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情绪描写公式：(A wave/sense of + )情感的名词+有灵动词(seized/overwhelmed/took hold of/washed over/flooded over/swept over)+ sb.（无灵主语句）
1）When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her.
2）A wave of excitement and delight swept over me.
One's heart pounded/ thumped/raced with 情感名词(excitement/nervousness/fear/terror/horror)等.(某人激动/紧张/害怕得心怦怦跳。)
Her heart was racing with anticipation as she waited for the results.她心怀期待,心脏怦怦直跳,等待着结果。
练习
1.A look of annoyance crossed her face.恼怒的神色从她脸上掠过。
2.A strong wave of fear was sweeping over him, and Mike couldn't utter a single word. 一阵强烈的恐惧传遍他的全身,迈克一个字也说不出来。
3.Her previous calm gave way to/was swept away by terror.她先前的泰然自若已变为惊恐。
4.His heart was pounding with nervousness before he stepped onto the stage.在登上舞台之前,他紧张得心脏怦怦直跳。
动作描写公式
1.三连动作链:Sb. + V, V and V.
The coach stepped forward, patted him on the shoulder, and reminded him softly.
2.主语+V ,非谓语动词 , 或者是非谓语动词 ，主语+V.
Looking around cautiously，my seven-year-old son slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.
Seeing his figure, she rushed to him with excitement and fell into his arms.
Mrs. Cook stood there and didn’t dare to move an inch, shivering /trembling /shaking with fear.
3.主 语+V, with+名词+非谓语动词/形/副/介词短语.
The boy dressed in dirty clothes looked up at me with tears welling up in his eyes .
练习：
1.She woke up, slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the door.她醒了,溜下床,踮着脚走到门口。
2.John pressed his finger against his lips, pointed to the cat, and shook his head gently.约翰把手指放在嘴唇上，指着猫咪，轻轻摇了摇头。
3.Using its head, it touched our hands, seemingly saying that we were to be thanked. 它用头碰了碰我们的手，好像在说，它要感谢我们。
4.He leaned against the kitchen counter with his arms folded across his chest, glaring at me. 他靠在厨房的操作台上，双臂交叉在胸前，怒视着我。
语言描写公式
1.“……,”sb said in a …voice/tone. 某人以…的声音、 语气说到
“All that we have suffered will eventually make us better. Don't give up until the blessing happens,” he said in a firm voice.
2.“……,”sb said in/with+心情类名词. 某人以…的心情说道……
“I hate you!”she screamed in anger.
3.“……,”sb said +adv..+doing.(添加非谓语动词表达后续动作)
“I don't believe you anymore.”He yelled angrily, slamming the door.
练习
1.“I don't want to go with you.”said Emily in a tone of impatience.“我不想和你一起去。”艾米丽用不耐烦的语气说。
2.“Nice to meet you,”he said with enthusiasm.“很高兴认识你。 ”他热情地说。
3.“I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.”Mike said excitedly，hugging them tightly.“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克激动地说，紧紧抱住他们。
4.The farmer picked up the dog, knelt down and said in a soft voice,“It's yours now.”农夫抱起狗，跪下来，轻声说：“现在是你的了。”
主题升华公式
1、留白式结尾:
floated in the air/filled +地点/…was bathed in“飘在空中/充满/沉浸在”
(1) The golden sun light streaming in, laughter lingered around the yard and happiness floated in the air.
(2)Bathed in the warm sunshine, we made our way home happily.
2、强调句:
It is+名词+that+谓语(count/matter/bring...)“正是…”
正是爱和关怀使世界运转。
It is love and care that make the world go around.
3. From then on, “从那时起, ……”
From then on, I was determined to try my best to help the family. Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.
4. Only then did sb. realize that…“直到那时某人才意识到…”
Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.
5. Many years have passed, but I will never forget ...“许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记…”
Many years have passed, but I will never forget the special gift.许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记那份特别的礼物。
6.格言警句结尾
Whatever happens in our lives, we can’t give up or lose our faith and hope.
Hard work pays off .
Love can break down the barriers.
练习
1.With the cool breeze, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.
2.From then on, I always give others a helping hand if possible.从那时起，我总是尽可能地帮助别人。
3.From then on friendship bloomed in both of our hearts.从那时起，友谊在我们两人的心中绽放。
4.Only then did I realized that we should never take love for granted.直到那时我才意识到，我们不应该把爱视为理所当然。
5.Many years have passed, but the experience is still deeply engraved in one's mind.许多年过去了，但这段经历仍深深地铭刻在一个人的脑海里。

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