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Callie was a high school student, because of her parents’ business, her family moved from London to Los Angeles where she grew up. Living in a quiet and warm community with her parents, Callie was very interested in various volunteer activities in the community, and almost no one in the community didn’t know her.
On a sunny afternoon, Callie was reading a poem when she heard a soft knock. She stood up at once and opened the door. Her favorite neighbor, Mrs. Baker, stood outside the door.
“I need your help, Callie,” Mrs. Baker said, “and do you know the empty lot down the street ” Callie nodded, smiling. “The place is a mess, covered with trash. The city is letting us use the lot as a community garden,” she explained. “We need help to clean up the lot on Saturday.” “Sure, Mrs. Baker!” Callie said cheerfully. “Just have nothing to do this Saturday. I will be happy to help you!” Mrs. Baker looked pleased and said, “Thanks, Callie. We want to get the garden planted before summer. By then, adults and children in our community will have had a good place to go.”
At school the next morning, Callie’s close friend Tamara was waiting for her by their classroom, who had a surprise for her. Tamara said, “My mom bought tickets to Fun World this Saturday. She has an extra one for you!” The girls had been waiting for months for the amusement park to reopen.
Callie sighed and worried over how to choose for the rest of the day. Her mother noticed her mood when she arrived home. “Did something go wrong at school ” her mother asked. Callie explained her problem. “What should I do, Mom ” Callie asked. “I know you want to go with Tamara and also want to help Mrs. Baker. Think carefully about your choice, and you need to make your own decision. But I know you will do what is best.” her mother answered.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para.1: Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision.
Para.2: On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot.
Callie关于志愿者活动选择的故事续写
续写要点
第一段：细致描绘 Callie 在做决定时内心的激烈挣扎，她在游乐园的诱惑与社区责任之间权衡。要展现她从犹豫、纠结到最终坚定选择帮助社区的心理转变过程，可通过回忆 Mrs. Baker 的请求、想象社区花园建成后的美好画面等方式，促使她做出决定，并且描述她告知 Tamara 决定时的场景。
第二段：具体讲述 Callie 在周六参与清理空地的全过程，包括到达空地后与 Mrs. Baker 及其他邻居的互动，详细描述她所承担的各项工作，如搬运重物、绘制花园规划草图等。强调她在劳动过程中的身体感受和内心的满足感，以及看到空地逐渐改变后的欣喜，最后阐述社区花园对整个社区的意义。
情感线
起初，Callie 面对游乐园的邀请和社区志愿活动，内心充满纠结与矛盾，渴望去游乐园玩耍但又觉得对社区有责任。在思考过程中，她的情绪逐渐倾向于社区，从犹豫转为坚定。当告知 Tamara 决定时，她有些愧疚，但同时也因自己的决定而感到一丝自豪。在参与志愿活动时，她从一开始的干劲十足，到劳动中的疲惫但坚持，再到看到成果时的喜悦与满足，情感随着行动不断变化，最终收获了强烈的成就感。
故事线
Callie 在晚上反复思考游乐园之行和社区志愿活动的选择，内心纠结。
回忆 Mrs. Baker 的请求以及社区花园的规划，Callie 逐渐坚定选择帮助社区。
Callie 打电话给 Tamara，向她解释自己的决定，Tamara 表示理解。
周六，Callie 来到空地与 Mrs. Baker 和其他邻居会合，开始清理工作。
Callie 积极投入劳动，承担多种任务，在过程中虽疲惫但坚持。
空地清理完成，初步规划出花园模样，Callie 和大家看到成果十分开心。
主旨升华句
True happiness often lies in making sacrifices for the greater good of the community, as Callie discovered.（正如 Callie 所发现的，真正的幸福往往在于为了社区的更大利益而做出牺牲。）
The choices we make, even when difficult, can shape not only our own lives but also the lives of those around us, just like Callie's decision.（我们所做的选择，即使艰难，也不仅能塑造我们自己的生活，还能影响周围人的生活，就像 Callie 的决定一样。）
Community spirit is built on the selfless contributions of individuals, and Callie's act of kindness is a shining example.（社区精神建立在个人的无私奉献之上，Callie 的善举是一个光辉的榜样。）
Sometimes, giving up immediate personal pleasures for long - term community benefits is the path to true fulfillment, as Callie's story shows.（正如 Callie 的故事所示，有时为了长期的社区利益而放弃眼前的个人乐趣，是通往真正满足的道路。）
Through her choice, Callie taught us that the value of helping others and building a better community is immeasurable.（通过她的选择，Callie 告诉我们帮助他人和建设更美好社区的价值是无法估量的。）
写作示范
示范一
Para.1: Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. The images of thrilling rides at Fun World and the messy empty lot in need of cleaning kept flashing in her mind. She tossed and turned in bed, torn between the two options. However, as she thought about Mrs. Baker's kind eyes and the bright future of the community garden, her heart began to lean towards volunteering. Finally, she picked up the phone and called Tamara. With a heavy heart, she explained her choice. Tamara was disappointed at first but then said she was proud of Callie. Callie felt a mix of relief and determination.
Para.2: On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. She was greeted with warm smiles from the neighbors. Without hesitation, Callie started working. She helped carry heavy bags of trash, dug the soil, and even used some old wood to build simple fences. As the sun shone brightly, she felt the sweat dripping down her face, but she didn't stop. By the end of the day, the empty lot had been transformed into a promising space. Callie looked around, filled with a sense of accomplishment. She knew that this community garden would bring joy to everyone, and her decision was truly worth it.
示范二
Para.1: Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. She sat at her desk, staring at the calendar, with the dates of the amusement park visit and the community clean - up marked. The thought of the fun she'd miss at Fun World made her sad, but she couldn't shake the feeling of responsibility towards the community. She remembered how much the community had welcomed her family. After a long time of deliberation, she decided to help with the garden. She called Tamara, her voice a bit shaky as she explained. Tamara was understanding, and their friendship remained strong. Callie felt a new sense of purpose.
Para.2: On Saturday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. She joined the group of neighbors, full of energy. She was in charge of removing the stubborn weeds and later helped design the flower - bed layout. As she worked, she chatted with the other volunteers, sharing ideas. The hot sun didn't dampen her spirits. When the day ended, the lot was clean and had the outline of a beautiful garden. Callie looked at the 成果，a huge smile on her face. She realized that by choosing to help the community, she had not only created a wonderful place but also learned the true meaning of giving.
参考答案
Callie spent the rest of the evening thinking about her decision. She wanted to go to Fun World, but in the end she decided that her promise to her neighbor was more important. The next day at school, Callie told Tamara that she would not be able to go to Fun World. Tamara tried to understand, but Callie could tell Tamara was disappointed. The girls hardly spoke for the rest of the week.
On Sunday, Callie met Mrs. Baker at the empty lot. “Your mother said you made a tough choice. Thank you for giving a hand today.” Callie smiled as she cleaned with a large trash bag. “Do you need any help ” a voice behind her asked. Callie turned, surprised to see Tamara. “I know you made a promise to clean up the garden, and I wanted to come to help you. My mom said she could take us to Fun World next weekend.” With joint efforts, they finished the cleaning. Both Callie and Tamara realized that once a promise is made, it needs to be kept.

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