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Josie and I wanted a dog more than anything else on Earth. At night, we’d slip out to the roof to talk about dogs after our parents went to bed.
One summer night, as we sat together on the roof, Josie saw something. “What’s that ”She pointed down toward a dark shadow on our driveway. I followed her finger and saw a big, black dog with long, shaggy hair. We climbed down onto the porch. Josie made a little kissing noise and held out her hand. It approached slowly. When she was close enough to pet, I ran my hand through her fur. She was so skinny that I could just about feel every bone, and her coat was tangled and full of dirt. She seemed to be a stray（流浪狗）.
We decided to bring her some food. I slid into the kitchen to fill a bowl with milk and a couple of raw eggs. She lapped it up（舔饮）, but as soon as she finished, she disappeared into the bushes.
The next day, we used all our saved money to buy dog food, including two cans of Woof Buddies, a small bag of kibble（狗粮）, and beef tailbones. We hid the food as we were afraid our parents wouldn’t approve of us feeding a stray.
That night, as soon as we set a plate down, she appeared almost as if from nowhere. She sniffed it, but for some reason she wouldn’t eat it.
“Come on, ” I said. “Let’s leave her alone and see what happens. ” So we went in and hid to spy. Unexpectedly, she grabbed the plate in her mouth and ran away. By the time we rushed back outside, she and the food were long gone.
This went on a long time — four or five nights, maybe. One of the oddest parts of the whole thing was that even though the dog kept taking the food, she didn’t seem to be putting on any weight. If anything, she was getting even skinnier.
Then came that special night. She came, but this time she barked at us, whined（哀叫）, and ran back and forth. I stroked her, “What’s it, girl What do you want ”
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第一段：She barked again, ran toward the bushes, and turned to see if we were following.
第二段：Seeing this, we decided to take her and her babies home together.
文章大意
Josie 和 “我” 极度渴望拥有一只狗，一个夏夜在屋顶看到一只瘦骨嶙峋、毛发杂乱的流浪黑狗。我们给它准备食物，它吃完就消失。之后我们用积蓄买狗粮，它却不吃还叼着盘子跑。这种情况持续了四五晚，它没长胖反而更瘦。一天晚上，它不再默默进食，而是冲着我们又吠又哀叫，来回跑动。
故事山分析
开端：Josie 和 “我” 渴望养狗，在屋顶发现流浪狗，它骨瘦如柴、毛发脏乱。
发展：我们给流浪狗提供食物，它吃完就走，后来它不吃准备的食物，叼着盘子跑，体重没增加反而更瘦。
高潮：狗这次冲着我们又吠又哀叫，来回跑动，似乎在传达什么，我们跟随它会有新发现，是故事高潮。
结局（待续写）：跟随狗发现它的秘密，把它和相关的小狗等带回家，解决它的困境，我们和狗的未来生活走向为结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
流浪狗很瘦，吃了食物却没长胖反而更瘦：续写中揭示原因，可能是它有小狗需要喂养，食物都给了小狗。
流浪狗叼着盘子跑：暗示它有特殊需求或藏身处，续写中跟随它找到它藏食物的地方或它的小狗。
我们藏起狗粮，怕父母不同意喂养流浪狗：为把狗带回家增加困难，续写中要解决如何说服父母同意的问题。
狗冲着我们又吠又哀叫，来回跑动：表明它有紧急事情，续写中我们跟随它，发现它的小狗遇到危险或需要帮助。
我们极度渴望养狗：与把狗带回家的结局呼应，续写中我们成功收养狗，实现愿望。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写狗的行为，它边跑边回头看，引导我们走向灌木丛。我们跟随过程中的心理，如好奇、紧张。到达灌木丛后，发现狗的秘密，如它藏着几只刚出生的小狗。
第二段：描述看到小狗后的反应，决定把狗和小狗一起带回家。思考如何安置它们，想象父母看到后的反应，如何说服父母同意收养。最后展望和狗、小狗们的幸福生活。
情感线
起初，Josie 和 “我” 渴望养狗，对流浪狗充满好奇和同情，给它食物。当狗奇怪行为出现，如不吃食物叼走盘子，我们疑惑不解。狗又吠又哀叫时，我们紧张担忧。发现小狗后，我们惊喜又心疼。决定带回家时，期待又忐忑，希望能收养它们，过上有狗陪伴的幸福生活。
故事线
Josie 和 “我” 渴望养狗，在屋顶发现流浪狗。
我们给流浪狗准备食物，它吃完就消失。
流浪狗不吃准备的食物，叼着盘子跑，体重更瘦。
狗冲着我们又吠又哀叫，来回跑动，引导我们走向灌木丛。
我们在灌木丛发现小狗，决定把狗和小狗带回家。
说服父母同意收养，和狗、小狗们过上幸福生活。
主旨升华句
This experience taught us that kindness and perseverance can bring unexpected warmth and joy, just like how our care for the stray dog led to a beautiful new beginning for all of us.（这段经历教会我们，善良和坚持能带来意想不到的温暖与喜悦，就像我们对流浪狗的关爱为我们所有人带来了美好的新开始。）
Through helping the stray dog and her puppies, we realized that every life is precious and worthy of our love and protection, no matter how small or seemingly insignificant.（通过帮助流浪狗和它的小狗，我们意识到每个生命都很珍贵，都值得我们去爱和保护，无论它多么渺小或看似微不足道。）
Our journey with the stray dog not only fulfilled our dream of having a pet but also deepened our understanding of responsibility and the power of compassion to change lives.（我们与流浪狗的经历不仅实现了我们拥有宠物的梦想，还加深了我们对责任的理解，以及同情的力量能够改变生活。）
In the end, what started as a simple act of feeding a stray dog turned into a life - changing adventure, showing us that even the smallest acts of kindness can have far - reaching consequences.（最终，从简单喂养流浪狗开始的行为变成了一场改变生活的冒险，向我们表明即使是最微小的善举也可能产生深远的影响。）
This story of the stray dog and her puppies is a testament to the unbreakable bond that can form between humans and animals, and the beauty that can emerge when we open our hearts to those in need.（这个关于流浪狗和它小狗的故事证明了人与动物之间可以形成牢不可破的纽带，以及当我们向有需要的生命敞开心扉时，所能展现出的美好。）
写作示范一
She barked again, ran toward the bushes, and turned to see if we were following. We exchanged a look of curiosity and followed her quickly. As we got closer to the bushes, we heard faint whimpers. When we pushed aside the branches, we were shocked to find several tiny puppies huddled together. They were so small and weak, their eyes not even fully open yet. No wonder the mother dog was so skinny. She had been saving all the food for her babies.
Seeing this, we decided to take her and her babies home together. We carefully carried the puppies in our hands and led the mother dog gently. Back home, we put them in a warm box with soft blankets. When our parents saw the dogs, we explained everything to them. To our relief, they were touched by the story and agreed to let us keep them. From then on, our home was filled with the sounds of barking and laughter, and our lives became more colorful with these lovely dogs around.
写作示范二
She barked again, ran toward the bushes, and turned to see if we were following. Our hearts pounded with excitement as we trailed behind her. Once we reached the thicket, the mother dog jumped in and we crouched down to peek inside. There, in a small hollow, were five little puppies, their fur still damp. They were clearly in desperate need of care. It all made sense now why the mother dog had been acting so strangely.
Seeing this, we decided to take her and her babies home together. We knew it would be a challenge to convince our parents, but we were determined. We brought the dogs inside and prepared a cozy corner for them. When our parents came into the room, we showed them the puppies and told them how we had found them. After a moment of hesitation, our parents smiled and nodded. With the dogs safely with us, we looked forward to a future filled with love and companionship.
One possible version:
She barked again, ran toward the bushes, and turned to see if we were following. We chased her closely. We ran across the field, darted between trees, threaded our way into another bush. There she stopped and stood perfectly still, panting and wagging her tail. Seeing that we were catching up, she whined, and disappeared through a dark hole in the wall of leaves and branches. We followed and broke through into a little clearing and could hardly believe what we’d found. At our feet lay four puppies, whining weakly. Bones and plates littered their small nest. The mother dog was nearby, feeble and exhausted. Obviously, she had saved all the food for her puppies but that was still far from enough.
Seeing this, we decided to take her and her babies home together. Running the risk of being scolded by our parents, we carefully picked up each puppy and carried them, the mother dog following closely behind, as if escorting. Fortunately, to our great relief, mama and papa were touched by the story and thereby things ended well for everybody: We turned to the local animal shelter for help, and they found good homes for the puppies, all close by. Josie and I ended up getting our dog after all-we adopted the mother who had been so selfless and brave to find help for her babies.

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