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假定你是李华，想拍摄一段短视频，向外国朋友推销你的家乡特产。请给你的外教 Tom 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1 .请他帮忙修改英文解说词；
2. 请他帮忙为视频录音；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：拍摄视频 shoot a video；特产 special products；解说词 narration；录音 recording
注意：1. 词数80词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段：开篇表明写信目的，简要提及自己正在拍摄关于家乡特产的短视频，引出下文请求。
第二段：详细阐述两个请求，即请外教帮忙修改英文解说词和为视频录音，说明这两个帮助对视频的重要性。
第三段：表达对 Tom 的感谢，期待他的回复。
短语：
shoot a short video（拍摄一段短视频）
promote special products（推销特产）
English narration（英文解说词）
accurate and fluent（准确且流利）
native - like pronunciation（地道的发音）
make the video more appealing（使视频更具吸引力）
face difficulties（面临困难）
polish the narration（润色解说词）
unique special products（独特的特产）
cultural connotations（文化内涵）
语言积累
I'm currently engaged in... 我目前正忙于...
I'm writing to ask a favor of you. 我写信是想请你帮个忙。
I would be extremely grateful if you could... 如果你能...，我将不胜感激。
The narration plays a crucial role in... 解说词在... 中起着至关重要的作用。
Your native - like pronunciation will surely add charm to the video. 你地道的发音肯定会为视频增添魅力。
I've made some efforts in writing the narration, but I'm not quite confident about it. 我在写解说词上花了些功夫，但我对此不太自信。
I'm looking forward to your professional advice. 我期待着您的专业建议。
It would be a great honor for me if you could participate in this project. 如果您能参与这个项目，对我来说将是莫大的荣幸。
Your help means a great deal to me. 您的帮助对我意义重大。
Thank you in advance for your kind assistance. 提前感谢您的热心帮助。
写作示范一
Dear Tom,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm Li Hua, and I'm currently shooting a short video to promote the special products of my hometown to foreign friends.
I'm writing to ask for your help. First, I've written the English narration for the video, but I'm not sure if it's accurate and fluent enough. So, could you please spare some time to revise it Second, your excellent pronunciation is well - known. I wonder if you could do the recording for the video. The native - like voice - over will surely make the video more appealing.
Your help means a great deal to me. Thank you in advance, and I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Tom,
Hello! I'm Li Hua, and I'm really excited about a project I'm working on. I'm making a short video to introduce the unique special products of my hometown to the world.
However, I'm facing some difficulties. I've tried my best to write the English narration, but I'm not confident in my language skills. I sincerely hope you can help me polish it. Also, I know you have a wonderful voice. It would be a great honor if you could do the recording for the video. Your voice will definitely make the video more attractive.
Thank you so much for your time. I'm eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear Tom,
I'm Li Hua, and I'm writing to ask a favor of you. I'm shooting a short video to promote the special products of my hometown, which are full of local characteristics and cultural connotations.
The narration is crucial for the video, but I'm not satisfied with my writing. I would be extremely grateful if you could help me modify it. Besides, I think your excellent pronunciation and intonation can bring the video to life. So, could you do me the honor of recording the voice - over for it
Your help will make this video more successful. Thank you in advance, and I'm looking forward to your kind reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear Tom,
Eager to shoot a video to promote my hometown’s special products to my foreign friends, I’m writing to consult you to perfect it.
Firstly, what upsets me is whether my narration is accurate, vivid and authentic. So it will be very kind of you to correct the mistakes and polish my narration. What’s more, I have no confidence in the English recording, which I think may result in misunderstanding for my inaccurate pronunciation and intonation. So can you record it for me Only in this way will my foreign friends understand it better.
I would appreciate it if you can give me a hand. Keenly anticipate your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

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