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On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.
Mac遭遇狼的续写
续写要点
第一段续写要点：详细描绘汽车停下后，Paul 和 Beeky 从车上下来的具体动作和表情，如他们匆忙打开车门，脸上满是焦急。深入刻画 Paul 拿棍子和 Beeky 呼喊时的神态与语气，突出他们的勇敢。描写狼被惊吓后的反应，包括它的动作、叫声，展现其凶狠。着重刻画 Mac 冲向汽车时的狼狈与急切，以及他在被保护过程中的心理变化，从极度恐惧到逐渐安心。
第二段续写要点：细致描写其他两名骑行者到达时的惊讶表情和动作，比如他们刹车的声音、瞪大的双眼。讲述他们听闻 Mac 遭遇后的反应，是懊悔没陪在 Mac 身边，还是庆幸他平安无事。描述众人决定一起行动后的具体安排，如如何将自行车装车，在车内的座位安排等。最后，补充旅途中大家交流的细节，如谁先开口讲述经历，其他人的回应等。
情感线
第一段中，Mac 从被狼追赶的极度恐惧，到看到汽车停下的一丝希望，再到被 Paul 和 Beeky 保护时的安心与感激，情感起伏剧烈。Paul 和 Beeky 则从看到狼时的震惊，转变为保护 Mac 的勇敢与坚定。第二段中，其他骑行者从最初看到场景的惊讶，到得知 Mac 安全后的欣慰，最后在旅途中因共同经历而产生的亲密与欢乐，情感逐渐趋于轻松愉悦，大家的情感因这次意外紧密相连。
故事线
独自骑行遇狼：Mac 独自骑行时，一只狼突然出现并追赶他，Mac 多次用防熊喷雾驱赶，但狼持续攻击。
汽车出现：Paul 和 Beeky 开车路过，发现 Mac 被狼追赶，汽车突然停在 Mac 面前。
保护 Mac：Paul 和 Beeky 下车，Paul 拿棍子，Beeky 呼喊，共同保护 Mac，狼暂时被吓退。
其他骑行者到达：几分钟后，Mac 的另外两名骑行伙伴赶到，看到眼前场景十分震惊。
共同决定：众人决定一起行动，将 Mac 的自行车装上车，乘坐 Paul 和 Beeky 的车前往附近城镇。
旅途交流：在前往城镇的路上，大家分享这次意外冒险的经历，欢声笑语，让旅程更难忘。
主旨升华句
This thrilling encounter vividly demonstrates that in the face of danger, the kindness and courage of strangers can be a powerful force, turning a terrifying situation into a chance for connection and shared experience.（这次惊心动魄的遭遇生动地表明，在危险面前，陌生人的善良和勇气可以成为一股强大的力量，将可怕的局面转变为建立联系和共享经历的契机。）
Through Mac's ordeal and the subsequent help from Paul, Beeky, and his fellow cyclists, we learn that unity and mutual assistance are the keys to overcoming adversity, making the journey of life more secure and meaningful.（通过 Mac 的磨难以及随后来自 Paul、Beeky 和他的骑行伙伴的帮助，我们了解到团结互助是克服逆境的关键，让人生旅程更加安全且有意义。）
The story serves as a poignant reminder that unexpected challenges can bring out the best in people, fostering a sense of community and camaraderie that enriches our lives and makes us stronger.（这个故事深刻地提醒我们，意外的挑战能够激发出人们最好的一面，培养出一种社区感和友情，丰富我们的生活并让我们变得更强大。）
In the end, Mac's adventure teaches us that even in the wildest and most unpredictable situations, there is always hope, and the bonds we form with others along the way are what truly matter.（最终，Mac 的冒险告诉我们，即使在最狂野、最不可预测的情况下，也总有希望，而我们在途中与他人建立的联系才是真正重要的。）
This tale of survival and kindness shows that every encounter, whether with danger or with helpful strangers, is an opportunity for growth and a chance to appreciate the beauty of human nature.（这个关于生存与善良的故事表明，每一次相遇，无论是面对危险还是遇到乐于助人的陌生人，都是成长的机会，也是欣赏人性之美的契机。）
写作示范一（细腻情感风）
第一段续写
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Beeky flung open the car doors, their eyes wide with alarm. Paul, with a sense of urgency, darted to the trunk and retrieved a thick, sturdy stick. Beeky, her voice filled with determination, let out a series of loud shouts, her face flushed with the effort. The wolf, startled by the sudden commotion, took a few hesitant steps back, its ears flattening against its head. But it quickly regained its composure, growling deep in its throat, its eyes fixed menacingly on Mac. Mac, his breath ragged and his heart pounding wildly, sprinted towards the car. His legs felt like jelly, and his hands trembled. Paul and Beeky positioned themselves in front of Mac, forming a protective barrier. Paul brandished the stick, ready to strike if the wolf charged. Beeky continued to shout, her voice unwavering. Mac, shielded by their brave actions, felt a wave of relief wash over him. He was filled with gratitude for these strangers who had so selflessly come to his aid.
第二段续写
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Their bikes screeched to a halt as they took in the scene before them. Their eyes widened in shock, and their mouths dropped open. One of them, Tom, exclaimed, "What on earth happened " Mac, still slightly shaken, recounted his terrifying encounter with the wolf. The other cyclist, Ben, let out a sigh of relief. "Thank goodness you're okay," he said. The group quickly decided to stick together. They carefully lifted Mac's bike and placed it in the car's trunk. As they climbed into the car, Paul and Beeky offered to drive them to a nearby town. During the drive, Mac began to share the details of his escape, his voice filled with a mix of fear and excitement. The others listened intently, interjecting with comments and questions. Laughter soon filled the car as they realized how lucky Mac had been. The unexpected adventure had brought them all closer, making the journey an unforgettable one.
写作示范二（简洁明快风）
第一段续写
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Beeky jumped out. Paul grabbed a stick from the trunk and Beeky yelled at the wolf. The wolf backed off a bit but kept growling. Mac rushed to the car, breathing hard. Paul and Beeky stood in front of him, protecting him. Mac was really thankful for their help.
第二段续写
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They were shocked to see the wolf and Mac. When they heard the story, they were glad Mac was safe. The group decided to go together. They put Mac's bike in the car and got in. Paul and Beeky drove them to a nearby town. On the way, they talked about the adventure and laughed. It made the trip more fun.
参考答案
The car abrup tly stopped inf ront of him. A woman hurriedly opened the car door and stretched out her arms, shouting out loud, “Get in!” Mac grabbed her by the hand without hesitation, leaving his bicycle lying randomly on the road and jumped into the car like crazy. The moment he shut the door, he caught a glimpse of the fierce eyes and hungry looks of the wolf by the door. A cold feeling crept his whole body, making him shiver all over. Fortunately, the car had eventually left the wolf far behind, leaving him sighing with relief. Calming down, the three started to chat, Mac thanked his new friends Paul and Becky and afterwards they pulled over to wait for Mac’s companions.
A f ew minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Surprisingly, they should bring Mac’s bike! Immediately they saw Mac, their worried looks turned into smiles. “What happened We were so worried when seeing your bike.” anxiously one asked. After Mac explained the narrow escape he just had, they exclaimed how lucky it was for him to be saved. They expressed their sincere gratitude to Paul and Becky again and again, exchanged each other’s phone numbers and left the dangerous zone without a second thought. On the way home, the gentle night breeze relieved Mac from the aftershock a little bit and he couldn’t wait to share this adventure with his wife and children and show them the kindness of the world.

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