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Unit 2 Travelling 单元写作--2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重点题型精准练 牛津译林版
1．假如你是李华，刚收到一封来自美国笔友的来信，请根据来信内容写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua, How is it going Things in 2024 were so unforgettable for me. I went to Sichuan and visited some places of interest. It was so much fun. Did you go anywhere interesting in 2024 And what did you do there I have a big dream. I want to be a traveler in the future so that I can enjoy all beautiful scenery. Do you have a dream How are you going to do that Can you tell me about it Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes! Yours, Mike
注意：
(1)邮件需包含所有内容，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等相关信息；
(3)词数80词左右；（邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear Mike,
I’m so happy to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是Mary，上个月你和父母一起去海南三亚游玩。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇70词左右的短文，向大家介绍一下这次游玩的经历。
提示:1.第一天：去亚龙湾 (Yalong Bay)游玩；
2.第二天：参观崖州古城 (Yazhou Ancient City);
3.第三天：在市区购物。
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3．请根据以下要点，以“A happy trip”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 本周末，你和好朋友一起去爬山；
2. 你们乘公交车前往；
3. 你们用了半天时间登上山顶，并拍了许多照片；
4. 虽然你们感到累，但玩得很愉快。
A happy trip
This weekend, I climbed the mountain with my good friends.
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4．假如你校英文校刊正在开展“Travelling”的主题征文活动。请你根据下面提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你难忘的(unforgettable)一次旅行经历和你对旅行的看法。
注意：
1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，适当发挥，书写规范；
2. 词数90左右，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。
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5．Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable trip to ________” (以“一次去……的难忘之旅”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following points are only for reference:
When and where did you take the trip
What did you do there
Why was the trip unforgettable
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6．假如北京是你最喜欢的城市之一，你去过很多次。请介绍一下你游览北京的经历，内容如下：
1．北京在中国的北方，每年有大量游客到北京旅游；
2．去过北京多次，游览了很多名胜古迹(places of interest)；
3．爬过长城，到过颐和园(the Summer Palace)和故宫(the Palace Museum)，拍下了很多照片；
4．上次去的时候，遇到几个有趣的外国人，用英语交谈甚欢。
要求：
1．词数80左右(标题已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
3．包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
My experiences of visiting Beijing
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7．在我们成长过程中，我们去过许多不同的地方。有的地方会给我们留下深刻的印象，成为我们心中最美好的回忆。请你根据以下提示要点，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你去过的最好的地方。
要点如下：
(1) 去了哪里；
(2) 做了什么；
(3) 你的感受。
注意：
(1) 词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
We have all been to many different places. The best place I have ever been to is
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8．假如你是 Linda，两个月前你坐飞机从美国来到中国，在北京游览了一周。这是一次难忘的旅行，请根据表格内容，介绍旅行情况。
Time Two months ago
Transportation Plane
Activities 1. Visited many places of interest (名胜古迹) 2. Went to some famous universities 3. Tasted Roast Beijing Duck, Beijing Zha Jiang Noodles... (请补充至少2个活动)
Feelings (请补充至少1个感受)
要求：①文章必须包括表格中的全部内容，语句通顺，语意连贯，可适当增加内容；
②短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名；
③词数80左右，文章标题和开头已经给出，不算在总词数内。
An Unforgettable Travel
I had an unforgettable travel in China.
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9．你的美国朋友Lucy计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在微信中给她留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡山西，词数70左右。
要求：1. 需包含所有提示信息（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Hi, Lucy. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Shanxi for a visit.
Shanxi lies ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
10．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack打算暑假来中国游玩，体验中国文化。请你写一封邮件向他推荐一处中国的旅游景点，并向他提几点来中国旅游需要注意的事项。
内容提示：
1．表达欢迎。
2．推荐一处中国的旅游景点。
3．注意事项。
要求：1．词数80—100。
2．中心突出，语义连贯，书写规范。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．古人云：读万卷书不如行万里路。旅游可以帮助我们开拓视野、结交朋友、了解不同的文化，从而丰富自己的人生阅历。你校英文报正在组织以“Travelling”为题的征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。
要点如下：
1. 介绍旅游的好处；
2. 分享一次旅游经历；
3. 谈谈这次旅游的收获或感想。
注意：
1. 要点齐全，适当拓展；
2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
4. 100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Travelling
Travelling is a very good activity.
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12．假设你叫王浩，在今年五月学校组织的游学活动中，你去了英国伦敦参观学习，收获很多。你准备将这次游学经历以邮件的形式告诉你的好朋友Paul。请根据下面表格中的信息，完成这封邮件。
My travel study
Time arrived on May 2 and left on May 11
Activities visited museums, studied with local (当地的) students, lived with a local family, tasted real English food and took photos
Feelings happy and excited
要求：
1. 参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息。（姓名、校名和地名等）
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Paul,
Have you ever been to London I went there for a travel study in May. Now let me tell you about it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Well, this is what I want to share with you. Hope you can have a chance to visit London, too.
Wang Hao
13．请以“A Place I Have Been to”为题写一篇短文，从地理位置、人口、天气、旅游景点、当地的食物等，介绍你曾经去过的某个地方。要求紧扣主题，语言表达准确，语意要通顺、连贯，词数约80。
A Place I Have Been to__________
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14．为了讲好呼和浩特故事，深入了解丰富多彩的本土文化，你校组织了有关呼和浩特文化的研学活动(study trip)。假如你是李华，请根据以下表格信息及要求给你的美国朋友 Aaron写一封电子邮件，介绍这次研学之旅及收获。
Process Time June 15. 2024
Place Ely Health Valley (伊利健康谷)
Activities visit the factory, have a taste of dairy (牛奶的) products…
Gains understand history and local culture better…
要求：
1）内容必须包括以上表格中所有信息，可适当增加细节；
2）活动和收获至少补充一条；
3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校及班级名称；
4）词数80词左右。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Aaron,
I’d like to share my experience of my school study trip with you.
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Do you want to know more about our local culture Let’s take a study trip together this holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
15．今年五一，河南凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务，吸引了世界各地的游客前来“打卡”， 在校园英语文化周，你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 简要介绍你对旅游的态度或看法，并详细介绍一个旅游胜地；
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数100左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
16．假如你是李华，你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行，请你给 Bob 叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。
When 7月5日下午2：00机场见
Where 北京， 酒店已定好， 直接前往
Who 我和我父母
What 1.观看升旗仪式 2.游长城 3.吃北京烤鸭 4.参观故宫 5…
How …
1.文章内容必须包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.对省略部分作1—2 句话的合理发挥；
3.词数不少于 80 词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词语： book 预定；directly 直接地；flag-raising ceremony 升旗仪式；the Palace Museum 故宫
Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan.
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Li Hua
17．假期是一个适合旅行的好时候，你曾经去过哪些有趣且让人印象深刻的地方？某英语网站以“难忘的旅行”为主题发起分享活动，请讲述你过去的旅行中最难忘的经历。
要求：
1. 80—120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：The vacations are a good time for us to travel to some interesting places.
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18．根据要求完成作文，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
Please introduce a place you have been to.
要求：
1.文中不可以出现真实的姓名：
2.70词左右。
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《Unit 2 Travelling 单元写作--2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重点题型精准练 牛津译林版》参考答案
1．例文：
Dear Mike，
I am so happy to hear from you.
Last summer, I went to the Great Wall with my family. It was fine that day. We went there by bus early in the morning. When we got there, there were many other visitors there. When we climbed onto the Great Wall, we saw beautiful scenery. We all were amazed by how beautiful it was. We took quite a few photos there.
When I grow up, I’m going to be a reporter. To realize my dream, I will study harder. What’s more, I am going to write articles for magazines and newspaper in my free time, so I can know more about the job. If I work hard enough, my dream will come true.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：本文是一封回信，考生注意提示中已给出问题和建议，根据这些提示适当添加细节，重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍自己在过去的一年的经历和自己在新的一年的愿望和决心。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be amazed by对……感到惊讶
②take photos拍照片
③grow up长大
④come true成真、实现
[高分句型]
①When we got there, there were many other visitors there. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②We all were amazed by how beautiful it was. (宾语从句)
2．例文
I went to Sanya with my parents last month. Sanya is a beautiful coastal city. On the first day, we had fun at Yalong Bay. It was really relaxing lying on the sunny beach. On the second day we visited the famous Yazhou Ancient City. It was a great experience for all of us. On the last day of our trip, we went shopping in the downtown. Sanya is the most interesting place that I have ever been to. I’d like to go there again some day if possible.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示信息进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍出游地点；
第二步，具体介绍参观亚龙湾和崖州古城；
第三步，总结三亚之行的感受并表达希望再去的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①beautiful coastal city美丽的海滨城市
②have fun玩得愉快
[高分句型]
Sanya is the most interesting place that I have ever been to. (that引导的定语从句)
3．Sample writing
A happy trip
This weekend, I climbed the mountain with my good friends. When we got there by bus, we began to climb the mountain. There were many beautiful flowers and green trees around us. We saw many people climb the mountain like us. It took us about half a day to get to the top of the mountain. We were excited. We took many photos there. Then we began to climb down the mountain.
We were tired, but we had a fantastic time this weekend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍和朋友如何到达地点；
第二步，介绍爬山过程中的活动；
第三步，总结：虽然累，但是很愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①begin to do开始做
②see sb do sth看见某人做某事
[高分句型]
There were many beautiful flowers and green trees around us. (there be句型)
It took us about half a day to get to the top of the mountain. (it固定句型)
4．例文
I like travelling very much.
So far, I have travelled to Beijing, Hong Kong, New York and many other places. But my favouriate place is Hong Kong, which is an international modern city with many beautiful places of interest. We can enjoy delicious food there. Last summer, we visited Hong Kong Disneyland. We watched a parade of Disney characters there and I couldn’t stop taking photos with them. I had a good time there. What an unforgettable experience!
Travelling is really a good way to open our minds and learn more about the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己去过的地方；
第二步，具体介绍自己难忘的一次旅行经历以及感受；
第三步，表达自己对旅行的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜古迹
②take photos拍照
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
But my favouriate place is Hong Kong, which is an international modern city with many beautiful places of interest.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．例文：
An unforgettable trip to Beijing
I took an unforgettable trip to Beijing last summer vacation. I visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the beauty and history of these places.
I also tried some delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck and Peking Noodles. The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.
What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends. We shared our experiences and had a lot of fun together.
This trip not only broadened my horizons but also gave me a lot of wonderful memories. I will never forget it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：介绍曾经去过的地方，分享个人的经历，避免语法错误，保持行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍一次难忘的旅行经历；
第二步，简要介绍去的地方、时间、交通方式、游玩的景点以及美食等；
第三步，总结全文，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②be amazed by对……感到惊讶
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
②What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends.（what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句）
6．例文
My experiences of visiting Beijing
Beijing is in the north of China. There are many places of interest there. A lot of people come to visit Beijing every year. I have been to Beijing many times. I have traveled around Beijing. I have climbed the Great Wall. I have visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. When I was there, I also had conversations with foreigners and I took lots of photos.
It was an interesting experience. I had a good time there. I love Beijing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为现在完成时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍游览北京的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍北京的位置以及自己游览北京的经历；
第二步，表达对这次游览经历感到愉快和对北京的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①in the north of 在……北部
②places of interest 风景名胜
③have conversations with 与……交谈
④have a good time 玩得愉快
[高分句型]
There are many places of interest there. (there be句型)
7．例文
We have all been to many different places. The best place I have ever been to is Yunnan.
I went to Yunnan with my parents by car when I was 10 years old. When we got to Yunnan, we fell in love with its beauty of nature. My father didn’t use to like taking photos. To our surprise, he stopped the car on the way to Gaoli-gongshan Mountain and asked my mother and I to take some photos. We enjoyed different special food there. I also ate the worms as food for the first time.
As long as I have time, I will go to Yunnan again. It has not only beautiful scenery but also delicious food.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接点出自己去过的最美的地方；
第二步，具体介绍自己去云南旅行的经历；
第三步，书写结尾，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with 爱上
②to my surprise 让我惊讶的是
③neither...nor... 既不……也不……
[高分句型]
①I went to Yunnan with my parents by car when I was 10 years old.（时间状语从句）
②As long as I have time, I will go to Yunnan again.（条件状语从句）
8．例文
An Unforgettable Travel
I had an unforgettable travel in China. I went on a trip to Beijing, the capital of China, a really great city in China by plane two months ago. I stayed in Beijing for one week. During these days, I visited lots of places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and so on. The Great Wall is over 6000 kilometres long with a long history. China is famous for the Great Wall. I took lots of pictures there. The Palace Museum is very large. When I was in the Palace Museum, I really didn’t konw the directions. People from all over the world come to see it every day. I also visited some famous universities, like Beijing University and Tsinghua University. These universities are so big and modern. I went to Wangfujng Street and tasted delicious Roast Beijing Duck and Beijing Zha Jiang Noodles. I also went to the countryside to experience the local life in Beijing. And on the last day, I went to the Front Gate Walking Street. It was a good place to go where I bought various kinds of souvenirs and clothes for my families and friends.
The trip to Beijing was so interesting and wonderful. I really enjoyed it.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：一般过去时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
【写作步骤】第一步，点出主题：两个月前到中国北京的旅行令人难忘；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，游览了北京的名胜古迹、名牌大学，品尝了北京烤鸭和炸酱面，体验了北京农村生活，最后给家人和朋友买了纪念品。
第三步，书写结语，“我”对此次北京之行的感受。
【亮点词汇】①various kinds of 各种各样的
②lots of许多
③from all over the world来自全世界
【高分句型】It was a good place to go where I bought various kinds of souvenirs and clothes for my families and friends.（定语从句）
9．One possible version:
Hi, Lucy. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Shanxi for a visit.
Shanxi lies in the north of China with Taiyuan as its capital city. It has a population of over 37 million. Have you ever tried Shanxi food Shanxi is famous for its food, such as sliced noodles, mutton soup and fried boiled pork. If you come, I’ll treat you to delicious food. With a history of thousands of years, there are many places of interest in Shanxi, like Yungang Grottoes and Mount Wutai. These places are really worth visiting. Another great thing about Shanxi is that it has convenient transport. You can get here easily by plane. I believe you’ll have a great time in Shanxi.
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍并推荐Lucy来山西旅游；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 以……而闻名
②such as 例如
③be worth doing 值得做某事
④have a great time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①If you come, I’ll treat you to delicious food.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I believe you’ll have a great time in Shanxi.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．例文
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know that you’re coming to China. I’m writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome. I’d like to tell you something about Dalian. Dalian is famous for its beautiful beaches. The weather here in summer is fine. There is an International Beer Festival every summer and you can try seafood and beer here. I think the best time to visit Dalian is in summer. It’s a good idea to relax yourself on the beach in the sun. You’d better take your swimming clothes because you might want to go swimming in the sea. Sometimes it rains a lot, so bring an umbrella with you.
I hope you have a fantastic time exploring China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示欢迎；
第二步，介绍大连的景观，美食和旅行注意事项。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②relax yourself放松自己
③had better do sth.最好做某事
[高分句型]
①You’d better take your swimming clothes because you might want to go swimming in the sea. (原因状语从句）
②I hope you have a fantastic time exploring China! (宾语从句)
11．例文
Travelling
Travelling is a very good activity. We can enjoy the beauty of nature, make friends with the local people and learn about different cultures by travelling.
I still remember the trip to Beijing last summer. My parents and I visited the Palace Museum. There we followed the guide and learned more about Chinese history. What’s more, we climbed the Great Wall. Tired but excited, we reached the top of it. The sights were so beautiful that I couldn’t stop taking photos. At the same time, I met a lot of foreigners and talked with them happily.
As an old saying goes, “It’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” From this trip, I have learned much knowledge that I can’t learn in the textbooks. I won’t forget it.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍旅游的好处；
第二步，分享自己去北京旅游的经历；
第三步，书写从此次旅行中获得的感想。
［亮点词汇］
①make friends 交朋友
②learn about 了解
③what’s more 此外
④take photos 照相
⑤at the same time 与此同时
［高分句型］
①The sights were so beautiful that I couldn’t stop taking photos. (so…that引导的结果状语从句)
②From this trip, I have learned much knowledge that I can’t learn in the textbooks. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
12．Dear Paul,
Have you ever been to London I went there for a travel study in May. Now let me tell you about it. I arrived in London on May 2, and lived in a local family. During my travel study, I visited some famous museums and saw thousands of amazing things. I went to a local school and studied with the students there. They helped me with my English. Of course, I tasted some real English food. How delicious! I took lots of nice photos, too. I’ll show them to you next time. On May 11, I left London for China. During my stay in London, I was happy and excited and I learned a lot. Well, this is what I want to share with you. Hope you can have a chance to visit London, too.
Wang Hao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出在伦敦学习的经历和生活经历。
第二步，写出自己的收获和感想。
[亮点词汇]
①arrived in 到达
②helped sb. with 帮助某人关于某事
③took lots of nice photos 拍很多好看的照片
[高分句型]
①I visited some famous museums and saw thousands of amazing things.（and连接并列成分）
②How delicious!（How引导的感叹句）
13．例文
A Place I Have Been to Beijing
I have been to Beijing, the capital city of China, a place filled with history and culture.
Beijing is located in the northeastern part of China. It has a population of over 21 million people, making it one of the most populated cities in the world. The weather in Beijing is characterized by four distinct seasons.
Beijing is famous for its historical landmarks and cultural heritage. The landmark is the Great Wall. Other popular tourist attractions include the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, and the Temple of Heaven. The local dishes include Peking duck and Zhajiang noodles.
Overall, Beijing is a fascinating city with a rich cultural heritage. I would highly recommend visiting if you have the chance.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单说明去的哪个城市；
第二步，具体从位置、人口、天气等方面介绍该城市；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①fill with充满
②in the world在世界上
③be famous for因……闻名
[高分句型]
I would highly recommend visiting if you have the chance. (if引导的条件状语从句)
14．例文
Dear Aaron,
I’d like to share my experience of my school study trip with you.
We went to Ely Health Valley on June 15, 2024. It was a sunny day. We did a lot of interesting things there. We visited the factory. The machines and robots there are quite smart and they make the work easier. We know that Ely is famous for its milk and dairy products. Luckily, we had a chance to have a taste of them. They are really delicious. We also watched a short film about Ely and learnt a lot. Ely is really amazing and I am proud of it as a native.
From this unforgettable study trip, I have learnt not only something about Ely, but also the history and local culture of Hohhot. In addition, we have realized how important the good teamwork is! Last but not least, it has also given me confidence to study hard and make our Hohhot better.
Do you want to know more about our local culture Let’s take a study trip together this holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是分享自己的研学旅行；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间、地点、活动”三方面来阐述自己的研学之旅；
第三步，表达这次研学旅行的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②be proud of以……为骄傲
③in addition此外
④last but not least最后但同样重要
[高分句型]
①We know that Ely is famous for its milk and dairy products. (宾语从句)
②Let’s take a study trip together this holiday. (祈使句)
15．参考例文:
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Jiyuan. Jiyuan is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the Wangwu Mountain. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the next day, we went to Wulongkou and saw many monkeys on the mountain. I had a great time.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据内容提示，介绍自己的旅游经历和感受，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
第二步，详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Jiyuan is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.（非限制性定语从句）
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
16．例文
Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan.
We’ll meet at the airport at 2 p.m. on July 5th. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. The next day we’ll watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square early in the morning. It must be amazing! On the third day, we’ll visit the Great Wall. What about the Great Wall It is worth visiting and you’ll be impressed. On the fourth day, we’ll visit the the Palace Museum. It is interesting for me to enjoy the old buildings. How wonderful they are. At last, we’ll have the delicious food, Beijing roast duck. And buy some presents for our friends. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.
Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的旅行安排，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题（已给出）；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍自己的旅行安排；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①have a rest休息
②the flag-raising ceremony升旗仪式
③be worth doing值得做某事
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. (as引导的原因状语从句)
17．例文
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
The vacations are a good time for us to travel to some interesting places.
My most unforgettable travel experience was a trip to Japan during the summer vacation. I have been to Tokyo where I took photos and tried delicious food. But the best part was a visit to a small village. There, I met friendly people who shared their culture and traditions. The nature and their warmth made me relaxed. And I enjoyed the beauty of nature there.
This trip not only opened my eyes to the world but also left an unforgettable memory. I value this experience and look forward to more trips in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍假期；
第二步，具体阐述作者最难忘的假期旅行及旅行的经历；
第三步，书写结语，表达旅行的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①made me relaxed使我感到放松
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I have been to Tokyo where I took photos and tried delicious food. (where引导的定语从句)
②This trip not only opened my eyes to the world but also left an unforgettable memory. (not only...but also句型)
18．例文
The Journey to Dalian
I like travelling, it’s really good fun. I can’t forget my trip to Dalian.
Last year, I went there by ship. I was very excited. I spent the whole day on the deck. The blue sky, blue sea, white clouds…It was quiet, I felt comfortable.
We arrived there the next day. Then we went to Xinghai Square. There was a piece of grass near it. And there were some colorful things on it. I was eager to know what they were. Wow, it’s the game of hang-gliding! I really like flying. Though it’s expensive, I tried it. At first, I was a little afraid. Later, I began to be brave. I flew over the hill. I flew over the sea. I flew over the bus. I flew over the building. I flew like a bird…We spent several days there. Dalian, a fantastic place to go!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：考生应注意主谓一致问题，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己去过的地方；
第二步，具体阐述做了哪些事情；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a piece of 一块
②be eager to do sth渴望做某事
③At first起初
[高分句型]
①Though it’s expensive, I tried it.（状语从句）
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