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高中英语人教2019版选择性必修三Unit 2 Writing学案
主题写作——给编辑的一封关于健康生活的邮件
Ⅰ考题回放
假设你是李华。最近，杂志Healthy Life就中学生的生活方式进行征稿。请你给编辑发一封电子邮件投稿，稿件包含以下内容：
你过去的生活方式以及问题所在；
你做出的改变；
最后的结果。
注意：
词数80词左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Ⅱ 写作思路
一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：应用文——一封电子邮件
主题：健康的生活方式
二定：确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息相关）
时态：一般过去时（介绍过去的情况）和一般现在时（叙述现在的情况）为主
人称：以第一人称为主
三明确：
明确写作要点：给编辑的电子邮件 介绍自己过去的情况（沉迷于吸烟、身体和精神状况都不好）
改变的过程（打篮球、锻炼等） 现在的状况（精力充沛，爱学习）。
四分段:
黄金分段法则：结合文章内容分为三段。第一段讲述自己过去的情况；第二段介绍自己做出的改变；第三段介绍现在的状况。
Ⅲ 素材整理
关键词语
tobacco, discipline, straight away, share… with, stressed out/ worn out, what is worse, become addicted to, become aware, make up one’s mind
完成句子
随着我的学业增加，我感觉心力交瘁。（stressed out）
___________________________________________________________________________________________
曾经有一段时间，我晚上失眠。（there be a time when…）
___________________________________________________________________________________________
我沉迷于吸烟，这对我的身心健康有消极的影响（be addicted to, have a negative effect on, physical）
___________________________________________________________________________________________
我突然意识到，如果不加以控制，我的坏习惯会让我一事无成。（if left unchecked）
___________________________________________________________________________________________
我下定决心马上改变自己。（make up one’s mind to do sth）
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每当我想吸烟时，我就尽量通过做其他事情来约束自己。（discipline）
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毫无疑问，我更有活力，更专注于我的学习。（There be no doubt that…, dynamic）
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Ⅳ连句成篇。
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Unit 2 Writing 答案
主题写作——给编辑的一封关于健康生活的邮件
Ⅲ 素材整理
As my studies grew, I was stressed out.
② There was a time when I couldn't sleep at night.
③ I became addicted to smoking tobacco，which had a negative effect on my physical and mental health.
④ I suddenly became aware that if left unchecked, my bad habit would make me accomplish nothing.
⑤ I made up my mind to change myself straight away.
⑥ Whenever I wanted to smoke, I tried to discipline myself by doing other things.
⑦ There is no doubt that I am more dynamic, concentrating on my study.
Ⅳ连句成篇
Dear Editor.
Here, I would like to share my story with you. As my studies grew, I was stressed out. There was a time when I couldn’t sleep at night. What was worse, I became addicted to smoking tobacco, which had a negative effect on my physical and mental health.
One day, I suddenly became aware that if left unchecked, my bad habit would make me accomplish nothing. Therefore, I made up my mind to change myself straight away. Whenever I wanted to smoke, I tried to discipline myself by doing other things. I chose to play basketball instead. In addition, I got up early to take exercise every morning.
Now, there is no doubt that I am more dynamic, concentrating on my study.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅴ话题词句背诵
【话题词块】
tobacco n.烟草;烟叶
alcohol n.酒;酒精
abuse n. &v.滥用;虐待;厚骂
dominate v.支配;控制;占有优势
negative adj.消极的:有害的;否定的
enhance vt.提高;增强;增进
refresh v.使恢复精力;使凉爽;刷新
discipline oneself严格要求自己，约束自己
physical and mental health 身心健康
rely on 依赖;依靠，信赖
straight away 立即;马上
decide on 决定;选定
make up one's mind/be determined to do sth.
下定决心做某事
be composed of/be made up of/consist of ....组或
dynamic/ energetic/ full of energy充满活力的;精力充沛的
stressed out/ worn out 精疲力尽;心力交瘁
develop a healthy eating habit
养成一个健康的饮食习惯
be beneficial to 对……有利
be harmful to 对……有害
worse still/what's worse更糟糕的是
do some outdoor activities进行一些户外活动
take plenty of physical exercise进行充足的体育锻炼
keep ft保持健康
suffer from遭受...之苦: 患……病
get overweight超重
quit/ give up playing video games放弃玩电子游戏
be used/accustomed to习惯于.....
be/become/get addicted to 对……上瘾
be in good/bad health/condition健康状况良好/不好
build up/enhance one's body增强体质
recover from 从...中恢复
skip breakfast不吃早饭
be rich in fat富含脂肪
a balanced diet均衡的饮食
【话题佳句】
I was stressed out/worn out because of the heavy pressure in my study.
因为我学习中的巨大压力，我感到精疲力尽。
There was a time when I couldn't sleep at night.
曾经有一段时间，我晚上失眠。
What worries me most is that these habits may have a negative effect on my academic performance.
最让我担心的是,这些习惯可能会对我的学习成绩有消极的影响。
Smoking/Playing video games has a negative impact on our physical and mental health.
吸烟/玩电子游戏对我们的身心健康有负面影响。
(5 ) If left unchecked, your bad habit will lead to more serious problems.
如果不加以控制，你的坏习惯会导致更严重的问题。
(6) People come to realize that good health is the most valuable thing a person can have.
人们逐渐意识到，良好的健康状况是一个人可以拥有的最有价值的东西。
(7) Only in this way can you form a healthy habit.
只有用这种方式，你才能养成健康的习惯。
(8) 1 suggest that you should take plenty of physical exercise a the weekend with your fiends.
我建议你周末和你的朋友一起进行充足的体育锻炼。
(9) Last but not least, it is essential that we have a positive attitude towards life.
最后但同样重要的是我们必须对生活持有一种积极的态度。

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