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In a coastal village named Seaford lived a courageous young woman named Amelia. Amelia was known
throughout Seaford for her adventurous nature. From the moment she could walk, she would eagerly run towards the crashing waves, feeling the sand between her toes and the cool spray of the ocean mist on her face. She was a woman with a strong will and possessed a heart full of kindness. Amelia's love for the ocean was intense,and she spent most of her days exploring the beautiful beaches and sparkling waters that surrounded her house.
One sunny morning, while Amelia was walking along the shore, she noticed a group of restless seagulls abnormally circling above the crashing waves. Their unusual calls echoed through the air. Concerned for their well-being, she followed their flight pattern, her instincts guiding her toward danger.
As she approached a towering cliff, Amelia gasped in horror. On a narrow ledge(岩架), high above the violent waves , was a young dolphin trapped in a thick fishing net. Its shiny body shone under the golden rays of the sun, but its freedom was cruelly limited by the trap. With each struggle, the net tightened around its delicate body, leaving painful marks on its skin. Its tail flapped(摆动) helplessly, each movement a request for help, while its desperate cries for assistance echoed through the air.
A sense of urgency filled Amelia, pushing her forward with determination and resolve. Realizing that time was tight, Amelia knew she had to act instantly to free this innocent creature from its difficult position before it submitted to exhaustion or the force of the tides.
注意 ：
1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village.__________________________________________________
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As the dolphin was gently released into the calm,welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment.__________________
文章大意
在名为西福德的海滨村庄，生活着勇敢且热爱冒险的年轻女子阿米莉亚，她对海洋充满热爱，常在海边探索。一个阳光明媚的早晨，她在海边散步时，注意到一群海鸥异常地在海浪上空盘旋，叫声回荡在空中。她跟随海鸥飞行的轨迹，来到一座高耸的悬崖边，惊恐地发现一只小海豚被困在海浪上方狭窄岩架的厚渔网中，它挣扎时渔网越勒越紧，在皮肤上留下伤痕，无助地摆动尾巴、发出求救声。阿米莉亚深感紧迫，决心立即行动拯救这只无辜的小海豚。
故事山分析
开端：介绍生活在海滨村庄的阿米莉亚及其对海洋的热爱，为故事背景铺垫。
发展：阿米莉亚在海边散步时，发现异常的海鸥，循迹找到被困在悬崖岩架渔网中的小海豚，看到小海豚的困境，她决定施救。
高潮：阿米莉亚返回村庄寻求帮助，以及后续救援过程中遇到的困难和挑战，将是故事高潮部分。
结局（待续写）：成功解救小海豚，小海豚回归大海后的反应，以及阿米莉亚和村民们的感受，构成故事结局。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
阿米莉亚勇敢且热爱冒险：在续写中，她会勇敢地组织救援行动，面对救援过程中的困难不退缩，如攀爬悬崖等，展现她的勇敢与冒险精神。
海鸥异常盘旋并发出叫声：这是小海豚被困的信号，续写中，村民们会因为海鸥的异常表现，意识到情况危急，积极响应阿米莉亚的求助，共同参与救援。
小海豚被困在狭窄岩架且渔网勒紧身体：在救援时，需要考虑如何在狭窄危险的岩架上操作，如何安全解开渔网，避免伤害小海豚，这将是续写中的关键情节。
阿米莉亚深感紧迫并决心行动：续写中，她会迅速返回村庄，争分夺秒地组织救援，与时间赛跑，体现她的果断和决心。
村庄位于海滨：为救援提供了一定便利，如村民可能熟悉海洋环境，有相关救援工具，续写中可利用这些条件展开救援。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述阿米莉亚返回村庄后的行动，她向村民呼喊求助，讲述小海豚的困境，呼吁大家一起帮忙。村民们的反应，有人积极响应，有人提出建议，大家迅速准备救援工具，如绳索、剪刀等，组成救援队伍跟随阿米莉亚前往悬崖。
第二段：着重描写救援成功后，小海豚被放回大海的场景。小海豚在海中的动作，如欢快游动、跃出水面，与阿米莉亚和村民互动，表达感激。阿米莉亚和村民们看到小海豚重获自由的喜悦心情，以及对这次救援行动的感慨。
情感线
起初，阿米莉亚看到小海豚被困，内心充满担忧和焦急，迫切想要解救它。在返回村庄求助过程中，她心急如焚，担心时间拖延小海豚会遭遇危险。村民响应时，她感到一丝欣慰。救援时，她紧张又专注，全力确保小海豚安全。小海豚回归大海，她的担忧转为喜悦和满足，为自己和村民的善举感到自豪，村民们也因共同完成救援而充满成就感。
故事线
阿米莉亚在海边散步，发现异常的海鸥。
循迹找到被困在悬崖岩架渔网中的小海豚。
阿米莉亚返回村庄，向村民求助。
村民响应，准备救援工具，组成救援队伍。
成功解救小海豚，将其放回大海。
小海豚与阿米莉亚和村民互动，大家感慨这次救援行动。
主旨升华句
This rescue mission not only saved a precious life but also demonstrated the power of unity and compassion within a community, showing that together, we can overcome any challenge to protect the vulnerable.（这次救援行动不仅拯救了一条宝贵的生命，还展示了社区中团结和同情的力量，表明只要齐心协力，我们就能克服任何挑战，保护弱势群体。）
Through their joint efforts to rescue the dolphin, Amelia and the villagers learned that every life in nature is connected, and our responsibility to protect it is a shared one that can bring out the best in humanity.（通过共同努力营救海豚，阿米莉亚和村民们认识到自然界中的每一个生命都是相互关联的，我们保护它的责任是共同的，这能激发出人性中最美好的一面。）
The successful rescue of the dolphin serves as a reminder that even in the face of great difficulties, a small act of kindness and the courage to take action can make a significant difference and create a more harmonious world.（成功营救海豚提醒我们，即使面对巨大困难，一个小小的善举和采取行动的勇气也能产生重大影响，创造一个更和谐的世界。）
Amelia's determination to save the trapped dolphin and the villagers' immediate response illustrate the deep - seated love for nature that exists within us and the positive change we can bring when we act on that love.（阿米莉亚拯救被困海豚的决心和村民们的迅速响应，体现了我们内心深处对自然的热爱，以及当我们基于这种热爱采取行动时，所能带来的积极改变。）
This heartwarming story of the dolphin's rescue is a testament to the fact that our connection with nature is unbreakable, and by working together to protect it, we are not only safeguarding the environment but also our own humanity.（这个温暖人心的海豚救援故事证明了我们与自然的联系牢不可破，通过共同努力保护自然，我们不仅在守护环境，也在守护我们的人性。）
写作示范一
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Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village. She ran through the narrow streets, shouting for help at the top of her lungs. “The dolphin is in trouble! We need to save it!” Her voice echoed, catching the attention of the villagers. In no time, a group of kind - hearted men and women gathered around her. Some brought ropes, while others fetched sharp scissors to cut the net. Led by Amelia, they hurried towards the cliff, their footsteps urgent. When they arrived, they carefully assessed the situation. One brave man volunteered to climb down the cliff with the help of the rope, while others held the rope firmly to ensure his safety.
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As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment. Then, it swam around the rescuers, its sleek body glistening in the sunlight. It even jumped out of the water a few times, as if expressing its gratitude. Amelia and the villagers watched in awe, their faces beaming with joy. “We did it!” Amelia exclaimed, her eyes filled with tears of happiness. This rescue not only saved the dolphin but also deepened the bond among the villagers, making them more aware of the importance of protecting marine life.
写作示范二
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Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village. She burst into the local fisherman's hut, her chest heaving from the sprint. “There's a dolphin trapped on the cliff ledge! We must act now!” she cried. The fishermen, accustomed to the perils of the sea, immediately sprang into action. They gathered their sturdiest ropes, a long - handled net, and a first - aid kit for the injured dolphin. Soon, a small but determined group of villagers was following Amelia back to the cliff. They discussed the rescue plan on the way, each person offering their own ideas based on their experience.
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As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment. Then, with a powerful flick of its tail, it darted towards the open sea. But it didn't go far. It circled back, swimming close to the shore where the rescuers stood. The dolphin's bright eyes seemed to meet each person's gaze, as if it was thanking them individually. Amelia felt a lump in her throat. “This is what it means to be part of a community that cares,” she said softly. The villagers nodded in agreement, their hearts filled with a sense of fulfillment and a new - found commitment to the protection of the ocean and its inhabitants.
【参考范文】
Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village. She grabbed a toolkit, carried a strong rope and hurried back with a group of villagers. Everything was all set before Amelia got down to the rescue. She lowered herself down the cliff little by little with great care. Somehow, she felt dizzy and nothing could be seen.She stopped. The dolphin's desperate cries lingering through the air, Amelia summoned up all the courage to proceed. Ultimately, she arrived at the ledge. Standing on the ledge, Amelia's heart pounded, the hands and feet shivering. After much effort, Amelia broke the thick net.With the help of the villagers,the innocent creature was let loose to the shore carefully and safely.
As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment. Delicate and painful as the dolphin was,it went to great lengths to jump, wagging its tail.Amelia stood there, appearing extremely worn-out. Then, she stepped over to the lovely creature, patting it on the head and kissing it. The dolphin snuggled up to Amelia, murmuring in a joyful voice. Amelia waved good-bye to it, feeling relieved. The sun cast the golden rays on Amelia's face, and she went home in delight. Amelia's story has uplifted more and more people and they have grown valorous, good-natured and persistent.

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