资源简介

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an ordinary Saturday morning. The sun was peeking through the clouds, casting a warm glow over the park. Emily was running in the park. She loved running because she believed that after a tough week at work, running could not only help her exercise her body but also free her mind from stress and exhaustion.
There were a lot of people in the park. Children were running around and playing, the elderly were leisurely practicing Tai Chi, and young couples were strolling by the lake. Emily was enjoying the lively and pleasant atmosphere. Her steps were light and rhythmic, and every breath made her feel more comfortable, filling her lungs with the fresh scent of the blooming flowers.
Suddenly, there was some noise not far away. Emily looked in that direction and saw a crowd gathering, looking panicked. She ran over to see what had happened. There was an old woman lying on the ground, her face pale as a sheet and her lips slightly purple and quivering. Beside her, another old woman shouted anxiously, “She’s having a heart attack! What should we do Who can help ” Everyone around looked troubled. Some were calling an ambulance on their phones, but no one knew how to help the old woman before the ambulance arrived.
Emily’s friend Jane is a nurse. The hospital where she works once held public welfare activities for CPR (心肺复苏) training in Emily’s community. Emily attended this event only because she was more interested in the free snacks and small gifts provided than the training itself. Never had she imagined there would be a day when she would use this skill.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为 150 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Calming herself down, Emily offered to have a try.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Finally, the old woman woke up.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文章大意
一个普通的周六早晨，艾米丽在公园跑步，享受着轻松愉悦的氛围。突然，不远处传来一阵喧闹，艾米丽发现人群中一位老妇人心脏病发作倒地，脸色苍白，嘴唇发紫，旁人焦急万分却不知如何是好，只能打电话叫救护车。艾米丽曾参加过社区的心肺复苏培训，当时只是因为对免费零食和小礼物感兴趣，没想到会有派上用场的一天。
故事山分析
开端：艾米丽在公园跑步，享受周六早晨的美好时光。
发展：老妇人心脏病发作倒地，众人围观却不知如何在救护车到来前施救。
高潮：艾米丽想起自己参加过心肺复苏培训，决定尝试施救。
结局（待续写）：艾米丽成功施救，老妇人苏醒，众人的反应以及艾米丽的感受。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：艾米丽参加过心肺复苏培训，当时只为免费零食和小礼物。回应：在施救时，艾米丽努力回忆培训所学，尽管细节有些模糊，但凭借模糊的记忆和尽力而为的决心开始急救操作，展现出从不在意到重视知识的转变。
伏笔：老妇人心脏病发作，情况危急，众人束手无策。回应：艾米丽施救过程中，周围人焦急关注，有人帮忙维持秩序，有人协助艾米丽回忆培训要点，体现出大家对老妇人生命的担忧和对艾米丽的期待。
伏笔：艾米丽享受跑步，享受轻松的氛围。回应：事件结束后，艾米丽感受到帮助他人带来的满足感远远超过了跑步带来的放松，升华了她对生活意义的理解。
伏笔：公园里有很多人，包括孩子、老人、情侣等。回应：老妇人苏醒后，众人纷纷夸赞艾米丽，孩子们眼中充满崇拜，情侣们也为这温暖的一幕感动，展现出整个公园社区的温馨氛围。
伏笔：艾米丽对培训内容不重视。回应：成功施救后，艾米丽意识到知识的重要性，决定以后积极参加各类培训，提升自己救助他人的能力。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述艾米丽决定施救后的具体行动，如回忆心肺复苏的步骤，开始进行胸外按压和人工呼吸，同时描写周围人的反应，有人鼓励，有人紧张观望，营造紧张的氛围。
第二段：老妇人苏醒后，描写周围人的喜悦反应，大家对艾米丽的称赞。艾米丽内心的感受，如欣慰、自豪，以及她对这次经历的感悟，意识到知识的重要性和帮助他人的意义。
情感线
起初，艾米丽在公园跑步，心情轻松愉悦。看到老妇人发病时，她感到震惊和担忧。决定施救时，她紧张又坚定，努力回忆培训知识。在施救过程中，随着时间推移，她越来越焦虑，担心自己救不活老妇人。老妇人苏醒后，她感到欣慰、自豪，内心充满成就感，同时对知识和帮助他人有了更深的感悟，情感从轻松到紧张再到喜悦和成长。
故事线
艾米丽在公园跑步享受美好时光的故事线。
老妇人心脏病发作倒地，众人围观却无法施救的故事线。
艾米丽回忆自己参加过心肺复苏培训，决定尝试施救的故事线。
艾米丽进行心肺复苏操作，周围人反应的故事线。
老妇人苏醒，众人喜悦，对艾米丽称赞的故事线。
艾米丽经历此事后内心感悟和成长的故事线。
主旨升华句
Knowledge, no matter how casually acquired, can prove to be a life - saving asset in unexpected moments.（知识，无论获取时多么不经意，在意外时刻都可能成为救命的财富。）
A simple act of kindness, driven by the courage to step forward, can bring hope and life to those in desperate situations.（一个简单的善举，在勇敢挺身而出的驱动下，能给身处绝境的人带来希望和生机。）
In the face of emergencies, our latent abilities, once awakened, can make a world of difference.（在紧急情况面前，我们潜在的能力一旦被唤醒，就能产生巨大的影响。）
Life's unexpected twists often remind us of the value of every learning opportunity and the power of human compassion.（生活中意想不到的转折常常提醒我们每个学习机会的价值以及人类同情心的力量。）
Sometimes, the most valuable lessons are learned not in the classroom but in the moments when we reach out to help others in need.（有时候，最宝贵的经验不是在课堂上学到的，而是在我们伸出援手帮助有需要的人的时刻。）
写作示范一
Calming herself down, Emily offered to have a try. She quickly knelt beside the old woman, trying hard to recall the steps of CPR she learned during the training. Her hands were a bit shaky at first, but she took a deep breath and started chest compressions firmly. "One, two, three..." she counted steadily. The people around watched with bated breath, some encouraging her softly. Some were still on the phone, updating the ambulance on the situation. Emily's forehead was covered with sweat, but she didn't stop for a second, constantly reminding herself to persevere.
Finally, the old woman woke up. A cheer erupted from the crowd. People clapped and praised Emily for her bravery and quick action. The old woman, though still weak, looked at Emily with gratitude in her eyes, murmuring her thanks. Emily felt a wave of relief wash over her. She realized that this simple act of using the knowledge she once took lightly had saved a life. From that day on, she decided to learn more life - saving skills, understanding that every bit of knowledge could be a ray of hope in the darkest moments.
写作示范二
Calming herself down, Emily offered to have a try. She cleared her mind and focused on the task at hand. First, she checked the old woman's airway and then started giving mouth - to - mouth resuscitation. The onlookers were silent, their eyes fixed on Emily and the old woman. A young man stepped forward to help, following Emily's instructions to time the compressions. Emily's heart was pounding, but she maintained her concentration, determined to do everything she could. The minutes seemed like hours as she continued the life - saving efforts.
Finally, the old woman woke up. Everyone around was overjoyed. The elderly woman who was with the patient hugged Emily tightly, tears of gratitude streaming down her face. The children in the crowd looked at Emily with admiration, as if she were a superhero. Emily herself was filled with a sense of pride and fulfillment. She knew that this experience had changed her. She would no longer take knowledge for granted and would always be ready to lend a hand when others were in trouble.
范文：
Calming herself down, Emily offered to have a try. Taking a deep breath, she quickly knelt beside the old woman, the basic steps of CPR she had learned in the public welfare activities flashing through her mind. Without hesitation, she placed one hand on the center of the woman’s chest and the other on top, pressing firmly and steadily. Anxious and worried, the crowd watched in silence. With time ticking with its own pace, Emily continued her press and counted aloud to keep the rhythm, “One, two, three, four...”
Finally, the old woman woke up. Seeing the old woman’s eyes fluttering open, Emily took a deep breath and gently wiped the sweat from her brow. Hardly had the old woman come to life than she held Emily’s hands tightly, tears of gratitude streaming down her face. Meanwhile, the crowd erupted in cheers, praising Emily for her quick thinking and effective CPR. With a sense of pride and accomplishment washing over her, Emily was determined to learn more first aid skills and help people in need.

展开更多......

收起↑