读后续写:“我” 帮助爷孙的故事 讲义素材-广西桂林市2024-2025学年高三下学期开学质量检测英语试题

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读后续写:“我” 帮助爷孙的故事 讲义素材-广西桂林市2024-2025学年高三下学期开学质量检测英语试题

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读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was just another regular afternoon at the supermarket where I work part-time after school. The usual sounds of busy shoppers, the steady beeps of the checkout counters, and the occasional chatting of colleagues filled the air. As I arranged snacks on the shelves near the cashier, a moment caught my eye that took me back to a memory I’d long treasured.
An elderly man, dressed in a worn jacket, stood at the register with a young boy holding a bag of brightly packaged cookies. The boy’s eyes shone with excitement, and he kept asking his grandfather if they could take the cookies home. The grandfather hesitated as the cashier added up the items. I could see the worry on his face when he pulled out a few wrinkled bills and a government assistance card.
When the total came up, it was clear that he didn’t have enough. The grandfather let out a small sigh and crouched (蹲下) down to explain to the boy that they would have to leave the cookies behind. The boy’s face fell immediately. His earlier excitement turned into sadness as he placed the cookies back on the counter with shaking hands.
I froze for a moment. The scene reminded me of a Christmas from my childhood, one I would never forget. My mom, a single parent, had lost her job just weeks before the holiday. We were struggling to make ends meet, and I was old enough to understand that our Christmas dinner would be far from cheerful. But then something magical happened. Our neighbor, Mrs Jenkins, knocked on our door on Christmas Eve. She came with arms full of food — ham, potatoes, pies, and even a box of Christmas chocolates. “I thought you could use some extra cheer,” she said with a wart n smile. That small act of kindness turned what could have been a sad holiday into one of the most joyous I’d ever had.
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The wonderful memory inspired me to step forward to the counter.
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The next morning, I was called into my manager’s office.
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“我” 帮助爷孙的故事续写
续写要点
第一段:续写重点在于 “我” 帮助爷孙后的情节发展。详细描述爷孙俩的反应,爷爷感激的话语、激动的神情,小男孩欢呼雀跃的样子,以及周围顾客的反应,如投来赞许的目光,小声议论 “我” 的善举。同时,“我” 内心充满温暖,回想起 Mrs Jenkins 的善举,意识到善良的传递是如此美好。接着,经理注意到了这一幕,虽未当场表态,但默默将此事记在心里。
第二段:着重描写经理与 “我” 在办公室的对话。经理表扬 “我” 的行为体现了商店的良好形象,对 “我” 的善良和同理心给予高度评价。随后,经理宣布给予 “我” 奖励,如奖金、额外假期或荣誉证书等。“我” 感到惊喜又自豪,深刻认识到一个小小的善举不仅能改变他人的一天,还能带来意想不到的回报。最后,“我” 决定将这份善意传递下去,在生活中寻找更多帮助他人的机会。
情感线
起初,“我” 看到爷孙俩因钱不够而无法买饼干,内心涌起同情,回想起童年受助经历,决定施以援手。帮助他们后,“我” 收获了爷孙俩的感激,周围人的认可,内心充满温暖与成就感。被经理叫到办公室时,“我” 从紧张不安转变为惊喜自豪,因善举得到肯定,更加坚定了传递善意的决心,对善良的力量有了更深的感悟,情感从个人的触动上升到对社会温情的积极追求。
故事线
“我” 在超市工作时,看到爷孙俩因钱不够,无法购买小男孩心仪的饼干。
“我” 回忆起童年时邻居 Mrs Jenkins 在困境中给予自己家帮助的经历,深受触动,决定为爷孙俩支付差价。
爷孙俩对 “我” 的帮助十分感激,小男孩重新展露笑容,周围顾客也对 “我” 投来赞许目光,经理默默关注到这一幕。
第二天,经理将 “我” 叫到办公室,对 “我” 的善举表示高度赞扬。
经理宣布给予 “我” 奖励,以表彰 “我” 为商店树立了良好形象。
“我” 深受鼓舞,决定今后在生活中积极传递善意,帮助更多需要帮助的人。
主旨升华句
This experience has taught me that a simple act of kindness, like a ripple in the pond, can spread warmth and happiness far and wide.(这次经历让我明白,一个简单的善举,就像池塘里的涟漪,能将温暖和幸福传播得很远很广。)
From this, I truly understand that helping others not only brings joy to those in need but also enriches our own lives in unexpected ways.(从这件事,我真正理解到帮助他人不仅给有需要的人带来快乐,也会以意想不到的方式丰富我们自己的生活。)
It turns out that the power of kindness is boundless. It can bridge gaps, bring smiles to sad faces, and make the world a more beautiful place.(事实证明,善良的力量是无穷的。它能跨越隔阂,给悲伤的面容带来笑容,让世界变得更美好。)
Through this act, I've realized that we all have the ability to be the change we wish to see in the world, and every small kindness counts.(通过这次善举,我意识到我们都有能力成为我们希望在世界上看到的改变,每一个小小的善意都很重要。)
This encounter serves as a reminder that in the journey of life, a little compassion can go a long way, inspiring others to pay it forward and create a cycle of kindness.(这次相遇提醒我们,在人生旅途中,一点同情心能产生深远影响,激励他人将善意传递下去,形成一个善良的循环。)
写作示范
示范一
The wonderful memory inspired me to step forward to the counter. I quickly took out my wallet and paid the difference for the cookies. The grandfather looked at me in disbelief, his eyes glistening with gratitude. “You are an angel, young man. Thank you from the bottom of my heart,” he choked out. The little boy jumped up and down, his face beaming with joy. “Thank you, mister! Now I can have my cookies!” he exclaimed. The customers in line nodded in approval, and a few even smiled at me. I felt a warm glow inside, knowing that I had made a difference. The manager, who had been watching from a distance, also gave me a thumbs - up.
The next morning, I was called into my manager’s office. I entered nervously, wondering if I had done something wrong. But the manager greeted me with a big smile. “I saw what you did yesterday, and I couldn't be prouder,” he said. “Your kindness not only made that boy’s day but also reflects the values we uphold in this store. As a token of our appreciation, we're giving you a $100 bonus.” I was stunned. I never expected such a reward. “Thank you so much, sir,” I stammered. This experience taught me that a small act of kindness can bring about great changes and that it always comes back to you in unexpected ways. From then on, I was more determined to spread kindness wherever I went.
示范二
The wonderful memory inspired me to step forward to the counter. I reached into my pocket and pulled out the money, saying, “Don't worry, I'll cover the rest.” The grandfather's eyes widened in surprise, and he grasped my hand tightly. “Thank you, son. You've no idea how much this means to us,” he said, his voice filled with emotion. The boy looked at me with adoration, his eyes shining like stars. “You're so cool, mister!” he cried. The people around us clapped, and I blushed, feeling a sense of pride. The manager, who was passing by, noticed the commotion and stopped to watch.
The next morning, I was called into my manager’s office. I was a bit worried, thinking I might have broken some rules. But when I entered, the manager had a huge smile on his face. “I want to commend you for your kind act yesterday,” he said. “It was a beautiful display of humanity, and it made our store look good. We're going to feature you in our monthly newsletter as the ‘Employee of the Month’ and give you a week's paid vacation.” I was overjoyed. This experience made me realize that a simple act of kindness can have a profound impact. It not only brings happiness to others but also rewards us in ways we never imagined. I decided then and there to always be on the lookout for opportunities to help those in need.
【答案】参考范文:
The wonderful memory inspired me to step forward to the counter. I took a deep breath and approached there with a smile. “Would it be alright if I paid for the cookies ” I asked gently. The elderly man looked at me in surprise, his eyes wide with disbelief. “Someone once helped my family during a tough time. This is my chance to pay it forward,” I explained. Without hesitation, I handed my card to the cashier and paid. The boy’s face lit up as he hugged the cookies tightly. “Thank you. You’ve made our day,” the elderly man said with heartfelt gratitude.
The next morning, I was called into my manager’s office. For a brief moment, a sinking feeling gripped me — I feared I might have made a mistake. To my surprise, my manager welcomed me with a warm smile and handed me a heartfelt note from the elderly man. In it, he detailed how profoundly my small act of kindness had impacted him and his grandson. “We’re proud to have you,” my manager remarked, presenting me with a certificate of appreciation. Touched beyond words, I realized it wasn’t the recognition but the far-reaching ripple of kindness that truly mattered. As I left the office, I resolved to seize every opportunity to spread generosity.

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