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参考答案
一、书面表达
（一）参考范文：
Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you argued with your mom. I think it’s not a good way to shout at her. It may make your mom very sad. I think you should say sorry to her first. Why don’t you sit down and communicate with your mother You can tell her why you don’t want to do chores. You can do some chores on weekends. Sometimes, doing chores makes us relaxed.
I often help my mom do chores at home, such as taking out the rubbish, cleaning the living room, making my bed and so on. In my opinion, it’s important for students to learn how to do chores. We depend on our parents too much. Doing chores helps to develop our independence and teaches us how to take care of ourselves. It can also help us to understand the idea of fairness. Everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy. I don’t think doing chores is a waste of time. You can try it. I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
（二）评分说明：本大题共15分，请按以下四档标准进行评分。
第一档：(15分) 符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误。
第二档：(11 — 14分) 符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。
第三档：(6 — 10分) 基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言有部分错误。
第四档：(0 — 5分) 不符合题意要求，表达不够清楚, 逻辑关系混乱，语言错误很多。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
二、书面表达（15分）
参考范文：
Doing Chores
Many students hate doing chores, but I like to do chores very much. I usually sweep the floor, clean the table, wash clothes, and even cook. I almost do chores every day.
I think doing chores is very important to us. First, we can improve our hands-on and creative abilities by doing chores. We can also be independent and responsible. We will feel strong and be able to help others so that we become confident. What’s more, when doing chores, we can connect what we experience with what we learn from books .
Start to do chores now!
三、
Dear Looking for help,
I'm glad to hear from you. I know it's not easy being your age and it's normal to have these feelings. I'd like to give you some advice.
First of all, you need to say sorry for being late for school. Then you could communicate with the teacher. I think the teacher will understand you and believe in you. Secondly, it's common for students to leave homework at home. But why don't you check all the things you need carefully before you leave school You must develop a good habit. However, you don't have to stay up late. It's really important to get enough sleep so that you won't feel sleepy the next day.
Try to follow the advice. I hope things will be better for you.
四、书面表达（计15分）
（一） 参考答案：(略)
（二）评分说明：本大题共15分, 请按以下四档标准进行评分。
第一档：(15分)符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误。
第二档：(11—14分)符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。
第三档：(6—10分)基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言有部分错误。
第四档：(0—5分)不符合题意要求，表达不够清楚，逻辑关系混乱，语言错误很多。
若书写潦草，可在以上基础上酌情扣除1-3分。
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
补充说明：
照抄试卷中的 阅读材料或题中要点提示句的一律判0分。
拼写与标点符号是语言准确的一个方向，应视其对语言表达的影响程度予以考虑，如 书写较差以致影响表达，将分数降低一个档次。
词数应在80词左右，如不足80词，只能最高按二档计分，超过80词，不扣分。
对完成了试题规定的任务，语言地道，准确的书面表达，可给予满分。
五、书面表达（计15分）
（一）答案：略
(二) 评分说明：本大题共15分, 请按以下四档标准进行评分。
第一档：(15分) 符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误。
第二档：(11—14分) 符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。
第三档：(6 — 10分) 基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言有部分错误。
第四档：(0 — 5分) 不符合题意要求，表达不够清楚，逻辑关系混乱，语言错误很多。
六、书面表达（计15分）
As a family member, it’s our duty to help our parents do housework.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping to buy food for lunch, I began to clean my house. First, I swept the floor and wiped the table. Then, I collected all the books and other things and put them in place. Finally, I took all the rubbish out. When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me. I felt so happy at that time. So I keep doing housework, such as sweeping the floor or tidying the room.
Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them. So I suggest all of us should take action from now on.
七、书面表达（共15分)
评分说明：本大题共15分, 请按以下四档标准进行评分。
第一档：(15分)符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误。
第二档：(11—14分)符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。
第三档：(6—10分)基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言有部分错误。
第四档：(0—5分)不符合题意要求，表达不够清楚，逻辑关系混乱，语言错误很多。
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、学校及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
八、书面表达（计15分)
（一）范文
I want to be a volunteer. I want to volunteer in a children’s home to help kids.
I am good with kids. I am interested in teaching kids. I can teach kids to sing and dance. And I am really good at repairing the broken toys. I can also help with chores. The clean and tidy rooms can make kids feel comfortable.
There are 3 reasons. First, the children in the children’s home are sometimes lonely. They need my help. I can make friends with the kids. And I can cheer them up. Second, I can learn more about how to take care of kids. I believe it can help me to get my future dream job. Third, as a teenager, I should help other people. If I help others, I will be happier. I believe I can do this volunteer job well.
（二）评分说明：本大题共15分，请按以下四档标准进行评分。
第一档：（15分）符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误。
第二档：（11— 14分）符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。
第三档：（6 — 10分）基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言有部分错误。
第四档：（0 — 5分）不符合题意要求，表达不够清楚，逻辑关系混乱，语言错误很多。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
九、书面表达（计15分）
参考范文：
These days, our spare time is much longer than before. So we have more free time to do what we like. But how to better use our free time？Here is some of my advice.
First, it’s important to care for our family. Since our parents are busy with their work, we can share some housework like sweeping the floor, cleaning the rooms and doing the dishes. This can not only help develop our independence, but also make our parents relaxed and happy. Secondly, why not do something to improve ourselves？We can do some sports to keep healthy or take up a new hobby. Last but not least, it’s a good idea to take part in the volunteer activities and help others. For example, we can visit the old people’s home or help the young children study. When we help others, we can also get a strong feeling of satisfaction.
All in all, let’s enjoy our after- school time and make it meaningful and colorful!
评分标准：
评分原则
1.本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
一档 12—15分 包含提供的所有信息，并能根据内容合理发挥；语篇结构完整；应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇；用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清晰；没有或基本没有（不超过1-2处）语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。
二档 9—11分 包含提供的所有信息，但内容欠丰富；语篇结构基本完整；应用的语言结构和词汇虽不太丰富，但能满足任务要求；句子基本通顺，表达基本清楚；语言虽有一些错误（不超过5处），但基本不影响意义表达；书写较工整；字数基本符合要求。
三档 5—8分 虽包含提供的大部分信息，但内容过少或部分内容偏离；语篇结构不够完整；应用的语言结构单一，不能满足任务要求；句子不够通顺，行文不够连贯；语言错误多，一定程度上影响意义表达；书写不够工整；字数不足40。
四档 0—4分 只写出一些与内容相关的词汇或句子，但语言错误多，几乎难以理解；所写内容杂乱，不知所云；书写潦草；字数不足20；抄袭试卷中的文段均为0分。
十、书面表达（计15分）
（一）参考范文：
Doing chores
I like doing chores at home and I usually help my parents with some chores at home. My parents work every day and they have no time to do chores every night. I often help do the chores.
There are many chores I can do at home. I can sweep the floor after I finish my homework. I usually take out the rubbish when I go to school in the morning. I think a clean and tidy environment is very important to us, so I usually help clean up the house every weekend. Now, I can cook meals very well.
I think teenagers should do chores at home. Because doing chores can develop our independence and teach us to learn how to take care of ourselves. Doing chores also helps us understand the idea of fairness. In my opinion, the earlier we learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.
（二）评分说明：本大题共15分，其中结构2分，内容10分，书写3分，请按以下四档标准进行评分。
第一档：(15分) 符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句通顺，语言正确无误。
第二档：(11 — 14分) 符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言基本无误。
第三档：(6 — 10分) 基本符合题意要求，表达基本完整，条理较清晰，语句较通顺，语言有部分错误。
第四档：(0 — 5分) 不符合题意要求，表达不够清楚，逻辑关系混乱，语言错误很多。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）2024-2025学年八年级下册人教版英语期中备考-书面表达
一、书面表达（计15分)
假如你是李华，请阅读你的朋友Eric给你的邮件，并给他回复。
要求：1. 词数70左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。
3. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分
Dear Li Hua, I’m in trouble now. Yesterday I argued with my mom and shouted at her. She wants me to learn to do chores, but I have too much homework and don’t have time to do chores. And I don’t like doing chores, either. She worries that I won’t take care of myself in the future. Now I’m very sad. What should I do Do you often help your parents do housework at home What chores do you often do What do you think of doing chores Yours, Eric
二、书面表达（计15分）
不同的学生对做家务持有不同的观点。你的观点是什么？请以“Doing chores”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对做家务的看法以及你的做法。
写作要求:
1. 紧扣主题，结合提示信息，适当发挥，语言表达准确、语义通顺连贯；
2. 书写工整，不少于80词。请考生将题目写在答题卡相应处。
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（校名，姓名，地名等）。
提示：
1. Do you like doing chores
2 What chores do you usually do
3. How often do you usually do chores
4. What do you think of doing chores Or what benefits (益处) has doing chores brought you
Doing Chores
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三、书面表达（计 15分）
下面是一位同学在学校论坛上写的一个帖子，想征求大家的意见，找到解决问题的方法。请你写一封回帖提出你的建议。
要求：
1.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2.不少于60词。可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Looking for help,
I'm glad to hear from you. I know it's not easy being your age and it's normal to have these feelings. I'd like to give you some advice.
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四、书面表达（计15分）
假如你是李华，刚刚收到英国网友Frank发来的邮件。请根据邮件内容，给他回一封信，谈谈你的看法并给他一些建议(每个问题至少提一个建议)。
Dear Li Hua, How's it going I really need your help! These days my mom is angry with me because I hardly ever help out around the house but watch TV all the time after school. At school, I study really hard at English, but I can't get good grades. What's worse, I got into a fight with my best friend because I lost his favorite CD．What should I do Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Frank
要求：
1.邮件必须回答所提问题，并可适当增加细节，使行文通顺、连贯；
2.邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名：
3.词数不少于80词，邮件开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。
Dear Frank,
I'm sorry to here that you are in trouble these days.___________________________
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Hope things work out!
Yours,
Li Hua
五、书面表达（计15分）
某英文报正在组织“Who should you talk to when in trouble ”调查活动，假如你是李华， 你校参加了此次活动。请根据表格内容，给报社编辑写一封信，介绍你校的调查结果并阐明你的观点。
Students Opinions Reasons
Most students talk to classmates and friends communicate and understand easily, …
Some students talk to teachers and parents have much experience, …
A few students be in their own way hardly get on well with others, …
I … …
要求：
1. 词数：80词左右（信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 使用表格中所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear Editor,
I am a Grade 8 student. Recently we have made a survey —“Who should you talk to when in trouble ” Here are the results. _________________________________________________
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Best wishes.
Li Hua
六、书面表达（计15分）
作为家庭的一员，每个人都有做家务的责任和义务。根据以下提示与要求，用英语写一篇短文。提示：
1. What housework do you usually do
2. Tell an experience of doing housework.
3. What have you learned from it
要求：
1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2.不少于70词。
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七、书面表达（计15分）
假如你是李华，刚刚收到英国网友Mike发来的邮件。请结合Mike的问题给他一些建议，并以邮件的形式给他回复。
Dear Li Hua, How’s it going I really need your help! Last weekend, I argued with my mom because I refused to do the housework. And we don’t talk to each other and she doesn’t do any housework now. I was very sad. What can I do What’s more, my parents give me so much pressure about school. They just care about my grades. So I don’t have enough free time to do what I like. I always feel nervous. What should I do Hope to hear from you soon. Mike
要求：
1. 邮件需包含信中问题，可适当发挥，使行文通顺、连贯；
邮件中请不要使用真实的人名、校名；
词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。
Dear Mike, I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble these days. _____________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope things work out! Li Hua
八、书面表达（计15分)
作为当代青少年，我们每个人都应积极参与到志愿活动中。请以 “Be a volunteer”为题，根据以下提示与要求，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：1. Which volunteer job do you want to do
2. How can your interests and hobbies help you to do the job
3. Why do you want to do the volunteer job
要求：1.包含以上所有信息提示，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
3.单词词数不少于80词。
九、书面表达（计15分）
当前中学生有了越来越多的课余活动时间，如何充实有意义地利用空闲时间成为中学生们讨论的热点话题。请你从关爱家人、提升自己、帮助他人三方面, 提出你的建议。
提示：
care for family share housework with mom, listen to parents carefully…
improve ourselves do sports;learn to play the piano …
help others take part in volunteer activities …
写作要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范，词数不少于80，所给开头不计入总词数；
2. 包含提示内容, 可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
These days, we have more free time than before._______________________________________
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十、书面表达（计15分)
在日常生活中，你经常做家务吗？你会做哪些家务？你认为青少年应不应该做家务，为什么？请以Doing chores为题，根据以下要求和提示，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
Do you usually chores at home
What chores can you do
Do you think young people should do chores at home Why or why not
要求：
短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分；
内容必须包含以上提示要点，可适当拓展。不少于80词。
Doing chores
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