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My friend Avery and I tried out for Alice in Wonderland several weeks ago. Avery really hoped she could get picked to be Alice. I said, “You’d make a great Alice! I don’t care what part I get as long as I’m in it.” Then she asked, “So you’d be happy to have a small part like the Dormouse ” I replied, “Exactly!”
A few days later, Avery and I raced over to the theatre office, where the director had posted the cast list.
“Wow!” said Avery. “You got the part of Alice and I got the part of the March Hare.”
“That can’t be right,” I said. “There must be some mistake!”
But I was really given the part of Alice. The reason why I’d done well during the audition (试镜) was that I was not nervous at all, because I had never thought I could get the major role.
I asked her if she wanted to practise our lines after school. Avery responded, “You mean practise your lines No, thanks. I’m busy this week.” “OK. How about someday next week ” I asked. “Sorry,” she whispered, “I’m sure I’m busy forever.”
That night at dinner, after my parents congratulated me on getting the lead role, they asked how I felt about it.
“Well, I’m confused,” I said. “Avery was so upset that I was picked to be Alice. She threw away our friendship.”
“Arizona, don’t you think this might be an opportunity for you to be an extra-good friend ” said my dad. “Sometimes when our friends do well, we feel envious (嫉妒的) and don’t know how to act. Try giving her a little time and understanding. I guess she’ll come around before long.”
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Over the next week, I did my best to give Avery some space.
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Our play ended up going great.
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《爱丽丝梦游仙境》演出与友情续写
续写要点
第一段：着重描绘 “我” 给予 Avery 空间的具体行为，除了留便签，还可包括在学校的日常互动中保持适当距离，给她时间调整心态。同时，细腻刻画 Avery 的心理变化，从最初的嫉妒、排斥，到看到便签后的触动，最终主动向 “我” 道歉求和，以及两人重归于好后共同努力排练的场景。
第二段：详细叙述演出的精彩过程，比如观众的反应细节，Avery 和 “我” 在舞台上的出色表现，动作、表情、台词等方面的呈现。演出结束后，突出两人之间深厚的友谊以及对这次经历的深刻感悟，将友谊与演出成功紧密联系起来。
情感线
在得知 “我” 被选为主角后，Avery 因嫉妒而产生不满情绪，对 “我” 态度冷淡，两人友谊出现裂痕，“我” 感到困惑和失落。
“我” 听从父亲建议，给予 Avery 空间，通过留便签表达善意，Avery 逐渐被打动，内心的嫉妒开始消散，产生愧疚感，主动向 “我” 道歉，两人重归于好，友谊得以修复，此时 “我” 感到欣喜和宽慰。
演出成功后，两人充满自豪，友谊在共同经历中进一步升华，对彼此的情谊更加深厚，内心满是感动与珍惜。
故事线
“我” 和 Avery 一起参加《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的试镜，“我” 意外获得爱丽丝的角色，Avery 成为三月兔，Avery 因嫉妒对 “我” 态度恶劣。
“我” 听从父亲建议，给 Avery 空间，不在排练上勉强她，而是在她的储物柜留下鼓励和表达想念的便签。
Avery 看到便签后，内心有所触动，开始反思自己的行为，意识到自己的错误。
Avery 主动找到 “我”，为自己之前的行为道歉，两人冰释前嫌，决定一起认真排练。
演出当天，Avery 和 “我” 在舞台上完美演绎各自角色，将《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的奇妙世界生动呈现给观众。
演出大获成功，Avery 和 “我” 收获了观众的热烈掌声，两人的友谊也在这次经历中变得更加坚不可摧。
主旨升华句
True friendship has the power to weather the storm of envy and emerge even stronger, teaching us the value of patience and understanding.
In the journey of friendship, moments of jealousy can be transformed into opportunities for growth, strengthening the bond between friends.
The magic of friendship lies in its ability to overcome the most challenging emotions, such as envy, and create lasting memories.
A strong friendship is not defined by the absence of envy, but by the willingness to forgive and work through it together.
Through the experience of envy and reconciliation, we learn that true friends are those who can turn a difficult situation into a chance to deepen their connection.
写作示范一
Over the next week, I did my best to give Avery some space. I refrained from asking her about rehearsals and simply smiled at her in the hallway. Every morning, I placed a handwritten note in her locker. One note read, “Your energy will make the March Hare unforgettable.” As days passed, I noticed a change in her. One afternoon, she stopped me in the corridor. Her eyes were filled with remorse as she said, “I was so wrong. I let jealousy get the better of me. Can we start over and practice ” I nodded eagerly. From that day on, we spent hours after school, perfecting our lines and acting skills, supporting each other every step of the way.
Our play ended up going great. As soon as the curtain rose, the audience was spellbound. Avery's portrayal of the March Hare was full of energy, and I did my best to bring Alice to life. We synchronized our movements and delivered our lines with precision. When the final scene ended, the applause was deafening. We took our bows, looking at each other with tears of joy. This play not only showcased our acting talents but also mended our broken friendship, proving that true friends can overcome any obstacle.
写作示范二
Over the next week, I did my best to give Avery some space. I didn't bring up the play around her and focused on my own preparations. I also made sure to compliment her on other things, like her new haircut. Along with the locker notes, I once left a small flower by her desk. One day, I found her waiting for me after class. She fidgeted nervously and then said, “I'm really sorry for being so distant. I was jealous, but I realize now how silly that was. Let's practice together.” I was thrilled. We immediately started planning our rehearsal schedule and helped each other with the tricky parts of our roles.
Our play ended up going great. The audience was captivated from the first scene. Avery's performance as the March Hare was both hilarious and endearing, and I felt a sense of confidence on stage. We could feel the energy from the audience as we performed. When the curtain closed, the cheers were overwhelming. We hugged each other tightly, knowing that our friendship had not only survived but thrived. This experience taught us that friendship is more precious than any role and that understanding can heal even the deepest rifts.
【答案】
Over the next week, I did my best to give Avery some space. Then one day, I approached her. “I know you didn’t exactly love the idea of being the March Hare, but you’re such a talented actress, and the way you say your lines is great.” “Thanks,” said Avery happily, with a big smile on her face. “Well,” I said, “I’m still struggling with a few things about my character. I’d love your help if you have any free time this week.” She smiled. “I might be free on Thursday.” And we practised carefully and passionately on Thursday.
Our play ended up going great. We had so much fun, and the audience loved the perfect show. They broke into loud applause. And even though things were rough for a little while with Avery and me, they’re better than ever now! She even apologized for the way she acted at first. And I’ve learned an important lesson from this experience. Give your teammate a little time and understanding, and he or she just might come around before too long.

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