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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册单元重难点高频易错题专练（人教版）
Unit4 单元话题书面表达专练
一、书面表达
1． 你的朋友李梅在昨天的英语考试中考得不好， 她情绪低落。假如你是Tom, 请你给她写一封信， 给她提一些建议， 让她有个好心情。
要点:
1. 李梅情绪低落的原因；
2. 你如何安慰她；
3. 你的建议。
要求:
1. 可适当进行发挥；
2. 文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名
3. 词数90左右。
Dear Li Mei，
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Yours，
Tom
2． Teens Feelings是一个国际青少年网站。以下内容取自该网站。假设你是李华。请你用英语回复一封邮件,给Eric提出2~3条建议。
TeensFeelings
MyproblemisthatI'mshy. IfeelnervouswhenIanswertheteachers'questionsinclass. Ialwayshatetotalkinfrontofabiggroupofpeople. Iprefertostayathomeratherthangooutandhavefun. Everybodylaughsatme. WhatshouldIdo
Eric, England
要求:1. 不要出现学生本人信息;2. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．为了更好地开展全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法。
要求：80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
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4．假如你是赵娜，你们学校英文广播站正在征集文章，文章的标题是"How to deal with the stress in our life"。请你根据以下提示，写一篇文章投稿。
提示: ⑴talk with our parents
⑵have a good rest
⑶take up a hobby…
要求：⑴语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
⑵不少于70词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to deal with the stress in our life
Nowadays, more and more students are under great stress. It is important for us to deal with it properly.
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5．在学习和生活中，每个人都会有苦恼的事。假设你叫Mandy，你的好朋友Nancy遇到了一些烦恼的事。请根据下面的提示， 给她写一封80词左右的邮件， 并提出自己的建议。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
※shy；don't have many friends at school；
※math is difficult；often get poor grades；
※difficult to talk to her parents
Dear Nancy，
I'm sorry that you have so many problems.Here is my advice for you.
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I hope you will feel happy again.
Yours，
Mandy
6．假如你是王峰，你的笔友Xiao Hui最近沉迷于手机游戏，为此你非常担心。请你根据下面的提示给Xiao Hui写一封信，谈谈你的看法。
提示：1）Xiao Hui过去成绩很好，积极参加学校的各项活动；2）Xiao Hui现在对学习没兴趣，上课不专心；3）你的看法(至少两点)。
要求：90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be crazy about…对……着迷；have no interest in…对……没兴趣；make a balance between…and…平衡……和……
Dear Xiao Hui,
I hear that you lose yourself in mobile games. I really feel worried about you. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Wang Feng
7．假如你是季明，Mike是你的美国笔友，当听说他染上了吸烟的坏习惯时，你感到很难过。现在请你给Mike写一封电子邮件，陈述吸烟的坏处，并劝他戒烟。
要求：1）80词左右；
2）电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：smoke吸烟；lung cancer肺癌；cigarette香烟
Dear Mike，
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Yours．
Li Ming
答案解析部分
1．Dear Li Mei，
I am sorry to hear that you did badly in the English exam yesterday. You are feeling upset about it, but it doesn't matter. You can do something to make yourself feel happy.
First, you can ask your teachers for help. Second, you'd better do some sports with your classmates when you are free. It can help you relax. Third, you can listen to your favorite music. It is also a good way to make you feel happy. At the same time, you should spend more time on your English. If you study hard, you will do well in it next time.
I hope you will soon become happy again.
Yours，
Tom
这是一篇材料作文和应用文作文写作。要求以Tom的身份，给李梅写一封信。信件需包含以下内容：描述李梅情绪低落的原因；如何安慰，也就是给出建议，最后是提出祝愿和希望。根据所给材料提示，文章应使用用第一、二人称。时态为一般现在时，同时用一般将来时提出希望。写作时，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：be sorry to do sth；ask for help；at the same time；study hard 等 以及句型结构，如：If you study hard, you will do well in it next time.（条件状语从句）等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
2．Dear Eric,
I know that you prefer to stay at home rather than go out and have fun. That's because you are shy. You feel nervous when you answer the teachers' questions.
Please don't worry about what others think of you. You'd better do something to change. First, try to talk with your classmates or help them when they need. Then try to answer one easy question in front of the class. If you start, you will feel much better. And it's a good idea to go out and have fun doing sports with your friends. If you can do these, you will be more confident.
Yours,
Li Hua
本文是一篇材料作文，要求写一封邮件，要提出2-3条建议，根据所给内容提示各方面的内容逐一进行了阐述。目的明确：文章直接针对Eric的害羞问题，提供了具体的建议和鼓励。建议具体：不仅指出了问题，还给出了实际可行的步骤，帮助Eric逐步克服害羞。语气友好：整篇文章的语气友好、鼓励，传达了对朋友的关心和支持。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活。内容丰富，语言连贯，从内容上看，Eric遇到了一些令他困惑的问题，所以回帖应该是针对他的问题来提出建议。时态用一般现在时，人称问第一人称，符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇文章是一封鼓励信，旨在帮助Eric克服害羞，变得更加自信和外向。以下是对这篇文章的和亮点分析：
亮点之处：
问题识别：文章准确地识别了Eric的问题——害羞和不自信。
逐步解决方案：提出了从易到难的解决方案，如先与同学交流，再在课堂上回答问题，最后参与体育活动。
正面激励：文章通过鼓励Eric改变，传达了积极向上的信息。
好词好句：
"Please don't worry about what others think of you."（请不要担心别人怎么看你。） - 这句话鼓励Eric放下对他人看法的担忧，专注于自我成长。
"You'd better do something to change."（你最好做些事情来改变。） - 使用了"had better"结构，提出了建议的语气。
"Try to talk with your classmates or help them when they need."（尝试与同学交谈或在他们需要时帮助他们。） - 这句话提供了具体的行动建议，鼓励社交互动。
"If you start, you will feel much better."（如果你开始行动，你会感到好多了。） - 这句话预示了积极行动的正面效果。
"And it's a good idea to go out and have fun doing sports with your friends."（和朋友们一起出去进行体育活动是个不错的主意。） - 这句话提倡通过体育活动增进友谊和自信。
整体而言，这封信通过具体的建议和鼓励的话语，旨在帮助Eric克服害羞，提升自信，语言简洁，情感真挚，是一篇充满正能量的鼓励信。
3．Hello, everyone!
As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can make us know about the world. For reading, I have some good advice.
First, we can build lots of small libraries in our city. Second, if there is a reading corner in a supermarket, we can do some reading while having a rest. Of course, if new books can be introduced often, more people will be interested in reading.
I hope my advice can work and more people will keep reading.
这是一篇应用文，要求写一篇发言稿，提出自己对有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境的想法。写作内容包括有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境看法。根据内容要求可知本文的主要时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意并列连词的使用和主谓一致问题，写作中要注意上下文的过渡和逻辑，要符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文对有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境看法进行了详细论述。内容全面、详尽，意思连贯，表达清楚，时态和人称的运用灵活准确。其中使用的there be等句型使得文章的逻辑性大大增强；使用的make sb. do sth.使某人做某事，be interested in对……感兴趣，keep doing sth.坚持做某事等短语增加了文章的可读性。日常进行写作训练注意多运用常见句式和短语，使表达更为流畅。
4．How to deal with the stress in our life
Nowadays, more and more students are under great stress. It is important for us to deal with it properly.
First, when we have the stress about life or studies, we can talk with our parents. They are very glad to help us. Second, we should have a good rest at night and shouldn't stay up late. Third, we can take up a hobby such as playing the piano, playing badminton or reading books. These can help us relax and forget the stress. Fourth, we can go out with our friends and enjoy ourselves.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求以"How to deal with the stress in our life"（如何应对生活中的压力）为题，从与父母谈心、休息好、养成良好习惯等角度进行写作，提纲中给出的是应对压力的一些方法，因此文章可以使用总分总结构或总分结构，在论述应对压力的方法时要使用表示次序的词是文章层次分明，引出应对方法时要适当补充自己的观点或具体事例。
考查提纲作文。所给例文采用了总分结构，总起句“ Nowadays, more and more students are under great stress. It is important for us to deal with it properly.”单独成段，然后用“First……Second……Tird……”逐条引出应对方法，并且使用了be glad to do、stay up late、help sb. do sth.等评价相应的做法，可用such as短语引出具体的例证，play the piano、play badminton、read books属于具体的事例，文章有建议有观点，事例充足，结构完整。
5．Dear Nancy，
I'm sorry that you have so many problems. Here is my advice for you. Firstly，you say that you don't have many friends at school. I think you should join some clubs and make new friends there. Secondly，you find math is difficult and often get poor grades in exams. You should ask the teacher or your classmates for help and do more exercises. Then you'll be good at it. Finally，you think it's not easy to talk with your parents. Why not open your heart to them and tell them how you feel？I'm sure they'll understand you.
I hope you will feel happy again.
Yours，
Mandy
首先认真审题，你的好朋友Nancy遇到了一些烦恼的事，给她写一封邮件，提出自己的建议。根据提示的问题写出针对性建议，要使建议符合逻辑，文章要通顺、连贯，有条理。
这篇作文根据题目要求，写出了针对性的建议，作文结构清晰明了，语句通顺、连贯，字数适当，使用了提建议的常用句式例如：I think you should ···，Why not do sth.等句式使文章增色不少。
6． I hear that you lose yourself in mobile games. I really feel worried about you. You used to do well in your lessons and take an active part in the activities at school. But now you are so crazy about mobile games that you have no interest in your schoolwork, and don't listen to the teachers carefully in class.
If you spend too much time playing mobile games, you will have less time to study. I hope you can make a balance between your schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not take part in some outdoor activities when you feel bored As your friend, I'll be glad to share your happiness and sadness.
Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Wang Feng
这是一篇提纲作文，描述你的笔友 Xiao Hui的现在和过去的变化。结合提示写作要点包括 Xiao Hui过去的情况，例如学习成绩很好，积极参加学校集体活动； Xiao Hui现在学习情况，对学习不感兴趣，上课不专心听讲；你针对Xiao Hui的情况提出自己两点的建议。文体记叙文。人称用第一和第二人称。时态应用一般过去时（介绍Xiao Hui过去的情况），一般现在时态（介绍 Xiao Hui现在得情况）和一般将来时态（建议）。写作中适当运用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
这篇短文描述笔友 Xiao Hui的现在和过去的变化及作者的建议，包含了题中要求的全部信息。连词but 和 and使用得当。文中还恰当的运用了宾语从句和状语从句。I hear that you lose yourself in mobile games. （宾语从句）； If you spend too much time playing mobile games, you will have less time to study. （条件状语从句）。
7．One possible version：
Dear Mike,
I'm very sorry to hear that you smoke．We all know that smoking is bad for people's health．If you smoke，you may get some serious illnesses such as lung cancer more easily．At the same time，smoking is really a waste of money．If you smoke，you have to spend a lot of money on cigarettes．And also, careless smokers may cause fires That's very dangerous．So please give up smoking at once .I know it's difficult for you，but you have to!
Yours,
Li Ming
应用文写作。本文要求给Mike写一封电子邮件，陈述吸烟的坏处，并劝他戒烟。首先根据已给条件明确写作要点。再根据要点，写出关键词，短语和句子。最后组词成句，连句成篇。注意写作要包含材料所给内容，时态主要为一般现在时，人称为第一第二人称。
本文详细、全面的阐述了吸烟的坏处，并包含了材料要求的所有内容。首句交代了邮件的起因，后续用两个条件状语从句表明了：|吸烟的害处，层层递进，条理清晰。其中使用的一些短语，如 such as 、At the same time、give up 等。日常学习中要注意掌握一些常用短语和句式，以便在写作时应用。

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