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Siti had a fear of heights. Her heart would race and her palms (手心) would sweat when she even tried climbing to a slightly higher place. One day, Siti’s good friend, Surin, came to her house excitedly with some news. “Siti, there’ll be a tree climbing competition at Marina Garden next month! I think you should enter for it!” Surin shouted, knowing it would benefit her friend.
Siti’s eyes widened when she heard this. Her heart was filled with a mix of excitement and fear. The idea of climbing a tall tree in front of everyone frightened her but part of her longed to overcome her fear. Eventually she made up her mind. “Yes, I will do it,” she told Surin firmly (坚定地).
Over the following weeks, Siti spent hours daily climbing rock walls and building up her strength. Besides, she practiced deep breathing at home to calm her nerves and said positive messages to herself to improve her self-confidence.
The day of the competition arrived and a large audience, including Siti’s family and Surin, gathered at Marina Garden. As Siti reached the competition site, she realized that a 40-foot tree there had been chosen for competitors to climb. Siti’s legs became weak as she had not expected it.
Once the competition began, one by one, the competitors climbed the tree, reaching impressive heights. Siti watched anxiously, her palms growing sweaty. Finally, it was her turn. She took a deep breath, and began her climb after putting on her safety equipment.
The first few branches were manageable and she made it upward easily till the midway point. However, when she looked down, she realized how high she had gone.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Siti began to feel unsure and was afraid of falling down.
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文章大意
Siti 有恐高症，朋友 Surin 告知她下个月在滨海花园将举办一场爬树比赛，并鼓励她参加，希望借此帮助她克服恐惧。Siti 虽害怕，但渴望挑战自我，最终决定参赛。随后几周，她通过攀爬岩壁锻炼力量，练习深呼吸和自我鼓励来增强自信。比赛当天，看到 40 英尺高的比赛用树，Siti 腿软了。比赛中，其他选手陆续攀爬，表现出色。轮到 Siti 时，她起初顺利爬到一半，然而向下看时，意识到自己爬得很高，开始感到不安和害怕坠落。
故事山分析
开端：Siti 有恐高症，朋友 Surin 邀请她参加爬树比赛，Siti 决定接受挑战。
发展：Siti 通过攀爬岩壁、练习深呼吸等方式为比赛做准备。
高潮：比赛当天，看到高大的比赛用树 Siti 害怕了，比赛中爬到一半时向下看，恐惧加剧。
结局（待续写）：Siti 需要克服内心恐惧，完成比赛或者在这个过程中获得成长。
伏笔及在续写中的回应
伏笔：Siti 有恐高症，一到高处就心跳加速、手心出汗。回应：续写中在她爬到高处感到害怕时，再次强调这种身体反应，强化她的恐惧心理。
伏笔：Siti 为比赛做了很多准备，练习攀爬岩壁、深呼吸等。回应：在续写中，当她恐惧时，利用之前练习的深呼吸方法来镇定自己，展现准备的作用。
伏笔：比赛用树有 40 英尺高，Siti 看到后腿软。回应：续写中再次描述树的高度，让她在攀爬过程中不断受到这个高度的心理压迫。
伏笔：Siti 渴望克服恐惧。回应：在续写中，她内心不断挣扎，克服恐惧的渴望成为她坚持下去的动力。
伏笔：Surin 鼓励 Siti 参赛。回应：续写中，当 Siti 犹豫时，回忆起 Surin 的鼓励，坚定自己继续攀爬的决心。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写 Siti 在半空中恐惧的心理状态，她的内心挣扎，以及周围环境对她的影响，比如风吹动树枝让她更害怕。同时，回忆之前为克服恐惧所做的努力，如深呼吸练习，尝试用这些方法让自己镇定下来。
第二段：描写 Siti 如何克服恐惧继续攀爬，可能是受到周围人的鼓励，或者内心的自我激励。最终完成比赛或者虽然没爬到顶但在这个过程中战胜了自己的恐惧，获得成长。
情感线
Siti 最初是充满恐惧的，决定参赛时内心是兴奋与恐惧交织。准备过程中，她努力克服恐惧，建立自信。比赛当天看到树时恐惧加剧，攀爬一半时达到恐惧顶点。在续写中，她内心开始挣扎，一方面是强烈的恐惧，一方面是克服恐惧的渴望。随着情节发展，她逐渐克服恐惧，最终无论结果如何，都在情感上得到了成长，从一个被恐惧束缚的人变得勇敢面对恐惧。
故事线
Siti 的恐高背景故事线。
Surin 邀请 Siti 参赛故事线。
Siti 为比赛做准备故事线。
比赛当天看到比赛用树的故事线。
比赛中其他选手攀爬的故事线。
Siti 攀爬及克服恐惧的故事线。
主旨升华句
Conquering fear is not about never feeling afraid, but about having the courage to face it bravely.（战胜恐惧不是从不害怕，而是有勇气勇敢面对它。）
In the face of fear, our inner strength can be awakened, leading us to unexpected growth.（在恐惧面前，我们内心的力量可以被唤醒，引领我们走向意想不到的成长。）
Fear is just a stepping - stone on the path to self - improvement, and overcoming it makes us stronger.（恐惧只是自我提升道路上的一块垫脚石，克服它会让我们更强大。）
The journey of overcoming fear is a journey of self - discovery, where we learn more about our own potential.（克服恐惧的旅程是自我发现的旅程，在这个过程中我们更了解自己的潜力。）
True courage lies not in the absence of fear, but in the determination to move forward despite it.（真正的勇气不在于没有恐惧，而在于尽管恐惧仍有决心前行。）
写作示范一
Siti began to feel unsure and was afraid of falling down. Her hands trembled, and her legs shook uncontrollably. The height seemed to magnify her fear tenfold. The wind whistled through the branches, making the tree sway slightly, which added to her anxiety. She closed her eyes tightly, trying to calm herself. Suddenly, she remembered the deep - breathing exercises she had practiced. She took a long, slow breath in and exhaled steadily.Gradually, her heart rate slowed down. With newfound courage, she opened her eyes and looked up. She saw Surin cheering for her in the crowd, and her family's encouraging faces. Their support gave her the strength to move on. One step at a time, she climbed higher, pushing aside her fear. Finally, she reached the top, feeling a sense of accomplishment like never before. She had not only conquered the tree but also her fear.
写作示范二
Siti began to feel unsure and was afraid of falling down. Every muscle in her body tensed up, and she clung tightly to the tree as if her life depended on it. The thought of slipping and plummeting down was terrifying. Just then, she recalled the countless times she had told herself positive messages during her preparations. "I can do this. I am stronger than my fear," she murmured to herself.She forced herself to take a deep breath and relax her grip slightly. With a determined look on her face, she started to climb again. As she ascended, the fear still lingered, but she refused to let it stop her. When she finally reached a height she had never imagined she could reach, she realized that she had already won a great victory over her fear, whether she made it to the very top or not. The journey itself had been a remarkable transformation.
【答案】
Siti began to feel unsure and was afraid of falling down. A sense of fear held her and she was unable to move an inch. Then came the encouraging voices from the audience. “Come on Siti! Look up!” Surin called out. She closed her eyes for a moment, focusing on her breathing. Gradually, she regained her calmness and found her inner strength. One branch at a time, Siti climbed higher and higher. With each step, her fear decreased and was replaced by a feeling of accomplishment. The cheers grew louder, giving her confidence. Finally, Siti made it to the top of the tree. At that very moment, she understood the true meaning of the famous quote, “The only thing we have to fear is fear itself.” With courage and determination, anything is achievable.

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