动词做伴随动作), the aroma filling the air(独立主格). As we sat down to eat(状从), I realized that it wasn’t just the food or the ornaments that mattered(宾从+强调句)—it was the kindness that had turned our Christmas into something magical(宾从+强调句). This memory, I promised myself, would inspire me to spread such light to others.
亮点语法分析
语法点 范文中的句子 替换例句/解释
分词短语作状语 "Overwhelmed with gratitude, I sank into a chair." Exhausted from work, she fell asleep instantly.
定语从句 "The note read: 'For all the kindness you’ve shown, may this bring joy to your family.'" The house, which had once been empty, now brimmed with laughter.
虚拟语气 "It was as though the teacher had given me not just a Christmas gift but also the strength to keep going." She looked at me as if she had seen a ghost.
亮点词汇与短语
情绪描写：overwhelmed with gratitude, my heart pounded, face lit up
动作描写：brought them inside, sank into a chair, decorated the tree
积累语料：
短语：turn into something magical, fill the air with aroma, inspire others
单词替换：
overwhelmed → deeply moved, overjoyed
dreary → gloomy, somber
aroma → scent, fragrance
例句：
The aroma of freshly baked cookies filled the room.
Her generosity turned a gloomy day into a joyful one.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, the doorbell rang, and I ran to answer it, only to find a pile of boxes beside the door. Confused but curious(adj做原因状语), I brought them in. As I opened the first box(状从), I gasped—inside was a turkey, a loaf of bread, and other festive foods(完全倒装句). The second box revealed a collection of sparkling ornaments, while the third held a handwritten card(状从). It said, “You gave me hope when I needed it most(状从); I hope this brings the same to you(宾从).” Tears streamed down my face as I realized the teacher’s gratitude had turned into a heartfelt gesture(宾从) that would change our Christmas forever(定从).
Paragraph 2: Seeing these surprises from the teacher(非谓语动词做原因状语), I knew we would have food and ornaments for this Christmas. My daughter’s eyes sparkled as she held up a shiny ornament(状从), and together we transformed the plain tree into a dazzling centerpiece. The room, once shadowed by despair(非谓语动词做原因状语), now radiated warmth and hope. On Christmas morning, we sat by the tree, enjoying a meal that felt like a feast fit for royalty(定从). This experience reminded me that even small acts of kindness could ripple through lives, bringing light(非谓语动词短语做结果状语) where it was needed most(定从)(宾从).
亮点语法分析
语法点 范文中的句子 替换例句/解释
被动语态 "The room, once shadowed by despair, now radiated warmth and hope." The gift was wrapped with care, adding to its charm.
强调句 "It was the teacher’s gratitude that made this Christmas unforgettable." It was her kindness that changed everything.
情态动词+完成时 "You gave me hope when I needed it most; I hope this brings the same to you." She must have felt immense gratitude at that moment.
亮点词汇与短语
情绪描写：tears streamed down my face, eyes sparkled, reminded me of hope
动作描写：gasped, held up, transformed the tree
积累语料：
短语：radiate warmth, bring light, heartfelt gesture
单词替换：
gasp → exclaim, breathe in sharply
radiate → emit, shine
gesture → action, sign
例句：
Her smile radiated joy, brightening the entire room.
The small gesture meant the world to her.
总结：
常用短语替换：
show gratitude → express appreciation, convey thanks
give hope → inspire, encourage
bring joy → fill with happiness, uplift
高考语法亮点：
强调句：It was...that...
非谓语动词：Overwhelmed by emotions...
定语从句：...which brought joy to our family.
积累表达：
动作：answer the door, unwrap the box, transform the room
情感：overwhelmed with gratitude, tears streamed down, sparkled with joy

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