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英語短文改错专练（一）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A
Growing up, I had a very lovingly family. I remember very fondly the games I used to playing with my brother. Especially, in the evening, we went to a nearby park with our sports equipments. These memories in the park is very dear to me. Once, my whole family visited the park but we had an incredible day. My mother packed pleasant dishes, that we ate up in the park. And my father took so much photos that day. Whenever I look at these pictures, the memory is clear that it seems like it happened yesterday. Thus, my childhood memories mean a lot to me and made me smile when I am in the low spirits.
B
ERNIE Bot, a question-answering system developed by researchers at Baidu, has been a wonder addition to my life. Why I appreciate most about ERNIE Bot is that its ability to learn and adapt to my preferences and interests. Whether I want to check out the late news, seek advice on a personal issue, and just have an informal chat, ERNIE Bot is always up to the task. I feel like owned a personal assistant who is available 24 / 7. Besides, I'm amazed by its capabilities in various area such as language translation and creative writing. It's true impressive how advanced AI technology has became. In short, I look forward many more interesting conversations and interactions with it in the future.
C
Practising kindness makes life meaningful and this joy can be attaining even through small acts. Recently, I offered my seat to a elderly man on a bus, who blessed me in appreciation. My own happiness which outdid the appreciation he expressed. Last winter, I visited one of my neighbour, who had to stay in bed because illness. She mentioned she hadn't yet enjoyed vegetables that season. I knew they had been prepared at home that day, so I rush to get her some. She was surprising and thanked me sincere. I still remember the joy on her face, the same joy I experienced too. So, why holding back when the cost of sympathy is so little and its benefits are so larger
D
While visiting my aunt on a wind day last week, I heard a bird crying — it had blown out of its nest. I kept watch for hours to see if its mother would find it, but she was a no-show. The little bird had very limiting flying skills, so I took it home and gave it some food. Fortunate, the bird survived the night, wrapping up in tissues in a container. The next morning, I placed them in a cage outdoors. Its crying attracted the attention of an adult bird, which fed it several insect through the cage, and it readily accepts them. I am thankful for that bird's help with and believe its future will be bright.
E
Last weekend, our class volunteered for a beach cleanup day. You wouldn't believe any of the waste we found on the shore. We picked up metal cans, plastic bags, and even the couple of magazines. To our surprises, a huge wave rushed onto the beach and washed up a treasure box covering with something shining. My heart started racing as we managed to opening it. There were in least 100 coins inside! My classmates and I shouted, “We're rich!” and started jumping up and down excitingly. But when I had grabbed some coins, they slipped out of my hands. The coins turned to be some candies. Anyway, we had a great day because we did something worthwhile and significantly.
F
As a young child I am attracted by the reproduction of Renoir's Luncheon of the Boating Party that hung in my aunt's living room. I was very envious of a young lady who was allowed have her dog at the table. Last summer, I was very luck to visit the National Gallery of Australia with my mother and saw the original in my person. I knew that the boating party were some friend of Renoir's. However, I didn't know their connections to the artist if I read an article call Renoir's Invitation To A Party a few days ago. I am now eager to learning more about Renoir, whose eye for beauty made him international popular.
G
Everyone understands what important knowledge is. While every educated person may not be intelligent, it is true that every qualify person has had an education. It may seem like strange statement but it is true. When you have the treasure of knowledge, and you can drive a car or even fly a plane. Similar, you can solve riddles with knowledge. And it enables you to do little so well as big things. When you have knowledge, you can stop yourself from fall into the same trap. Of course, knowledge can only be gaining through hard works. In short, it will make you a successful person and helps you gain power and respect someday.
答案
短文改错专练（一）
A
1. ... very lovingly family. lovingly → loving
2. ... used to playing ... playing → play
3. ... our sports equipments. equipments → equipment
4. ... is very dear ... is → are
5. ... but we had ... but → and
6. ... that we ate ... that → which
7. ... so much photos ... much → many
8. ... is clear that ... clear前加so
9. ... made me smile ... made → make
10. ... the low spirits. 去掉the
B
1. ... a wonder addition ... wonder → wonderful
2. Why I appreciate ... Why → What
3. ... that its ability ... 去掉that
4. ... the late news ... late → latest
5. ... and just have ... and → or
6. ... feel like owned ... owned → owning
7. ... in various area ... area → areas
8. It's true impressive ... true → truly
9. ... technology has became. became → become
10. ... I look forward ... forward后加to
C
1. ... can be attaining ... attaining → attained
2. ... a elderly man ... a → an
3. ... which outdid the ... 去掉which
4. ... of my neighbour ... neighbour → neighbours
5. ... bed because illness. because后加of
6. ... so I rush ... rush → rushed
7. She was surprising ... surprising → surprised
8. ... thanked me sincere. sincere → sincerely
9. ... why holding back ... holding → hold
10. ... are so larger larger → large
D
1. ... a wind day ... wind → windy
2. ... it had blown ... had后加been
3. I kept watch ... watch → watching
4. ... limiting flying skills ... limiting → limited
5. Fortunate, the bird ... Fortunate → Fortunately
6. ... wrapping up in ... wrapping → wrapped
7. ... I placed them ... them → it
8. ... it several insect ... insect → insects
9. ... readily accepts them. accepts → accepted
10. ... help with and ... 去掉with
E
1. ... any of the ... any → some
2. ... the couple of ... the → a
3. To our surprises ... surprises → surprise
4. ... box covering with ... covering → covered
5. ... to opening it. opening → open
6. ... in least 100 ... in → at
7. ... and down excitingly. excitingly → excitedly
8. ... when I had ... 去掉had
9. ... turned to be ... turned后加out
10. ... worthwhile and significantly. significantly → significant
F
1. ... I am attracted ... am → was
2. ... a young lady ... a → the
3. ... who was allowed ... allowed后加to
4. ... very luck to ... luck → lucky
5. ... in my person. 去掉my
6. ... some friend of ... friend → friends
7. ... if I read ... if → until
8. ... an article call ... call → called
9. ... eager to learning ... learning → learn
10. ... him international popular. international → internationally
G
1. ... understands what important ... what → how
2. ... every qualify person ... qualify → qualified
3. ... like strange statement ... like后加a
4. ... and you can ... 去掉and
5. Similar, you can ... Similar → Similarly
6. ... so well as ... so → as
7. ... fall into the ... fall → falling
8. ... only be gaining ... gaining → gained
9. ... through hard works. works → work
10. ... and helps you ... helps → help

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