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应用文写作
学校英文报正在开展以 Safe Trip to School（安全出行）为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结 果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1、上学出行方式的描述；
2、结合自身出行方式给出安全出行的建议。
注意：
1、词数 80 左右；
2、请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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写作提纲
第一段：引出话题，提及学校英文报关于 “Safe Trip to School” 的讨论，并简要介绍图表中上学出行方式的总体情况，如各种出行方式的占比。
第二段：详细描述图表中不同的上学出行方式，如步行、骑自行车、乘坐公共交通、家长开车接送等，可适当提及每种方式的特点。
第三段：结合自身的出行方式，给出具体的安全出行建议，如遵守交通规则、佩戴安全装备等，并呼吁大家重视上学途中的安全。
语言积累
According to the survey 根据调查
account for 占（比例）
go to school on foot 步行上学
ride a bike to school 骑自行车上学
take public transportation 乘坐公共交通
be picked up by parents 被家长接送
obey traffic rules 遵守交通规则
wear a helmet 戴头盔
pay attention to 注意
attach importance to 重视
写作示范
示范一
Safe Trip to School
According to the survey, different students have various ways to go to school. About 30% of the students choose to go to school on foot, enjoying the fresh air along the way. Another 25% ride bikes, which is an environmentally - friendly option. 35% of the students take public transportation like buses or subways, while the rest are picked up by their parents.
As for me, I usually ride a bike to school. To ensure a safe trip, I always wear a helmet and obey traffic rules. I never run red lights and always check the road conditions before crossing.
In conclusion, no matter which way we choose to go to school, we should attach great importance to safety. Only by doing so can we arrive at school safely every day.
示范二
Safe Trip to School
The survey shows the diverse ways students use to get to school. Among them, walking accounts for a significant part, about 30%. Cycling is chosen by 25% of the students, offering them a sense of freedom. Taking public transportation is popular among 35% of us, as it is convenient. And the remaining 10% are driven to school by their parents.
I am one of those who take the bus. When taking the bus, I always wait at the bus stop in an orderly manner. Once on the bus, I hold the handrail firmly to avoid falling.
Safety is of utmost importance during our trip to school. We must always be cautious and follow safety guidelines to have a smooth journey.
示范三
Safe Trip to School
Based on the survey results, we can see the different commuting methods of students. 30% of the students prefer to walk to school, which allows them to exercise a bit. 25% of us ride bikes, making our way through the streets. Public transportation is the choice of 35% of the students, and the rest are accompanied by their parents in cars.
I usually go to school on foot. To stay safe, I always walk on the sidewalk and look both ways before crossing the street. I also avoid using my phone while walking to focus on my surroundings.
In short, safety comes first when we go to school. By following these safety tips, we can protect ourselves and have a pleasant journey every day.
示范四
Safe Trip to School
The survey reveals the ways students commute to school. A considerable number, about 30%, walk to school. 25% of the students choose to cycle, which is both fast and healthy. Public transportation is favored by 35% of the students, and 10% are driven by their parents.
I am in the group of students who are picked up by my parents. When in the car, I always fasten my seatbelt. I also remind my parents not to drive too fast and to pay attention to the traffic signs.
In a word, no matter how we go to school, safety should always be our top concern. Let's all take necessary precautions to ensure a safe trip to school.
参考答案
Our school English newspaper is currently engaging in a vibrant discussion on “Safe Trip to School”. The survey results regarding students’ commuting methods are as follows: The students who go to school on foot and by bike account for 38% and 30% respectively while 20% of the students take the bus as their first choice. The chart clearly indicates that green transportation is favored by the majority.
As for me, I commute by bike, always ensuring to wear a helmet and reflective gear, and strictly obeying traffic rules. I hope my habits can arouse other cyclists’ awareness of road safety. Regardless of your chosen mode of transportation, safety should always be your top priority. Let us all strive for a safe and enjoyable journey to school each day.

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