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Unit 4 History and Traditions
Reading for Writing
Learning objectives:
By the end of this class, you will be able to…
1. figure out the organization and language features of the passage.
2. appreciate and describe a place from sight, smell, taste, hearing and touch.
3. write an essay of a place with “Introduction—Body—Ending” structure.
4. realize the importance of history and tradition to a city and a country; tell your own stories and increase your cultural confidence.
Lead-in
Take a trip following a video
Pre-writingTask1Read for main ideaabout the beauty and traditions of Ireland.I am here!Pre-writingTask2Read for structureWhat's the topic sentence of the passage IntroductionEndingBody/DetailsPre-writing Task3 Read for details and language features
The paragraph describes the landscape using different senses in different places. Find out the sentences according to the the following senses .
sight hearing touch smell taste
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you are lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
sight
Task3 What words does the writer use to describe sensory details
body
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you are lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
sight
Task3:What words does the writer use to describe sensory details
hearing
the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds
make up the music of the coast
birds greet the new day with their morning song
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you are lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
sight
Task3 What words does the writer use to describe sensory details
hearing
the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds
make up the music of the coast
birds greet the new day with their morning song
touch
feel the sun on your skin
smell
the sweet scent of fresh
flowers
Tip for Writing: Good writers use sensory details to describe something according to one or more of the five senses: sight, hearing, smell, touch and taste.
taste
with a glass of
wine or a local beer
a delicious traditional Irish Beef
Stew
Find the words or phrases in the passage (body)to describe these pictures.
Pre-writing Task4 Read for sensory description
rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle
起伏的绿色山丘上点缀着牛羊
green counties 绿色乡村
peaceful landscape
宁静的风景
What can you see in Ireland’s countryside
the roar of the ocean waves
海浪的咆哮声
the cries of the seabirds
海鸟的鸣叫声
the music of the coast
海岸交响曲
What can you hear in Ireland’s coast
breathe in the sweet scent of
fresh flowers
呼吸鲜花的芬芳
呼吸鲜花呼吸新鲜的花香
birds greet the new day with
their morning song鸟儿们用它们的晨歌迎接新的一天
feel the sun on your skin
感受太阳照在皮肤上
What can you feel, smell and hear in Ireland’s mountains
delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew
爱尔兰传统炖牛肉
traditional music and dancing
传统音乐和舞蹈
a glass of wine or a local beer
一杯葡萄酒或本地啤酒
What can you taste, see and hear in Ireland’s village pub
summary：
How to describe
a place you like
body
Ending
make the reader eager to read your writing
Introduction
use sensory details and give examples
Transitions:help the reader follow your ideas easily
the landscape\down by the sea\in the mountains(space order)
In the morning...(time order)
First,second...(logic order)
Let the reader know that the passage ends
Help the reader remember your writing
这是历史悠久、物华天宝、人杰地灵、文化兴隆、人才辈出、多有圣迹并集麟文化、鲁文化、儒家文化与佛教文化于一身的麒麟之乡、戏曲之乡、杂技之乡——巨野
While—writing
假如你是巨野一中高一学生李华，你的笔友Peter在暑假要到你的家乡旅游，请你写信介绍一下自己家乡的情况，要点如下，可适当增加细节。
1.巨野县地处山东省西南部，有两千多年的历史。
2.著名的景点与文化。（看古迹明历史、听鸟语闻花香、听戏曲知传统、品美食懂风俗从而感受大野泽的古与今）。
3.表示欢迎与祝愿。（开头和结尾已给出）
Dear Peter，
I’m glad to learn that you’re coming to our hometown for a visit. I’m honored to share something about it.
Looking forward to your coming.
yours Lihua
While—writing Preparations for writing
假如你是巨野一中高一学生李华，你的笔友Peter在暑假要到你的家乡旅游，请你写信介绍一下自己家乡的情况，要点如下，可适当增加细节。
1.巨野县地处山东省西南部，有两千多年的历史。
2.著名的景点及文化。（看古迹明历史、听鸟语闻花香、听戏曲知传统、品美食懂风俗从而感受大野泽的古与今）。
3.表示欢迎与祝愿。（开头和结尾已给出）
Group work
1.巨野悠久的历史对巨野的人们和传统有着极大的影响。The long history of Juye county_______________.
2.永丰塔（Yongfeng Tower）、齐鲁会盟台(Qilu Alliance Platform)和文庙(Confucious Temple)等会带你体验巨野的古文化。Yongfeng Tower, Qilu Alliance Platform and the Confucious Temple will make you_________.
3.作为农民绘画之乡（Hometown of Farmers’ Painting）的巨野，其工笔牡丹画（the peony meticulous painting）在全国，甚至是在全世界越来越受欢迎。
As the Hometown of Farmers’ Painting, the peony meticulous paintings_______________________________.
4.漫步公园，你不但可以呼吸鲜花的芬芳、聆听鸟类的歌唱，你还可以欣赏当地传统的戏剧（traditional operas）。______, not only can you______, ______, but also you can_________________.
5.更为美妙的是，为更好地了解当地的文化和习俗，你可以在小饭馆品尝传统的小吃、喝一杯当地的美酒。_________,____________,you can enjoy some traditional snacks and drink a glass of local wine in the eateries.
Dear Peter，
I’m glad to learn that you’re coming to our hometown for a visit. I’m honored to share something about it.
Looking forward to your coming.
yours Lihua
While-writing Organizing writing
1.Exchange your writings. Use the checklists to give feedback on each other’s draft.
2. Polish your drafts and share with your partners.
yes No
1.Is the description well-organised and easy to read
2.Has the writer included any sensory details
3.Does the writer use specific words and give examples
4.Is the ending effective
5.Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes
6. Is the handwriting beautiful
Post-writing pairwork：Evaluate and polish your writings
Dear Peter，
Learning that you’re coming to our hometown for a visit, I’m honored to share something about it.
Located in the southwest of Shandong province, Juye has a history of more than 2000years, which has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. In this sacred land, there’re many places of interest, such as Yongfeng Tower, Qilu Alliance Platform and Confucious Temple, and by visiting them in person will you experience the rich culture of Juye. As the Hometown of Farmers’ Painting, the peony meticulous paintings are a true feast for the eyes, which are becoming more and more popular in the world. Walking in the park, not only can you breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers, hear the birds’ songs, but also you can enjoy local trational operas. Better yet, to have a better understanding of local customs and history, you can enjoy some traditional snacks and drink a glass of local wine in the eateries.
With all this beauty,it’s not surprising that more and more visitors come here to explore its culture and traditons.
Looking forward to your coming.
yours Lihua
yes No
1.Have you figured out the organization and language features of the passage
2.Can you describe a place with any sensory details
3.Can you tell your own stories to the world
4.Are you becoming more and more confident about your city
Self—assessment
homework
Task1.Appreciate your classmates’ good works and try to learn from them.
Task2.Try to introduce a place you like and exchange them with your classmates.

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