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假定你是李华，在撰写一篇题目为The Importance of Cultural Heritage Protection的英语作文时遇到了困难，你给外教Smith先生写邮件求助。内容包括：
1. 陈述你写作中遇到的问题；
2. 期望得到他的指导。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段：开篇表明写信目的，简单介绍自己正在写关于文化遗产保护的作文。
第二段：详细阐述写作过程中遇到的问题，比如观点阐述不清晰、缺乏有力论据、语法词汇运用困难等。
第三段：表达希望得到外教 Smith 先生指导的急切心情，期待他的回复。
短语
cultural heritage protection（文化遗产保护）
logical presentation of ideas（观点的逻辑阐述）
persuasive examples（有说服力的例子）
well - written essay（写得好的文章）
reliable information sources（可靠的信息来源）
proper grammar usage（恰当的语法运用）
rich vocabulary（丰富的词汇）
comprehensive development of ideas（观点的全面拓展）
effective argumentation（有效的论证）
integration of materials（材料的整合）
语言积累
I'm currently working on a composition titled... 我目前正在写一篇题为... 的作文。
I'm really struggling with... 我在... 方面真的很吃力。
It's quite challenging for me to... 对我来说... 相当具有挑战性。
I have trouble in presenting my ideas clearly. 我在清晰表达自己的观点上有困难。
I'm in desperate need of some guidance. 我迫切需要一些指导。
I'm looking forward to your prompt reply. 我期待您的及时回复。
Your professional advice would be of great help to me. 您的专业建议对我将大有帮助。
I find it hard to come up with strong arguments. 我发现很难想出有力的论据。
I'm not sure how to use appropriate grammar and vocabulary. 我不确定如何使用恰当的语法和词汇。
I sincerely hope you can spare some time to help me. 我衷心希望您能抽出一些时间帮助我。
写作示范一
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I'm currently writing an English composition with the title "The Importance of Cultural Heritage Protection". However, I'm facing several difficulties.
Firstly, I have trouble presenting my ideas in a logical way. Although I know the significance of cultural heritage protection, I can't organize my thoughts clearly. Secondly, I'm short of persuasive examples to support my viewpoints.
I'm really in need of your help. I sincerely hope you can give me some advice on how to structure my essay and where to find relevant materials. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Mr. Smith,
Hello! I'm Li Hua, writing to seek your help. I'm working on an essay about the importance of cultural heritage protection. But I'm stuck.
I find it hard to use proper grammar and rich vocabulary to express my ideas precisely. Also, I'm not sure how to make my arguments more convincing. I've read some materials, but I still don't know how to integrate them into my writing.
Your guidance would be highly appreciated. Could you please offer me some suggestions on grammar usage and how to make my writing more persuasive I'm eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, and I'm writing this email because I'm having a tough time with my English composition "The Importance of Cultural Heritage Protection".
The biggest problem I'm facing is that I can't develop my ideas comprehensively. I have some basic understandings, but I don't know how to expand them into a well - written essay. Besides, I'm struggling to find suitable sources for reliable information.
I truly hope you can give me some tips on how to solve these problems. Your help means a lot to me. Thank you very much. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to seek your help regarding an English writing assignment titled The Importance of Cultural Heritage Protection. While writing, I struggle to organize ideas and use proper English. Despite searching for materials, I can’t make the essay logical and coherent. I would be extremely grateful if you could offer me some guidance, such as suggesting an outline or providing some useful sentence patterns. Vocabulary related to this topic is also badly needed. Additionally, recommending reliable English resources or websites would be of great help.
Thank you so much for your time and consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua

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