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读后续写
It was the night. The rain was coming down hard outside.
All through the house, not an animal was moving, not even my dog, Lucky. Suddenly, I woke to a strange sound. From my bed, I could see water rushing in under the front door. I threw off the covers and jumped out of bed, putting on my slippers (拖鞋). I knew I was living in a flood area, so I’d carried out this emergency plan in my head many times. I gathered up my important things.
I tried the back door, but it didn’t work. That wasn’t part of the plan. My truck was parked in the back, and this was the quickest way to it. I pushed with all my strength, but the door wouldn’t open. The water must be higher than I thought. I hurried to the front door. To my relief (宽慰), it opened. Now I just had to get Lucky.
I turned around and saw that she’d climbed to higher ground. “Come here, Lucky!” I called out. About five inches (英寸) covered the floor now, with more rushing in through the open door. Lucky knew something was wrong. She wasn’t moving. With my hands full, perhaps it would be easier to get my truck, put my things in it, then pull up to the front door and carry Lucky out. “Stay, girl!” I said before stepping outside and closing the door behind me.
The water became a roar. When I made it to the truck, I opened the door and climbed inside, hoping it would start. Luckily, the engine came to life. I drove to the front of the house to pick up Lucky. Halfway up the driveway, however, a wave killed the engine instantly. Kicking off my ruined slippers, I walked carefully through the water toward the front door.
With the water still rising, the doorknob (球形门拉手) was now completely under water. I pulled the door until the doorknob came off in my hand, sending me backward into the water. I had to get to higher ground outside to find help for Lucky before it was too late.
I turned around and started walking toward the main road.
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Thanks to the driver’s help, I phoned the police on the road.
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洪水救援故事续写
一、续写要点（两段）
第一段：着重描写警察带着 Lucky 回来后，自己与警察、司机之间的互动细节。比如详细表达对他们的感激之情，询问一些关于洪水后续处理的建议等。同时，可简单描述周围环境在洪水后的惨状，如被冲毁的房屋、漂浮的杂物等。
第二段：讲述洪水过后自己的生活变化。例如，重新审视家庭应急计划，增添更多应对洪水的物资；积极参与社区组织的洪水救援经验分享活动，向邻居们传授应对洪水的知识；还可以描述自己和 Lucky 的关系因这次经历变得更加紧密，Lucky 在洪水后的一些暖心举动等。
二、情感线（150 字）
故事起始于主角对洪水的惊慌以及对 Lucky 的担忧，在逃生过程中情感愈发焦虑。遇到司机获得帮助后，焦虑有所缓解，增添了一丝希望。警察到来并成功救出 Lucky 时，主角的喜悦达到顶点，充满对救援人员的感激。后续情感逐渐转向对生活的反思，心怀感恩，更加珍惜生活，也更加注重预防灾害，情感从紧张慌乱过渡到平静且积极向上。
三、故事线（6 条）
主角与警察、司机交流，了解洪水相关信息及后续应对措施。
主角观察洪水过后自家房屋及周边环境的受损情况。
主角重新规划家庭应急物资储备，完善应对洪水的准备。
主角参与社区组织的洪水救援经验分享会，向他人传授知识。
主角和 Lucky 在洪水后相处模式的改变，关系更加亲密。
主角对洪水灾害的认识加深，从这次经历中获得成长。
四、主旨升华句 5 句英文
This flood not only tested my courage but also taught me the true value of kindness and preparedness.
The experience of the flood made me realize that in the face of disasters, the unity of people and the love for life can overcome any difficulty.
Through this terrifying flood, I learned that every moment of safety is precious, and we should always be ready to protect what we cherish.
The rescue of Lucky and the help from strangers in the flood remind me that humanity's kindness and compassion can shine brightly even in the darkest of times.
This flood disaster turned out to be a life - changing lesson, making me a more resilient and responsible person, always ready to face challenges and help others.
五、写作示范
详细叙事风格
After the police handed Lucky over to me, I was overcome with gratitude. I thanked them profusely, shaking their hands firmly. The driver, who had been patiently waiting, also joined in the conversation. The police informed me that the flood had caused extensive damage in the area. Looking around, I saw debris floating everywhere, and some of my neighbors' houses were severely damaged.
In the days following the flood, I immediately started restocking my emergency supplies. I made a list of essential items like food, water, and first - aid kits, and made sure to store them in a waterproof container. Moreover, I actively participated in a community - organized flood - rescue experience sharing event. I shared my story with others, hoping to help them better prepare for such disasters. Lucky, on the other hand, became even more attached to me. She would always stay by my side, as if she also understood the preciousness of our new - found safety. This flood had truly changed my life, teaching me the importance of being prepared and the power of kindness.
简洁明快风格
Once Lucky was safe in my arms, I couldn't stop thanking the police and the kind - hearted driver. The police briefly told me about the flood's impact on the neighborhood. The sight of the destroyed houses and floating rubbish was heart - breaking.
After the flood, I quickly got to work. I restocked emergency supplies and made a point to be more organized. I also joined a community event to share my flood - survival story. It was a great chance to help others. Lucky and I became inseparable. This flood was a tough lesson, but it made me stronger and more aware of the need to be ready for anything.
参考答案
I turned around and started walking toward the main road. I used all my strength to take each step. The water was still rising. I risked washing me away. My heart raced as I struggled to catch my breath. I finally reached the main road. I tried my phone anyway, but it wouldn’t turn on. I had no way to call for help. Just then, I spotted a light in the distance. Headlights, fast approaching. I waved down the driver, and he let me borrow his phone.
Thanks to the driver’s help, I phoned the police on the road. When they arrived, I nervously informed them that my dog was still inside the house. Without a second thought, they headed for my house to save Lucky with their supplies. Soon after, they returned with Lucky—unharmed and completely dry. They found her on the dining table. Apparently, she’d avoided the floodwater completely by climbing to higher and higher points in the house. I hugged her happily. It was the police that made Lucky lucky. We were both finally safe.

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