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Unit 6 Electricity everywhere 单元写作--2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重点题型精准练 沪教版2024
1．用英语讲好中国故事是每个中学生义不容辞的责任和光荣使命。“诗画丹江，醉美淅川”作为南水北调渠首所在地——淅川的宣传标语，吸引着全国各地的游客前来观光旅游。请你根据以下写作要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下自己的家乡淅川，推荐给大家来淅川游玩。
写作要点：
1、家乡的地理位置、气候特点以及著名景区等；
2、友好善良的家乡人喜好哪些运动等；
3、表达自己对家乡的情感并欢迎大家来家乡观光旅游。
写作要求：
1、包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2、条理清晰，语句通顺，句法正确，书写规范；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4、开头已给出，不计入总词数，不少于80词。
参考词汇：名胜古迹 places of interest，香严寺Xiangyan Temple，坐禅谷Meditation Valley，丹江大观苑Danjiang Grand View Gardan，等等and so on.
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
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2．假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Tom准备来你的家乡——福州当交换生，他想提前了解一些有关福州的情况，请你模仿所给的范文给Tom写一封电子邮件，介绍美丽福州。词数在70个左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 结构完整，意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名。
Dear Tom,
How are you Let me tell you something about my hometown, Harbin.
There are four seasons in a year in Harbin. Summer is short and cool, while winter is long and cold. The best time to visit Harbin is in winter. It’s a good time to do winter sports. For example, you can ride bikes on the ice and make a snowman. To keep warm, you should bring some warm clothes and shoes.
Welcome to my hometown! You will have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Word bank:
while 然而；当……时候 For example 例如
3．每个季节都有其独特的美，在不同的季节中我们感受着不同的风景，体验着不同的乐趣。相信你所在的城市冬天一定很美吧！假设你是李辉，请你以“Winter in my hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你所在城市的冬天。
要点：
1. 城市冬天的天气和景色；
2. 人们通常在冬天做什么；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
（1）词数80-100，标题已为你写好，不计入总词数；
（2）内容应包括所有的提示信息，可适当发挥；
（3）语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
（4）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Winter in my hometown
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4．美好的经历使人快乐、让人感动和促进成长。如：快乐旅行、健康行动、学做美食、择朋交友、梦想行动……请以“A Wonderful Experience”为题，请用英语写一篇不少于70词的短文，记录你的一次美好经历及感受！
要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
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5．近日，新泰被评为“齐鲁炒鸡之乡”，很多外地游客想来新泰游玩。元旦假期，你邀请了两年未见的好友Wang Hao来领略新泰之最（最高的山，最大的公园，最美味的食物等）。请你根据以下问题，写一篇英语短文，介绍Wang Hao的变化及所见所闻。
内容提示：
1．What are Wang Hao’s differences before and now
2．What does Wang Hao do in his free time
3．Where did Wang Hao go and what did he do in Xintai
提示词：Qingyin Park, Mount Xinfu, fried chicken（炒鸡）
要求：
1．书写认真规范，词数不少于80词，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2．短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My friend Wang Hao came to Xintai for a trip a week ago. Let me tell you something about him and his trip.
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6．走遍中国，游历各地，一部“To the Wonder”（《我的阿勒泰》）让“新疆”成为不少人向往的旅行目的地。假设你是一名来自新疆的学生，请你根据以下提示，以“Welcome to Xinjiang”为题，写一篇英语短文，邀请更多的人走进你的家乡“新疆”。词数不少于80词。
要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥：
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
Welcome to Xinjiang
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7．假设你叫李明，你打算以“Lower Carbon, Happier Life”为题向校报英语角投稿，介绍你对低碳生活的认识并呼吁人们采取行动。请你根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
低碳生活：
1. 步行或骑自行车上学；
2. 节约用水、用电；
3. 用过的课本留给低年级学生；
4. 购物时带上篮子，不用塑料袋。
注意：
1. 可适当拓展信息；
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数80左右（作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
It’s our duty to protect the environment.
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8．根据以下情境写一篇不少于80词的短文。
针对学生生活中存在浪费电的现象，学校决定举行抵制浪费电的行为的活动。假设你是学校学生会成员之一，请你在学校英文报上写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1.活动的目的；
2.节约用电的具体做法；
3.呼吁大家节约用电。
以下词汇仅供参考：join hands; take action
注意：
1.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
2.短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school I’d like to call on everyone to
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Students’ Union
16 June
9．在你的学习或生活中，一定有某个人对你非常重要，他或她可能是你的长辈、老师、同学、朋友，请结合以下要点用英语写一篇短文介绍他/她。
Who is very important to you
What does he/she look like
What is he/she like
How does he/she help you in your daily life
注意：
1.词数不少于80，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
There is always someone important to us in our lives. I am glad to introduce such a person to you.
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10．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mary想结交更多中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的同学张博介绍给她，内容包括他的年龄、外貌、爱好、性格、最喜欢的科目以及他上周六所进行的活动。
注意：
（1）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
姓名 张博
年龄 13
外貌 中等身材，黑色短发，戴眼镜……
爱好 踢足球，听音乐，看书……
性格 外向的（outgoing），友好的，经常在学习方面帮助同学
最喜欢的科目 英语
上周六的活动 ……
Dear Mary,
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Zhang Bo to you.
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I’m sure you will be good friends. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
11．你们学校决定组织一次主题为“Planting Trees for the Earth”的植树活动。假设你是班长，你要动员你班同学参加这次活动，请你写一篇不少于80词的英文发言稿。
要点：
(1)我国的森林覆盖率 (coverage rate) 低，近年来情况有所改善；
(2)树可以吸收有害气体，保持空气清新，防止水土流失；
(3)保护树木的建议 (至少2点)。
Dear fellow students,
Forests are important to the environment.
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12．假定你是李华，为了提高学生对保护树木和环境的认识，你们学校举办了植树节系列活动。请根据以下内容提示，向你校英国交换生 Leo写信介绍此次活动，并分享你的活动心得。
时间 3月12日下午
活动 ①参加有关如何保护树木的讲座； ②和同学一起种树。
活动心得 ①进一步了解树木的重要性； ②……
要求：
1. 80词左右 (开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 要点齐全，可适当增加细节；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：lecture 讲座
Dear Leo,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to share a piece of exciting news with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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《Unit 6 Electricity everywhere 单元写作--2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重点题型精准练 沪教版2024》参考答案
1．例文
Hello, everyone. I want to tell you something about my hometown—Xichuan.
Xichuan is a beautiful city in the south of Henan. The climate here is very nice. It is not too hot in summer and not too cold in winter. There are many places of interest in my hometown, such as Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley, Danjiang Grand View Gardan and so on. They are very beautiful and many people come to visit them every year. The people here are very friendly and they like doing different kinds of sports like running and swimming. My hometown is very beautiful. I love it very much.
Welcome to my hometown.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍家乡的地理位置、气候特点以及著名景区等；
第三步、介绍友好善良的家乡人喜好哪些运动等；
第四步、表达自己对家乡的情感并欢迎大家来家乡观光旅游。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of…在……的南部
②places of interest名胜古迹
③such as例如
④different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①There are many places of interest in my hometown, such as Xiangyan Temple, Meditation Valley, Danjiang Grand View Gardan and so on.(there be句型)
2．例文
Dear Tom,
How are you Let me tell you something about my hometown, Fuzhou.
Fuzhou is in the southeast of China. Spring is warm and wet, while autumn is cool and dry. The best time to visit Fuzhou is in spring. It’s a great time to enjoy beautiful flowers and green hills. And you can visit Three Lanes and Seven Alleys where there are many old buildings. You can also try delicious food like fish balls.
Welcome to Fuzhou! You will have a great time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍福州位置、气候、景点以及美食；
第二步，表达欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy享受
②delicious美味的
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
And you can visit Three Lanes and Seven Alleys where there are many old buildings.（定语从句）
3．例文：
Winter in my hometown
Hello! Welcome to my hometown. It’s a beautiful place to visit in winter. My favourite season is winter.
Winter in my hometown is a season of contrast. The weather can be quite cold with temperatures often dropping below freeing and snowfall is very common. The landscape is often blanketed in a layer of white, creating a beautiful scene.
People here enjoy various winter activities, such as ice skating on the frozen lake or skiing in the nearby mountains. Families gather indoors to share warm meals and stories around the table.
I find the winter in my hometown to be enchanting. It is a time for reflection and togetherness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作句式已给出，考生应注意紧扣要点并适当拓展.。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“欢迎来到我的家乡”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述城市冬天的天气和景色、人们通常在冬天做什么。
第三步，书写结语。表达我的感受，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①common常见的
②scene景色
③togetherness和睦相处
[高分句型]
①I find the winter in my hometown to be enchanting.（宾语从句）
4．例文
A Wonderful Experience
Last summer, I had a wonderful travel experience. My family and I visited a small village by the sea. We swam in the ocean, collected seashells, and watched beautiful sunsets. The village was peaceful, and the people were friendly. One day, the villagers invited us to join their local festival. We enjoyed traditional music and delicious food.
This trip not only brought me happiness but also taught me to appreciate nature and different cultures. It was an unforgettable experience that I cherish deeply.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我有很棒的旅行经历”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、人物、旅行地点和旅行内容”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
②appreciate nature欣赏大自然
[高分句型]
It was an unforgettable experience that I cherish deeply.（定语从句）
5．例文
My friend Wang Hao came to Xintai for a trip a week ago. Let me tell you something about him and his trip.
When we first met, Wang Hao was a shy and introverted individual. He found it difficult to express his thoughts and often hesitated to participate in group activities. His academic performance was also not up to the mark, mainly due to his lack of confidence.
Now, he is much different from before. He has learned a lot more, and become more outgoing. He has a lot of things to do in his spare time. he usually takes exercise after school. He likes basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help him to keep healthy and study better. He often watches TV or does some reading in the evening. Sometimes he listens to music for a while. He finds it a good way to relax himself. In Xintai. We come to Qingyin Park and Mount Xinfu. They’re the biggest park and mountain in Xintai. And we eat fried chicken, it’s very delicious.
We have a good time in Xintai. I hope Wang Hao can come here again next time.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，具体阐述内容提示中给出的问题，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍关于好朋友的一些事情以及此次旅行。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从所给出的问题“好朋友的前后变化，空闲时间做的事以及此次旅行主要玩的和吃的”几个方面来介绍具体情况。
第三步，书写结语。希望好朋友下次再来新泰。
【亮点词汇】
①spare time空闲时间
②keep healthy保持健康
③for a while一会儿
④have a good time玩得开心
【高分句型】
He finds it a good way to relax himself.（find it＋adj＋to do sth“发现做某事是什么样的”句型）
6．例文
Welcome to Xinjiang
Hello, everyone! I’m a student from Xinjiang, and I’m so excited to invite you to visit my hometown.
Xinjiang is located in the northwest of China. It has a dry climate with little rain. The land here is full of wonders, with deserts, grasslands, mountains, and beautiful lakes. You can see many wild animals running freely in the wild. Xinjiang is also famous for its delicious fruits, like grapes and Hami melons. They are so sweet and juicy that you can’t stop eating them. You can go hiking and trekking in the mountains. You can also explore the ancient Silk Road sites and learn about the history.
I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家乡——新疆，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍新疆的相关信息；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in坐落于
②be famous for因为……而闻名
③can’t stop doing sth.忍不住做某事
[高分句型]
①They are so sweet and juicy that you can’t stop eating them. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②I hope you can come and visit my hometown soon! (宾语从句)
7．例文
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
It’s our duty to protect the environment. We can do many things to live a low-carbon life. First, we can ride to school or go to school on foot and tell our parents to ride to work instead of driving a car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. Third, we can give the old textbooks to the lower-grade students if we don’t use them anymore. At last, we should go shopping with baskets rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take action.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“保护环境是我们的责任。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——步行或骑自行车上学、节约用水、用电、用过的课本留给低年级学生、带上购物篮等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②go shopping去购物
③better and better越来越好
[高分句型]
①Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. (when引导的时间状语从句）
②I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things. (宾语从句)
8．参考范文
Dear schoolmates,
Have you noticed that electricity waste happens every minute in our school I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity is from natural resources such as coal, and these resources are limited because they are not renewable. Therefore, we must save them, and my following suggestions will greatly reduce everyone’s electricity usage.
First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. Second, try to use electronic products as little as possible and do not overuse them. Third, use new products that consume less electricity, such as new types of light bulbs.
If everyone can do these things, the world will become better and better.
Students’ Union
16 June
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当增加细节补充内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动目的；
第二步，介绍节约用电的具体做法；
第三步，呼吁大家节约用电。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②turn off关闭
③as little as possible尽可能少地
[高分句型]
①I’d like to call on everyone to save electricity because most of our electricity is from natural resources such as coal, and these resources are limited because they are not renewable. (原因状语从句)
②First, please remember to turn off the lights when you don’t need them. (时间状语从句)
9．例文
There is always someone important to us in our lives. I am glad to introduce such a person to you. She is my English teacher.
She is of medium height and has long hair. She always wears glasses. She is very helpful and kind to all the students. She is always helping to answer questions. When I make a mistake, she never blames me. She always encourages me to study hard. All the students in my class like her.
When I grow up, I want to be a teacher just like her to help the children in my school. How lucky I am to meet her in my school life! I’ll try my best to be a person like her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍这个对自己重要的人的信息。
[亮点词汇]
①of medium height中等身高
②make a mistake犯错
③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
④grow up长大
[高分句型]
①When I make a mistake, she never blames me. (时间状语从句)
②How lucky I am to meet her in my school life! (感叹句)
10．参考范文
Dear Mary,
How is everything going Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Zhang Bo to you.
Zhang Bo is 13 years old. He is of medium build with short black hair. He has big eyes and wears glasses. He likes playing football, listening to music, reading books and keeping pets. He is outgoing and friendly. He often helps his classmates in their studies. His favourite subjects are English and Maths. He went to the English club last Saturday. He likes the English club very much, because he can communicate with his classmates in English.
I’m sure you will be good friends. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍张博的年龄和外貌，爱好和性格；
第二步，介绍他最喜欢的科目；
第三步，最后介绍他上周六的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①be of medium build中等身材
②like doing sth喜欢做某事
③communicate with sb和某人交流
[高分句型]
①I’m sure you will be good friends. (宾语从句)
②He likes English club very much, because he can communicate with his classmates in English. (because引导的原因状语从句)
11．参考范文
Dear fellow students,
Forests are important to the environment. We should plant more trees for the Earth.
At present, the coverage rate of forests in China is low, but the situation has improved in recent years. Trees can take in harmful air and keep the air fresh. Trees can prevent water and soil loss. To protect the Earth, people should take action as soon as possible.
I have some advice. First, people should plant more trees around the world. Second, people should stop cutting down too many trees.
Let’s try our best to protect the Earth!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍我国目前森林覆盖情况；
第二步，介绍植树的好处；
第三部，提出保护树木的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……是重要的
②at present目前
③cut down砍伐
[高分句型]
①To protect the Earth, people should take action as soon as possible.（动词不定式表示目的）
12．例文：
Dear Leo,
I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to share a piece of exciting news with you. Our school held activities to teach students about planting trees and protecting the environment.
The event began in the afternoon on 12 March with a lecture on how to protect trees. Following that, my classmates and I took part in a tree-planting activity. By taking part in this event, I learnt more about the importance of trees. They not only create cleaner air for us to breathe but also make our lives more convenient. I can’t imagine a world without them. I call on people to protect them from now on.
I’m looking forward to knowing about your experiences.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，特别注意不要遗漏表格中需要自行补充的“活动心得”，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。问候对方，并告知对方自己学校举办了植树造林以及保护环境的活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍活动的时间、内容以及自己的活动心得。
第三步，书写结语。期待了解对方的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①how to do sth.如何做某事
②take part in参加
③learn about
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Our school held activities to teach students about planting trees and protecting the environment.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I’m looking forward to knowing about your experiences.（动名词作宾语）
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