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One sunny morning， the sky was a brilliant expanse of blue, dotted with a few fluffy white clouds. Little Tim, his eyes shining with anticipation and joy, skipped merrily to the park with his father. Clutched tightly in his small hands was a brand-new kite — a real work of art. The kite’s frame was made of lightweight bamboo and its surface was painted with vivid colors of red, yellow and blue that seemed to dance in the sunlight. A long, flowing tail made of delicate ribbons drifted gently in the soft breeze. “What a fine-looking kite!” Tim exclaimed as he took a closer look, bubbling with excitement about the upcoming kite-flying adventure.
When they reached a wide-open space in the park, Tim could barely contain his eagerness to unfurl (展开) the kite string. His father took the kite, his large hands gripping it firmly, positioning it perfectly to catch the wind. “Alright, Tim, run!” he called out, his voice spirited and encouraging. With a deep breath, Tim began to sprint across the field, his small feet pounding rhythmically on the grassy ground, each step kicking up tiny blades of grass.
Slowly but surely, the kite caught the wind and began to rise, much like a hesitant bird taking its first flight. “Great job, Tim! Keep going! You’ve got it now!” Father’s proud voice carried across the open space, filling Tim with confidence.
Tim’s face flushed with exhilaration as he ran, his laughter mingling with the sounds of nature around him. His gaze was fixed on the kite as it soared higher into the sky, the string slipping smoothly through his fingers. Lost in the magical moment, his senses dulled to everything else; all that mattered was the connection between him and the kite.
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(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Unluckily, a small, sharp branch was sticking out from a nearby tree.
As Tim desperately tried to piece together the torn kite, a comforting hand patted his back.
文章大意
一个阳光明媚的早晨，小蒂姆满心欢喜，和父亲带着崭新漂亮的风筝来到公园。父亲帮忙放飞风筝，蒂姆在父亲的鼓励下奔跑，风筝成功起飞，蒂姆沉浸在风筝翱翔天际的喜悦中，感受着与风筝之间的奇妙联系。
故事山分析
开端：蒂姆和父亲带着新风筝去公园，蒂姆对风筝充满期待，兴奋不已。
发展：到达公园空旷处，父亲准备放风筝，让蒂姆奔跑助力，风筝缓缓升起。
高潮：风筝顺利升空，蒂姆沉浸在快乐中，此时出现续写的转折点 —— 风筝被树枝划破。
结局（待续写）：需续写蒂姆面对风筝损坏后的反应，以及父亲如何帮助他，最终走向积极的结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
新风筝：前文强调风筝崭新且漂亮，为后文风筝被划破蒂姆的难过做铺垫，续写中蒂姆看到损坏的风筝会更加失落，因为它原本是完美的。
蒂姆的兴奋：蒂姆一开始的兴奋与期待，和风筝损坏后的情绪形成强烈反差，在续写中会着重体现他情绪的巨大落差。
空旷的公园：空旷的公园看似是放风筝的好地方，但也为出现意外埋下伏笔，续写中树枝可能是被风吹断落在公园，划破风筝。
父亲的鼓励：父亲之前的鼓励体现了对蒂姆的支持，在续写中，父亲会继续给予安慰和帮助，呼应前文的鼓励。
蒂姆专注于风筝：蒂姆专注于风筝，忽略了周围环境，这使得他没注意到树枝，续写中会展现他因专注而导致的意外后果。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述风筝被树枝划破后的场景，蒂姆的震惊、难过、自责等情绪，如他的表情、动作、语言。同时描写周围环境，烘托悲伤氛围。
第二段：父亲安慰蒂姆，可能提出解决办法，如一起修理风筝或再买一个。蒂姆在父亲的鼓励下，情绪逐渐好转，明白失败是成长的一部分，最后两人一起完成放风筝的心愿或者有新的收获。
情感线
起初，蒂姆充满期待与兴奋，对即将开始的风筝飞行之旅满怀憧憬。在风筝放飞成功时，他的喜悦达到顶点，沉浸在快乐之中。然而，风筝被划破后，他瞬间跌入谷底，震惊、难过、自责等情绪交织。在父亲的安慰下，他逐渐平复心情，从失落中走出，重新感受到温暖和希望，最终明白挫折只是暂时的，积极面对才是生活的态度。
故事线
蒂姆和父亲带着风筝去公园，准备放风筝。
父亲协助蒂姆放风筝，风筝成功起飞。
风筝意外被树枝划破。
蒂姆面对损坏的风筝，情绪低落。
父亲安慰蒂姆，给予支持和鼓励。
蒂姆在父亲的帮助下，重新找回信心，完成放风筝或者有新的收获。
主旨升华句
Through this experience, Tim learned that setbacks are but stepping - stones to growth, and with love and support, one can overcome any obstacle.（通过这次经历，蒂姆明白了挫折只是成长的垫脚石，有了爱和支持，就能克服任何障碍。）
This kite - flying adventure taught Tim that even the most beautiful dreams may encounter bumps, but it's the journey of persevering that truly matters.（这次放风筝的经历告诉蒂姆，即使最美好的梦想也可能会遇到坎坷，但坚持下去的过程才是真正重要的。）
What seemed like a disaster turned into a valuable lesson for Tim, showing him the power of resilience in the face of disappointment.（对蒂姆来说，看似一场灾难的事情变成了宝贵的一课，向他展示了在失望面前坚韧的力量。）
In the end, it wasn't just about flying the kite; it was about the bond between father and son and the lessons learned along the way.（最后，这不仅仅是关于放风筝，更是关于父子之间的纽带以及一路上学到的教训。）
This incident reminded Tim that life is full of unexpected twists, but with a positive attitude and the love of family, he can always find a way to soar high.（这件事提醒蒂姆，生活充满了意想不到的波折，但只要有积极的态度和家人的爱，他总能找到高飞的方法。）
写作示范一
Unluckily, a small, sharp branch was sticking out from a nearby tree. As Tim ran with the kite, the string got caught on the branch. In an instant, the kite plummeted to the ground, its beautiful surface torn into pieces. Tim froze in his tracks, his eyes wide with shock and disbelief. His mouth hung open, and his hands trembled slightly as he stared at the broken kite. "No, no!" he cried out, his voice filled with despair. The once - bright colors of the kite now seemed dull and lifeless, mirroring his broken heart.
As Tim desperately tried to piece together the torn kite, a comforting hand patted his back. It was his father. "Don't be too sad, son," his father said softly. "Accidents happen. We can fix it together, or we can buy a new one. The most important thing is that we had fun together today." Father's words were like a warm breeze on a cold day. Tim looked up at his father, his eyes glistening with unshed tears. Slowly, he nodded. Together, they gathered the pieces of the kite and headed home. Along the way, Tim realized that the time spent with his father was far more precious than the kite itself.
写作示范二
Unluckily, a small, sharp branch was sticking out from a nearby tree. In his excitement, Tim didn't notice it. Suddenly, the kite string snagged on the branch. There was a loud ripping sound, and the kite fluttered down, damaged beyond recognition. Tim's face turned pale, and his heart sank. He dropped to his knees beside the broken kite, his hands gently touching the torn fabric. "I'm so stupid! I should have been more careful," he muttered to himself, blaming himself for the accident.
As Tim desperately tried to piece together the torn kite, a comforting hand patted his back. His father crouched down beside him. "It's okay, Tim. This isn't the end of the world," his father said, smiling encouragingly. "We can make a new kite together. It'll be even better than this one." With his father's words, a glimmer of hope returned to Tim's eyes. They spent the rest of the day at home, cutting paper, tying strings, and painting colors. When the new kite was finally finished, Tim couldn't wait to fly it. This time, he knew that the joy of flying a kite wasn't just about the kite itself, but also about the time and love shared with his father.
【答案】Unluckily, a small, sharp branch was sticking out from a nearby tree. However, in his overexcitement, Tim totally failed to notice it. With a sudden, sickening pull, the string got caught on the branch. Without thinking, Tim hurriedly pulled hard on the string, only to have the tail tangled in the tree. The kite, which had been flying so gracefully, was violently yanked back, its frame buckling under the strain. There was a tearing sound that seemed to cut through the air, and the kite came diving down, crashing onto the ground in a mess. He stood there motionless for a second, and then rushed to the broken kite.
As Tim desperately tried to piece together the torn kite, a comforting hand patted his back. Looking up, Tim saw his father kneeling beside him. “Dad, the kite is broken!” His voice choked with intense sorrow. “It’s alright, Son,” father said reassuringly, “We can fix it, and I’m here with you every step of the way.” Hearing that, Tim sniffed back his tears and nodded. Together, they carefully examined the damage, untangled the ribbons and straightened the bent bamboo. As they worked, Tim felt a glimmer of hope. Holding the partially repaired kite, he learned an important lesson: while not every flight goes as planned, efforts and support can help lift one up.

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