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Lucy and her friend Jack loved being at school every day because they both really enjoyed music lessons. Lucy began playing two instruments, the piano and the violin, but she enjoyed singing more. She dreamed of being a pop star like Alex Pepper one day. Jack had a guitar and played pop and rock music very well. He wanted to be the coolest guitar player in the world.
One day, their music teacher, Mr. Brown, said to the class, “We’re going to have a music competition here at school next Friday. If you want to enter, you must sing or play a song on the school stage. Alex Pepper will be here that day for his concert at City Stadium, so I wrote to his manager and asked him to come and give you some guidance. He’s going to decide the best performer and invite him or her to his concert.”
Lucy and Jack determined to take part in the competition as a team. They chose a song called “I’ll Help You!” They practiced on the playground in their spare time. Lucy made such great progress that Jack was deeply absorbed in her singing and often said admirably, “How sweet your voice is!” While they practiced, the branches of the trees around the playground were swaying (摇摆) in the wind as if they were enjoying their performance.
On the afternoon of the competition, all the students were waiting in the school hall for Alex Pepper to arrive. When he walked in with Mr. Brown, everyone clapped. Alex smiled and waved and then he and Mr. Brown sat down on special seats in front of the school stage.
Then the competition started. Lots of other students sang before Jack and Lucy. An older girl named Mary sang very well. Some students shouted “More! More!” when she finished. “She’s going to win,” thought Lucy. Soon Mr. Brown pointed to Jack and Lucy and called out that it was their turn.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage.
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Paragraph 2:
Hearing the result, Lucy whispered to Jack guiltily. _________________________________________________________________
Lucy 舞台表演故事续写
续写要点（两段）
第一段
Lucy 的舞台恐惧与自我怀疑（颤抖、忘词风险）
Jack 的无声支持（眼神鼓励、吉他节奏稳定情绪）
表演转折点：回忆练习场景找回自信，完美呈现
观众反应（掌声、对手认可）
第二段
结果揭晓（Mary 获胜），Lucy 内疚自责
Alex Pepper 的意外肯定（强调 “灵魂” 而非技巧）
获得演唱会邀请，意外收获比奖杯更珍贵
结尾象征（夕阳、树木呼应开头，传递希望）
情感线（150 字）
紧张：Lucy 面对舞台的生理反应（颤抖、喉咙发紧）。
无助：关键时刻忘词，依赖 Jack 的支持。
突破：通过回忆练习场景重获自信，完成表演。
失落：得知未获奖的瞬间失望。
释然：Alex 的认可化解胜负心结，理解 “灵魂” 的意义。
希望：结尾夕阳与树木的意象暗示未来可能性，友情与梦想的延续。
故事线（6 条）
Lucy 在舞台上的心理挣扎与 Jack 的默契配合。
表演中通过回忆练习场景实现自我救赎。
Mary 的优异表现制造悬念。
结果揭晓后的情感转折（胜负≠价值）。
Alex Pepper 的意外邀请打破常规结局。
结尾环境描写呼应开头，强化成长主题。
主旨升华句（5 句英文）
"True artistry lies not in perfection, but in the vulnerability we dare to share."
"A friend’s support can turn a trembling voice into a symphony of courage."
"Sometimes, the greatest victory is not in winning, but in the journey that transforms us."
"Talent without heart is fleeting; it’s the soul behind the music that leaves an imprint."
"The applause of the crowd fades, but the bond forged through shared passion lasts forever."
写作示范两篇
示范 1
Paragraph 1
Lucy’s knees shook as she faced the crowd. Her mind blanked—until she met Jack’s steady gaze. His fingers danced across the guitar strings, a familiar melody that transported her back to the playground, where the trees had whispered encouragement. Suddenly, her voice soared, clear and trembling no more. The audience gasped, then erupted into cheers. Even Mary’s eyes widened in surprise.
Paragraph 2
When Mary’s name was called, Lucy’s heart sank. "I ruined it," she murmured. But Alex Pepper approached, holding two tickets. "You didn’t win the competition," he said, "but you won me. Your performance had raw emotion—the kind that changes lives." Lucy stared, speechless. Later, as they walked home, Jack grinned. "Next time, we’ll headline our own concert." Lucy laughed, the weight of disappointment lifting. The trees rustled, as if applauding their new beginning.
示范 2
Paragraph 1
Lucy’s throat closed as the spotlight hit her. Out of nowhere, Jack’s guitar played the opening notes of their song, loud and steady. His nod said "I’m here." She took a breath, and the words poured out—a mix of nerves and fire. By the end, the audience was on their feet. Even Mr. Brown wiped his eyes.
Paragraph 2
"Third place: Lucy and Jack," announced Mr. Brown. Lucy froze. But Alex Pepper stood up. "Wait. I’d like to invite both winners and these two to my concert. Mary’s voice is polished, but Lucy’s…" He smiled. "It’s like lightning—unpredictable, alive." Lucy’s eyes filled with tears. That night, she wrote a new song: "I’ll Help You Find Your Voice." Outside her window, the trees swayed in time.

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