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Nala loved spending her school holidays on Grandma’ s little farm! But this time, her grandma was so sick, and couldn't get out of bed!
“Don't worry,” Nala told her grandma, “I'll look after everything!” She knew how to feed all the animals: it was easy! The chickens and ducks had pellets（丸）. The horse had oats（燕麦）. There was plenty of grass for the four sheep and the goat. She could also water the vegetables and collect eggs from the chicken coop.
“What a great help you are,” Grandma said when Nala brought her a bowl of soup for lunch.
“It's no trouble!” Nala smiled.
“I'll have to get up soon,” Grandma sighed. “Nanny will need milking.” Nanny, the goat, had to be milked every day. In fact, she would come outside and bleat（咩咩叫）when it was time! But Nala thought that her grandma still looked pale and shaky.
“I can do it!” Nala said confidently. She hadn't tried milking yet, but she had watched Grandma do it closely! Grandma would always put on her special dress and straw hat, get the bucket from the tool shed（棚）, get Nanny to the milking shed, and get everything done.
When Nanny bleated to be milked, Nala went out to see her. She expected Nanny to follow her to the milking shed like Nanny did with Grandma, but the animal just stood there.
“Come on, Nanny,” Nala said. “I'm milking you today. Grandma's sick, so we have to work together.”
Nanny just bleated impatiently, moving her feet uncomfortably.
“Maybe I need to speak more firmly,” Nala thought. “Now listen, Nanny. I want you to follow me to the milking shed.”
“Hey, come back here!” Nala called. Nanny stopped and turned around. She didn't like this little stranger. Grandma never yelled at her!
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At that moment Nala had a think. . Just then, Nala spotted Grandma's dress and the straw hat hanging over a chair.
文章大意
娜拉喜欢在奶奶的小农场度过学校假期，这次奶奶病得很重，无法下床。娜拉主动承担起照顾农场的责任，她知道如何喂养动物，还能给奶奶送汤、照料蔬菜和收集鸡蛋。但给山羊南妮挤奶成了难题，娜拉虽然看过奶奶挤奶，可南妮并不听她指挥，对这个 “小陌生人” 很抗拒，娜拉一喊它，它就停下来转身，因为奶奶从不这样对它。
故事山分析
开端：娜拉在奶奶生病时主动照顾农场，熟悉大部分工作，但挤奶遇到困难。
发展：南妮不听娜拉的话，对她表现出抗拒，这使得挤奶工作无法顺利进行。
高潮：娜拉需要想办法解决南妮不配合的问题，这是故事的关键转折点，后续情节将围绕她的解决办法展开。
结局（待续写）：要展现娜拉如何成功让南妮配合挤奶，以及这次经历对她的影响，体现成长与担当的主题。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
娜拉看过奶奶挤奶：在续写中，娜拉会凭借记忆，结合自己的尝试，努力让挤奶工作顺利进行，这是她解决问题的基础。
奶奶会穿上特殊的衣服和草帽挤奶：在续写中，这会成为娜拉的一个灵感来源，她可能会借助这些物品让南妮安静下来配合挤奶。
南妮对娜拉的抗拒：在续写中，娜拉会通过各种方式消除南妮的抗拒，比如改变态度、模仿奶奶的行为等，体现她的成长和应变能力。
娜拉对奶奶的关心：在续写中，这种关心会成为她坚持解决问题的动力，让她克服困难，成功挤奶，照顾好奶奶和农场。
娜拉的自信：在续写中，尽管遇到困难，她的自信会支撑她不断尝试，最终找到解决办法，完成挤奶任务，也让自己得到成长。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述娜拉思考解决办法的过程，比如回忆奶奶与南妮相处的细节，分析南妮不配合的原因，是因为对她陌生还是自己的方式不对等，突出她的思考和探索。
第二段：描述娜拉看到奶奶的衣服和草帽后的行动，她可能穿上这些物品，模仿奶奶的声音和动作，成功让南妮配合挤奶，最后体现她完成任务后的成就感和对自己成长的感悟。
情感线
起初，娜拉自信满满地想要照顾好农场，当南妮不配合时，她从有点着急到有些挫败，但对奶奶的关心和自己的责任感让她没有放弃。思考解决办法时，她充满期待又有些紧张。看到奶奶的衣服和草帽时，她仿佛看到了希望，充满干劲。成功挤奶后，她内心满是喜悦和自豪，也更加坚定了自己照顾好农场和奶奶的决心。
故事线
娜拉在奶奶生病时主动照顾农场，熟悉大部分工作。
给南妮挤奶时，南妮不配合，抗拒娜拉。
娜拉思考解决南妮不配合的办法。
娜拉看到奶奶的衣服和草帽，受到启发。
娜拉穿上衣服和草帽，成功让南妮配合挤奶。
娜拉完成挤奶，获得成长，更加坚定照顾农场和奶奶的决心。
主旨升华句
This experience taught Nala that with determination and careful thinking, even the most challenging tasks can be accomplished, and that growing up means taking on responsibilities bravely.（这次经历教会娜拉，只要有决心和认真思考，即使是最具挑战性的任务也能完成，成长意味着勇敢地承担责任。）
Through this struggle with Nanny, Nala realized that understanding and patience are essential when dealing with others, whether they are animals or people, and that small details can make a big difference.（通过与南妮的这次 “较量”，娜拉意识到在与他人相处时，理解和耐心是至关重要的，无论是与动物还是与人，并且小细节可能会产生重大影响。）
In the end, Nala understood that true strength lies not in being fearless but in facing fears and difficulties head - on, and that helping others in need can bring out the best in us.（最后，娜拉明白了真正的力量不在于无所畏惧，而在于直面恐惧和困难，帮助有需要的人能激发出我们最好的一面。）
This story of growth shows that sometimes, the greatest lessons in life come from unexpected challenges, and that we are capable of more than we think when we put our minds to it.（这个成长的故事表明，有时候，生活中最宝贵的教训来自意想不到的挑战，当我们用心去做时，我们的能力远超自己的想象。）
Nala's experience made her aware that in the face of difficulties, a little creativity and a lot of love can overcome any obstacle, and that every small success on the journey of growth is a step towards becoming a better person.（娜拉的经历让她意识到，在面对困难时，一点创造力和满满的爱可以克服任何障碍，成长旅程中的每一个小成功都是迈向更好自己的一步。）
写作示范一
At that moment Nala had a think. She remembered how gentle Grandma was with Nanny. Maybe she had been too harsh just now. She decided to change her approach. Nala walked slowly towards Nanny, speaking in a soft, soothing voice. “Nanny, it's okay. I know you're used to Grandma, but I'm here to take care of you too. Let's go to the milking shed together, shall we ” She reached out her hand gently, trying to show Nanny that she meant no harm.
Just then, Nala spotted Grandma's dress and the straw hat hanging over a chair. An idea popped into her head. She quickly put on the dress and the hat. Miraculously, Nanny seemed to relax a bit. Nala led Nanny to the milking shed, and this time, the goat followed obediently. With a little practice, Nala managed to milk Nanny successfully. She felt a great sense of achievement. She couldn't wait to tell Grandma that she had done it all by herself.
写作示范二
At that moment Nala had a think. She recalled all the times she watched Grandma milk Nanny. There must be something she was missing. She thought about how Grandma always had a bucket of fresh grass ready for Nanny before milking. Maybe that was the key! She rushed to the storage room and filled a small bucket with fresh, juicy grass.
Just then, Nala spotted Grandma's dress and the straw hat hanging over a chair. She put them on, thinking it might make Nanny feel more at ease. Holding the bucket of grass, she walked towards Nanny again. This time, Nanny's ears perked up at the sight of the grass. Nala led Nanny to the milking shed, and as she munched on the grass, Nala carefully started the milking process. It was a bit tricky at first, but soon she got the hang of it. She was so proud of herself for solving the problem and taking good care of Nanny.
【参考范文】
At that moment Nala had a think. Maybe she could trick Nanny to the shed with food! She quickly pulled up a fresh, green bundle of grass and walked towards Nanny, her hands stretched out, her voice gentle but firm. “Come on, Nanny,” she coaxed（哄劝）. But Nanny merely sniffed at the grass, bleated impatiently again and trotted（小跑）further away. Nala clenched her fists, her cheeks flushing red as frustration and embarrassment swirled（打旋）inside her. She chased Nanny across the yard, but the stubborn goat clattered（出大声）toward the tool shed, stopping to glance back as if challenging her.
Just then, Nala spotted Grandma's dress and the straw hat hanging over a chair. “Of course," she murmured to herself, “if Nanny won't listen to me, maybe she’ll listen to...Grandma.” With her mind made up, Nala slipped into the dress, adjusting its oversized sleeves, and placed the straw hat on her head. Mimicking（模仿）Grandma's steady walk and soothing（抚慰的）voice, she stepped confidently out of the shed and called, “Come on, Nanny. Time for milking!” Nanny's ears flicked（快速移动）, her head jerking（猝然一动）up in surprise and, to Nala's astonishment, she began trotting toward her! She made it. A grin spread across Nala's face. This time, Nanny stood still as Nala carefully milked her. For a moment, it felt as if the farm truly was hers to handle.

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