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The boys in the block were going to have a roller-skating (滑旱冰) race next Saturday. They were divided into two teams: the Sunnysiders and the Shadysiders, with five boys on each team. Andy was on the Sunnysiders. They lost last year, so they were desperate to win this time. But Andy knew his short legs made it hard for him to skate fast.
One day, Andy was greeted by a pleasant “Hello” as he was putting on his roller-skates. He looked up and saw his new neighbor, Francis. “Hello! ” he replied cheerfully, noticing his neighbor’s long legs. “Wanna skate with me Look at your long legs! Just the right kind to make you a good skater.” “I’d love to. You know, I’m really good at roller skating and I used to help my team win.” Francis said, his tone now heavy with sadness. “But I lost my roller skates and my mom just cannot afford to buy me another pair.”
Andy thought it was a shame for Francis. As a new comer, there were undoubtedly many moments when he must have felt lonely. Andy thought to himself, wondering what he could do for Francis. But he had to say goodbye in a hurry since the team were meeting in the open space on the corner to talk over some plans.
When talking to the team captain, Andy suggested adding another boy to their team, Francis. But the captain said “No” as the team knew nothing about him. Besides, the Shadysiders wouldn’t let them take on an extra player.
In the following days, Andy practiced very hard with his team. Then came the day before the race when he saw Francis on the sidewalk, watching them skate past, his eyes filled with a sense of loss. Somehow it upset Andy, and his desire to help his new neighbor resurfaced. Then he thought of a way that could not only help his team win, but help Francis fit in.
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He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan.
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The next day, the race began as scheduled.
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文章大意
街区的男孩们下周六将举办滑旱冰比赛，分为阳光队和阴凉队，各有五名成员，安迪在阳光队，他们去年输了，今年渴望赢，但安迪因腿短滑不快。一天，安迪遇到新邻居弗朗西斯，弗朗西斯表示自己擅长滑旱冰，曾帮队伍获胜，可现在没有旱冰鞋，妈妈也买不起。安迪想帮弗朗西斯，提议把他加入队伍，但队长拒绝，因为不了解他且对方队伍也不会同意加人。比赛前一天，安迪看到弗朗西斯失落的样子，再次萌生帮助他的想法，并想到了一个办法。
故事山分析
开端：街区准备滑旱冰比赛，安迪所在的阳光队去年输了，今年想赢，安迪因腿短有劣势，还结识了新邻居弗朗西斯。
发展：弗朗西斯表示自己擅长滑旱冰但没鞋，安迪提议让他加入队伍被拒，之后安迪和队友努力训练。
高潮：比赛前一天，安迪看到弗朗西斯失落，想到能帮队伍赢且帮弗朗西斯融入的办法，这是故事的关键转折点，后续情节将围绕这个办法展开。
结局（待续写）：要展现安迪的办法如何实施，比赛结果如何，以及弗朗西斯在其中的融入情况，突出友情和团队精神。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
安迪腿短滑不快：在续写中，安迪的办法可能会弥补他自身的劣势，比如让弗朗西斯发挥优势来帮助团队，从而体现团队协作的重要性。
弗朗西斯擅长滑旱冰但没鞋：这是安迪想帮助他的原因，在续写中，安迪的办法可能会解决弗朗西斯没鞋的问题，让他能参加比赛，发挥他的特长。
队长拒绝让弗朗西斯加入队伍：在续写中，安迪的办法可能会绕过这个阻碍，比如以特殊方式让弗朗西斯参与比赛，也可能会改变队长的看法。
安迪看到弗朗西斯失落的样子：这激发了安迪再次帮助他的想法，在续写中，会推动安迪办法的实施，让弗朗西斯不再失落。
安迪想到能帮队伍赢且帮弗朗西斯融入的办法：在续写中，会详细描述这个办法的具体内容和实施过程，以及带来的结果。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：详细描述安迪告诉弗朗西斯计划的过程，包括计划的具体内容，如借用别人的旱冰鞋给弗朗西斯，或者让弗朗西斯以特殊身份参与比赛，以及弗朗西斯的反应，是惊喜、感激还是有其他顾虑。
第二段：描述比赛当天的情况，弗朗西斯如何参与比赛，他和安迪及其他队员的配合，比赛过程中的精彩瞬间，最终的比赛结果，以及弗朗西斯成功融入团队后的情景。
情感线
起初，安迪因自身劣势和队伍去年的失败而渴望胜利，同时对弗朗西斯的困境感到同情。当队长拒绝让弗朗西斯加入时，安迪有些失落但没有放弃。看到弗朗西斯失落的样子，安迪的决心更坚定，想到办法后兴奋不已。告诉弗朗西斯计划时，充满期待。比赛时，紧张又激动，看到弗朗西斯和大家配合默契，心中满是喜悦，最后获胜时，是满满的自豪和对团队及友情的珍惜。
故事线
街区准备滑旱冰比赛，安迪所在阳光队想赢，安迪腿短有劣势，结识弗朗西斯。
弗朗西斯擅长滑旱冰但没鞋，安迪提议让他加入队伍被拒，安迪和队友训练。
比赛前一天，安迪看到弗朗西斯失落，想到帮助他和队伍的办法。
安迪告诉弗朗西斯计划，弗朗西斯做出反应。
比赛当天，弗朗西斯参与比赛，和队员配合。
比赛结束，阳光队获胜，弗朗西斯成功融入团队。
主旨升华句
This roller - skating race not only brought victory but also taught us that true friendship and teamwork can overcome any obstacle.（这场滑旱冰比赛不仅带来了胜利，还教会我们真正的友谊和团队合作可以克服任何障碍。）
Through this experience, we realized that helping others in need is not only a virtue but also a way to strengthen the bond within a team.（通过这次经历，我们意识到帮助有需要的人不仅是一种美德，也是加强团队凝聚力的一种方式。）
The story of Andy and Francis shows that sometimes, a simple act of kindness can lead to great achievements and a harmonious community.（安迪和弗朗西斯的故事表明，有时候，一个简单的善举可以带来巨大的成就和和谐的社区。）
In the end, we understood that winning is not just about the result but about the journey of working together and supporting one another.（最后，我们明白了胜利不仅仅是关于结果，更是关于共同努力和相互支持的过程。）
This event made us aware that everyone has their own strengths, and by combining them, we can create a more powerful and united team.（这次活动让我们意识到每个人都有自己的优势，通过整合这些优势，我们可以创建一个更强大、更团结的团队。）
写作示范一
He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan. “Francis, I have an idea! I know a guy who has an extra pair of roller skates. He's willing to lend them to you. And during the race, you can be our secret weapon! You can skate at the back of our team, and when it's the most crucial moment, you dash forward to win the race for us. What do you think ” Francis's eyes widened in surprise at first, then a big smile spread across his face. “Are you serious That would be amazing! I'd love to help.”
The next day, the race began as scheduled. The Sunnysiders started steadily, with Andy and the others skating as fast as they could at the front. Francis, wearing the borrowed skates, trailed behind, waiting for his chance. As the race entered the final lap, the Shadysiders were leading slightly. Just then, Francis kicked into high gear. His long legs moved swiftly, and he zoomed past the opponents like a lightning bolt. The Sunnysiders cheered loudly. In the end, they won the race. Everyone on the team gathered around Francis, patting him on the back, and he finally felt like he truly belonged.
写作示范二
He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan. “Francis, listen! I talked to the Shadysiders. They agreed that if you can beat one of their members in a one - on - one warm - up match, you can join our team for the race. I know you're good. You can do it!” Francis was a bit nervous but also eager to give it a try. “Okay, I'll do my best.” The next day, Francis showed up at the warm - up area. He faced the Shadysider's best skater bravely. With his excellent skills, Francis managed to win the match.
The next day, the race began as scheduled. With Francis on their team, the Sunnysiders were full of confidence. At the start, the two teams were neck and neck. But as the race went on, Francis's speed gave the Sunnysiders an edge. He passed the opponents with ease, and the rest of the team followed closely. The audience cheered loudly. In the end, the Sunnysiders crossed the finish line first. Everyone was overjoyed. Francis became a hero, and he had found his place in the community.
【答案】
He rushed to Francis, excited to tell him his plan. “Francis, you can use my skates in the race tomorrow! ” Andy yelled, eyes shining with hope. Francis hesitated. Noticing that, Andy explained that having him on their team would not only boost their chances of winning but also help him make more friends. Eventually, Francis put on the roller-skates and skated around, his talent instantly impressing the captain who was nearby. Struck by Francis’ excellent skills, the captain agreed to include the new boy. At that moment, Andy felt a touch of emptiness for giving up his own chance, but a surge of excitement for the plan as well.
The next day, the race began as scheduled. Francis, wearing Andy’s skates, stood at the starting line, looking determined, while Andy, from the sidelines, felt a mix of anticipation and nervousness. The race was intense, but Francis’ excellent skating skills helped the Sunnysiders finally win the race. Once the race was finished, Francis, now part of the team, skated over to Andy with the others. Together, they lifted Andy onto their shoulders, celebrating not just the victory but also the newfound friendships. Cheers filled the air, and Andy experienced a swell of pride and a profound sense of accomplishment for the success of his friend and the team.

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