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安徽省肥东县2024 - 2025学年高二上学期期末考试英语试卷——书信写作指导
原题
假定你是校英语社团负责人李华，你们社团将代表学校参加英语诗歌创作大赛。请你给外教John写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 比赛相关情况介绍；
2. 需要他提供的帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,

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Yours,
Li Hua
写作提纲
1. 第一段：邮件开头表明写信目的，提及社团即将参加英语诗歌创作大赛，引起外教John的兴趣。
2. 第二段：详细介绍比赛情况，包括比赛主题、举办时间、参赛对象以及比赛要求等，让John对外教大赛有全面了解。
3. 第三段：明确提出需要John提供的帮助，如对社团成员诗歌草稿的语法、词汇和结构进行审核，分享诗歌创作中运用比喻、明喻等修辞手法的技巧以及保持诗歌韵律的方法等。
4. 第四段：表达对John帮助的期待与感谢，以礼貌、诚恳的语言结束邮件。
语言积累——短语
1. on behalf of 代表
2. be scheduled to 预定，计划
3. be open to 对……开放
4. brainstorm ideas 集思广益
5. provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物
6. give feedback on 对……给出反馈
7. share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
8. make use of 利用
9. pay attention to 注意
10. contribute to 有助于，贡献于
佳句
1. I'm writing to inform you that our English Club is about to participate in the English poetry writing competition, and we sincerely hope to get your support.（我写信是想告知您，我们英语社团即将参加英语诗歌创作大赛，我们衷心希望得到您的支持。）
2. The competition, with the theme of "Dreams and Aspirations", is a great opportunity for us to showcase our English skills and creativity.（以“梦想与抱负”为主题的这次比赛，是我们展示英语能力和创造力的绝佳机会。）
3. It would be of great help if you could spare some time to review our poems and offer your professional suggestions.（如果您能抽出时间审阅我们的诗歌并给出专业建议，那将对我们有极大的帮助。）
4. We believe that with your guidance, we can improve our poems and achieve better results in the competition.（我们相信，在您的指导下，我们能够完善我们的诗歌，并在比赛中取得更好的成绩。）
5. Your knowledge and experience in English poetry will definitely light up our path to success in this competition.（您在英语诗歌方面的知识和经验，一定会照亮我们在这次比赛中通往成功的道路。）
写作示范一
Dear John,
I'm Li Hua, the leader of the school English Club. I'm writing to tell you that our club will represent our school in an upcoming English poetry writing competition.
The competition, whose theme is "Dreams and Aspirations", is scheduled to be held next month. It's open to all high school students. The requirement is that contestants should express their thoughts and feelings about future goals and hopes through English poetry. We've already brainstormed a lot of ideas related to the theme and drafted our poems.
However, we need your help. We would be very grateful if you could review our drafts. Please give us feedback on grammar, vocabulary, and the overall structure. Also, we're not very skilled at using metaphors and similes, and we don't know how to maintain a proper rhythm in poems. So, it would be wonderful if you could share some techniques about these aspects with us.
We really hope you can offer us a hand. Your help will play a crucial role in our preparation for the competition. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范二
Dear John,
I'm writing on behalf of the English Club to share some exciting news with you. We're going to take part in an English poetry writing competition.
The competition is themed "Dreams and Aspirations" and will take place next month. It welcomes all high - school students. Contestants are expected to convey their understanding of future goals and dreams in the form of English poems. Our club members have been working hard and come up with many creative ideas, and we've finished the first drafts.
Now, we're turning to you for help. We badly need you to check our drafts. Your feedback on grammar, vocabulary usage and poem structure will be of great value. Moreover, we hope you can introduce some useful ways to make good use of metaphors and similes, and teach us how to keep a pleasant rhythm.
We truly appreciate your help. It will be a great boost to our confidence and performance in the competition. Thank you in advance and waiting for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
Dear John,
I am writing on behalf of our English Club as we are preparing for the upcoming English poetry writing competition.
The competition, whose theme is Dreams and Aspirations, is scheduled to be held next month and it is open to all high school students. It requires contestants to express their thoughts and feelings about future goals and hopes through the medium of English poetry.
Our club members have brainstormed ideas related to the theme and drafted our poems. We would be extremely grateful if you could review our drafts and provide us with feedback on grammar, vocabulary, and overall structure. It would also be wonderful if you could share with us some techniques and tricks about using metaphors and similes effectively, and maintaining a proper rhythm.
Yours,
Li Hua

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