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The city circle was quiet when my van (面包车) pulled up to Two’s Company cafe. It was 8:00 a.m.. As the film crew of student moviemakers hopped out of the van and started unloading a ton of equipment, I sat in the driver’s seat reading a book.
Sometimes, it made me feel a bit sad that I was not wanted or needed on the set. These kids used to need a parent’s advice, help and caring. Now, as older teens, they were making their own decisions, helping each other and supporting their friends through whatever assignments they were given. I was just the driver. Anything else that I might be able to impress on them was not required and, I dare say, unwelcome.
With all the equipment unloaded, the van now became the snack mobile and place to leave personal items. My job, as the driver, was to stay within calling distance with the keys when necessary.
To finish reading the book, I got out looking for a place to sit down. It was early, but I didn’t want to sit in the sun. Against a wall, in the shade, just twenty or so faces away, I spied a beautifully carved park bench. I noticed that a man was sitting on one end, but there was plenty of room for at least two more bodies. Walking over, I set my drink on the ground near the leg of the bench and sat on the end seat so that I could rest my hand on the arm.
The man on the other end looked at me oddly but remained seated. I quickly discovered that he’d probably spent the night on the bench. His clothes were untidy, his hair was messy, and I could smell something unpleasant. I looked at him and smiled, and he smiled back with a mouth of misshapen and blacked-out teeth. That was it. He wasn’t bothering me, and I thought I wasn’t bothering him.
We both sat there for over an hour. I was reading. He was intently watching the filming. He then stood, walked in front of me and bowed. I looked up, not knowing what was going to happen next. In a slightly shake but clear voice, he said, “Thank you.”
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Astonished by his simple “thank you,” I looked at him with confusion.
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Later, as the film crew began to load their equipment, I walked up to them.
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文章大意
清晨，作者作为学生电影制作团队的司机，将面包车停在咖啡馆外。团队成员卸载设备，作者自觉在拍摄现场不被需要，只是个司机。为找地方读完书，作者在公园长椅坐下，旁边坐着一位衣衫褴褛、气味难闻的流浪汉。作者和他相安无事地坐了一个多小时，流浪汉突然起身向作者鞠躬并道谢，这让作者十分困惑。
故事山分析
开端：作者送学生电影制作团队到拍摄地，自觉在团队中仅充当司机角色，不被需要。
发展：作者找地方读书，在公园长椅上与流浪汉一同安静地坐了许久。
高潮：流浪汉突然向作者道谢，引发作者的困惑。
结局：流浪汉解释原因，作者深受触动，并将此事分享给学生团队，让大家都受到教育。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应
作者自觉在拍摄团队中不被需要：伏笔，在后续故事中促使作者去寻找自己的空间，从而有了在公园长椅的经历。
作者找地方读书，选择公园长椅：伏笔，为与流浪汉相遇提供场景，在续写中推动两人交流情节的发展。
流浪汉的邋遢形象：伏笔，与后文作者的不嫌弃形成对比，突出作者行为的可贵，在续写中成为流浪汉道谢的原因。
两人安静地坐了一个多小时：伏笔，在续写中引出流浪汉道谢的情节，使故事发展自然。
流浪汉的道谢和作者的困惑：伏笔，在续写中通过流浪汉的解释得以解决，同时引发作者的感悟和对学生团队的分享。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写作者听到流浪汉道谢后的反应，通过流浪汉的解释，展现流浪汉内心的感受，体现作者行为对他的影响，以及作者内心的触动。
第二段：描述作者将这次经历分享给学生团队的过程，突出学生们的反应，以及这次经历给大家带来的思考和成长，升华主题。
情感线
作者起初因在拍摄团队中不被需要而感到失落。在公园长椅与流浪汉相处时，保持着平常心态。听到流浪汉道谢时，从困惑转为感动和反思。将经历分享给学生团队后，看到学生们的思考，内心感到欣慰和自豪，情感得到进一步升华。
故事线
作者送学生电影制作团队到拍摄地，自觉不被需要。
作者找地方读书，在公园长椅坐下，旁边是流浪汉。
作者和流浪汉安静相处一个多小时。
流浪汉向作者道谢，作者感到困惑。
流浪汉解释原因，作者深受触动。
作者将经历分享给学生团队，大家都受到教育。
主旨升华句（英文）
This simple encounter taught us that a small act of kindness, like not showing disgust to a homeless person, can have a profound impact on someone's life, reminding us to always be kind and empathetic.
Through this experience, we realized that true respect and kindness are not about grand gestures but about treating every individual with dignity, regardless of their appearance or situation.
The man's gratitude for a simple act of normalcy shows that in a world full of judgment, a little acceptance can bring hope and warmth to those who are often overlooked.
Our encounter on the park bench was a powerful reminder that every person we meet has a story, and by being kind and open - minded, we can make a positive difference in their lives.
This story tells us that kindness is a universal language that can bridge the gap between people from different walks of life, and we should always be ready to spread it wherever we go.
写作示范一
Astonished by his simple “thank you,” I looked at him with confusion. He cleared his throat and said, “I've been on the streets for a long time. People usually avoid me like the plague. But you, you just sat there like I was an ordinary person. It made me feel human again.” I was speechless for a moment, then reached out my hand. “I'm glad I could help in some small way.” He took my hand, a big smile on his face.
Later, as the film crew began to load their equipment, I walked up to them. I gathered them around and told them the story. Their eyes widened in surprise at first, and then they fell into deep thought. One student said, “We should learn from this. Everyone deserves kindness.” I nodded, feeling that this day had not only been about driving but about teaching important life values. We all got in the van, excited to share this new lesson with others.
写作示范二
Astonished by his simple “thank you,” I looked at him with confusion. He shuffled his feet nervously and said, “I watched you reading so peacefully. You didn't even flinch when you sat next to me. It's been a long time since I felt such calmness around me.” I smiled gently at him. “I'm glad I could bring you some peace.” He nodded, a bit of light returning to his eyes.
Later, as the film crew began to load their equipment, I walked up to them. I recounted the whole experience. The students listened intently, and one of them said, “This is a great story for our movie, about kindness and acceptance.” I was delighted that this encounter could inspire their work. We all climbed into the van, ready to create something meaningful with this new - found inspiration.
【答案】
Astonished by his simple “thank you,” I looked at him with confusion. He continued, “Most people avoid me or tell me to get lost. You are the first person who didn’t mind sitting next to me, like I’m a person too. Thank you for treating me with respect.” I was taken aback, realizing how a small act of kindness had such a significant impact on him. “We all deserve kindness,” I replied softly. He nodded, gathered his few belongings, and gave me one last appreciative smile before walking away. This brief encounter left me pondering the profound influence of acknowledging one’s humanity.
Later, as the film crew began to load their equipment, I walked up to them. Sharing the experience with the students, I said, “Today, I learned something valuable. Every act of kindness counts. Even when you think it’s insignificant, it could mean the world to someone else.” The students listened intently, absorbing the lesson. Inspired, they acknowledged the importance of empathy and compassion, ready to incorporate this mindset into their lives and work. I realized that even as just the driver, I still had much to offer, both as a lesson and as an example.

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