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假定你是李华，上周六你们班在西山滑雪场组织了一次滑雪活动。请你给美国朋友Eric 写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
(1)你的滑雪体验；
(2)你的感受。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：滑雪场 ski resort
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
第一段：开篇点明写信目的，引出上周六班级组织的滑雪活动。
第二段：详细描述滑雪体验，包括初次滑雪的紧张、学习技巧的过程以及在雪地上滑行的感受。
第三段：阐述这次活动的感受，表达对下次滑雪的期待，并询问 Eric 的相关经历。
语言积累
I'm extremely delighted to share with you... 我非常高兴与你分享...
It was my first encounter with... 这是我第一次接触...
At the beginning, I was so clumsy that... 一开始，我笨手笨脚以至于...
With the help of... 在... 的帮助下
Gradually, I got the hang of... 逐渐地，我掌握了... 的窍门
The feeling of gliding on the snow was indescribable. 在雪地上滑行的感觉难以言表。
This activity not only... but also... 这次活动不仅... 而且...
It taught me the value of... 它教会了我... 的价值
I'm eagerly looking forward to... 我热切期待着...
Do you have any similar experiences 你有类似的经历吗？
写作示范一
Dear Eric,
How's everything going I'm writing to tell you about an unforgettable skiing activity our class had last Saturday at the Xishan Ski Resort.
As a beginner, I was quite nervous at first. Standing on the skis made me feel like I was going to fall at any moment. But my classmates were really helpful. They patiently showed me how to balance and how to control the speed. After several tries, I finally managed to slide down a small slope. The wind whistling in my ears, I felt a sense of achievement.
This skiing trip was more than just fun. It made me more confident and taught me not to be afraid of new challenges. I'm already thinking about my next skiing adventure. What about you Have you ever skied
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear Eric,
I hope life treats you well. I'm excited to share with you our skiing experience last Saturday.
When we arrived at the ski resort, the white snow-covered slopes looked so inviting. I was both thrilled and a bit scared to start skiing. Initially, I kept falling down, but I didn't give up. With the guidance of a coach, I learned to turn and stop properly. Soon, I was skiing smoothly, enjoying the beautiful scenery around me.
It was an amazing day filled with laughter and excitement. This activity not only strengthened the bond among our classmates but also made me realize that with determination, anything is possible. I can't wait to go skiing again. Do you have any interesting skiing stories to share
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范三
Dear Eric,
Hi! I'm writing to let you know about a wonderful skiing activity we had last weekend.
Stepping onto the ski resort, I was immediately attracted by the vast white snow. Starting skiing was tough. I was like a newborn deer, struggling to keep my balance. However, through continuous practice and with the support of my friends, I started to make progress. Sliding down the slope, I felt free and alive.
This skiing experience was truly rewarding. It brought me a lot of joy and also improved my physical coordination. I'm looking forward to the next time I can hit the slopes. How about you Have you ever tried skiing
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
Last Saturday our class organized a meaningful skiing activity at the West Mountain Ski Resort. Learning you’ re interested in skiing, I can’t wait to share my experience with you.
The moment we arrived at the ski resort, the breathtaking scenery fascinated us all. As it was the first time I had tried skiing, I was a bit nervous at first. But after a few falls, I soon mastered the basic skills and enjoyed speeding down the slopes. The fresh air and thrilling rides made the whole day unforgettable.
Overall, the activity not only challenged me physically but also brought me joy and relaxation. I’m looking forward to more adventures like this.
Yours,
Li Hua

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