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作文学案
【学习目标】To write a passage to introduce a figure.
写作攻略
1. 审题：根据题目要求不同分为两类 1）指定人物的介绍。题目中会提供一些基本信息供选择使用。 2）自选人物进行介绍。 2. 时态的选择：对于人物的成就和贡献应使用一般过去时，人物对自己的影响用一般现在时态。 3. 注意 1）事实细节的罗列应注重内在联系和适当的过渡。不能是零散信息的简单堆砌。 2）避免句式单一 3）人物的品格成就应重点突出，可将其贡献对自己的影响联系起来。不必面面俱到 4）词汇的选用尽量精确，不泛泛而谈，特别是形容词，动词短语。
二、素材积累
1. 必备短语
品质： hardworking; determined ;strong--minded(意志坚强的); selfless; creative; devoted(投入的); committed(尽职尽责的); warm-hearted
外貌： good-looking; funny-looking; ordinary-looking; handsome; charming; beautiful; pretty; white-haired; near-sighted; healthy; bearded; leggy(腿长的); bony(瘦的); muscular（肌肉发达的；强壮的）; slim; athletic（体格健壮的）
性格： kind-hearted; absent-minded; patient; naughty; smart; intelligent; bad-tempered; attractive; confident; independent; humorous; talkative; modest; serious; friendly; extrovert（外向的）; untidy; shy; fatherly（慈爱的，父亲般的）; motherly; lovely; manly（强壮的 男子气概的）; optimistic; innocent; modest; sensitive; reliable; forgetful; sincere
兴趣爱好： be good at; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about; be strict in/with; be absorbed in; be addicted to; focus on; pay attention to; put one’s heart into
家庭背景： be born in; spend one’s childhood in; live a happy/hard life
教育背景： be admitted into/to a key university; graduate from; receive a doctor’s degree
主要事迹： serve/work as; devote one’s life to; commit oneself to; make up one’s mind to do; have a gift/talent for
成就： set a good example for; be honored/respected as; make great contributions to; make a difference to; make great contributions to; have a great effect/influence/impact on; make important discoveries; realize one’s dream/make one’s dream come true; improve the quality of life; win the admiration of; gain a bachelor’s degree/master’s degree/doctor’s degree; lead to/result in // bring about
2. 必备句型
1) As an intelligent and outstanding/extraordinary/brilliant scientist, Albert Einstein had a pleasant personality and was much respected for his friendliness. He was not only modest, but had distinctive/unique views towards things. 作为一个聪明的和杰出的科学家， 爱因斯坦有着很好的个性并且由于他的友善备受尊重。他不仅很谦虚，而且对事物有着独特的见解。
What needs to be stressed is that he is not only modest/selfless/ open-minded but also usually manages to swallow his pride and ask others for help. 需要强调的是，他不仅谦虚/无私/开明/而且通常能放下自尊向别人求助。
Mei Lanfang is still acknowledged as one of the masters of Beijing Opera. He played a key role in bringing Beijing Opera to the world, leading to the international status and recognition that it has today. Mei Lanfang is still widely remembered for his skill and his kindness and his deep love for his country. 梅兰芳至今仍被公认为京剧大师之一。 他在京剧走向世界的过程中发挥了关键作用，使京剧获得了今天的国际地位和认可。 梅兰芳的技艺、善良和对祖国的热爱至今仍被人们广泛铭记。
Mei Lanfang is acknowledged as a cultural ambassador for his great contributions to bringing Beijing Opera to the world and promoting cultural exchange between china and other countries. Meilanfang was and still is greatly loved not only for his tremendous /tr m nd s/ artistic skill but also for his great kindness to all the people and his love for his country. 梅兰芳被公认为文化大使，因为把京剧带到世界，促进中国和其他国家的文化交流而做出的贡献。 无论是过去还是现在，梅兰芳都深受人们的喜爱，不仅因为他高超的艺术技巧，还因为他对所有人的善良和他对国家的热爱。
四、范文赏析
【范文一】
【2016北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 该人物是谁；
2. 该人物的主要贡献；
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
[列提纲找思路]
1) 开头 表示荣幸和 骄傲：delighted; honor; be enthusiastic about; excited; share; interest
2) 介绍自己喜欢的中国历史人物，说明人物的贡献和对自己的影响：when it comes to; my favorite figure; person; introduce; renowned（著名的 有声望的）; widely; establish（建立 创办）; masterpiece（杰作）; impact; style; enlighten（启发 开导）; encourage
3）结尾：希望朋友能感兴趣：be interested in; tell; send; recommend; work
【答案】
Dear Jim, I am delighted to hear from you. It’s an honor to know you are enthusiastic about Chinese history. When it comes to my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Li Bai of Tang Dynasty. He was renowned as the greatest romantic poet. Over 900 poems of him survived and were widely read by later generations. He expressed his emotions in poems directly every time he was frustrated by his unsuccessful career, which formed his unique style of writing. This really enlightens me. Are you interested in Li Bai Please tell me and I’ll send you some books. Yours, Li Hua
【范文二】
【2020高考全国I卷】
你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请以身边尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
【参考范文1】The person I Respect There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhong Nanshan, who has become a household name for his great contributions to defeating viruses. First of all, Zhong Nanshan is considered as an outstanding scientist, whose research achievements are playing an increasingly significant role in the development of science. What’s more, faced with the challenge of COVID-19, he devoted himself to helping others and made great contributions to the whole society. Not only did he find an effective solution, but he encouraged countless volunteers to join him, which benefited a great many people in need. His dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like him in the future.
【参考范文2】The person I Respect There are many respectable people around us. Among them, the person I respect most is Zhang Guimei, who has become a household name for her great contributions to promoting girl’s education. First of all, Zhang Guimei is considered as an outstanding educator, whose educational practices are playing an increasingly significant role in the development of girls’ education. What’s more, faced with the challenge of poverty, she devoted herself to helping girls enter high school and made great contributions. Not only did she found the Huaping Girls High School, but she encouraged countless volunteers to join her, which benefited a great many girls in need. Her dedication to education and to students is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like her in the future.
【参考范文3】The person I Respect Mr. Liu, aged 58, is my English teacher. He is so humorous, responsible and selfless that I respect and love him very much. To be honest, his assistance has a great impact on me. It was Mr. Liu who made me realize the importance of learning English well. Had it not been for his guidance and encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first place in the city English speech contest. Without his aid, I wouldn’t have a good understanding in English. I’ll definitely remember his kindness and help forever. Mr. Liu is a very respectable teacher indeed! I do thank him for what he did for me.

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