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Unit 3 Trees and us
单元话题书面表达
一、书面表达
1． 每年的3月12日是植树节，以"Tree Planting Day"为题，写一篇英语小短文，阐述你在植树节的那一天所做的事情，和所学到的东西。
提示：
1.学会了怎样种树；
2. 树木对人类的重要性；
3. 80词左右。
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2．今天是一年一度的植树节，假设你是你们学校英语报的小记者，请根据以下提示内容写一篇英语短文，现场报道同学们的植树活动情况。词数70左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
内容包括：
1）同学们正在校园里种树，有的在挖坑，有的在搬树苗，有的在浇水。
2）请列举三点说明树木对人类的好处。
3）呼吁大家爱护树木，多植树。
Today is Tree Planting Day and the Sun shines brightly.
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独立以Tree Planting Day 为题写一篇报道，注意正确使用时态和添加介词以及冠词。
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4．请你根据下面的内容提示，以“The uses of trees”为题，写一篇关于树的用途的文章。要求：60词以上，可以适当发挥。（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
提示：1）树可以为我们提供很多有用的东西，如水果、药品、木材等；2）树可以为人类提供氧气，净化空气，美化环境；3）树可以为动物提供家园和足够的食物，保持大自然的平衡（the balance of nature）；4）树能够防止水土流失和土地变成沙漠（desert）。
The uses of trees
For humans, trees have a lot of uses.
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5．3月12日是“植树节”（Tree Planting Day），学生会要组织全体学生参加植树活动。根据表格中的信息，写一篇通知告知全体学生，词数60左右。
植树日期 3月12日
植树地点 西山
集合地点、时间 学校操场，早晨7点出发
要求 全体学生参加，每班带5个或6个脸盆（basin）作浇水用；乘校车前往；不要迟到
March 12th is Tree Planting Day.
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6．植树节前夕，学校举行英语演讲比赛，请你以“Let's protect the trees”为题写一篇演讲稿，号召大家植树护林。要求60词以上。内容包括：
1）树木对人类很重要。
2）列举两三条树木对人类重要的原因，如提供氧气、净化空气等。
3）为了地球和人类的未来，请遵守法律，保护树木，植树护林。
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7．请根据以下提示，以"Trees are very helpful to us"为题，写一篇短文。70词左右，可适当发挥。
提示：1）树能吸收有害气体，能给我们提供氧气。树能清洁空气，是对抗空气污染的好战士；
2）我们生活中有很多东西都来自于树木，比如书桌、椅子、门和床等等；
3）树给我们提供水果；
4）树还可以美化我们的城市。
Trees are very helpful to us
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答案解析部分
1．Tree Planting Day
It was March 12—Tree Planting Day yesterday. We went to the hill to plant trees with our teacher. There we learned how to plant trees. We also learned a lot about plants. For example, trees can help clean the air. They give us food, like apples, oranges, peaches and pears. People and other animals need them to live. We planted many trees yesterday.
We were very tired, but we felt very happy. Because planting trees means hope and a better future for us.
这是一篇以"Tree Planting Day"为题的英语小短文。本文要求描述在植树节这一天所做的事情和所学到的东西，特别强调了学会种树的过程、树木对人类的重要性这两点，并要求控制在80词左右。写作步骤上，首先可以简短地介绍植树节这个节日，然后详细描述在植树节当天自己是如何参与种树活动的，包括学习的过程和体验。接着，阐述通过种树活动，自己对树木重要性的认识，比如树木对环境的贡献，对人类生活的帮助等。最后，可以简单总结自己的感受和收获。
在写作时，需要注意时态的正确使用，由于是描述过去发生的事情，所以主要使用一般过去时。此外，要注意用词的准确性和表达的流畅性，避免使用过于复杂的句子结构，以免超出字数限制。
这篇以"Tree Planting Day"为题的英语小短文结构清晰，内容充实，中心思想明确。以下是对例文的：文章以"It was March 12—Tree Planting Day yesterday."开头，直接点明了植树节这一主题，简洁明了。行动描述：紧接着，文章描述了"We went to the hill to plant trees with our teacher."，清晰地表述了作者在植树节当天的活动。详细描述了所学到的内容，包括如何种树（"learned how to plant trees"）和树木对人类的重要性（"trees can help clean the air. They give us food... People and other animals need them to live."）。最后，文章以"We were very tired, but we felt very happy. Because planting trees means hope and a better future for us."作为结尾，既总结了当天的活动，又升华了主题，表达了对植树活动的积极态度和深远意义的认识。文章内容丰富，不仅描述了植树活动的过程，还深入探讨了树木对人类的重要性，使得文章既有行动的描述，又有深层次的思考。
2． Today is Tree Planting Day and the Sun shines brightly. Look! The students are planting trees happily on campus. Some are digging holes, some are carrying young trees and others are watering them. They are trying to give the young trees the greatest care.
As we know, trees help us a lot. For one thing, they keep the air cool and clean. For another, they produce oxygen for us to breathe. What's more, they can also stop water and soil from going away.
To make our Earth become more an more beautiful, let's take good care of the trees and plant as many trees as we can!
这是一篇提纲类作文，现场报道同学们的植树活动情况，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要适当添加内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求，检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误，行文时要注意人称时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。
本文结构紧凑，语言简练，要点齐全，文中try to do，as we know，what's more等词汇的使用，使上下文意连接紧密 ，本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如运用了To make our Earth become more an more beautiful, let's take good care of the trees and plant as many trees as we can不定式做状语，比较级，祈使句等语法，和Some are digging holes, some are carrying young trees and others are watering them现在进行时等时态，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，也更富有条理。
3．Tree Planting Day
Our school celebrated Tree Planting Day with great enthusiasm. The students, teachers, and staff all participated, digging holes, planting saplings, and watering the new trees. The atmosphere was filled with laughter and camaraderie as we worked together. It was a rewarding experience to see our efforts transform the school grounds into a lush green area. Our principal reminded us of the importance of tree planting for the environment and future generations. It was a meaningful day that taught us the value of conservation and teamwork.
这是一篇命题作文写作。要求以"Tree Planting Day"写一篇报道。按照所给提示内容，写作中要包含所给的四方面的内容，植树节的庆祝方式，意义，做了什么事情以及植树节中学到什么。根据材料内容可知本文要用一般过去时，人称主要是第一人称单数和复数，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题，写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑关系，符合英语的表达习惯。
这篇短文根据所给内容的提示将四个方面的内容逐一进行了陈述。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整，时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如：dig holes ; water trees; the importance of......的重要性 等以及句型结构，如：The atmosphere was filled with laughter and camaraderie as we worked together.（时间状语从句）等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
4． The uses of trees For humans, trees have a lot of uses. Trees can provide us with many things, such as fruits, medicine and wood. Trees can produce oxygen for people to breathe, and keep air cool and clean. We can make our environment better by protecting trees. Trees provide a home for animals and provide them with enough food. Trees can help keep the balance of nature. Trees can stop earth moving away with water and make less land become a desert. We can't imagine a world without trees.
这是一篇提示性文章，要求以"The uses of trees"为题写一篇英语短文。这篇短文主要围绕树的用途，写明四个要点，时态要用一般现在时，不少于60词。
写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，如provide sb. with sth；such as；keep air cool and clean；stop earth moving away with water等等，高分句型（1）We can make our environment better by protecting trees. 高分句型（2）Trees can stop earth moving away with water and make less land become a desert. 高分句型（3） We can't imagine a world without trees. 符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好时态，以及一些衔接词,如such as；and, without等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
5． March 12th is Tree Planting Day. The Students Union will organize the students to plant trees on Xi Shan. All the students are required to take part in the activity. We will meet on the school playground at seven. Please be on time so that we will then take the school bus there together. Don't forget to take 5 or 6 basins with you to water the trees.
Everybody is welcome.
这是一篇提纲作文，要求写一则关于植树节活动的通知。根据所给材料，可知文章时态为一般将来时，人称为第一人称。写作时注意保持语句的通顺和上下文的连贯。
这篇文章内容完整、表达准确、逻辑清晰，恰当地使用了连词、副词、固定搭配等，其中一些用法，如：The Students Union；organize the students to；are required to；take part in；meet on the school playground；on time；so that；Don't forget to；take 5 or 6 basins with you等，都是可圈可点之处。
6． Good morning, ladiesand gentlemen. I want to say something about trees.
As we
know, trees are very important to human beings. First of all, they benefit our
health. They produce out oxygen for us to breathe. We can't live without trees.
Secondly, trees can beautify our environment. As trees are so important, we
must do our best to protect them. We must enforce the tree-protection laws. We
must plant as many trees as possible. Only in this way can we live happily in
the beautiful world.
That's
all, thank you.
这是一篇命题作文和提示作文。要求根据以下提示， 以“Let's protect the trees”为题写一篇演讲稿，号召大家植树护林。要求60词以上。 要求包括提示中所有要点，并可适当增加内容，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯，本文主要使用第一人称复数，一般现在时。
这是一篇命题作文和提示作文。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整，时态运用灵活准确，一些固定短语，如 As we know 众所周知， First of all 首先，do one' s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事， in this way 这样，等等和句型结构 As trees are so important, we must do our best to protect them. We must plant as many trees as possible. Only in this way can we live happily in the beautiful world. 等等的运用较为得体，使得文章更加流畅，自然。
7．Trees are
very helpful to us
There
are many trees around us. Do you know they are very helpful to us They can
take in harmful gases and produce oxygen. They can dean the air. Trees are the
best fighters against air pollution. Many things in our daily lives are from
trees such as desks, chairs, doors, beds and so on. Trees also provide us with
lots of fruit. What's more, they can make our city more beautiful. They are so
helpful that we need to protect them.
这是一篇命题作文，主要介绍树木对我们人类的作用。同时这又是一篇提纲作文；在写作时,要把提纲中的四个要点写出来。因材料可知要用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。另外，在写作时句意要表达清楚,，信息完整,语言通顺，语意连贯。充分利用好提示语言，使作文结构完整。
本文紧扣材料，要点完整，表达清晰流畅。文中用到了很多短语，如：take in harmful gases；such as；provide sb. with sth.等等。此外，还用了一些经典语句，比如, What's more, they can make our city more beautiful. Do you know they are very helpful to us 等。另外时态运用非常准确，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，没有任何语法错误。

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