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假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Karry作为“The Cleanup Teenagers”环保组织的一员，清理海岸垃圾，并获得了国家青年英雄奖。请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：
(1)祝贺他获奖；
(2)表示受到启发并向他学习。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Karry,
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. _______________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Love,
Li Hua
分析：
写作提纲
第一段：开篇点明写信目的，表达对Karry获奖的诚挚祝贺，强调奖项的分量以及对他的赞赏。
第二段：具体阐述Karry在环保工作中的努力对自己的启发，如在生活中注重环保行动、倡导环保理念等。
3. 第三段：再次表达祝贺，表明会以Karry为榜样，积极参与环保活动，期待未来能一起为环保事业贡献力量。
语言积累
I am extremely delighted to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes.
This prestigious award is a well - deserved recognition of your remarkable dedication and outstanding contributions to environmental protection.
Your unwavering commitment to cleaning up coastal garbage has not only made a significant difference to the environment but also inspired countless others.
Knowing that you've been working tirelessly as a member of "The Cleanup Teenagers" fills me with admiration.
I am deeply inspired by your efforts and have decided to take immediate action in my daily life.
I will start by reducing plastic use, such as bringing my own reusable bags when shopping.
I'll also encourage my friends and family to join me in protecting our environment.
Once again, congratulations on this remarkable achievement.
I look forward to following in your footsteps and making our world a cleaner and more beautiful place.
I sincerely hope that we can collaborate on environmental projects in the future.
写作示范一
Dear Karry,
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. This is truly an amazing accomplishment, and I couldn't be prouder of you. Your hard work and dedication to cleaning up coastal garbage as a member of "The Cleanup Teenagers" have finally paid off.
Your efforts have not only made a huge difference to the environment but have also deeply inspired me. I've decided to start making small changes in my daily life, like reducing waste and recycling more. I'm eager to follow your example and contribute to environmental protection.
Once again, congratulations on this well - deserved honor. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your great work in the future and hope we can work together on environmental projects someday.
Love,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Karry,
I am overjoyed to learn that you've been awarded the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. This is a remarkable achievement that reflects your outstanding commitment to environmental conservation. Your contributions as part of "The Cleanup Teenagers" are truly inspiring.
Your story has motivated me to take more active steps in protecting our planet. I'll start by using less single - use plastic and promoting environmental awareness among my peers. I'm determined to be as passionate and dedicated as you are.
Congratulations again on this wonderful recognition. I have no doubt that you'll continue to make a positive impact, and I'm excited to support you in any way I can.
Love,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear Karry,
I am thrilled to offer my heartfelt congratulations on your winning the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. It's an honor that you richly deserve. Your work with "The Cleanup Teenagers" to clean up coastal areas has been truly remarkable.
Your example has inspired me to be more environmentally conscious. I plan to participate in local environmental protection activities and encourage others to do the same. I'm eager to learn from you and contribute to making our planet a better place.
Once more, congratulations on this significant achievement. I'm looking forward to seeing you achieve even greater things in the future.
Love,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Karry,
I am glad to hear that you won the Gloria Barron National Prize for Young Heroes. At the news, I am as excited as you and can’t wait to write this e-mail to express my sincere congratulation.
By reading your deed, I am deeply intoxicated in your industry/industrious effort to clean up the trashes along the coast, which surely sheds light on my attitude towards environmental protection. Collecting plastic items littered by tourists not only helps save trapped wild animals, but also recovers the local ecological balance. Inspired by your example, I am determined to devote myself to this great cause. I look forward to the day when I can work together with you.（5句98）
锦言妙语：
1.非谓语做定语：effort to clean up the trashes along the coast；items littered by tourists；trapped wild animals
2.定语从句：, which surely sheds light on my attitude towards environmental protection；the day when I can work together with you
3.非谓语做主语：Collecting plastic items
4.非谓语做状语：Inspired by your example
5.陶醉于...：am deeply intoxicated in
6.启发：sheds light on；Inspired
7.投身于：devote myself to

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