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Module 3 单元写作--2024-2025学年九年级英语下册重点题型精准练（外研版）
1．世界在发展，生活在变化。请你根据以下提示内容和相关图片，以“How life changes!”为题用英语写一篇短文。
In the Past Now
①
② old and dirty house new and clean house
③
… (请再列举1~2个方面) (请再列举1~2个方面)
注意：
1. 请先简要介绍表格中的3组图片，再根据生活实际列举1~2个方面；
2. 词数：80~100。
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2．近年来，中国在全球舞台上展现出了令人瞩目的进步与变革。校园文化节即将到来，你所在的学校将举行以“Proud of My Motherland”为题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李华，请你结合以下图文提示，写一篇英语演讲稿，简要阐述中国这些年在环境、科技以及传播中国文化等方面的发展与变化，并谈谈你的感受。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Proud of My Motherland
Good morning, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
3．假设你是李华，以下是你的美国笔友Alex发给你的一封电子邮件，请你根据该邮件内容给Alex回一封邮件。
Hi Li Hua, I am going to China next week. I am interested in Chinese culture, especially the festivals. Can you introduce one of them When is the festival How do you celebrate it What do you think of it Hope to hear from you as soon as possible. Yours, Alex
要求：
(1)邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；
(2)词数：90-110；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
4．人工智能AI（Artificial Intelligence) 技术的快速发展给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化，假如你是Li Hua，请你谈谈你对人工智能的看法。
写作要点：
1. 告诉人们不必担忧人工智能的发展；
2. 例举至少2点人工智能的优点；
3. 谈谈你对人工智能的发展期待
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5．为庆祝2024年国庆节的到来，你校英语社团拟举办以“China in My Eyes”为题的征文活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下我们亲爱的祖国！
Our goals (目标)：
渴求知识；努力学习；
永不放弃；实现梦想。
要求：
（1）短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）语言表达准确，语义连贯、通顺；
（3）文中不要出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
（4）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
相关词汇（高铁：high-speed railway 新能源汽车：new energy cars）
China in My Eyes
Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you!_
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6．随着互联网技术的发展，扫码支付已成为主要支付手段之一。你的英语老师Miss Gao想知道你对扫码支付的看法，请你用英语写 一篇短文，向她表达你的看法。
内容包括：
(1) 简单介绍支付方式的变化与发展；
(2) 扫码支付的优势；
(3) 扫码支付在日常生活中的运用 。
参考词汇：cash现金，e-payment电子支付
作文要求：
(1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
(2) 语句连贯，词数80个左右。
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7．最近10多年来，中国老百姓的生活发生了巨大的变化。你的奶奶亲眼见证了生活的巨大变化，请根据奶奶的所见所闻，以“Our life has changed”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：（1）生活环境的改变；（2）人们娱乐方式的变化；（3）交通的变化；（4）……
要求：（1）词数：80—120 词左右；（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在班级的名称。
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8．As the bar chart shows, ___________________. (说明图表反映的问题)
Several factors contribute to _____________. And, ________________. Furthermore, _____________. All these result in ______________. (分析问题产生的原因)
However, _____________ is faced with some problems. With ____________, the effect of _____________ is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay your attention to ______________, but not just to ______________. (提出解决措施)
9．近年来，中国发生了翻天覆地的变化，取得了世界瞩目的成就，例如航空航天技术的重大突破、杂交水稻的成功培育、两次奥运会的成功举办、汉语热和中国游的全球兴起……学校英文网站正在开展以“厉害了，我的国！” 为主题的征文活动。请你以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文投稿。
写作要点：
1. 简述最让你感到惊讶和自豪的两三件事，并写出你的感受；
2. 为了将来能够更好地为祖国的建设做贡献，现在你能做什么来让自己成为更好的人？
写作要求：
1.书写规范，要点齐全，条理清晰，适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词汇：aerospace industry 航空航天工业；develop hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻；Olympic Games 奥运会
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world. For example,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．随着社会的不断发展和进步，人们的生活方式发生了翻天覆地的变化。请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍一下人们在过去和现在的生活方式发生了哪些变化。
具体要求如下：
1.包含思维导图的所有信息，可适当增加内容；
2.重点谈谈人们在过去和现在生活方式的变化；
3.文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
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11．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下要点提示，以“Great Changes Around Me”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：1. In the past（narrow roads，…houses，air…，water…）；2. At present（wide and clean roads，different kinds of transportation，…houses，…sky)；3. Your feelings…
要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现任何真实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；3. 90词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
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12．Changing Leisure Activities
提示：不同时代的孩子有不同的休闲娱乐活动。父辈们以前的休闲活动有看露天电影、滚铁环、跳绳等，你的休闲娱乐活动有哪些？请以“Changing Leisure Activities”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的休闲娱乐活动与父辈们相比，有什么优缺点？
参考词汇： watch movies in the open air, roll iron rings, jump ropes.
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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13．提示：中国在近10年之间发生了很大的变化。你的家随着国家的强大也一定发生了很多的改变。请你根据下表提示，以“Changes in my family”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你家的变化。
项目 二十年前 现在
房子 小而旧 大而新
通讯方式 写信 电话或手机
交通方式 步行或骑自行车 开私家车
生活 贫穷但安宁 富裕并愉快
其他 …… ……
要求：
1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60；
2.文中不得使用真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计；
3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
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14．党的二十大的召开取得了全面的胜利。在党的领导下，中国发生了翻天覆地的变化。请根据图片提示，以“How Life Has Changed!”为题写一篇英语短文。
In the past Now
①
②
③
你的感受。
要求：1. 要点齐全，可以适当发挥。
2. 80-100词，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。
How Life Has Changed!
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15．随着社会的快速发展，我们的生活发生着巨大的变化，尤其是在交通、旅游、购物等方面。假如你是李华，John是一名不折不扣的“中国迷”，尤其对近些年来中国的这些变化非常感兴趣。请你写一封 e-mail向他详细介绍。
参考要点：
（1）What are the changes
（2）How do the changes influence your life
（3）...
要求：
（1）词数100左右，格式已给出
（2）文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear John,
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《Module 3 单元写作--2024-2025学年九年级英语下册重点题型精准练（外研版）》参考答案
1．例文
How life changes!
Great changes have taken place in our lives.
In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV to get the latest information. But now they use mobile phones and computers. People in the past lived in the old and dirty houses. How about now They live in the new and clean houses. As for the ways of communication, they ever communicated with their friends by posting letters and postcards. But now, emails, WeChat and QQ are widely used. Besides, they used to go to the shop to buy things. Now they prefer to shop online. What’s more, people went to work on foot or by bus. Nowadays most people take the underground to go to work or drive to work instead.
In a word, people are living a better life than before.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍过去人们的生活方式和现在人们的生活方式；
第三步，书写结语
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②communicate with和某人交流
③prefer to do sth.更喜欢做某事
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
As for the ways of communication, they ever communicated with their friends by posting letters and postcards. (动名词作宾语)
2．One possible version:
Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.
Great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has improved a lot. Clear rivers and blue sky return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. More and more foreigners come to China for a visit very year.
What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. We have been successfully launched Shenzhou-19, making China’s space dream a reality. I’m proud of my motherland and I hope she’ll be better and better in the future.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：文章使用“现在完成时”为主；
③ 提示：结合图文内容，简要讲述中国在环境、科技和文化传播方面的变化，并表达对祖国的自豪感；不要存在语法错误，注意上下文的衔接。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表达荣幸并简述中国近年来的变化；
第二步，具体描述环境改善和文化传播等方面的进步；
第三步，讲述中国在科技领域特别是航天行业取得的成就；
第四步，总结并表达对祖国未来的美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①take place 发生
②for example 例如
③be proud of 以……为傲
④in the future 在未来
[高分句型]
①Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②I’m proud of my motherland and I hope she’ll be better and better in the future. (and连接并列句；省略that的宾语从句)
3．
I’m happy to hear that you are coming to China. I know you are interested in some Chinese traditional festivals. Now I’ll introduce my favourite one to you. I like the Lantern Festival best.
It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. We celebrate it at the end of the Spring Festival. We go out to watch colorful lanterns and guess lantern riddles with our family. Usually, we eat sweet rice dumplings called yuanxiao. We also set off fireworks for fun. It’s really interesting! We like the Lantern Festival very much. If you have any further questions, please write to me as soon as possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。
②时态：本文主要采用一般现在时；
③提示：本文需要结合自身实际，介绍自己最喜欢的节日，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己喜欢的节日；
第二步，介绍该节日庆祝的时间，如何庆祝等内容。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in...对……感兴趣
②introduce...to...将……介绍……
③set off释放
[高分句型]
①I know you are interested in some Chinese traditional festivals.(宾语从句)
4．例文
Hello everyone, My name is Li Hua. I’d like to share my thoughts on the rapid development of Artificial Intelligence, or AI. First of all, I believe we shouldn’t worry too much about its progress. AI is designed to help us, not replace us.
There are many advantages of AI. For instance, it can make our learning more efficient. With AI, we can get personalized learning plans and instant feedback. Another great point is that AI improves our daily lives. It helps in tasks like home automation, making our homes smarter and safer.
As for me, I hope AI can continue to develop in ways that benefit everyone. I dream of a future where AI assists doctors in treating patients more effectively and aids farmers in growing crops sustainably.
In conclusion, AI holds great potential for a brighter future. Let’s embrace it with an open mind!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明人们不必担忧人工智能的发展；
第二步，具体列举至少两点人工智能的优点，并介绍自己对人工智能发展的期待；
第三步，书写结语，总结自己的观点，强调人工智能的积极作用，并表达对未来人工智能发展的期待和信心。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development快速发展
②personalized个性化的
③instant feedback即时反馈
④home automation家庭自动化
⑤sustainably可持续地
[高分句型]
①AI is designed to help us, not replace us. (被动语态)
②I dream of a future where AI assists doctors in treating patients more effectively and aids farmers in growing crops sustainably. (定语从句)
5．例文
China in My Eyes
Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you!
As the National Day celebrations draw near, I find myself reflecting on the beauty and depth of my native country, China. The essence of China, in my eyes, is a tapestry of rich history, vibrant culture, and unwavering spirit. In ancient times, Shen Nong invented tea. And China has many traditional festivals with a long history, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Spring Festival, and so on. In modern times, the wide application of high-speed rail and new energy cars has made people’s life more convenient. Wechat Pay allows us to shop without carrying cash. We should thirst for knowledge and study hard. At the same time, in order to realize our dreams, we should never give up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“我眼中的中国”来引出下文中对中国的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“传统文化、现代科技和我们的目标”三方面入手，重点介绍我眼中的中国；
第三步，书写结束语，号召大家努力学习，实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①draw near临近
②reflecting on反思
③essence本质
④vibrant充满活力的
⑤unwavering坚定不移的
⑥the wide application of ……的广泛应用
⑦allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
⑧thirst for渴望
⑨at the same time同时
[高分句型]
As the National Day celebrations draw near, I find myself reflecting on the beauty and depth of my native country, China.（as引导的时间状语从句）
6．例文：
When was the last time that you paid by cash For me, it was a long time ago. With the development of Internet technology, e-payment, especially paying by scanning QR codes, has become a popular method of payment.
Paying by scanning QR codes is really convenient. And it only takes people a few seconds to finish the payment, no matter how much the money is. People might use this method every day, while they are shopping, eating, taking the subway and so on. When you need to pay, you might use this method without thinking.
In a word, paying by scanning QR codes makes people’s lives easier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍支付方式的变化与发展；。
第二步，介绍扫码支付的优势以及扫码支付在日常生活中的运用；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of随着……的发展
②a popular method of payment一种流行的付款方式
③a few seconds几秒钟
[高分句型]
①When you need to pay, you might use this method without thinking. (when引导时间状语从句)
②In a word, paying by scanning QR codes makes people’s lives easier. (动名词作主语)
7．例文
Our life has changed
Our life has changed greatly these years.
People used to live in small, old houses. Now people live in big, tall buildings. With the progress of society, now the family is getting smaller and smaller, generally only one or two children. In this way, children can enjoy a good life. There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, which makes travelling easier. There are many more activities in people’s free time, such as mountain climbing, fishing and so on. There are many high-quality programs on TV, such as Beijing Opera and some old movies.
In a word, our life is better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍生活的变化，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍不同方面的变化；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做某事
②in one’s free time在某人的空闲时间
③such as例如
④in a word总的来说
[高分句型]
There are buses, subways and airplanes everywhere, which makes travelling easier. (which引导的定语从句)
8．例文：
As the bar chart shows, the number of people below the poverty line dramatically decreased during the years of 1978 to 1997. As early as 1978, about 250 million people went under the poverty line. Then seven years later, the number became three fifths that of 1978. And arriving in the year 1997, the number was reduced to 50 millions.
Several factors contribute to the sharp decrease of the below-poverty population. The reform and opening following1978 enabled the peasants to become much better off. And, with the development of Chinese economy, that policy also improved city dwellers’ lives greatly. Furthermore, the high-tech introduced made it possible for the country’s economy as a whole to take off. All these result in the great fall of the Chinese population below the poverty line.
However, a further decrease in the number of poverty-stricken people is faced with some problems. With quite few employees being laid off, the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay due attention to the newcomers , but not just to care for the poor in remote mountain areas. (不唯一仅供参考)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是“图表作文”；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明图表反映的问题。
第二步，分析问题产生的原因。
第三步，提出解决措施。
[亮点词汇]
①the number of ……的数量
②three fifths五分之三
③with the development of随着……的发展
[高分句型]
So my principle is to pay due attention to the newcomers, but not just to care for the poor in remote mountain areas. (动词不定式作表语)
9．
China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world. For example, aerospace industry of our country has advanced by leaps and bounds. Two Olympic Games were held successfully. It really surprised me.
China successfully hosted the 2008 Summer Olympic Games and once again introduced China to the world. China has developed rapidly since then. The Winter Olympic Games were successfully held this year. And many Chinese athletes won gold medals. As a Chinese, I feel excited for the strength of the motherland.
As a student, I’m very proud of my country-China. In order to better contribute to the construction of the motherland in the future, I will work hard to learn scientific and cultural knowledge to be an ideal, ambitious person.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“近年来中国发生了翻天覆地的变化”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，中国成功举办了两次奥运会；
第三步，书写结语表达“要努力学习科学和文化知识”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of为之骄傲
②in order to为了
③take place发生
[高分句型]
①In order to better contribute to the construction of the motherland in the future, I will work hard to learn scientific and cultural knowledge to be an ideal, ambitious person.（in order to引导的句子，动词不定式作目的状语）
10．例文
The Changes of Our Lifestyle
With the development of our country and technology, great changes of our lifestyle has taken place. Here are some changes in our daily life from the past.
We used to write letters to communicate, but now, we can simply call others or send them e-mails. It is both fast and convenient. In the past, people went to school by bike, yet now, we usually take the subway to school. People listened to the radio before, but now, we would like to watch TV. It’s fantastic. People used to live in small and bad houses, but at the moment, people live in tall buildings and live more comfortably.
I think the changes bring us a more comfortable and convenient life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据思维导图介绍人们在过去和现在的生活方式发生了哪些变化。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示人们的生活发生了很多变化；
第二步，根据思维导图详细介绍人们在过去和现在的生活方式发生了哪些变化；
第三步，书写结语，介绍自己对变化的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①with the development of随着……的发展
②take place发生
③would like to do想要做某事
[高分句型]①
①We used to write letters to communicate, but now, we can simply call others or send them e-mails. (but连接的并列句)
②I think the changes bring us a more comfortable and convenient life. (宾语从句)
11．One possible version：
Great Changes Around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. In my hometown, the roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were small and old. The air wasn’t fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It’s really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built. Most of us have moved to big and beautiful houses. The sky is very blue. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
We are living a happy life. I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述过去的生活；
第二步，描述现在发生的变化；
第三步，描述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常做某事
②different kinds of各种各样
③live a happy life过一个幸福的生活
[高分句型]
①It’s really convenient for people to go out.（it作形式主语）
②I’m sure as time goes by, our life will become better and better!（宾语从句）
12．例文
Changing Leisure Activities
Throughout the ages, the development of society has influenced people’s leisure activities, and their ways of change are also very interesting. I would like to tell you about the changes in the past few decades.
In the past, people like my parents did a lot of sports activities in their free time to have fun. The main things they did were watching movies in open air, rolling iron rings and jump roping. However, nowadays people mainly stay at home in their free time. Due to the development of technology, teenagers like me often make watching TV, playing video games, and texting friends as their leisure activities.
I think this is a bit bad because in the past, people could exercise and have fun in their free time, but now the activities people do can make them lazy and unhealthy. I hope the leisure activities that people do now will be healthier in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态过去的事情为“一般过去时”，现在的情况为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我的休闲活动与父辈的休闲活动不同以及它们的优点和缺点”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“古往今来，社会的发展影响着人们的休闲活动，他们的变化方式也很有趣。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“过去人们（如父母）的休闲活动与我现在的休闲活动的不同”重点介绍娱乐方式的变化；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望人们现在的休闲活动在未来会更健康。”。
[亮点词汇]
① throughout the ages古往今来
② stay at home呆在家里
[高分句型]
① I think this is a bit bad because in the past, people could exercise and have fun in their free time, but now the activities people do can make them lazy and unhealthy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② I hope the leisure activities that people do now will be healthier in the future.（定语从句）
13．例文
Changes in my family
Great changes have taken place in my family over the past ten years.
We used to live in a small and old house. But now we have moved into a big and new apartment. My parents used to write letters to their friends, but now they use telephones or mobile phones. My family has our own car and it’s easier for us to travel. But those days, we used to walk or ride bikes somewhere. My parents’ lives used to be poor but quiet. But now things are different. They live a rich and happy life.
I believe our life will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己家的变化。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据表格内容详细介绍自己家的变化；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做某事
②live a...life过着……的生活
[高分句型]
①My parents used to write letters to their friends, but now they use telephones or mobile phones. (but连接的并列句)
②I believe our life will become better and better.(省略that的宾语从句)
14．例文
How Life Has Changed!
Great changes have taken place in our life during the years. In the past, people read newspapers, listened to the radio and watched TV for news and other information. People kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or sending postcards. They would buy everything in the shop or the market. Big families had to share small houses which were old and dirty. Children used to go to school by bicycle.
But now people can get information on the mobile phones or computers almost at any place and at any time. They can buy things online at home. What’s more, people can talk to others by e-mail WeChat or QQ, with which they can send and receive messages whenever they like. More and more people live in new and clean houses with several rooms. Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars.
In a word, people live better than before.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How Life Has Changed!”为题，结合图片内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍人们过去的生活；
第二步，介绍人们现在的生活；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②kept in touch with each other彼此保持联系
③talk to others与他人交谈
④In a word总之
[高分句型]
①Big families had to share small houses which were old and dirty.（定语从句）
②Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars.（enough后置）
15．例文
Dear John,
With the rapid development of science and technology, our life is undergoing great changes. The house we live in gets bigger. The environment around us has become better. Our transportation has become more convenient and faster. Our life is getting better and better. Now we have a better living and learning environment. If you are traveling to China, Beijing is your first choice. There you can visit the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, taste Beijing roast duck and so on. Have a good time.
Yours,
LiHua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍所发生的变化有哪些；
第二步，介绍这些变化如何影响我们的生活；
第三步，发出邀请及介绍北京的名胜。
[亮点词汇]
①live in住在
②better and better越来越好
③the Great Wall长城
④have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
①With the rapid development of science and technology, our life is undergoing great changes.（with介词短语）
②If you are traveling to China, Beijing is your first choice.（if引导的条件状语从句）
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