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故事续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A young man was driving home one evening on a two-lane (道) country road. Work in this small mid-western community was almost as slow as his old car, and he didn’t know whether to look for it or not. Ever since the factory closed, he’d been unemployed, and with winter coming on, the cold had finally hit home.
It was starting to get dark and light snow was coming down. He’d better get a move on. Then he saw an old lady trapped on the side of the road. But even in the dim (昏暗的) light of day, he could see she needed help. So he pulled up in front of her car and got out.
Even with the smile on his face, she was worried. No one had stopped to help for the last hour or so. Was he going to hurt her He didn’t look safe and seemed jobless. He looked poor and hungry. He could see that she was frightened, standing out there in the cold. He knew how she felt. He said, “I’m here to help you, Ma’ am. Why don’t you wait in the car where it’s warm By the way, my name is Bryan. ” The lady felt a little relieved after hearing what Bryan said. She got in her car and thought maybe he was helping for money.
Bryan found all she had was a flat tire, but for an old lady, that was bad enough. He crawled (爬) under the car looking for a place to put the jack (千斤顶) , cutting his finger a time or two. Soon he was able to change the tire. But he had to get dirty and his hands were hurt. As he was doing the work, she rolled down the window and began to talk to him. She told him that she was from St. Louis and was only just passing through.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She expressed her gratitude for his coming to her aid.
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Before she drove off, the old lady handed him a small piece of paper with her phone number and address.
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传递善意的文章续写
续写要点
第一段：续写老太太表达感激后，Bryan 进一步拒绝金钱，强调帮助是出于本心，两人可以聊聊彼此的生活，老太太得知 Bryan 的失业困境，鼓励他不要灰心，分享自己年轻时的类似经历，给他讲一些应对挫折的方法和心态调整的建议。
第二段：续写老太太离开后，Bryan 看着纸条，心中满是温暖和感动，他可能会在之后的生活中遇到困难，想到老太太的鼓励，决定打电话向她倾诉，老太太给予实际的帮助，比如帮他留意工作机会，或者在精神上持续支持他，Bryan 因此慢慢走出困境，他也开始主动帮助他人，将这份善意传递下去。
情感线
Bryan 一开始出于善良去帮助老太太，老太太起初担忧害怕，后来被 Bryan 的真诚和行动打动，心怀感激。Bryan 拒绝金钱时，老太太可能有些意外但更多的是对他品格的认可。Bryan 得到老太太的鼓励和帮助信息后，从失业的迷茫无助转变为充满希望，内心温暖且坚定了传递善意的想法。
故事线
Bryan 驾车回家途中，看到被困在路边的老太太，决定停车帮忙。
老太太因 Bryan 看起来不安全且像无业游民而担忧，Bryan 表明来意并让她到温暖的车里等待。
Bryan 帮老太太换轮胎，过程中手指受伤、浑身变脏，老太太通过车窗与他交谈，透露自己只是路过此地。
换好轮胎后，老太太表达感激并想给钱，Bryan 拒绝，两人交流生活，老太太得知 Bryan 失业并鼓励他。
老太太离开前给 Bryan 留下写有电话和地址的纸条，让他有困难联系。
之后 Bryan 在生活困境中想起老太太的鼓励，联系她并得到帮助，走出困境后开始传递善意。
主旨升华句
From that day on, Bryan understood that a simple act of kindness could not only bring warmth to others but also light up his own world in the darkest times.（从那天起，Bryan 明白了一个简单的善举不仅能给他人带来温暖，还能在最黑暗的时刻照亮自己的世界。）
It was a profound lesson for Bryan that helping others selflessly was not about expecting rewards but about the joy and hope it brought to both sides.（对 Bryan 来说，这是深刻的一课，无私帮助他人不是为了期待回报，而是在于它给双方带来的喜悦和希望。）
The encounter with the old lady taught Bryan that even in tough situations, one's kindness could be a beacon of hope, inspiring others and creating a cycle of goodness.（与老太太的相遇教会了 Bryan，即使身处困境，一个人的善良也能成为希望的灯塔，激励他人并创造出善良的循环。）
Bryan realized that kindness was a powerful force that could break down barriers of mistrust and fear, and build bridges between strangers.（Bryan 意识到善良是一种强大的力量，它可以打破不信任和恐惧的障碍，在陌生人之间架起桥梁。）
This experience made Bryan determined to always reach out to those in need, for he knew that every act of kindness, no matter how small, could make a big difference in someone's life.（这次经历让 Bryan 下定决心总是向那些需要帮助的人伸出援手，因为他知道每一个善举，无论多么微小，都能在某人的生活中产生巨大的影响。 ）
写作示范一
She expressed her gratitude for his coming to her aid. “I can't thank you enough, young man. You've really saved me a lot of trouble.” she said with a warm smile. Bryan just shook his head, saying, “It's really no big deal. I'm glad I could be of help.” Then, they started chatting. When the old lady learned about Bryan's unemployment, she patted his shoulder gently. “Don't lose heart. I once faced the same situation. With patience and perseverance, you'll surely get through it.” Her words were like a ray of sunshine, bringing warmth to Bryan's heart.
Before she drove off, the old lady handed him a small piece of paper with her phone number and address. “If you ever need anything, don't hesitate to call me. I mean it.” she said earnestly. Bryan thanked her sincerely. A few days later, when Bryan was still struggling to find a job, he decided to call the old lady. She listened attentively and promised to help. Soon, she found a job opportunity for Bryan. With this help, Bryan got back on his feet. From then on, he also made it a habit to help others, believing that kindness could always bring hope.
写作示范二
She expressed her gratitude for his coming to her aid. “You're such a kind - hearted person. I don't know how I could have managed without you.” The old lady's eyes were filled with appreciation. Bryan replied, smiling, “Helping others makes me happy, and that's enough for me.” As they talked, the old lady shared some of her life stories and encouraged Bryan not to give up on his dreams despite the difficulties. Her positive attitude influenced Bryan deeply.
Before she drove off, the old lady handed him a small piece of paper with her phone number and address. “Keep this. You might need it someday.” she said. Weeks later, Bryan faced financial problems. Remembering the old lady's words, he called her. She not only comforted him but also offered some financial support to help him through the tough time. With her help, Bryan gradually overcame his difficulties. Since then, he was always ready to lend a hand to those in need, spreading the kindness he had received.
【答案】
She expressed her gratitude for his coming to her aid. The old lady felt so warm in her inner heart as she watched Bryan, a stranger, selflessly change her flat tire in the cold. “You’ve been a blessing today, Bryan, ” she said. Bryan just smiled, saying it was nothing. She asked him how much she owed him. Any amount would have been all right with her. She had already imagined all the awful things that could have happened had he not stopped. But he simply declined and then the car could start again.
Before she drove off, the old lady handed him a small piece of paper with her phone number and address. It read, “If you’re ever in St. Louis, come to me. Maybe I can help you. ” Bryan smiled, feeling a warmth that transcended the cold evening. As he watched her car disappear into the distance, he realized that sometimes, the simple act of helping others can light up not just their day, but also one’s own heart. He headed home, determined to keep looking for work, knowing that kindness always finds a way.

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