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At the Flosslande restaurant, Germany waiter Paul Blachut, 24, was busy at work. It was a warm Sunday afternoon in May and many cyclists and hikers came for refreshments at this pretty place beside the Lech river. The snow water from the Alps was very cold at this time of year, and it flowed quickly.
From behind the bar, Blachut had a good view of the river; there were stone steps that stretched some 20 metres down from the restaurant to the riverbank.
Among those enjoying the cooling water were a mother and her two teenage daughters, all in long dresses. They were standing on the edge of the riverbank, playing with an inflatable (充气的) boat when, suddenly, the girls lost their footing and were caught in the river’s current.
It all happened so fast. The girls struggled to grab on to the boat, which their mother was sitting in, causing her into the river, too. Now all three were being carried away by the current.
A bystander shouted, “Three people are drowning (溺水) in the Lech!”
Blachut could only see a boat moving rapidly in the river. Then he spotted three people a short distance away, flapping their arms, trying to grasp anything they could. No one was helping them. Horrified, he saw that one of them kept sinking.
Despite having no lifesaving training, he rushed down to the riverbank, quickly taking his mobile phone, wallet and keys from his pockets and pulling off his T-shirt. Then he jumped into the cold river.
As Blachut got closer to them, he could tell that the mother seemed to be in the most trouble; her head was now almost under the water.
Without hesitation, Blachut dived under the drowning woman, pushing her upward and trying all his best to throw her forcefully towards the bank. An onlooker was able to get close enough to grab the woman’s hand, pulling her to bank.
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Blachut knew he must rescue the two daughters at once.
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A bystander telephoned the nearest hospital.
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文章大意
在五月一个温暖的周日下午，德国弗洛斯拉德餐厅的服务员保罗 布拉胡特正在工作。餐厅旁的莱希河里，一位母亲和她的两个十几岁的女儿在玩充气船。突然，女孩们失足落水，母亲也被卷入河中，三人被水流冲走。布拉胡特看到这一幕，尽管没有救生训练，仍迅速跳入冰冷的河中。他先将母亲奋力推向岸边，被旁观者拉上了岸，此时他还需要营救两个女儿。
故事山分析
开端：温暖的周日下午，在莱希河边的餐厅，人们享受休闲时光，母亲和两个女儿在河边玩充气船。
发展：女孩们失足落水，母亲也被卷入，三人被水流冲走，布拉胡特看到这一紧急情况。
高潮：布拉胡特跳入河中救人，先成功将母亲推向岸边，此时面临营救两个女儿的艰巨任务。
结局（待续写）：布拉胡特成功营救两个女儿，或者描述救援过程中遇到的困难及最终的结果，以及后续人物的情况。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
伏笔：莱希河的雪水很冷且流速快。回应：在续写中描述布拉胡特在救援过程中，寒冷的河水对他体力和行动的影响，如他的身体逐渐麻木，动作变得迟缓。
伏笔：布拉胡特没有救生训练。回应：在救援女儿们时，体现他因缺乏专业训练而遇到的困难，比如不知道如何更有效地抓住溺水者，或者在水中保持平衡很吃力。
伏笔：三个溺水者在水中挣扎，其中一人不断下沉。回应：在续写中，着重描写布拉胡特如何应对这种危急情况，优先营救情况最危急的女儿，展现救援的紧张和艰难。
伏笔：旁观者在岸边。回应：续写中，旁观者可以在布拉胡特救援女儿时提供帮助，如递出长棍等工具，或者在岸上指挥，协助他完成救援。
伏笔：布拉胡特迅速行动，跳入河中。回应：体现他在救援女儿时同样保持着果断和勇敢，尽管面临困难，但毫不退缩，展现他的坚定决心。
续写要点
第一段：描述布拉胡特营救两个女儿的过程。强调河水的寒冷和湍急给他带来的阻碍，他如何在体力不支和缺乏专业救援知识的情况下，凭借顽强的意志和努力，接近并抓住两个女儿。可以描写他与水流的搏斗，以及女儿们惊恐的表情和动作。
第二段：写救援成功后的情况。描述被救者的状态，如是否受伤，神志是否清醒。接着讲述布拉胡特的身体和精神状态，他可能因体力透支而疲惫不堪，但内心充满成就感。最后提及旁观者打电话叫医院后，医护人员的到来和后续处理，如将被救者送往医院检查治疗等。
情感线
起初，布拉胡特看到溺水者时充满震惊和担忧。在决定跳水救人的瞬间，他表现出勇敢和果断。救援母亲时，他全神贯注，一心只想把人救上岸。当面临营救两个女儿的任务时，他的内心既有紧张和压力，又有坚定的决心。成功救援后，他感到欣慰和自豪，同时也可能因体力透支和精神放松而感到疲惫。而被救者从最初的惊恐绝望，到被救时的感激和庆幸，情感上经历了巨大的转变。旁观者则从焦急担忧，到看到救援成功后的欣慰和赞叹。
故事线
莱希河边的休闲场景，母亲和女儿们玩充气船的故事线。
女孩们和母亲失足落水，被水流冲走的故事线。
布拉胡特看到溺水情况，决定跳水救人的故事线。
布拉胡特营救母亲的故事线。
布拉胡特营救两个女儿的故事线。
救援成功后，被救者、布拉胡特以及旁观者后续反应和处理的故事线。
主旨升华句
In the face of danger, a brave heart can overcome any obstacle, showing the true power of humanity.（在危险面前，勇敢的心能克服任何障碍，展现出人性的真正力量。）
A selfless act of kindness, even without professional skills, can be a lifeline in the most desperate situations.（一个无私的善举，即使没有专业技能，在最绝望的情况下也能成为救命稻草。）
Courage is not the absence of fear, but the decision to act when others hesitate, as demonstrated by Paul Blachut.（勇气不是没有恐惧，而是在别人犹豫时果断行动，保罗 布拉胡特就是这样的证明。）
In times of crisis, the unity and cooperation between bystanders and rescuers can turn the tide, highlighting the value of community spirit.（在危机时刻，旁观者和救援者之间的团结与合作可以扭转局面，凸显出社区精神的价值。）
A simple act of heroism can change lives forever, reminding us that every one of us has the potential to be a hero in someone else's story.（一个简单的英雄行为可以永远改变他人的生活，提醒我们每个人都有可能在他人的故事中成为英雄。）
写作示范一
Blachut knew he must rescue the two daughters at once. Despite the cold water numbing his limbs, he pushed forward with all his might. The current was so strong that it was like a wild beast trying to drag him down. He swam towards the younger daughter first, who was struggling the most. With a firm grip, he managed to grab her arm, but the force of the water made it difficult to swim back. Just then, a bystander threw a long rope. Holding the rope tightly, Blachut pulled the girl towards the bank. Then, he immediately turned back to save the other daughter. After a fierce battle against the current, he finally got her to safety.
A bystander telephoned the nearest hospital. Soon, the ambulance arrived. The three victims were quickly taken to the hospital for a thorough check - up. Blachut, exhausted but relieved, watched as they were carried away. Although he was shivering from the cold and his muscles ached, a sense of pride filled his heart. The onlookers gathered around him, praising his bravery. Later, the mother and daughters recovered well. They came to thank Blachut, their eyes filled with gratitude, and their meeting became a heartwarming moment that would be remembered by all.
写作示范二
Blachut knew he must rescue the two daughters at once. His body was already tired from the previous rescue, but the thought of the two girls in danger gave him new strength. He swam towards the older daughter, fighting against the strong current. As he got closer, he saw the fear in her eyes. He shouted words of encouragement, trying to calm her down. Grabbing her firmly, he used his body to shield her from the force of the water. With great effort, he inched towards the bank. Another bystander rushed into the shallow water to help him pull the girl to safety. Without taking a break, he swam back for the younger one. After several attempts, he finally caught hold of her and brought her to the shore.
A bystander telephoned the nearest hospital. Minutes later, the medical team arrived. The three drowning victims were examined on the spot. Fortunately, they were breathing, but needed further medical attention. Blachut, who was sitting on the ground, was also offered medical help. He refused, saying he was okay. The rescued family was full of gratitude. The mother cried as she thanked Blachut for saving their lives. This incident not only saved three lives but also became a story that inspired many in the community, showing the power of one person's courage in the face of danger.
参考答案
Blachut knew he must rescue the two daughters at once. He dived into the current again, swam quickly downstream and managed to get hold of one. Blachut gathered all his strength to push her toward the bank in the same way that he saved her mother. Looking back at the river, he could see someone was helping the other girl — a good thing. A bystander with medical training came forward and gave first aid to the girls. Exhausted and cold, Blachut sat on the bank, breathing heavily.
A bystander telephoned the nearest hospital. While waiting for the ambulance, some bystanders took care of the trembling mother and daughters. Thankfully, it was not long before an ambulance arrived and the grateful mother and daughters were sent to hospital immediately. Several onlookers expressed their admiration for the quick-thinking waiter, Blachut, but he was modest about his role. “It is everyone’s joint efforts that creates miracles,” he said, adding that it was worthwhile to have rescued someone in the cold water.

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